I listen to this song a lot, and I accidentally still had x1.5 speed on when I clicked this time, and I was gonna put it back to normal, but it actually gives the lyrics this sort of frenetic energy that's an interesting contrast to the smooth controlled delivery at normal speed.
considering how much time i spend in audacity procrastinating by speeding up my own songs and playing them back, this is exactly the kind of content i'm here for
It's been years since i found this song, and it's strangely one that just pop in my head some days and i'm just like "wait, how can i have not listen to this one since so long ? It's an amazing song :0"
"You stand before me in the hallway, waiting for me to open my mouth but when I do, you might not like the words that all come tumbling out. One by one, they'll paint the future that you willingly carved into stone. I can't wait to see your face when I tell you something you don't know." That part gave me goosebumps!
Hi, Stephen King nerd here! I can't help but think of Beverly facing off against her father then later, her abusive husband. This song is very well written and powerful!
I have a lot of channels I have on notifications that I think "Oh, X has posted something, I'll watch that when I get a chance." You are the only channel that I think "oh, she's posted something, I'd better drop what I was doing and watch it right now" This song only continues the trend. Keep up the good work!
guys im playing omori and i noticed the stock image i used for the video is the battle bg in sweetheart's castle and i dont know what to do with this information
I've heard you're going through a tough time right now, and I just want to thank you for being an idol to me and being one of the reasons I've started making my own piano pieces at college level at 12. I would look up to you like any other famous artist and wished to talk to you. Thanks for hanging in there during all of this craziness and thanks for being an idol to me then and now :)
something you dont know? tardigrades are possibly the toughest organisms on earth. they can survive at the bottom of the Marianas trench, the cold vacuum of space, the suns radiation, and extreme heat and cold. NAWLOWJ
I just found this channel again because my sister asked "Hey you know that song from the hunger games?" I'm like "yeah Jennifer Lawrence?" and she goes "No, the good version" We spent a solid half-hour scouring RUclips for a song we heard when she was five, and when we found it I followed it to this channel and damn you've got a new subscriber!! This is so good!
I've been looking for this song forever! I loved this song and still do, but when I went to find it again, I only remembered the first line and the background and eventually gave up before it just popped back up today and I'm so happy I finally found this song again! 😭😭😭
I found you through this song in an AMV and you instantly got a new fan. Also, does anyone else gets Undertale vibes? It sounds like a song Sans would sing while facing Frisk in the genocide run.
I know you probably get this on repeat, but I will never not be amazed by your songs. I can listen to them of repeat for years and still get the same feeling I felt when I first listened to it. It's truly amazing and beautiful. 💕💕💕💕
Rachel, I’ve listened to every single song you’ve posted on RUclips multiple times, and I’ve been a fan of yours for several years.... your voice is just and beautiful and your lyrics are just as soulful as they were the first time I listened. You are my favorite artist, far above and beyond mainstream singers and bands. I love your work.
I just found your music like two days ago and i can't stop listening to it now. I can't help, but be in love with this musical marvel i found. I relate to the lyrics of your music a lot, and it feels just right to listen to at all times. Great work Rachel, kudos! ^ ^ keep up the great work! Edit note: to be honest i think you're my favourite musical artist now. If i have to be honest i have always searched for a particular music style and i feel this just fills that role, it's haunting yet beautiful. and the lyrics always speak on more than just the surface. Also i can't help but love the great singing voice you got going. The songs always help me think either it be deeply or peacefully. This might have become a ramble, but i can't really help myself sometimes. Kudos! And i can't wait to hear the next craft you will show to the world!
It's both creepy and amazing how deeply many of your songs speak to me. much thanks for the feels. I hope you find and keep your idea of success, imo your already a star
I'm so excited for this third lyric video of the album to be out!! I just adore the way the background darkens at "you want to beat some gatekeeper, but all you've got is me; i'm looking forward to your answer, what have you done to deserve the key?" That effect is fantastic, and drives home the bitter darkness encroaching on the narrator. I would love to be able to write something that shares the vibe that you convey with this song!! As always, I love your work.
