I love it when you do theese types of things, 1 its a good story every time 2 its a long story 3 its a fundraiser for a good cause, 100% gonna try my hardest to make it to the premiere
Excellent! I would love a second part to this, but only if you guys wanted to. I know it's taxing to do the longer ones! One of my favorite types of characters is the one where they secretly know everything about love. So, Paolo touched my heart for this one! It was delightful how Adrienette slowly came together. I love that this indicates that Mr. Banana has merch. Lol! I love that the whole time Adrien's like well "I love this girl," but I don't know how she feels. Paolo was fun to hear him say that he had a chance with Marinette, just based on her smile. I enjoyed this one! Good job you two!
Thanks! I felt like Adrien needed an unexpected wingman/father figure and Paola fit the bill. He was so much fun to write and Dawn did such an excellent job bringing him to life. The parts with Paolo and Emmie were my favorites! I'm glad you liked it. This story feels like it might work with a follow on, but it would undoubtedly be much shorter. I'll talk with Dawn about it once she has caught up with herself again.
Dawn, you and Jheqia out did yourselves. The story was fantastic! It was sweet and funny, and the way y'all built up Marinette and Adrien's relationship was perfect. It wasn't rushed, and it wasn't drawn out. It's exactly what I've always wanted the series to do between Adrienette. There were so many gems in this story: Paola's talk with Adrien, Marinette "secretly" making Adrien breakfast, all the clues they gave (or were given) about their secret identities. You two are amazing!you I hope you are able to help lots of people with your fundraising efforts.
Whew Dawn, thanks for the performance! It was quite lengthy! I hope you got plenty of tea or water for your throat through out! Especially if you got it done in one go.
Great story with the bonus of raising money to assist those in need! Thank you Dawn, Jheqia and Art! One of my favorite parts was Adrienette getting soft watching each other interact with Emi... That was so sweet. I was melting! 🥰
8:30 Gabe going on about Adrien always has been or only ever will be an Agreste... my headcannon that Adrien takes Marinette's surnames when he gets married! Take that Gabey-pants!! The ultimate last laugh after Gabe wasted so much of his existence constructing this artifical façade of a legacy.
I only have a few words to say... This is amazing. This is marvelous. This is beautiful. This is for a good cause. This is something i have on loop in the background for the sake of running the ads to generate more money because yes ✨✨💕💕
@@jheqiawrites4985 It was more than worth it! Glad I could help somehow about the Pakistan Flood, such devastating news 😔. SO thank you to the both of you for writing this!
Song recommendations for fanfic! Habits by Genitive Strokes. (I imagine marinette saying it to Adrien, but it would also fit cat to lb quite well!) Pink in the night by Mitski. (Cat to lb mostly, but also could fit adrinette both ways) Nothing else I could do by ella jane. (I imagine cn finally quits, "I broke my knuckles in a fight, you were crying in the back of the room" could be cn sacrificing himself yet again and lb blowing up like she did in kuro neko, making cn quit for the last time "now the world is on fire" she mightve been akumatized, or she just feels it metaphorically) Attracted to you by Pink panthress. (Could be kagami, marinette, or cn falling out of love??) If you choose to use one or more of theese I know you'll do it wonderfully!
Love love love this! I've been absolutely craving a longer story for a while now, and this was exactly what I needed ❤️ Thank you both for the incredible amount of time and effort that goes into these, especially super long ones like this, and I hope you're both doing well! Now that I've listened, I'm gonna play this on silent while I work today and let all the ads run as long as possible!
I’m a British Pakistani. I use to go to Pakistan 🇵🇰 a lot when I was younger now. Now that I am busy with university I kind of miss going to Pakistan. I give my support of a thumbs up for this fan fiction.
I finally could listen to the whole story 😂 it took me like 3, maybe 4 days 😂💔 sometimes I hate my job and college Anyway, it was one of the best stories I've ever known!
