I love Jhope ff I think he would be very romantic.He is so handsome and gentle and funny.I love our sweet sunshine and hope he finds his forever love soon.
42:55 Surely it is the most pure form of love even in every pure relationship friendship lies. Friendship is truly something different from each and every relationships out there. It is friendship which makes any bond strong and pure.
*The best fanfiction i've ever read mannn!!!! I had multiple emotions while reading this i cried i laughed and also felt a bundle of butterlies in my stomach....This deserves more likes, comments and views...i really appreciate your hardwork...and Thank you sooo much for making a Jhope fanfiction... Please make more Jhope ff's....Saranghae...💜✨🤧*
Thank you so much 💗 I'll surely make more jhope ffs.. Right now I'm busy so i cannot make any ff.. i can make ffs only from july 2024.. I'm sorry, you'll have to wait..
One of the best ff I have read . especially when it comes to Jin,Rm,Suga and hobi 💜 great job army 👍 i hope i could get to read this types of ff . about BTS hyung line more 😅😊 amazing work keep going 🥰
Wow! I can't contain my happiness after reading your story. Such a great story, plot twist, ending and everything. Congratulations to author for this wonderful story. Thanks for this jhope ff. More stories to tell. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
OMG it is a masterpiece and it is really funny and cute and heartwarming at the same time the part where Jimin was complaining about hobi scolding them despite the fact that Y/n was his wife was too cute and when why and told them to marry each other I was rolling on the floor with laughter😂😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤
Author you are an amazing writer whole time i was blushing and smiling i love the friendship scene so much jhope innocence he is so cute. So amazing So beautiful So wonderful just looking like a wow❤❤❤
I'm here again with tears in my eyes as i finished watching this beautiful ff.... i watched this many times,but still my heart always pulls me here... if anyone is checking the comment section to confirm whether this ff is good or not dude you missed the bestest ff till now, so don't waste more time just play the ff and watch it... this the best hobi ff you will ever watch... common give it a try, because once you give it it will drag you here again just like how i ended up commenting here after watching it...
😂 ohh my god, you're here again.. I am surprised that you liked this story to such an extent.. because this story is not actually well written in my opinion the end half of the ff is quite rushed.. 😂 But still, I'm glad you loved it..💗
@@inflorescentff 😂😂..actually it is not rushed don't think like that this ff is a emotional one and every role is good, unlike some ffs where the story line is not good and the whole ff is being messed up no love only obsession i just don't like them but many people are loving those u can say I'm different i love when authors write their ffs with dedication.. and you are one of them🤍 pls continue to post hyung line ffs...
I'm crying😫...i never saw hobi ff before,this is the first time i watching.. and also i have no words to explain how i feel after watching this ff ....bcuz it is really beautiful..🥳.one of the best😝 and beautifull hobi ff..{~•~} 👉👈 AND!! ••YOU ARE AMAZING•• 🤗YOU ARE A REALLY GOOD STORY MAKER🤭😁
You don't know how much this ff had a affect on me. You are really best. ❤ I have cried i have laughed and fell butterfly and also bad for jimin. But all this are worthless for your hardwork and at lastly that BESTFRIEND and FRIENDSHIP thing was so Awesome. I really cried a lot after reading this 🤧🤧🫶. You deserve mor then this. I love you so much 😽😘❤️💓🥰
Please make more jhope ff He is my bias ...but i dont get his ff 😢😢 Anyway it was awesome and delightful 🎉❤❤ Make more hyung line ff please ❤❤❤ Love you This is my first ff in ur channel and i become ur subscriber !!!
Thank you so much 💗 I'll surely make more jhope ffs.. (he is my bias too) Right now I'm busy so i cannot make any ff.. i can make ffs only from july 2024.. I'm sorry, you'll have to wait..
Thanks for considering it a masterpiece 😅💗 And it's okay.. i honestly don't really expect much views from hyung line ff.. and i don't really care about views.. i write it because i like to write.. and also i want to write for those people who would be finding jhope ffs (or any other hyung line ff) , as there are not much ffs about them.. And also it has only been 1 day since i have posted it, so this is also one of the reasons that it has less views right now..
