Im gonna be honest, it's possible to see that most of the shots are rushed you barely see any scenebuild or map it's just a blackvoid or a volumetric light on the background, i also think you should try to do some transitions because it doesnt look so good when it's just the camera switching shots or a blackscreen appearing out of nowhere and it's basically an important thing you should do because now it looks really weird seeing one shot with springbonnie the next with springtrap and golden freddy and then circus baby appears out of nowhere and it cuts to ennard without any type of transition yk, it's also possible to see that most of the movements are rushed which i wouldn't recommend doing it because it's a full animation no one gives you a due date for it, you should take your time and do your best, it's also possible to notice some random movements like at 0:53 , besides everything i said there's some parts that are really good like the fnaf 3 shots at 1:47 - 2:14 , 0:00 - 0:23 and etc next time you do a full animation try not to rush it, some ppl take months or even years to make the best product they could ever do, it's not a thing to be rushed and i hope you understand my critics
I completely agree with your statement mate and yes again Diamond sorry to bother if I am also repeating it tho as what some peeps say we shall take time to make a full, I’m making one now and I’m taking much time as possible but I don’t have a due date so you don’t have to worry when it shall finish , I might be done with what I got till November, anyways I hope next time we will see how things go with you Diamond :]]
Amazing man, I can confirm you have done way better than my first full animation , I liked the lighting and some shots around the video but I don’t recommend rushing , if you ever feel unmotivated then take a small rest like a day and a next day you continue the work . To gain new ideas or be motivated to go back to animating . Anyways good job :]
Well this was quite interesting First, I do wanna say that the lighting was pretty good for the most part, and I especially like the sequences in the begging, and some in the middle as well But, I think you could have pulled out a better product if you didn't rush a fair amount of shots (especially in the end) Also, the animation doesn't have a specific story, it's mostly loosely connected scenes pasted together Don't take this as hate, I'm just trying to give my criticism so you can improve in the future But overall, it came out decent, next time try to put it more time to the oven, so it doesn't come out half-baked (if you get what I mean)
pretty good, but a lot of the movements and ideas in general look really basic to me, and a lot of the shots really lack atmosphere and scenebuild, along with there being almost no transitions. pretty decent tho
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Im gonna be honest, it's possible to see that most of the shots are rushed you barely see any scenebuild or map it's just a blackvoid or a volumetric light on the background, i also think you should try to do some transitions because it doesnt look so good when it's just the camera switching shots or a blackscreen appearing out of nowhere and it's basically an important thing you should do because now it looks really weird seeing one shot with springbonnie the next with springtrap and golden freddy and then circus baby appears out of nowhere and it cuts to ennard without any type of transition yk, it's also possible to see that most of the movements are rushed which i wouldn't recommend doing it because it's a full animation no one gives you a due date for it, you should take your time and do your best, it's also possible to notice some random movements like at 0:53 , besides everything i said there's some parts that are really good like the fnaf 3 shots at 1:47 - 2:14 , 0:00 - 0:23 and etc
next time you do a full animation try not to rush it, some ppl take months or even years to make the best product they could ever do, it's not a thing to be rushed and i hope you understand my critics
I completely agree with your statement mate and yes again Diamond sorry to bother if I am also repeating it tho as what some peeps say we shall take time to make a full, I’m making one now and I’m taking much time as possible but I don’t have a due date so you don’t have to worry when it shall finish , I might be done with what I got till November, anyways I hope next time we will see how things go with you Diamond :]]
Amazing man, I can confirm you have done way better than my first full animation , I liked the lighting and some shots around the video but I don’t recommend rushing , if you ever feel unmotivated then take a small rest like a day and a next day you continue the work . To gain new ideas or be motivated to go back to animating . Anyways good job :]
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Well this was quite interesting
First, I do wanna say that the lighting was pretty good for the most part, and I especially like the sequences in the begging, and some in the middle as well
But, I think you could have pulled out a better product if you didn't rush a fair amount of shots (especially in the end)
Also, the animation doesn't have a specific story, it's mostly loosely connected scenes pasted together
Don't take this as hate, I'm just trying to give my criticism so you can improve in the future
But overall, it came out decent, next time try to put it more time to the oven, so it doesn't come out half-baked (if you get what I mean)
Absolutely perfecto
not even 15 seconds in i'm already amazed.
I just watched the video after writing the top message and IT'S AMAZING, JUST AMAZING!!@#!231254
Amazing
pretty good, but a lot of the movements and ideas in general look really basic to me, and a lot of the shots really lack atmosphere and scenebuild, along with there being almost no transitions. pretty decent tho