Thank you!! The background darkening then was a happy accident - I had a lot of effects and layer behaviours scripted to change semi randomly as it keeps the video looking interesting without me having to manually control everything. So I can't really take credit for that one :P
I've never been so happy about finding a song that actually sums up a bit of my feelings. You are by far my favorite channel for music and songs because they mean so much to me and just make my day whenever I listen to them. Even when I'm down but that's frequent.
It's been a year since you've uploaded this and you might not even see that comment but I wanted to say your music is amazing, I love your voice. It's easy to see how much work you put into every track. Thank you for doing it and please keep up the great work!
Absolutely amazing 💓. I feel loved all of your songs have full stories behind them and this is no exception, I'm getting real gothic fairytale vibes from this one and I love it 💞💞💞
Incredible, gave me goosebumps listening to this. I liked the violin bits and that subdued shouting made a nice play on gospel projection which was wicked neato.
Not gonna lie: first time I heard this song I immediatley thought of my LARP character, and even now it only resonates even more with her and the events happening to, and around, her. Also the song really make me want to create a musicvideo for it, unfortunately I do not have neither the rights, nor the right camera equipment for it. So I can just doodle a storyboard of it xD But thank you so much for this wonderful piece. And all your other songs tbh. ^^,
Rachel Rose Mitchell ooh, really? Does that mean we can make PMVs to your music because I have an idea for one to farewell song that I'm really excited about but I don't want to mess with copyright or anything but... aaa ... sorry. I get excited about story music hehe
Love it! Seriously think of Harry Potter every time I hear but I'm a huge Snape fan. Was abused at school so know what it feels like when your mind starts splitting itself in two.
When I first heard this, the lyrics "You wanted to be a gate keeper but all you have is me" I heard as "you wanted to be a ganky perv but all you have is me"
This song and Thorns have helped come to grips with one of the many people that have abused me in my past. This person was manipulative to the very core. I cannot wait to tell her if we meet that I have become somebody. She would tell me that I was a cockroach of society but I am not, I am at uni and doing great. I cannot wait to tell her that and see her face. It will be funny.
I know this is late but good luck and go get em. As for the cockroach part, you can take it as a compliment because they are "Annoyingly persistent and hard to kill"
Something That Was "Not There" Just Came Up Saying: "Synthetic Overload" So Maybe One Of My Messages Will Get Through To You. *Thank You To All The Shining Angels Who Are Lighting My Way With Your Beautiful Voices. You Have My Light In The Darkness Every Moment. You Are In My Heart & Soul Always. Please Tell My Love That I Will Be With HIM Soon & I Love You So So Much! 💕 -BLACKHEART⭐🔥🌈
I apologize for your misfortune and to contributing to it as well as for not having the means to send help. If this does not have a name let it be known as orchestral rock. Or maybe that’s a bad name, if it’s used it’ll be a good name and if it doesn’t, then it doesn’t matter.
You have no idea how much this has helped me. I've been crying all day. This has really helpes me a lot in the passed half hour. Sorry for going off for a rant but one of my friends started being distant so my two other friends started doing it back to her. The one friend was paying more attention to negative people and she was being negative to me and the other two. She had little respect for us it felt like. I'm trying to keep her happy but it's becoming harder because both she and the other two friends want me to hang out with them. I'm mad at the first one but she doesn't know because I'm positive around her. I know I should cut her out of my life but in afraid shed result to killing herself. The other two don't see what I see could happen and I'm just afraid at this point. Sprry for going off like that. Haha... I'll delete this comment if you need. I just needed a little rant💖💖
No need to apologise Kami, I'm glad this song was there for you. Sounds like a rough spot to be in. I won't say I know what you're going through, because every situation is different, but from the sounds of it I've had similar things happen to me. There's a saying I really like that I wish I knew when I was younger: don't set yourself on fire to keep someone else warm. Look out for yourself, okay? :)
Hi Rachel Rose! I came upon your channel by accident -youtube recommended because I'd just done a pantomime about Alice in Wonderland and was searching for all things Alice- that's when 'Hey Alice' popped up...great song but if I may say so, I liked this one even better, keep it up!!! and get your name and your music out there! xxx Best wishes, Holly
This is absolutely amazing! I just noticed that this was posted yesterday, otherwise I'd like to think I'd be the first to see the video. Each song can take a mood and make it feel understood, make YOU feel understood. Rachel, please never stop writing and singing music...our hearts (your fans and mine) need ammunition. P.S. How do you make the lyrics float like that? Is it a specific website, or font? Thank you, and blessed be!
