How to Add Complexity to Your IELTS TOEFL Writing

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  • In order to achieve high scores on your IELTS or TOEFL writing section, especially the academic essay, you will need to show variety in your sentence structures. Even more importantly, you will need to demonstrate your ability to use complex structures.
    In this video, we look at the difference between complex sentences and complex structures. The latter rely on set structures, such as the inverted sentence, the subjunctive, causative, and passive voices, and especially embedded clauses (clauses within clauses).
    See examples in this video of complex sentences and complex structures and begin to integrate these into your writing.
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Комментарии • 87

  • @mamayusupovakhusniya9564
    @mamayusupovakhusniya9564 5 лет назад +12

    Adam you can't imagine how much appreciate you, my time spending with you is not getting wasted. It's absolutely productive

  • @rakeshkumarmadella7955
    @rakeshkumarmadella7955 5 лет назад +6

    If we religiously follow your follow channel word by word and read a lot, I am sure writing skills will go to the different level. I am very happy and glad that I found your channel. Not happy and glad but I should say I am lucky enough. Thank you so much. Take care and please keep uploading such great videos.

  • @newbisfun
    @newbisfun 5 лет назад +31

    Hi Adam. This channel is awesome. Do you have a channel like "Speak to the Top"?

  • @rakeshkumarmadella7955
    @rakeshkumarmadella7955 Год назад

    Sir, I have one embedded clause. It is about Artificial Intelligence will take over the role of teachers.
    It has long been discussed whether robots and computers can do this in educations. It is known that the complexity of programs can now adapt to so many situations that something can already been setup that has the required knowledge of the teacher, along with the ability to predict and answer all the questions that might be asked by the students.
    Thank you so much for your efforts and knowledge that you have shared with us. I have learned a lot from this channel. I will always be indebted to you for your teachings 🙏

  • @muktarmiah3958
    @muktarmiah3958 5 месяцев назад +1

    You are really an expert in...... I follow your sentences

  • @hamed.jafarishad
    @hamed.jafarishad 5 лет назад +2

    Hi Adam.
    You are the best English teacher. I always follow your videos.
    I think it would be great if you include some tests on your videos and give us some time for solving it and then give the answer or illustrate your examples as tests. I think it would make viewers more active while watching.

  • @yaroslavhoncharenko106
    @yaroslavhoncharenko106 3 года назад +1

    Hello Adam, I really want to see you embedded clauses lesson, if it's possible. There is no words that describe my thanks for your work here. It awesome. Thank you so much!

  • @prashantmishra1994
    @prashantmishra1994 2 года назад +1

    Hi Adam! It was definitely useful for academic writing.That's because,marking schemes for IELTS & TOEFL demand this structure for higher grade.
    Best regards.

  • @MdFardaousAhmed
    @MdFardaousAhmed 5 лет назад +3

    Really helpful. Thanks Adam. SO nice of you.
    We will be glad if more lectures on COMPLEX SENTENCE AND STRUCTURE especially EMBEDDED CLAUSES ... pls

  • @tjalerkon3680
    @tjalerkon3680 9 месяцев назад

    Adam, you are wonderful. On of the best teacher I ever found

  • @idanmoqaddasi3971
    @idanmoqaddasi3971 5 лет назад +2

    You are THE BEST! I really forward to your next video for embadded clauses.

  • @nickrobinson2023
    @nickrobinson2023 3 года назад

    You are so talented, that even dense grammar topics sound interesting and they are very engaging. The best teacher on youtube is an understatement. Thanks for all the videos you post.

  • @muhammadyoqubov837
    @muhammadyoqubov837 3 года назад +2

    Hi, Adam thank you for all of these you are the best teacher!

  • @javierjesuscolquehuancasuxo
    @javierjesuscolquehuancasuxo 2 года назад

    Adam, I really appreciate you're explaning this topic, because there are some people like me loving this subject on writing skill, thanks...

  • @ajvlogs1323
    @ajvlogs1323 4 года назад

    Wonderful teacher! Never have I ever seen, such a sophisticated and English encyclopedia teacher I must say. 😄 Informative!!!!!!!
    Love from Pakistan

  • @whousedmyID
    @whousedmyID 4 года назад

    Binge-watched part of the series a week before my test and that definitely will help! Hope I get 27 on Writing. Thank you for your effort, Adam.

  • @abhishekmishra8467
    @abhishekmishra8467 5 лет назад +9

    thanks sir very nice lecture,please make video on embedded clause and complementation.

    • @nafinurrosyid4202
      @nafinurrosyid4202 4 года назад

      Until now , sadly sir adam have not upload about embedded clause 😢😢😢

  • @inspectorsantos965
    @inspectorsantos965 5 лет назад +3

    In my opinion you are the best!