I actually don't feel that connection to yn in hyung line cause I consider them as my brothers but when I read any ff in which they are brother of yn I really felt good but also I like to read hyung line ff also so for me story matters more than characters 💓💓💜
author do you have any idea i came here again to watch this amaJIN ff why do you have to be so perfect 🤧 ikn I'm being dramatic but my words are true you are really good at story line and in presenting too.. lots of love from me🤍❤💜
@@inflorescentff thank you soo much for you too your ffs always make me happy🥺🤍🤍will you pls make more hobi ffs🥺🥺 i'm dying to watch hobii ffs... and you are the only one who can do justice for hobi ffs 💜🥺 pls make more hobii ffs
@@just_wanna_behappier3369 yes, I'll surely make more jhope ffs.. infact most of the ffs on my channel will be of jhope.. It's just that right now I'm really busy.. I'll be free from june-july.. and then I'll start writing FFs again.. there is already a jhope series in my draft, but it's not yet complete.. when I'll come back during june-july, I'll make more jhope ffs..
@@inflorescentff take your time author...i will wait for your new ffs as i completed watching all of your ffs dont worry till you come back i'm gonna rewatch your videos just like always... untill that stay healthy love you💜🤍❤
The story was beautiful and realistic. Maybe not 5 years in prison for her brother (what for? Was he abusive to his sister and mother? Or he stole her shares?) and his mother being ok with that. It was good that Hobi was fine with Jimin and was not insecure. The thing with daughters not being loved or appreciated is mostly an Asian thing. In Europe daughters are more welcomed then boys sometimes because they usually are behaving better, are better at studies and take more care of their elder parents in future then sons although not always of course.
For that 5 years in prison, the only explanation i would give is that he was also involved in all the things happening along with his dad.. both of them were planning all this.. but still there was less involvement from his side as compared to his dad, he got only 5 years.. maybe i should i have made it 2 years.. i don't really know.. The problem with this ff is that i didn't write everything in detail.. especially the part where they got exposed and were punished.. had it been a series, i would have mentioned the details.. i was making a oneshot, and because of this i had to cut down so many scenes at the end (even if i didn't want to).. so this is also a reason why there might be a few things that don't really make sense in this ff.. That is why I'm not really satisfied with this story (honestly speaking, i think I'm not really satisfied with any of my stories).. that is why i have decided that now i will try to write series.. that would be much better.. And about the daughters.. i won't really call it an asian thing.. it rather depends upon the mentality of the people.. even in asia there are people with good mentality and treat girls equally.. infact there are some places where girls are given more preference (because they are more responsible).. so things vary even in asia.. But yes i think i understood what you were saying.. because even if people have good mentality, there might be some people around them, trying to bring them down.. so it is a bit difficult for the person with good mentality..
Ohh yes.. i will surely make his FF.. i haven't posted any FF for yoongi and taehyung yet.. so i will post one for them too.. infact Yoongi's ff is currently in writing, but it's not complete.. i had just started writing that ff, but i didn't get enough time to complete it.. and I'm not sure when will i be able to complete it.. i have already told everyone that i will post FFs after june-july.. because only then i will get enough time.. But if it would be possible to complete the yoongi ff, i will post it before that.. but i can't promise.. I hope you understand.. I'll post it for sure, but i can't tell about the timing..
I think this story is already long enough, and the ending is already sufficient.. it doesn't really need bonus.. they have kids, they are happy, even jimin is happily married.. so now there is nothing else that i can show (atleast for now).. i don't really have anything in my mind that i can put in bonus part.. that would seem like dragging the story unecessarily.. Also i don't have time.. this was the story that i started to write almost 1 year ago, but i wasn't getting time to write any FFs, but somehow i completed and posted it.. i can't make bonus.. Neither i have idea, nor do i have time.. So I'm really sorry..