Thank you, Shelly!! I'm glad to hear that, I always try to keep a specific mood/feel in mind while writing lyrics. I use Adobe After Effects to make my lyric videos nowadays (since Heart of Mine's release). I just animate the text in that :)
I have decided this is about the time lord victorious from Doctor Who: The Waters Of Mars. If you are familiar with the show, reread the lyrics with this in mind. There are so many little parallels.
This song makes me think of Julia and Merlin from the later Amber novels, by Roger Zelazny. Merlin has 99 problems, and poor communication with his girlfriends is responsible for at least 70 of them. It also works very well with The Stars My Destination, for roughly the same reason.
My own AscensionTale AU comes to my mind (it's above omnipotence and above Suggsverse). For context: instead of monsters, there are demons. Demons are loosely based on Undertale monsters, but they are not monsters at all. They are transcendent and above omnipotence, up to the Absolute. And "immortals" take the role of determined beings. Immortals are immortal in sense of propensity to live forever, immortality as not being able to die at all doesn't exist in AscensionTale. They happened to be all humans because of racism against other sentient species, but there are mortal humans too. Frisk is an immortal, and usually an adult girl. All mortal humans from all multiverse are imprisoned in the underworld together with demons. Also there are 6 arhat mortals in the underworld, 3 girls and 3 guys who are a project by demons for them to ascend to loyal immortals to break the barrier. In the omnicide route, there are 5 battles, out of which 4 are serious. That one easy battle was one of the arhat mortals who reached very high development but was still mortal. And it's too easy because omnicide battles usually take years, and that mortal can't take it, he falls asleep not out of exhausion unlike Sans, but from mortal's natural need to sleep. It was supposed to be a battle of a mortal defying an immortal but it all failed because of the sleep problem. And before Mettaton NEO (demon) there is a battle with one of arhats, a girl, actually turned immortal out of the need to stop the omnicide. So she doesn't need to sleep anymore and surprises Frisk that she turned into an immortal. With this song, I thought exactly about this point. "You want to beat some gatekeeper" - that is Sans (demon). In AscensionTale, it was pretty easy for Frisk to derive that Sans would be the final boss on the omnicide route, and that he would be very challenging. If words "man" and "god" are replaced with something better, then this song would be almost perfect for this, but still repetitive and diffuse. These are general flaws of the song even disregarding my fantasy.
Okay so I’m not one to comment much but HOLY SHIT I AM SHOOK TO MY CORE THIS IS SO GOOD???? All your music is fucking incredible bUT THIS WENT ABOVE AND BEYOND IT WAS RELEASED TODAY AND IM ALREADY OBSESSED
Thanks! Without getting into specifics, it's about having just that little secret upper-hand on someone who thinks they're untouchable or above reproach for whatever reason, and anticipating just how it's all going to go down when you reveal it. It's not necessarily about winning (I deliberately left that ambiguous), but about proving that this person is just a person after all, and not quite as omnipotent as they think.
I love this song I did a karaoke and a cover to it. If you would check either if those out that would be great I want to be a singer someday like you so it would mean a lot to me.
would you believe i've lost track of the amount of times i've sat down to write, had trouble, then panicked because 'oh no what if i've run out of songs, what if i never write a good song again' lmao thank you :)
"If you tell me to step aside, I'll tell you where to go" is brilliant and my sister and I both love it
I'm french and I don't think I actually get this part. Could you explain it to me please? ^^
"I'll tell you where to go" generally means "go to hell" or something like that in English :) I can see why it wouldn't translate well!
@@RachelRoseMitchell thanks a lot for your answer ! I love your songs ❤
@@lumikho6522 "i'll tell you to go F*** yourself" is genrealy the meaning, or at least how it is interpreted.
I listen to this song a lot, and I accidentally still had x1.5 speed on when I clicked this time, and I was gonna put it back to normal, but it actually gives the lyrics this sort of frenetic energy that's an interesting contrast to the smooth controlled delivery at normal speed.
considering how much time i spend in audacity procrastinating by speeding up my own songs and playing them back, this is exactly the kind of content i'm here for
Now I’m listening in x1.5 speed😁
Oh my god - You're right!