I've spent a lot of time in Pakistan, ❤️🇵🇰❤ It️ is a wonderful county. The people are so nice and humble, The hospitality is crazy like any one will invite you randomly one the street for drinks, food and goods. Also, there food is out of this world. It's a shame a country which emits less than 1% of the planet-warming gasses and yet one of the most affected by climate change. Really appreciate your effort for this fundraiser. ❤️😻😼
Thank you. I personally don't have a connection but when I saw the images and the devastating facts, the amount of people need help. I wanted to do what I could. 🤞😊
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous that is awesome, Let me know if you are having any difficulty finding a trust full source for sending the donos. I have a friend who is from Pakistan and is also helping out people in these things
@@adrienbrown438 thank you for the offer, since I'm based in UK I'm using DEC Disaster Emergency Committee. I used them for Ukraine Funds and the bonus of using a UK based company, they Gift Aid the donation which means the UK government add to the donation and no tax. So all the money donated in superchat and all the AD money will be donated. Fingers crossed 🤞 we can raise lots. 🙏
OMG! Heute Nacht kamm ich aus dem Urteil. Ich habe mich so gefreut das Ihr so fleißig wart und ich so viel nachzuholen habe 😉. Nachdem ich diese Geschichte gehört habe muss ich einfach DANKE sagen!! Ich habe gelacht, geweint, bin herum gesprungen wie ein kleines Mädchen (ich werde übermorgen 40😅). Es ist immer wieder soooo schön eure Fahnfiction zu hören! Ich liebe eure Geschichten aber ich muss gestehen besonders Jheqia's, die Geschichten sind so lebendig und detailreich da sich einfach ins Treiben geraten muss!! Und Dawn deine Stimme ist so schön und gefühlvoll ist ist einfach nicht möglich dir nicht zu zuhören. Mein Englisch hat sich extrem verbessert nur wei ich eure Geschichten immer wieder und wieder snhören. Ob zum einschlafen oder bei der Hausarbeit eure unglaublich schöne Fahnfiction... ach so schön😍💓!! Ich höre jetzt gleich weiter. Ein Glück das es nach dem Urlaub immer so viel zu Hause zu tun gibt 😉.
I could listen to your stories for hours! Listened to this yesterday and could've listened to 10 more hrs. 😄💕 Love your stories have a wonderful day Dawn! 💖
I finally got to finish this now that school wks over and babysitting is tm...and I gotta say dawn, jheqia...I literally am lost for words... 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌👏👏😌🥺
Yeah, this was mental to create... a lot of work but fingers crossed 🤞 it will be worth it if you can raise lots of fund for the people of Pakistan 🇵🇰 and supporting them through this disaster! 🙏🤞🤗
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous same here dawn, but I'm sure the story itself will be amazing in general, and will be inspirational throughout the years 😁🥰🫂
Thanks for campaign! A big heart touching story that you didn't need any thing even you have it to help just courage. So you can make that possible. Humanity is above any limits. Hopefully you can make another campaign story like that for gaza Palestinian people. It can be based on: how much people think that others suffering is acceptable due to some faults, right is always become clear if you analyse rationally by taking break from bias narratives. (Gabriel realise & accept lose after long adrien accumatisation & injuring LB aka mari and loosing control over adrien seeing everyone suffering)
So I did my best to make it to the premiere, but I missed it. We must take urgent action to uh...listen to uh...Dawn Chorus Writes x Jheqia Writes,...OUTSIDERS, IT DOES MORE THAN IT SOUNDS LIKE! Anyway, I'll listen to this to help me fall asleep even if I fall asleep in the middle...
I love it when you do theese types of things, 1 its a good story every time 2 its a long story 3 its a fundraiser for a good cause, 100% gonna try my hardest to make it to the premiere
And i missed 2/3s of it😭
Excellent! I would love a second part to this, but only if you guys wanted to. I know it's taxing to do the longer ones! One of my favorite types of characters is the one where they secretly know everything about love. So, Paolo touched my heart for this one! It was delightful how Adrienette slowly came together. I love that this indicates that Mr. Banana has merch. Lol! I love that the whole time Adrien's like well "I love this girl," but I don't know how she feels. Paolo was fun to hear him say that he had a chance with Marinette, just based on her smile. I enjoyed this one! Good job you two!
Thanks! I felt like Adrien needed an unexpected wingman/father figure and Paola fit the bill. He was so much fun to write and Dawn did such an excellent job bringing him to life. The parts with Paolo and Emmie were my favorites! I'm glad you liked it.
This story feels like it might work with a follow on, but it would undoubtedly be much shorter. I'll talk with Dawn about it once she has caught up with herself again.
@@jheqiawrites4985 :) Yeah!
This already looks so cute! I love Adrien's sweatshirt
So.... a three hour story was completely unexpected... I know what I'm doing tomorrow!
Ferb, I know what we're gonna do today! Lol. Idk why but this comment reminded me of that line
Dawn, you and Jheqia out did yourselves. The story was fantastic! It was sweet and funny, and the way y'all built up Marinette and Adrien's relationship was perfect. It wasn't rushed, and it wasn't drawn out. It's exactly what I've always wanted the series to do between Adrienette. There were so many gems in this story: Paola's talk with Adrien, Marinette "secretly" making Adrien breakfast, all the clues they gave (or were given) about their secret identities. You two are amazing!you I hope you are able to help lots of people with your fundraising efforts.