Sorry but I don't like the ending coz there was no need to bring cold husband thing disgusting You can end her up with her best friend but no u have to write some drama so that everyone can tell it's so beautiful blah blah blah when it's not Disgusting shits it is And it's my opinion so kindly mind your own business
I don't think that i have mentioned jhope as the cold husband in this whole story (not even in the title).. i don't know how you got the idea of the cold husband, when he clearly wasn't.. they had little misunderstandings because of which they fought once (only once), and even in that case, both of them were wrong, both y/n and jhope said something to eachother which they shouldn't.. but when they realized the truth, they tried to amend it.. although i didn't really show much about what happened in those 2-3 months , i just gave a little bit of summary.. And for the bestfriend thing, accept it or not, it's not always possible to fall for anyone you want, especially when you are in certain circumstances.. she didn't fall in love with him, that's completely fine, she cannot be forced to do so.. even jhope was not cruel or abusive, not even cold (like you said).. even i mentioned it earlier that he was really sweet and good professor untill someone disrespected him (which y/n used to do sometimes , by not caring about what he is saying).. so he was a little bit strict to her, like every teacher, to make her improve.. and along with that i also mentioned that he tried his best to understand her first and know what was wrong with her, but she wasn't bothered about telling her problem, so how would he even know.. honestly i also showed him like a typical teacher at a few points.. and after marriage it weren't even so many days , i think it was just two days after the marriage that he came to know about the truth, and he immediately communicated that with y/n.. and within those two days, he treated her respectfully, and even did everything to make her feel comfortable.. If i would have made jhope's character as rude, arrogant, abusive , etc. Then i i surely would have made y/n fall for jimin.. but in this case, it wasn't like that.. his character was understanding, mature, caring, willing to communicate whenever there was a problem, etc.. both jimin and jhope were good characters, so y/n had the right to fall in love with any one of them.. And if i would have to create that drama, then i wouldn't even have shown jimin being her bestfriend in the first place, this story was already going too long.. but i did show that part, infact i even wrote so much about him, that it almost felt like i was writing his story.. that is how i wanted the story to be.. maybe every story is like a happy ending for you.. but I'm sorry, i don't really like to write fairy tales all the time, there is one story that i have written, where she fell for her bestfriend jimin later on and had a good life, but every time it cannot be like that.. not everyone has a successful love story, and i wanted to show that pain.. jimin wasn't even hurt, because he knew that everyone's choice matters and it's okay if she doesn't love him, later on he found someone who loved him like he deserved, and so he fell for that girl.. And talking about opinion.. opinions are not something that are meant to be said the way you said.. that's not how you write OPINION.. you should definitely learn how to write opinions..
And there is one more thing that i would like to share to you, although i don't really like to tell about my personal life to others.. but maybe i should tell you so that you don't think that these things don't happen in reality.. I was a second lead in someone's story.. i fell for my friend, but he didn't love me.. he knew that i used to love him.. He fell for some else, and i helped them getting together.. Edit: i deleted what i wrote.. i don't know, but didn't really want to share such details.. but let me tell you, that you can keep me at jimin's place and that boy as y/n's place, and all those feelings were real, whatever i wrote at the end.. the only difference is that i didn't get another boy yet.. i just simply moved on.. and I'm happy with that.. it might be a little painful while going through it, but once you move on, everything is fine.. Both of us are still friends.. i don't want to say further, so i should stop.. I'm constantly writing and deleting everything lmao.. Maybe you haven't experienced such things, and honestly i don't even want you to experience this.. it's better if you understand this without experiencing it..
@@abhilashadubey4261 no no.. please don't say that.. you shouldn't be saying that.. i already wrote whatever i wanted to reply her.. Whenever you find such a comment, you should not really reply under that, especially when the creator has already replied to it (untill and unless you are having something to explain), because it sometimes lead to unnecessary arguements.. just ignore it.. even she said to do so.. so next time please keep that in mind.. thanks for your concern btw.. And yes I'll definitely try to do better in the next ff.. i feel like every time i write a oneshot, i keep messing it (the fact that i only have oneshots on my channel, p.s. there is a series , but it was in the very starting of this channel, so it is still not good and is quite small).. whenever i write oneshots , I'm always in a hurry to complete it.. also i always have to keep in mind the parts and duration, due to which I'm unable to put everything in the story that i want to.. and because of this reason i am never satisfied with my stories because i always find something missing.. I feel like i should start writing series.. that would be much better, in that way I'll be able to write each and every idea very precisely and express all the thoughts without any misunderstanding.. Oneshots doesn't really suit my ideas i guess.. I will not stop writing one shots, but I'll make it less frequent.. I'll prefer series (long or short).. But for now I'm not doing anything, I'm busy.. I'll start after july 2024..