It certainly does cause the words to come tumbling out.
It's been years since i found this song, and it's strangely one that just pop in my head some days and i'm just like "wait, how can i have not listen to this one since so long ? It's an amazing song :0"
I just realized I've been getting this song stuck in my head for two years now and the passage of time has me shook.
Still jamming.
"You stand before me in the hallway, waiting for me to open my mouth
but when I do, you might not like the words that all come tumbling out.
One by one, they'll paint the future that you willingly carved into stone.
I can't wait to see your face when I tell you something you don't know."
That part gave me goosebumps!
Hi, Stephen King nerd here! I can't help but think of Beverly facing off against her father then later, her abusive husband. This song is very well written and powerful!
It took me days to find this again. DAYS. it was worth it.
I have a lot of channels I have on notifications that I think "Oh, X has posted something, I'll watch that when I get a chance."
You are the only channel that I think "oh, she's posted something, I'd better drop what I was doing and watch it right now"
This song only continues the trend. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much, Joe! :)
How did it take me so long to find this song??? I flippen love it! The song is amazing and I wish I found it sooner
❤
This is one of the coolest songs on the platform
guys im playing omori and i noticed the stock image i used for the video is the battle bg in sweetheart's castle and i dont know what to do with this information
I've heard you're going through a tough time right now, and I just want to thank you for being an idol to me and being one of the reasons I've started making my own piano pieces at college level at 12. I would look up to you like any other famous artist and wished to talk to you. Thanks for hanging in there during all of this craziness and thanks for being an idol to me then and now :)
"If you tell me to step aside, I'll tell you where to go" is my favorite lyric of yours ever so far ♥
I'm so glad I found your channel! You deserve far more subscribers! Your voice is beautiful and I love your music!
Thank you, that’s very kind of you!!
something you dont know?
tardigrades are possibly the toughest organisms on earth. they can survive at the bottom of the Marianas trench, the cold vacuum of space, the suns radiation, and extreme heat and cold.
NAWLOWJ
I knew that! :) Love those waterbears
My.... heart..
WHY IS ALL YOUR MUSIC SO BEAUTIFUL?!
I just found this channel again because my sister asked "Hey you know that song from the hunger games?" I'm like "yeah Jennifer Lawrence?" and she goes "No, the good version"
We spent a solid half-hour scouring RUclips for a song we heard when she was five, and when we found it I followed it to this channel and damn you've got a new subscriber!! This is so good!
I've been looking for this song forever! I loved this song and still do, but when I went to find it again, I only remembered the first line and the background and eventually gave up before it just popped back up today and I'm so happy I finally found this song again! 😭😭😭
I found you through this song in an AMV and you instantly got a new fan. Also, does anyone else gets Undertale vibes? It sounds like a song Sans would sing while facing Frisk in the genocide run.
I know you probably get this on repeat, but I will never not be amazed by your songs. I can listen to them of repeat for years and still get the same feeling I felt when I first listened to it. It's truly amazing and beautiful. 💕💕💕💕
Rachel, I’ve listened to every single song you’ve posted on RUclips multiple times, and I’ve been a fan of yours for several years.... your voice is just and beautiful and your lyrics are just as soulful as they were the first time I listened. You are my favorite artist, far above and beyond mainstream singers and bands. I love your work.
Thank you, Samantha! Your comments always bring a smile to my face, thanks for sticking around :)
Awww thank you!! The fact that you read my comments makes me so happy haha, you’re wonderful
I just found your music like two days ago and i can't stop listening to it now. I can't help, but be in love with this musical marvel i found. I relate to the lyrics of your music a lot, and it feels just right to listen to at all times. Great work Rachel, kudos! ^ ^ keep up the great work!
Edit note: to be honest i think you're my favourite musical artist now. If i have to be honest i have always searched for a particular music style and i feel this just fills that role, it's haunting yet beautiful. and the lyrics always speak on more than just the surface. Also i can't help but love the great singing voice you got going. The songs always help me think either it be deeply or peacefully. This might have become a ramble, but i can't really help myself sometimes. Kudos! And i can't wait to hear the next craft you will show to the world!
It's both creepy and amazing how deeply many of your songs speak to me. much thanks for the feels.