Hi Dawn, I hope you are feeling better and thank you so much for organizing this fundraiser ❤🐞
Tikki 😁🫂
This was INCREDIBLE!!! I just wish He revealed himself to her! but that just filled my soul with happiness
Whew Dawn, thanks for the performance! It was quite lengthy! I hope you got plenty of tea or water for your throat through out! Especially if you got it done in one go.
Omggggg actually love it when you do these hella long ones for charity there always amazing defo donating thank you for all your hard work
Thank you and yeah, this is my longest oneshot... its been a challenge but I hope everyone loves it! ❤️ 😄
Great story with the bonus of raising money to assist those in need! Thank you Dawn, Jheqia and Art!
One of my favorite parts was Adrienette getting soft watching each other interact with Emi... That was so sweet. I was melting! 🥰
Those and them talking to Paolo were my favorite parts too!
@@jheqiawrites4985 Paolo knows what's up! 😊
emi best child (besides emma)
The "blue spot on her lip" from her pen around 26:06, this feels like a reference to Sugar Rush when she gets blue marker on her face! 💙 😆
8:30 Gabe going on about Adrien always has been or only ever will be an Agreste... my headcannon that Adrien takes Marinette's surnames when he gets married! Take that Gabey-pants!! The ultimate last laugh after Gabe wasted so much of his existence constructing this artifical façade of a legacy.
Hi I hope you are feeling better and so excited for this
I only have a few words to say...
This is amazing.
This is marvelous.
This is beautiful.
This is for a good cause.
This is something i have on loop in the background for the sake of running the ads to generate more money because yes ✨✨💕💕
I hope it was worth missing Black Lion for two weeks! This is why I've been behind a bit!
@@jheqiawrites4985 It was more than worth it! Glad I could help somehow about the Pakistan Flood, such devastating news 😔. SO thank you to the both of you for writing this!
so excited!!! i missed this!! ❤🇵🇰
*bites on your leg* 😁
@@Dire_Database217 BAD WOLF >:(
@@axuatix (chews on your leg playfully)
@@Dire_Database217 *pats* stop >:C
@@axuatix (let's go and lays down next to you)
Song recommendations for fanfic!
Habits by Genitive Strokes. (I imagine marinette saying it to Adrien, but it would also fit cat to lb quite well!)
Pink in the night by Mitski. (Cat to lb mostly, but also could fit adrinette both ways)
Nothing else I could do by ella jane. (I imagine cn finally quits, "I broke my knuckles in a fight, you were crying in the back of the room" could be cn sacrificing himself yet again and lb blowing up like she did in kuro neko, making cn quit for the last time "now the world is on fire" she mightve been akumatized, or she just feels it metaphorically)
Attracted to you by Pink panthress. (Could be kagami, marinette, or cn falling out of love??)
If you choose to use one or more of theese I know you'll do it wonderfully!
Great job and keep up the great work! Remember to take care of yourself first and don't overwork yourself.
Love love love this! I've been absolutely craving a longer story for a while now, and this was exactly what I needed ❤️ Thank you both for the incredible amount of time and effort that goes into these, especially super long ones like this, and I hope you're both doing well!
Now that I've listened, I'm gonna play this on silent while I work today and let all the ads run as long as possible!
Thanks, Jessica! You rock!
This was super sweet 😍
I loved it as always u and jheqa did amazing
Thanks!
1hr in,LOVING THIS! hope every thing gets better in pakistan
Wow! What an epic story! I love it!
Part 2 !!! Pleeeeeease 🥺 !
Your stories and story telling are the best 🥰😍🥰
WOW, I WISH I COULD SEE A PICTURE OF MARINETTE'S "BLUEBELL" DRESS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥰😍😻
I do hope things get better soon for everyone. This was a very great story
Suger and cookies that story is amazing
I’m a British Pakistani. I use to go to Pakistan 🇵🇰 a lot when I was younger now. Now that I am busy with university I kind of miss going to Pakistan. I give my support of a thumbs up for this fan fiction.
I finally could listen to the whole story 😂 it took me like 3, maybe 4 days 😂💔 sometimes I hate my job and college
Anyway, it was one of the best stories I've ever known!
I can’t wait to see it lol 😂
I love this story so much! It was well worth the time!!
I loved it and the cause to keep it up love your stories♥️♥️♥️♥️
I've spent a lot of time in Pakistan,
❤️🇵🇰❤ It️ is a wonderful county.
The people are so nice and humble,
The hospitality is crazy like any one will invite you randomly one the street for drinks, food and goods.
Also, there food is out of this world.
It's a shame a country which emits less than 1% of the planet-warming gasses and yet one of the most affected by climate change.
Really appreciate your effort for this fundraiser.
❤️😻😼
Thank you. I personally don't have a connection but when I saw the images and the devastating facts, the amount of people need help.
I wanted to do what I could. 🤞😊
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous that is awesome,
Let me know if you are having any difficulty finding a trust full source for sending the donos.