  • @alittlewolf8637
    @alittlewolf8637 3 года назад

    Hey Adam
    I think in second example moreover, there are a number of challenges
    The first clause is an adjective clause and later clause ( that our world faces that necessitate the collaboration ) is a noun clause as it comes after the verb faces

  • @mariamkinen8036
    @mariamkinen8036 4 года назад

    Calling these to mind is what i like! Thank you. You are good at this.

  • @Abu-Aley
    @Abu-Aley 5 лет назад +1

    Hi Adam,
    Your efforts are highly appreciated. I guess I've the right to claim that u r the solely online teacher who can boost students level to C1 or even C2 as there is no else teacher, as far as I think, has reached such horizon.
    Will be eagerly waiting for the "Embedded Clause" lesson soon, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
    Thanks a lot Adam,
    Regards,
    Ahmad, ☺ 👍 👍 👍

  • @rcemcah9673
    @rcemcah9673 4 года назад

    Great lessons! If I may suggest, please display on the screen at one go for comparison both the original sentences and the modified ones. Thank you

  • @alexoliynyk2101
    @alexoliynyk2101 5 лет назад

    Thank you for another great lesson!
    I've noticed in many of your lessons, especially about some complex sentences or structures, you say something like" Do I reccomend you to write like this?"...
    And for some reason I already know that the answer is " Absolutely NO!")). I like that part, really... But seriously, your lessons helped me a lot to improve my writing. When I write an essay I start to sort of subconsciously implement these structures.Thank you very much for this,Adam.

  • @sandipdatta470
    @sandipdatta470 3 года назад +1

    Sir, I am lucky to find your channel. Please upload a video on embeded clauses, or if you had already made it, send me the link. I also request you to make more videos on advanced grammar and complex structure. With lots of love and respect.

  • @arpitadutta5494
    @arpitadutta5494 5 лет назад

    Thank you Adam. The channel is very useful and your teaching method is easy to follow. Please keep posting such good lessons.

  • @user-wq8oh1ux6c
    @user-wq8oh1ux6c 25 дней назад

    Great 👍 could you also make a video about embedded clauses? It would be great to see

  • @ellyreads4886
    @ellyreads4886 5 лет назад

    Thanks, Mr. Adam. However, the thing is while I am writing essays during exams, I actually focus more on coherence, the organization of the essay, and on addressing the question. I do use inversion and complement clauses but I hope I can achieve much more complexity.

  • @user-pc3wb5fv6m
    @user-pc3wb5fv6m 4 года назад

    Your lessons are so brilliant, Adam. Thanks for everything you do.

  • @alifasl533
    @alifasl533 3 года назад

    it is the most important video you ever made
    thank you from all my sincerity

  • @saidfarid6382
    @saidfarid6382 2 года назад

    Hello professor
    Thanks a lot for your your help and advice.

  • @aiganysmolbay6971
    @aiganysmolbay6971 5 лет назад +1

    You are amazing teacher in the world

  • @dileepa1901
    @dileepa1901 5 лет назад

    Thank you very much for the excellent video. Please try to make a video on the embedded clauses and inversions to know about those structures well.

  • @jazminchavez-mindproject2976
    @jazminchavez-mindproject2976 5 лет назад +2

    Than you again Adam you're the best teacher :)

  • @moulmour
    @moulmour 5 лет назад +2

    Thank you teacher!!!

  • @iqbalmarri3192
    @iqbalmarri3192 3 года назад

    thank you very much. sir, i donot find your video on embedded clauses.

  • @emondj6358
    @emondj6358 2 года назад +1

    please, make a video on embedded question

  • @mmanuman788
    @mmanuman788 5 лет назад +1

    U r my favorite teacher 😊

  • @farhatkhan4718
    @farhatkhan4718 5 лет назад +1

    Please make a video on how to write a news report,diary writing, and descriptive writing

  • @abbos-
    @abbos- Год назад

    I got it. It's completely simple sentence but kinda tricky

  • @shoeibmr
    @shoeibmr 5 лет назад +1

    I'm a little bit confused. Should we try and use embedded clauses for better IELTS scores or not?

  • @yandaneelu
    @yandaneelu 5 лет назад

    Thanks a lot for your wonderful lessons. Looking forward to your video on #Embedded clause.

  • @Godblessme85
    @Godblessme85 Год назад

    Thanks 🙏🙏🙏 Adam.

  • @aabatenmahmood126
    @aabatenmahmood126 2 года назад

    Nice of you...

  • @sobuzrahman6921
    @sobuzrahman6921 4 года назад

    Please make a video about embedded clause !!

  • @myintmyintkoko2074
    @myintmyintkoko2074 4 года назад

    Thanks teacher . From myanmar

  • @asadzaman3264
    @asadzaman3264 5 лет назад

    it will be very helpful for us if you make a full lecture on embedded clauses

  • @malamirasi
    @malamirasi 4 года назад

    Wonderful ❣️😊❣️❣️ teacher,, please make some more videos like this 😍😍😍

  • @hebahaggag6195
    @hebahaggag6195 5 лет назад

    Many thanks for your precious knowledge 🙏

  • @rakeshkumarmadella7955
    @rakeshkumarmadella7955 5 лет назад

    I think I need to practice a lot of these sentences.. Thank you w/o look much Adam ji. Ji, in hindi mean respected, revered.