I hope you find and keep your idea of success, imo your already a star
I'm so excited for this third lyric video of the album to be out!! I just adore the way the background darkens at "you want to beat some gatekeeper, but all you've got is me; i'm looking forward to your answer, what have you done to deserve the key?" That effect is fantastic, and drives home the bitter darkness encroaching on the narrator. I would love to be able to write something that shares the vibe that you convey with this song!! As always, I love your work.
Thank you!! The background darkening then was a happy accident - I had a lot of effects and layer behaviours scripted to change semi randomly as it keeps the video looking interesting without me having to manually control everything. So I can't really take credit for that one :P
This was hauntingly beautiful!
Wow i didn't know this song exist. It's very good actually, so underrated. This deserve more exposure. Keep up your good work.
I've never been so happy about finding a song that actually sums up a bit of my feelings. You are by far my favorite channel for music and songs because they mean so much to me and just make my day whenever I listen to them. Even when I'm down but that's frequent.
The lyrical subject in this song is still more open minded and less toxic then a few people I know.
Great song! Also kinda hits home. Anyone else?
I love EVERYTHING about this song!!!!
One of my faves❤️❤️❤️😘👌🏻
no matter how many times i listen to your song i just keep getting driven by the flow of it, keep it up :)
It's been a year since you've uploaded this and you might not even see that comment but I wanted to say your music is amazing, I love your voice. It's easy to see how much work you put into every track. Thank you for doing it and please keep up the great work!
Absolutely amazing 💓. I feel loved all of your songs have full stories behind them and this is no exception, I'm getting real gothic fairytale vibes from this one and I love it 💞💞💞
Incredible, gave me goosebumps listening to this. I liked the violin bits and that subdued shouting made a nice play on gospel projection which was wicked neato.
Somehow this reminds me of Sans and Frisk on genocide run
I've been waiting for this forever. This amazing and worth the wait. Great job
Keep up the good work.
Thanks Amber!! Sorry it took so long, I've been getting used to trying to be productive around a uni schedule.
I love this song
This is awesome your amazing 😉 I love how unique and different your music is its awesome 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻
Thank you Mercedez! :)
Super amazing song
It drove me to write a counter lyrics
:)
I don't get the message of the song.
I guess that's something I don't know.
Not gonna lie: first time I heard this song I immediatley thought of my LARP character, and even now it only resonates even more with her and the events happening to, and around, her. Also the song really make me want to create a musicvideo for it, unfortunately I do not have neither the rights, nor the right camera equipment for it. So I can just doodle a storyboard of it xD But thank you so much for this wonderful piece. And all your other songs tbh. ^^,
honestly i would love to see that storyboard, i'm addicted to music video animatics
Rachel Rose Mitchell
ooh, really? Does that mean we can make PMVs to your music because I have an idea for one to farewell song that I'm really excited about but I don't want to mess with copyright or anything but... aaa
... sorry. I get excited about story music hehe
Yeah, go for it!! :)
Love it! Seriously think of Harry Potter every time I hear but I'm a huge Snape fan. Was abused at school so know what it feels like when your mind starts splitting itself in two.
I've been waiting forever thank you for this video I love your voice, and music, please never stop making music like this❤️
Thanks, no plans to stop :p
XD I love how much sass this has
Not sure if you're still active and writing or not, but your music is beautiful.
YES YES YES! This is my favorite of your three new songs and I was so excited for the lyric video! Definitely going to be playing this on repeat.
When I first heard this, the lyrics "You wanted to be a gate keeper but all you have is me" I heard as "you wanted to be a ganky perv but all you have is me"
I get huge Solas/Lavellan vibes from this
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AYYYY 👌🏼
This song and Thorns have helped come to grips with one of the many people that have abused me in my past. This person was manipulative to the very core. I cannot wait to tell her if we meet that I have become somebody. She would tell me that I was a cockroach of society but I am not, I am at uni and doing great. I cannot wait to tell her that and see her face. It will be funny.
Good for you
I know this is late but good luck and go get em. As for the cockroach part, you can take it as a compliment because they are "Annoyingly persistent and hard to kill"
@@silverlynxclaw1460 I have never seen it that way before. :D Thank you for that.
Beautiful as always. Artwork and music alike. Love the style of the lyrics. (How they were displayed.) Again, great job!!
