Great cartoon! I like the Direction you are going for but the visual effects are a bit wonky which can either be changed by improving your editing and vfx skills or by making everything real (using paper backgrounds etc). Still I love your cartoon!
Thank you for the feedback! It's greatly appreciated. I would love to make the backgrounds out of paper as well but I went with cg just for a quick and dirty look. Any suggestions on the VFX aspect? Any advice is greatly appreciated here. So thank you again for watching and giving me your honest take. 😁
One more thing that could be improved it the use of depth. Sometimes it's hard to follow the action or distinguish subjects from the background because of the way everything blends together. You could fix this using shadows or using a stylistic approach by making the subjects the opposite color from the background. The rest of your cartoon is perfect. I will definitely follow your progress with excitement! @@RandomActsofAnimation
Lol, love your honesty 🤪 thank you for the comment. I'll be honest, the entire episode isn't finished yet. I'm just now recording the voiceover work and animating the lip-syncing. It's going to be even better with the voice acting 🤣🤣
Great cartoon! I like the Direction you are going for but the visual effects are a bit wonky which can either be changed by improving your editing and vfx skills or by making everything real (using paper backgrounds etc). Still I love your cartoon!
Thank you for the feedback! It's greatly appreciated. I would love to make the backgrounds out of paper as well but I went with cg just for a quick and dirty look. Any suggestions on the VFX aspect? Any advice is greatly appreciated here. So thank you again for watching and giving me your honest take. 😁
One more thing that could be improved it the use of depth. Sometimes it's hard to follow the action or distinguish subjects from the background because of the way everything blends together. You could fix this using shadows or using a stylistic approach by making the subjects the opposite color from the background. The rest of your cartoon is perfect. I will definitely follow your progress with excitement! @@RandomActsofAnimation
@@aprildev1you are awesome! Thank you for your insight. I'll keep your points in consideration while I film the next part. Thank you again! 😊
Cool! I liked the fish stuff
The Red Herring is my favorite too 😁
Be sure to sub for more. I'm about to post the entire first act of Detective Allien soon. 😁 animating lip-syncing takes forever! 😅
@@RandomActsofAnimation subscribed! Can’t wait to see the rest of it!
Thank you 😊 you're awesome
This is amazing!
Thank you! 😊 I'm making backgrounds for the next part. Stay tuned for more.
@@RandomActsofAnimation Okay!!!
Cannibal aliens! Haha very nice
@@DireDungeonMaster thanks! I had that worm character in another cartoon and had to reuse him in this. I like his design.
WTF but awesome at the same time, im so confused!
Lol, love your honesty 🤪 thank you for the comment. I'll be honest, the entire episode isn't finished yet. I'm just now recording the voiceover work and animating the lip-syncing.
It's going to be even better with the voice acting 🤣🤣
@jeruubrblx782 I know right! His stuff is trippy AF! I love the style he's got going on.
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Nice