23:08 she never disappointed anyone*
😂lol i made such a blunder..
Beware of cringe parts in this fanfiction lol 😂
👀👀👀👀👀👀 what a surprise? BTW... Gonna read now. I just refreshed my recommendation page and yhis popped out.
@@ansparkle_ffs3934 hehe.. kept this for nearly 1 year lmao 😂
You are such a great ff maker 💗
Every one have friends but I have no friends just because of my nature 😔😔😢
@@mafiaking69_eof1d thank you so much 💗
I love Jhope ff I think he would be very romantic.He is so handsome and gentle and funny.I love our sweet sunshine and hope he finds his forever love soon.
42:55 Surely it is the most pure form of love even in every pure relationship friendship lies. Friendship is truly something different from each and every relationships out there. It is friendship which makes any bond strong and pure.
It's the best Hoseok FF I've read till now. Good work author-nim. 💜
Thank you.. 💜
Hobi really need this kind of wife he is so innocent 😂❤
True 😂😅
We all need such supportive and kind people like Jimin around us. This ff was amazing💜
Thank you..💜
*The best fanfiction i've ever read mannn!!!! I had multiple emotions while reading this i cried i laughed and also felt a bundle of butterlies in my stomach....This deserves more likes, comments and views...i really appreciate your hardwork...and Thank you sooo much for making a Jhope fanfiction... Please make more Jhope ff's....Saranghae...💜✨🤧*
Thank you so much 💗
I'll surely make more jhope ffs..
Right now I'm busy so i cannot make any ff.. i can make ffs only from july 2024.. I'm sorry, you'll have to wait..
@@inflorescentff *No problem I will wait.... 💜*
Master of masterpieces
@@Bora.sparkleStars thank you..🤧💗
Wow it really amazing..the thing you put at last the love between friends 😊
Thank you so much 💗
Every one have friends but I have no friends 😞
Just because of my nature 😔😔😢
Don't be sad..
You'll surely make friends in future..
There's a long life ahead..
At 41:24 I read bad as bald….and imagined Hobi with a receding hairline 😂😂😂 omgggg I’m still imagining the science of that XDD
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Now even I'm laughing so hard because of this..🤣
One of the best ff I have read . especially when it comes to Jin,Rm,Suga and hobi 💜 great job army 👍 i hope i could get to read this types of ff . about BTS hyung line more 😅😊 amazing work keep going 🥰
Thank you so much 💗
Bro, Han jisung is my Bais 😂😂😂
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That is why i mentioned that it wasn't han jisung..
Wow! I can't contain my happiness after reading your story. Such a great story, plot twist, ending and everything. Congratulations to author for this wonderful story. Thanks for this jhope ff. More stories to tell. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Thank you so much 💗
Much love 💜 just saw this today and subbed today
Thank you so much 💗
Jimin is me in my life 💜
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OMG it is a masterpiece and it is really funny and cute and heartwarming at the same time the part where Jimin was complaining about hobi scolding them despite the fact that Y/n was his wife was too cute and when why and told them to marry each other I was rolling on the floor with laughter😂😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤
@@anchal473 thank you..🤧😂💗
Author you are an amazing writer whole time i was blushing and smiling i love the friendship scene so much jhope innocence he is so cute. So amazing
So beautiful
So wonderful just looking like a wow❤❤❤
Thank you so much 💗
One of the best ff I have read till date ❤Author great Work!! I truly loved it!!!
Thank you so much 💗
The best ff I've ever read 💜💜
Thank you so much..💜
@@inflorescentffmention not & keep going 💖
Omo 🤧🤧 this is so real....fuck. I love it so fucking much💜💜
Thank you..💜
Wowwww this was soo amazing 😍😍
Thank you so much 💗
I LOOOOOVE THIS,I NEED MORE‼️‼️👏🏾👏🏾🥰🥰🥰🔥🔥🔥
Thank you so much..💗
I'll definitely bring more after july..
Best story 😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰 love you jhope ❤❤
Thank you..💗
36:45 Well no doubt... His side profile is capable of piercing our souls.
39:08 Why butterflies are dancing in my stomach 🤭🤭🤭... BTW Loved it bro ❤
Thanks 💗
😂 don't worry, seokjin would be on his way to cut wings of those butterflies in your stomach 😂
@@inflorescentff Yahhh... That was harsh... You just ruined my delulu world. 🤣🤣🤣🤣
@@ansparkle_ffs3934 🤣🤣🤣
I have no words express it.