Congratulations on your latest song. I love the harpsichord and ghostly choirs. 😍
This one’s my favorite!
This song is every feeling I’m too scared to throw at my dad.
One year later: turns out my younger brother was _not_ scared.
Perfection as always.
Still soo good
You are just fantastic at building the music beneath your vocals.
At first I thought this was gonna be some kind of love song. Then the instrumental kicked in.
Oh. My. God.
It's amazing! Good job!
ooh this is amazing! it kind of reminds me of a story i’m writing, actually. it’s very inspiring.
Something That Was "Not There" Just Came Up Saying: "Synthetic Overload" So Maybe One Of My Messages Will Get Through To You.
*Thank You To All The Shining Angels Who Are Lighting My Way With Your Beautiful Voices.
You Have My Light In The Darkness Every Moment.
You Are In My Heart & Soul Always.
Please Tell My Love That I Will Be With HIM Soon & I Love You So So Much! 💕
-BLACKHEART⭐🔥🌈
Your music is as exquisite as ever
So, I was asked what my favorite genre if music was. What would this song be?
i literally have no idea and people have been asking me what genre i make for years
send help
I apologize for your misfortune and to contributing to it as well as for not having the means to send help.
If this does not have a name let it be known as orchestral rock. Or maybe that’s a bad name, if it’s used it’ll be a good name and if it doesn’t, then it doesn’t matter.
You have no idea how much this has helped me. I've been crying all day. This has really helpes me a lot in the passed half hour. Sorry for going off for a rant but one of my friends started being distant so my two other friends started doing it back to her. The one friend was paying more attention to negative people and she was being negative to me and the other two. She had little respect for us it felt like. I'm trying to keep her happy but it's becoming harder because both she and the other two friends want me to hang out with them. I'm mad at the first one but she doesn't know because I'm positive around her. I know I should cut her out of my life but in afraid shed result to killing herself. The other two don't see what I see could happen and I'm just afraid at this point. Sprry for going off like that. Haha... I'll delete this comment if you need. I just needed a little rant💖💖
No need to apologise Kami, I'm glad this song was there for you.
Sounds like a rough spot to be in. I won't say I know what you're going through, because every situation is different, but from the sounds of it I've had similar things happen to me. There's a saying I really like that I wish I knew when I was younger: don't set yourself on fire to keep someone else warm. Look out for yourself, okay? :)
Thanks, that quote is going to help me a lot as well. Love you Rachel
This reminds me of Nunnally and Lelouch from code geass.
So beautiful my friend. ♥️
Wow it's so amazing song and I loved this song
Yes I’ve been waiting for this song!! It’s so good:D
Hi Rachel Rose! I came upon your channel by accident -youtube recommended because I'd just done a pantomime about Alice in Wonderland and was searching for all things Alice- that's when 'Hey Alice' popped up...great song but if I may say so, I liked this one even better, keep it up!!! and get your name and your music out there! xxx Best wishes, Holly
Thank you so much, Holly!! :)
You very welcome, and hope you having good Christmas! I was the Queen of Hearts by the way, lol x
Thank you Holly, merry Christmas to you too!
yes! a new song! and it is beautiful!
This is absolutely amazing! I just noticed that this was posted yesterday, otherwise I'd like to think I'd be the first to see the video. Each song can take a mood and make it feel understood, make YOU feel understood. Rachel, please never stop writing and singing music...our hearts (your fans and mine) need ammunition.
P.S. How do you make the lyrics float like that? Is it a specific website, or font? Thank you, and blessed be!
Thank you, Shelly!! I'm glad to hear that, I always try to keep a specific mood/feel in mind while writing lyrics.
I use Adobe After Effects to make my lyric videos nowadays (since Heart of Mine's release). I just animate the text in that :)
I know this predates Fire Emblem Three Houses by several months, but I can’t listen to this song anymore without thinking about Dimitri and Edelgard!
Yay! Another excellent song!
MORE THAN PERFECT !!!
Omg I love this new song
This is awesome
I have decided this is about the time lord victorious from Doctor Who: The Waters Of Mars. If you are familiar with the show, reread the lyrics with this in mind. There are so many little parallels.