I have a friend who is from Pakistan and is also helping out people in these things
@@adrienbrown438 thank you for the offer, since I'm based in UK I'm using DEC Disaster Emergency Committee. I used them for Ukraine Funds and the bonus of using a UK based company, they Gift Aid the donation which means the UK government add to the donation and no tax.
So all the money donated in superchat and all the AD money will be donated. Fingers crossed 🤞 we can raise lots. 🙏
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Oh Wow! That is good ✌
OMG!
Heute Nacht kamm ich aus dem Urteil. Ich habe mich so gefreut das Ihr so fleißig wart und ich so viel nachzuholen habe 😉. Nachdem ich diese Geschichte gehört habe muss ich einfach DANKE sagen!! Ich habe gelacht, geweint, bin herum gesprungen wie ein kleines Mädchen (ich werde übermorgen 40😅). Es ist immer wieder soooo schön eure Fahnfiction zu hören! Ich liebe eure Geschichten aber ich muss gestehen besonders Jheqia's, die Geschichten sind so lebendig und detailreich da sich einfach ins Treiben geraten muss!! Und Dawn deine Stimme ist so schön und gefühlvoll ist ist einfach nicht möglich dir nicht zu zuhören. Mein Englisch hat sich extrem verbessert nur wei ich eure Geschichten immer wieder und wieder snhören. Ob zum einschlafen oder bei der Hausarbeit eure unglaublich schöne Fahnfiction... ach so schön😍💓!!
Ich höre jetzt gleich weiter. Ein Glück das es nach dem Urlaub immer so viel zu Hause zu tun gibt 😉.
Danken Shen 😊💖
Vielen Dank für Ihre freundlichen Worte. Ich bin froh, dass Dawn und ich dir Freude bereiten können!
I could listen to your stories for hours! Listened to this yesterday and could've listened to 10 more hrs. 😄💕
Love your stories have a wonderful day Dawn! 💖
ur telling me i get to listen to a great flc AND help people on the other side of the world 😍
A comment to feed the algorithm 👍
O...and... *IM NOT CRYING U R!!!*
🥰💖🤗🤗 bless you *passes tissues*
🤧🤧🤧
I lover the story and good job
I finally got to finish this now that school wks over and babysitting is tm...and I gotta say dawn, jheqia...I literally am lost for words... 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌👏👏😌🥺
Marinette actually called herself Marino in Party Crasher.
I feel powerful ✨️200 to lk 😌
Lol... And also I feel bad for bein here this late. Busy week of school.
beautiful
Soooooo excited for this, IT'S THREE HOURS LONG 😰 how do you guys do it
This will be amazing and this will help so many people, I just hope we can help them all
Yeah, this was mental to create... a lot of work but fingers crossed 🤞 it will be worth it if you can raise lots of fund for the people of Pakistan 🇵🇰 and supporting them through this disaster! 🙏🤞🤗
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous same here dawn, but I'm sure the story itself will be amazing in general, and will be inspirational throughout the years 😁🥰🫂
At least for me, a lot of exhaustion, late nights, and writing around screaming kiddos!😅
@@jheqiawrites4985 oh I'm sorry Jheqia 🥺
❤❤❤❤ Please a part 2 ❤❤❤
Love it
Thanks for campaign!
A big heart touching story that you didn't need any thing even you have it to help just courage. So you can make that possible. Humanity is above any limits.
Hopefully you can make another campaign story like that for gaza Palestinian people.
It can be based on: how much people think that others suffering is acceptable due to some faults, right is always become clear if you analyse rationally by taking break from bias narratives.
(Gabriel realise & accept lose after long adrien accumatisation & injuring LB aka mari and loosing control over adrien seeing everyone suffering)
This was so good
I❤this one shot
Hope you haven't forgotten my request hehe~💜💜💜
I love this ❤❤❤
Please make a part 2 or make it a series it was amazing
Can you please do more Miraculous lyrical One-Shots? Here are some songs to use:
"Photograph"
"Thinking Out Loud"
"Love In Slow Motion"
I love the name princess
1:07:36 sorry just a marker
So I did my best to make it to the premiere, but I missed it. We must take urgent action to uh...listen to uh...Dawn Chorus Writes x Jheqia Writes,...OUTSIDERS, IT DOES MORE THAN IT SOUNDS LIKE! Anyway, I'll listen to this to help me fall asleep even if I fall asleep in the middle...
By the way, epic idea to collaborate! Won't finish this one time!
You should do a lyric one shot for heaven by bryan adams
Paolo is a dad I want
If he said that I would die
And you got to go back to the house 🏡
Part 2
This make me so happy thank you for the three hour gift 🤍🍾