It's a beautiful day today! Clouds are blowing, Rulers are slapping, and on days like these, kids like you... Should be getting a reflex checkup!! @@Thereallifebuddy
cool little concept and idea :) i think the problem is it goes out of key at parts, especially in the instrumental you use slide notes and little vocal gimmicks like the spookeez sample well though, it just needs to go somewhere if yk what i mean? when making the song try to stick to a specific set of notes (for a simple example, if you were to make a Defeat remix you'd want to look up what keys are in F# Minor, and only use those otherwise it sounds out of place) I feel like as you go with music you'll learn by ear what notes sound right for the most part but also looking at some theory would help I'd also say looking at LSE's "why your fnf music sucks" as a starting point is great help! :)
bf's vocal melody lacks flow,reflex too not as much as bf,the instrumental does do a decent job of capturing the game's vibe,and at the same time there's nothing in the song that feels consistent enough to be a fun melody,i agree it is better and i think all it needs is something to tie it down,a chord progression,a consistent type of melody or something else,i hope you keep working on it,i find a lot of potential and charm in it
THIS SONG REALLY DOES FEEL LIKE GETTING SMASHED IN THE SKULL WITH A HAMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Eh it’s not the worst fnf song. There is improvement to be made though. Keep improving. Cause you can definitely improvement your music!!! (Unless this was made like this on purpose)
finished version ruclips.net/video/0vc8JPmqLzM/видео.html
Rap it faster next time!
its the guy
NO WA
WHOOPS! Toooo slow!
It's a beautiful day outside principles whistling got a sweep is sweeping on days like these kids like you should be getting their reflexes check
It's a beautiful day today! Clouds are blowing, Rulers are slapping, and on days like these, kids like you... Should be getting a reflex checkup!! @@Thereallifebuddy
0:18 "DO IT FASTER DO IT FASTER DO DO IT DO FASTER DO DDD FA EH EH AH EH DO FA FA OH OOOO OH OH"🗣🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥
why and how did i read that as soon as that played in the video
1:24 hits the hardest
cool little concept and idea :)
i think the problem is it goes out of key at parts, especially in the instrumental
you use slide notes and little vocal gimmicks like the spookeez sample well though, it just needs to go somewhere if yk what i mean?
when making the song try to stick to a specific set of notes (for a simple example, if you were to make a Defeat remix you'd want to look up what keys are in F# Minor, and only use those otherwise it sounds out of place)
I feel like as you go with music you'll learn by ear what notes sound right for the most part but also looking at some theory would help
I'd also say looking at LSE's "why your fnf music sucks" as a starting point is great help! :)
good advice
bf's vocal melody lacks flow,reflex too not as much as bf,the instrumental does do a decent job of capturing the game's vibe,and at the same time there's nothing in the song that feels consistent enough to be a fun melody,i agree it is better and i think all it needs is something to tie it down,a chord progression,a consistent type of melody or something else,i hope you keep working on it,i find a lot of potential and charm in it
thank you for good criticism :3
yw dude@@wakooke
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cooked so hard blew up the whole house
thanks
This sounds like an fnf song from 2021, so thanks for the nostalgia 😅
I'm not saying it's bad though
this comment feels like a complement and an insult 😭
@@wakooke I'm sorry 😢
my kitchen is flaming up please stop
im sorryyy :((
Good one!
thanks
“Uh oh! Wrong one- hit ,the,circle!”
1:24
circle
@@wakookecircle
we burning the kitchen with this one
Interesting
THIS SONG REALLY DOES FEEL LIKE GETTING SMASHED IN THE SKULL WITH A HAMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Nice job! 👍
thanks
Eh it’s not the worst fnf song. There is improvement to be made though.
Keep improving. Cause you can definitely improvement your music!!!
(Unless this was made like this on purpose)
im working on it
Yo it's doctor ret-
THIS IS SO FIRE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥MAKE IT STOP 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
burning
@@wakooke reflex doctor aldi fnf
Something looks off with his hair. also why does he have eye brows?
im bad at drawing gimmie a break 😭
this song made me die from cancer
cold
This song made me pregnant. Good reflex dude
This song made you realize that you can't make a better song
@@17xcBloodMouthis that a compliment or an insult
@@Definitelyachannelwtf does it look like to you?
flex bass when
i think i used 808 clean
FLP release? 👀👀
maybe.... once im fully happy with the song
@@wakooke okie :D
baldi basic
well done
Just one basic? No more?
@@17xcBloodMouth …I’m the Fucking Jonkler.. I alive for chaos- agent.
@@Nixus378lol
@@17xcBloodMouth laughing…. Out loud..? Of course- why so… hahaha…
aldi asics
It's time to faster
do it faster
am i a joke to you
isotope
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artstyle is ass. instrumental is ass. but vocals is good.
watch new version