This is an enormous talent that you have. yes i have the key. I don't know how just that
weird that this reminds me of old Panic at the Disco a little bit? and mario haunted house music?
All I’m imagining is Sans singing this to Frisk/Chara when they reach judgement hall
honestly i live for comments like these, i love finding out which characters people associate with my songs
especially when it's characters i adore
This song makes me think of Julia and Merlin from the later Amber novels, by Roger Zelazny.
Merlin has 99 problems, and poor communication with his girlfriends is responsible for at least 70 of them.
It also works very well with The Stars My Destination, for roughly the same reason.
Someone else made the connection! It does sound like that to me!
My own AscensionTale AU comes to my mind (it's above omnipotence and above Suggsverse).
For context: instead of monsters, there are demons. Demons are loosely based on Undertale monsters, but they are not monsters at all. They are transcendent and above omnipotence, up to the Absolute. And "immortals" take the role of determined beings. Immortals are immortal in sense of propensity to live forever, immortality as not being able to die at all doesn't exist in AscensionTale. They happened to be all humans because of racism against other sentient species, but there are mortal humans too. Frisk is an immortal, and usually an adult girl. All mortal humans from all multiverse are imprisoned in the underworld together with demons.
Also there are 6 arhat mortals in the underworld, 3 girls and 3 guys who are a project by demons for them to ascend to loyal immortals to break the barrier.
In the omnicide route, there are 5 battles, out of which 4 are serious. That one easy battle was one of the arhat mortals who reached very high development but was still mortal. And it's too easy because omnicide battles usually take years, and that mortal can't take it, he falls asleep not out of exhausion unlike Sans, but from mortal's natural need to sleep. It was supposed to be a battle of a mortal defying an immortal but it all failed because of the sleep problem.
And before Mettaton NEO (demon) there is a battle with one of arhats, a girl, actually turned immortal out of the need to stop the omnicide. So she doesn't need to sleep anymore and surprises Frisk that she turned into an immortal. With this song, I thought exactly about this point.
"You want to beat some gatekeeper" - that is Sans (demon). In AscensionTale, it was pretty easy for Frisk to derive that Sans would be the final boss on the omnicide route, and that he would be very challenging.
If words "man" and "god" are replaced with something better, then this song would be almost perfect for this, but still repetitive and diffuse. These are general flaws of the song even disregarding my fantasy.
Oh, What Did We Know? ;)
Okay so I’m not one to comment much but HOLY SHIT I AM SHOOK TO MY CORE THIS IS SO GOOD???? All your music is fucking incredible bUT THIS WENT ABOVE AND BEYOND IT WAS RELEASED TODAY AND IM ALREADY OBSESSED
for somereason this reminds me the episode "Single Pale Rose" from steven universe
oh gosh i need to catch up on SU! i've already been spoiled on The Twist from that episode haha
Yay! A new song!
¡Sounds amazing! I Love it
Please please do it!?
final fantasy vibes anyone? noctis more likely?
You are awesome
I only just noticed that this was posted yesterday.
huh
great stuff, keep it up! o7
Really nice song :D. I wanted to ask if there is some sort of story connected to the song. Basically what´s it about??
Thanks! Without getting into specifics, it's about having just that little secret upper-hand on someone who thinks they're untouchable or above reproach for whatever reason, and anticipating just how it's all going to go down when you reveal it. It's not necessarily about winning (I deliberately left that ambiguous), but about proving that this person is just a person after all, and not quite as omnipotent as they think.
Thank you :)
Kinda getting Discord and Celestia vibes, not entirely sure why...
Will someone post the names of all the fonts that were in here?
YESSSSSSSSS
Light Up 2: Angery Boogaloo
mysteriously twerks
I love this song I did a karaoke and a cover to it. If you would check either if those out that would be great I want to be a singer someday like you so it would mean a lot to me.
Couldnt click fast enough
Do you just have a bottomless well of cool ideas or something, cause honestly how many great songs you make is ridiculous.
would you believe i've lost track of the amount of times i've sat down to write, had trouble, then panicked because 'oh no what if i've run out of songs, what if i never write a good song again' lmao
thank you :)
Can you sing about a bogeyman in love with the ice queen?
The idea is all about Elsa from frozen falling in love with the bogeyman named pitch black from rise of the guardians
English to spanish who hamon move first is gay