It's really awesome👍 💜
Thank you so much 💗
I'm here again with tears in my eyes as i finished watching this beautiful ff.... i watched this many times,but still my heart always pulls me here... if anyone is checking the comment section to confirm whether this ff is good or not dude you missed the bestest ff till now, so don't waste more time just play the ff and watch it... this the best hobi ff you will ever watch... common give it a try, because once you give it it will drag you here again just like how i ended up commenting here after watching it...
😂 ohh my god, you're here again..
I am surprised that you liked this story to such an extent.. because this story is not actually well written in my opinion the end half of the ff is quite rushed.. 😂
But still, I'm glad you loved it..💗
@@inflorescentff 😂😂..actually it is not rushed don't think like that this ff is a emotional one and every role is good, unlike some ffs where the story line is not good and the whole ff is being messed up no love only obsession i just don't like them but many people are loving those u can say I'm different i love when authors write their ffs with dedication.. and you are one of them🤍 pls continue to post hyung line ffs...
@@just_wanna_behappier3369 sure..
Just a few more days.. and i will be back with my stories..
My exam is on 26th may.. then i will be free..
@@inflorescentff woww same even i have exam on that day 😂
@@just_wanna_behappier3369 🤣🤣
Are you by any chance giving JEE Advanced ?
I'm crying😫...i never saw hobi ff before,this is the first time i watching.. and also i have no words to explain how i feel after watching this ff ....bcuz it is really beautiful..🥳.one of the best😝 and beautifull hobi ff..{~•~}
👉👈 AND!! ••YOU ARE AMAZING•• 🤗YOU ARE A REALLY GOOD STORY MAKER🤭😁
@@PROTECHCOCHIN thank you so much for your heartfelt comment..💗
So cute
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You don't know how much this ff had a affect on me. You are really best. ❤ I have cried i have laughed and fell butterfly and also bad for jimin. But all this are worthless for your hardwork and at lastly that BESTFRIEND and FRIENDSHIP thing was so Awesome. I really cried a lot after reading this 🤧🤧🫶. You deserve mor then this. I love you so much 😽😘❤️💓🥰
Thank you so much..🤧
Here, take my love..💗
Poor jimin 😭
Amazing 🙌
Thank you so much 💗
Please make more jhope ff
He is my bias ...but i dont get his ff 😢😢
Anyway it was awesome and delightful 🎉❤❤
Make more hyung line ff please ❤❤❤
Love you
This is my first ff in ur channel and i become ur subscriber !!!
Thank you so much 💗
I'll surely make more jhope ffs.. (he is my bias too)
Right now I'm busy so i cannot make any ff.. i can make ffs only from july 2024.. I'm sorry, you'll have to wait..
I can't believe you get such low views with this masterpiece 🙄
Thanks for considering it a masterpiece 😅💗
And it's okay.. i honestly don't really expect much views from hyung line ff.. and i don't really care about views.. i write it because i like to write.. and also i want to write for those people who would be finding jhope ffs (or any other hyung line ff) , as there are not much ffs about them..
And also it has only been 1 day since i have posted it, so this is also one of the reasons that it has less views right now..
I actually don't feel that connection to yn in hyung line cause I consider them as my brothers but when I read any ff in which they are brother of yn I really felt good but also I like to read hyung line ff also so for me story matters more than characters 💓💓💜
Eonnie i have no words its just an amazing story🫠❤️
Thank you..💗
3:09 I'm already having second lead syndrome yaarrrr
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@@inflorescentff Author the story is honestly great and of my taste. Btw how are you doing?
@@dramalover8683 I'm doing fine i guess.. honestly i don't know.. I'm quite stressed.. i have an exam tomorrow..🤧😂
What about you ?
author do you have any idea i came here again to watch this amaJIN ff why do you have to be so perfect 🤧 ikn I'm being dramatic but my words are true you are really good at story line and in presenting too.. lots of love from me🤍❤💜
Thank you so much.. 🤧💗
@@inflorescentff thank you soo much for you too your ffs always make me happy🥺🤍🤍will you pls make more hobi ffs🥺🥺 i'm dying to watch hobii ffs... and you are the only one who can do justice for hobi ffs 💜🥺 pls make more hobii ffs
@@just_wanna_behappier3369 yes, I'll surely make more jhope ffs.. infact most of the ffs on my channel will be of jhope..