  • @zainabali2482
    @zainabali2482 2 года назад

    Thanks Adam

  • @wongsimon2387
    @wongsimon2387 2 года назад

    Is there any conflict between complex structure and brevity? We always talk about good writing is easy to read and understand.

  • @alifasl533
    @alifasl533 3 года назад

    is the last example about "complex sentences" ? isn't the first example about complex structure so long in the sentence too?

  • @rizwanhafeez8711
    @rizwanhafeez8711 5 лет назад

    You are a great mentor.

  • @dulanjaligunawardhana579
    @dulanjaligunawardhana579 2 года назад

    Has he done a separate lesson on Embedded clauses?

  • @elisaburesta2692
    @elisaburesta2692 5 лет назад

    Adam, you are the best!

  • @haiderps4
    @haiderps4 4 года назад

    Have you made a video about embedded clauses yet? I couldn't find it!

  • @DilpreetGillCharik
    @DilpreetGillCharik 3 года назад

    Hey sir
    I have a doubt that can i use sunjunctive after so that?
    eg. - Parents should moniter the activities of their children so that they not indulge in bad company.
    Please reply me i am perplexed about this.

  • @soroushm9820
    @soroushm9820 5 лет назад

    i love you Adam!
    can you please explain how the 'em dash' should be used? is it allowed to use it in toefl?

  • @chloezhang5620
    @chloezhang5620 4 года назад

    thank you

  • @alisherjatoi9557
    @alisherjatoi9557 4 года назад

    Love you sir

  • @samiullah3809
    @samiullah3809 4 года назад

    Doing really a good job....

  • @vidit-gupta
    @vidit-gupta 4 года назад

    Hi Adam,
    Do you have an extensive lesson on embedded clause? I can't seem to find the relevant video.

  • @birdalrk2098
    @birdalrk2098 2 года назад

    is it important for Toefl writing use only formal words instead of informal words?
    and does using informal words hurt my score?

  • @nasimuddin4326
    @nasimuddin4326 5 лет назад

    Please make the embedded clause video.

  • @arnavshrestha8465
    @arnavshrestha8465 3 года назад

    8:46 example

  • @yunmiao7619
    @yunmiao7619 4 года назад

    so I could not doing working for I am already 70 with old body problems .

  • @akhlassavatar1486
    @akhlassavatar1486 5 лет назад +2

    Hi Dr I'm a literature student , and i have a problem in exams I take a very bad grades , my teacher told me u have grammatical mistakes, how could I avoid this problem

    • @user-cy3jc8tm7h
      @user-cy3jc8tm7h 5 лет назад

      I also

    • @ellyreads4886
      @ellyreads4886 5 лет назад

      I am a literature student as well, and of course, all of us struggle with writing.

  • @tanzim3178
    @tanzim3178 4 года назад

    adam, the embedded clause is so confusing, and i am wondering further information about it.

  • @24MiHind
    @24MiHind 5 лет назад

    09:00
    Shouldn't there be a comma before 'as' in the part: .... in which they caim that, as China increasenly imports ..., the level rises ... ? Whithout it the senttense is hard to read.

  • @zarinaz7554
    @zarinaz7554 5 лет назад

    Hi Adam, could you please check if the usage of embedded clause was correct here. I tried to use the same structure from lesson: This is supported by recent study conducted at Oxford university, in which they claim that as English speakers travel to various developing countries more frequently, the demand for knowledge of English increases sharply and that, inevitably, indigenous languages are shadowed.

    • @elvst3331
      @elvst3331 4 года назад

      Zarina Z correct in my opinion

  • @mastersacademy950
    @mastersacademy950 4 года назад +2

    It was me who ask that question a year ago... Haha

  • @chloezhang5620
    @chloezhang5620 5 лет назад

    great video

  • @youssefmokadem5434
    @youssefmokadem5434 5 лет назад

    Great

  • @manoochehrghanbari822
    @manoochehrghanbari822 5 лет назад

    Thank u

  • @vinaygrover9424
    @vinaygrover9424 5 лет назад

    66 words paragraph was crazy

  • @hassn7750
    @hassn7750 4 года назад

    hi

  • @khairunnahar4174
    @khairunnahar4174 5 лет назад

    Why necessitate is not necessitates

  • @churnyeechong2427
    @churnyeechong2427 4 года назад

    Can I send you my IELTS essay for your valuable comments please?

  • @tejmachhar4903
    @tejmachhar4903 5 лет назад

    Nice shirt

  • @ashusharma8515
    @ashusharma8515 4 года назад

    All of it is so.. complicated

  • @alexanderpadalka5708
    @alexanderpadalka5708 5 лет назад

    🗽