How to Add Complexity to Your IELTS TOEFL Writing
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- Опубликовано: 7 сен 2024
- In order to achieve high scores on your IELTS or TOEFL writing section, especially the academic essay, you will need to show variety in your sentence structures. Even more importantly, you will need to demonstrate your ability to use complex structures.
In this video, we look at the difference between complex sentences and complex structures. The latter rely on set structures, such as the inverted sentence, the subjunctive, causative, and passive voices, and especially embedded clauses (clauses within clauses).
See examples in this video of complex sentences and complex structures and begin to integrate these into your writing.
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Sir, I have one embedded clause. It is about Artificial Intelligence will take over the role of teachers.
It has long been discussed whether robots and computers can do this in educations. It is known that the complexity of programs can now adapt to so many situations that something can already been setup that has the required knowledge of the teacher, along with the ability to predict and answer all the questions that might be asked by the students.
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I think it would be great if you include some tests on your videos and give us some time for solving it and then give the answer or illustrate your examples as tests. I think it would make viewers more active while watching.
Hello Adam, I really want to see you embedded clauses lesson, if it's possible. There is no words that describe my thanks for your work here. It awesome. Thank you so much!
Hi Adam! It was definitely useful for academic writing.That's because,marking schemes for IELTS & TOEFL demand this structure for higher grade.
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Really helpful. Thanks Adam. SO nice of you.
We will be glad if more lectures on COMPLEX SENTENCE AND STRUCTURE especially EMBEDDED CLAUSES ... pls
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Adam, I really appreciate you're explaning this topic, because there are some people like me loving this subject on writing skill, thanks...
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Binge-watched part of the series a week before my test and that definitely will help! Hope I get 27 on Writing. Thank you for your effort, Adam.
thanks sir very nice lecture,please make video on embedded clause and complementation.
Until now , sadly sir adam have not upload about embedded clause 😢😢😢
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Hey Adam
I think in second example moreover, there are a number of challenges
The first clause is an adjective clause and later clause ( that our world faces that necessitate the collaboration ) is a noun clause as it comes after the verb faces
Calling these to mind is what i like! Thank you. You are good at this.
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Will be eagerly waiting for the "Embedded Clause" lesson soon, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
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Great lessons! If I may suggest, please display on the screen at one go for comparison both the original sentences and the modified ones. Thank you
Thank you for another great lesson!
I've noticed in many of your lessons, especially about some complex sentences or structures, you say something like" Do I reccomend you to write like this?"...
And for some reason I already know that the answer is " Absolutely NO!")). I like that part, really... But seriously, your lessons helped me a lot to improve my writing. When I write an essay I start to sort of subconsciously implement these structures.Thank you very much for this,Adam.
Sir, I am lucky to find your channel. Please upload a video on embeded clauses, or if you had already made it, send me the link. I also request you to make more videos on advanced grammar and complex structure. With lots of love and respect.
i think he did that
Thank you Adam. The channel is very useful and your teaching method is easy to follow. Please keep posting such good lessons.
Great 👍 could you also make a video about embedded clauses? It would be great to see
Thanks, Mr. Adam. However, the thing is while I am writing essays during exams, I actually focus more on coherence, the organization of the essay, and on addressing the question. I do use inversion and complement clauses but I hope I can achieve much more complexity.
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Thank you very much for the excellent video. Please try to make a video on the embedded clauses and inversions to know about those structures well.
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thank you very much. sir, i donot find your video on embedded clauses.
please, make a video on embedded question
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Please make a video on how to write a news report,diary writing, and descriptive writing
I got it. It's completely simple sentence but kinda tricky
I'm a little bit confused. Should we try and use embedded clauses for better IELTS scores or not?
Thanks a lot for your wonderful lessons. Looking forward to your video on #Embedded clause.
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Nice of you...
Please make a video about embedded clause !!
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it will be very helpful for us if you make a full lecture on embedded clauses
Wonderful ❣️😊❣️❣️ teacher,, please make some more videos like this 😍😍😍
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I think I need to practice a lot of these sentences.. Thank you w/o look much Adam ji. Ji, in hindi mean respected, revered.
Thanks Adam
Is there any conflict between complex structure and brevity? We always talk about good writing is easy to read and understand.
is the last example about "complex sentences" ? isn't the first example about complex structure so long in the sentence too?
You are a great mentor.
Has he done a separate lesson on Embedded clauses?
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Have you made a video about embedded clauses yet? I couldn't find it!
Hey sir
I have a doubt that can i use sunjunctive after so that?
eg. - Parents should moniter the activities of their children so that they not indulge in bad company.
Please reply me i am perplexed about this.
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can you please explain how the 'em dash' should be used? is it allowed to use it in toefl?
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Doing really a good job....
Hi Adam,
Do you have an extensive lesson on embedded clause? I can't seem to find the relevant video.
is it important for Toefl writing use only formal words instead of informal words?
and does using informal words hurt my score?
Please make the embedded clause video.
8:46 example
so I could not doing working for I am already 70 with old body problems .
Hi Dr I'm a literature student , and i have a problem in exams I take a very bad grades , my teacher told me u have grammatical mistakes, how could I avoid this problem
I also
I am a literature student as well, and of course, all of us struggle with writing.
adam, the embedded clause is so confusing, and i am wondering further information about it.
09:00
Shouldn't there be a comma before 'as' in the part: .... in which they caim that, as China increasenly imports ..., the level rises ... ? Whithout it the senttense is hard to read.
Hi Adam, could you please check if the usage of embedded clause was correct here. I tried to use the same structure from lesson: This is supported by recent study conducted at Oxford university, in which they claim that as English speakers travel to various developing countries more frequently, the demand for knowledge of English increases sharply and that, inevitably, indigenous languages are shadowed.
Zarina Z correct in my opinion
It was me who ask that question a year ago... Haha
great video
Great
Thank u
66 words paragraph was crazy
hi
Why necessitate is not necessitates
Write to Top I got it . Thank you very much
Can I send you my IELTS essay for your valuable comments please?
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All of it is so.. complicated
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