It's just that right now I'm really busy..
I'll be free from june-july.. and then I'll start writing FFs again.. there is already a jhope series in my draft, but it's not yet complete.. when I'll come back during june-july, I'll make more jhope ffs..
@@inflorescentff take your time author...i will wait for your new ffs as i completed watching all of your ffs dont worry till you come back i'm gonna rewatch your videos just like always... untill that stay healthy love you💜🤍❤
@@just_wanna_behappier3369 you too take care..💗
The story was beautiful and realistic. Maybe not 5 years in prison for her brother (what for? Was he abusive to his sister and mother? Or he stole her shares?) and his mother being ok with that.
It was good that Hobi was fine with Jimin and was not insecure.
The thing with daughters not being loved or appreciated is mostly an Asian thing. In Europe daughters are more welcomed then boys sometimes because they usually are behaving better, are better at studies and take more care of their elder parents in future then sons although not always of course.
For that 5 years in prison, the only explanation i would give is that he was also involved in all the things happening along with his dad.. both of them were planning all this.. but still there was less involvement from his side as compared to his dad, he got only 5 years.. maybe i should i have made it 2 years.. i don't really know..
The problem with this ff is that i didn't write everything in detail.. especially the part where they got exposed and were punished.. had it been a series, i would have mentioned the details.. i was making a oneshot, and because of this i had to cut down so many scenes at the end (even if i didn't want to).. so this is also a reason why there might be a few things that don't really make sense in this ff..
That is why I'm not really satisfied with this story (honestly speaking, i think I'm not really satisfied with any of my stories).. that is why i have decided that now i will try to write series.. that would be much better..
And about the daughters.. i won't really call it an asian thing.. it rather depends upon the mentality of the people.. even in asia there are people with good mentality and treat girls equally.. infact there are some places where girls are given more preference (because they are more responsible).. so things vary even in asia..
But yes i think i understood what you were saying.. because even if people have good mentality, there might be some people around them, trying to bring them down.. so it is a bit difficult for the person with good mentality..
pls make more hobi ffs.......... this ff is really AMAZING 💓💓💓🤍🤍💜
Yes, I will..
Thank you so much 💗
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Can you please make yoongi ff
Ohh yes.. i will surely make his FF.. i haven't posted any FF for yoongi and taehyung yet.. so i will post one for them too.. infact Yoongi's ff is currently in writing, but it's not complete.. i had just started writing that ff, but i didn't get enough time to complete it.. and I'm not sure when will i be able to complete it.. i have already told everyone that i will post FFs after june-july.. because only then i will get enough time..
But if it would be possible to complete the yoongi ff, i will post it before that.. but i can't promise..
I hope you understand..
I'll post it for sure, but i can't tell about the timing..
Bonus part please
I think this story is already long enough, and the ending is already sufficient.. it doesn't really need bonus.. they have kids, they are happy, even jimin is happily married.. so now there is nothing else that i can show (atleast for now).. i don't really have anything in my mind that i can put in bonus part.. that would seem like dragging the story unecessarily..
Also i don't have time.. this was the story that i started to write almost 1 year ago, but i wasn't getting time to write any FFs, but somehow i completed and posted it.. i can't make bonus..
Neither i have idea, nor do i have time..
So I'm really sorry..
Sorry but I don't like the ending coz there was no need to bring cold husband thing disgusting
You can end her up with her best friend but no u have to write some drama so that everyone can tell it's so beautiful blah blah blah when it's not
Disgusting shits it is
And it's my opinion so kindly mind your own business
I don't think that i have mentioned jhope as the cold husband in this whole story (not even in the title).. i don't know how you got the idea of the cold husband, when he clearly wasn't.. they had little misunderstandings because of which they fought once (only once), and even in that case, both of them were wrong, both y/n and jhope said something to eachother which they shouldn't.. but when they realized the truth, they tried to amend it.. although i didn't really show much about what happened in those 2-3 months , i just gave a little bit of summary..
