What If Naruto Became The Ice King Shinobi

[@joelzuniga2112]

This story was awesome keep up the great work looking forward to part2 please 😊😊😊😊😊

[@joshualiedle5124]

Please do a part 2 this is one of my favorite ones!!

[@jacksonmburu-oq4nq]

this story is very excellent and awesome plz part 2

[@predrag2320]

Part 2 please

[@sn1pesh0t93]

Feel like whoever wrote this has the grammer of a 13 year old, ngl

[@TopG-wg6qg]

Nah the grammar of 7 year old

[@anthonyhuffman1692]

The logic of these stories makes no sense. Naruto didn't ask the third to release. Who his father was to the everybody? He just asked if he could know and he's up to age at this point. He can keep a d*** secret so why don't they tell him? I never understood that in the original story. And many of these fan fiction authors keep up. We can't tell you. Your father didn't want you to know until you're this age or whatever? So what the boy deserves to know? He's been f****** suffering under the hands of the villagers and they're worrying about villages halfway across the continent, sending assassins. He's getting treated like s*** in his village already. Why can't he know something positive?

[@sn1pesh0t93]

And whats the point of having the ice ice fruit if you not gonna use its intangibles???

[@jamesboone8520]

the story plot is good but the grammer is crap like yoda jumped in and started reading at random or the ai readine this had a stroke.

[@jamesboone8520]

link pls

[@michaellindsay22]

Yea grammer def lousy

[@EdwardMontes-l9f]

Part 2 please

[@johnathanhenderson93]

Part 2 please