And for the bestfriend thing, accept it or not, it's not always possible to fall for anyone you want, especially when you are in certain circumstances.. she didn't fall in love with him, that's completely fine, she cannot be forced to do so.. even jhope was not cruel or abusive, not even cold (like you said).. even i mentioned it earlier that he was really sweet and good professor untill someone disrespected him (which y/n used to do sometimes , by not caring about what he is saying).. so he was a little bit strict to her, like every teacher, to make her improve.. and along with that i also mentioned that he tried his best to understand her first and know what was wrong with her, but she wasn't bothered about telling her problem, so how would he even know.. honestly i also showed him like a typical teacher at a few points.. and after marriage it weren't even so many days , i think it was just two days after the marriage that he came to know about the truth, and he immediately communicated that with y/n.. and within those two days, he treated her respectfully, and even did everything to make her feel comfortable..
If i would have made jhope's character as rude, arrogant, abusive , etc. Then i i surely would have made y/n fall for jimin.. but in this case, it wasn't like that.. his character was understanding, mature, caring, willing to communicate whenever there was a problem, etc.. both jimin and jhope were good characters, so y/n had the right to fall in love with any one of them..
And if i would have to create that drama, then i wouldn't even have shown jimin being her bestfriend in the first place, this story was already going too long.. but i did show that part, infact i even wrote so much about him, that it almost felt like i was writing his story.. that is how i wanted the story to be.. maybe every story is like a happy ending for you.. but I'm sorry, i don't really like to write fairy tales all the time, there is one story that i have written, where she fell for her bestfriend jimin later on and had a good life, but every time it cannot be like that.. not everyone has a successful love story, and i wanted to show that pain.. jimin wasn't even hurt, because he knew that everyone's choice matters and it's okay if she doesn't love him, later on he found someone who loved him like he deserved, and so he fell for that girl..
And talking about opinion.. opinions are not something that are meant to be said the way you said.. that's not how you write OPINION.. you should definitely learn how to write opinions..
And there is one more thing that i would like to share to you, although i don't really like to tell about my personal life to others.. but maybe i should tell you so that you don't think that these things don't happen in reality..
I was a second lead in someone's story.. i fell for my friend, but he didn't love me.. he knew that i used to love him..
He fell for some else, and i helped them getting together..
Edit: i deleted what i wrote.. i don't know, but didn't really want to share such details.. but let me tell you, that you can keep me at jimin's place and that boy as y/n's place, and all those feelings were real, whatever i wrote at the end.. the only difference is that i didn't get another boy yet.. i just simply moved on.. and I'm happy with that.. it might be a little painful while going through it, but once you move on, everything is fine..
Both of us are still friends.. i don't want to say further, so i should stop.. I'm constantly writing and deleting everything lmao..
Maybe you haven't experienced such things, and honestly i don't even want you to experience this.. it's better if you understand this without experiencing it..
Author don't get bother by such idiots who doesn't know anything about story writing
You did a great job here
And yes It can get more better ❤❤❤❤❤😊
@@abhilashadubey4261 no no.. please don't say that.. you shouldn't be saying that.. i already wrote whatever i wanted to reply her..
Whenever you find such a comment, you should not really reply under that, especially when the creator has already replied to it (untill and unless you are having something to explain), because it sometimes lead to unnecessary arguements.. just ignore it.. even she said to do so.. so next time please keep that in mind.. thanks for your concern btw..
And yes I'll definitely try to do better in the next ff.. i feel like every time i write a oneshot, i keep messing it (the fact that i only have oneshots on my channel, p.s. there is a series , but it was in the very starting of this channel, so it is still not good and is quite small).. whenever i write oneshots , I'm always in a hurry to complete it.. also i always have to keep in mind the parts and duration, due to which I'm unable to put everything in the story that i want to.. and because of this reason i am never satisfied with my stories because i always find something missing..
I feel like i should start writing series.. that would be much better, in that way I'll be able to write each and every idea very precisely and express all the thoughts without any misunderstanding..
Oneshots doesn't really suit my ideas i guess..
I will not stop writing one shots, but I'll make it less frequent.. I'll prefer series (long or short)..
But for now I'm not doing anything, I'm busy.. I'll start after july 2024..
@@inflorescentff OK dear I will wait for you