It's pathetic .. sorry ... I mean it would have been so kuch better if they would have separated. But here she lost her life in life .. indirectly rayah won anyways
The ending was ok. But seriously??? She didn't confronted Jimin about their.problem. 🥴 and she just let his bestfriend to steal his boyfriend's attention.. she is weak...but yah, the ending was ok. 🤐
It was always the boyfriend's choice to rather stay with his girl or fulfill his so called promises!! Yn could have been bold but here she cares and respects her bf's decisions..🙂
I wish you didn't made her an obsessed ghost in the end. You could've let her die and jimin regrets bigtime or you can just make her break up with him.
Your ff’s are good but endings are not bcz we dont see more, its like you cut them. Please make bonus parts. I understand that its so stressful to writte ff’s but first end 1 ff an make bonus ( if the end is not okay) and then, start to writte the new one
Hi, of course there's an answer. I put Reyah's scene then y/n's where they fight over who Jimin really loves more. I also put that it's obvious that Reyah likes jimin and she always tries to break up y/n and jimin. I also put how Reyah behaved towards Jimin, I just explained Reyah's clinginess instead of making a scene because the video would be too long
@sushmita699 i already said that reyah posted their picture together so which means he ditched his date to be with reyah. And he left y/n on that night because of reyah, didn't i mentioned that another person called him to be with reyah??
@injuche that's what I'm asking 😂😂 I'm sorry I think you're not understanding my question, at first he ditched the date to be with his gbf right??? So did he do it intentionally?? To spend time with his gf eating pizza?? or did he forget the date or what?? Because when he came to the restaurant you mentioned that he was stuck somewhere what do you mean by somewhere ?? and forgot his phone. And the second time when he left her he first cut his gbf call then received some unknown number, who was that??? And if he intentionally left Yn both the time to be with his gbf then why did he claim to love Yn???
@sushmita699 the genre or concept of this ff is thriller, mystery and dark romance. There's some circumstances that'll leave without any answer. You can work with your own imagination if it's not contained inside the story. I hope this helps you to sort things out about this topic, thank you 🎀
Ohhh myy GAWDD I am surprised 🙀 like the ending was unexpected I just loved it.... Ummmmm ik that I am the only one asking this but I thing that it needs a bonus ? Cause I wanna see what actually happened between Reyah and Jimin and ofcourse Y/N did she actually died ? Cause there were two I got confused hehehe lol 😂
wahhh dudeee the ending tho!!! was that a ghost of y/n?? and who was with him then after the accident!?? im confused tho!! but anyways it was amazing!🤭😘😆
It was both yn obviously she got hit but the story got short cut she bcome ghost instantly and appear to jimin as if nothing happen to her as jimin didnt see her lifeless body he thought that is not yn got hit but in reality she is and her ghost bcome selfish now not leaving him forever 😁
The story was great but…
It looks like YN’s ghost became obsessed lol
It's pathetic .. sorry ...
I mean it would have been so kuch better if they would have separated. But here she lost her life in life .. indirectly rayah won anyways
I know right. Aish. I'm kinda sad about her end
Ha ha!! The ending was unexpected but, I love it. A bonus would be really nice. What happens next with Jimin and Reyah? Y/N should haunt them both.
This masterpiece must have a bonus, right?!!
The ending was ok. But seriously??? She didn't confronted Jimin about their.problem. 🥴 and she just let his bestfriend to steal his boyfriend's attention.. she is weak...but yah, the ending was ok. 🤐
It was always the boyfriend's choice to rather stay with his girl or fulfill his so called promises!!
Yn could have been bold but here she cares and respects her bf's decisions..🙂
I wish you didn't made her an obsessed ghost in the end. You could've let her die and jimin regrets bigtime or you can just make her break up with him.
What a scary ending….
Ending was unexpected! yet good 👍
The story was great but the ending was very unexpected and....a bit weird 😅
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Your ff’s are good but endings are not bcz we dont see more, its like you cut them. Please make bonus parts.
I understand that its so stressful to writte ff’s but first end 1 ff an make bonus ( if the end is not okay) and then, start to writte the new one
Wowww amazing
Is in the last there were both y/n and ghost?? I mean the one in front of mirror was y/n and the ghost which he has seen was his imagination or what??
that was y/n's ghost too
Ohh.. So that means y/n is alive.. And it was her ghost whom he has seen..
Tysm for clearing my doubt btw your fan fictions are amazing 😭
@@UmmeHabiba-j8r yn is not alive she's dead she became ghost and haunting him now
So why did he left her??? Ditch the date and all this??? Are we going to get any answer??
Hi, of course there's an answer. I put Reyah's scene then y/n's where they fight over who Jimin really loves more. I also put that it's obvious that Reyah likes jimin and she always tries to break up y/n and jimin. I also put how Reyah behaved towards Jimin, I just explained Reyah's clinginess instead of making a scene because the video would be too long
@injuche no I'm mean I am talking about why Jimin ditched the date and went with his gbf and why he again left her at night to go to rhea
@sushmita699 i already said that reyah posted their picture together so which means he ditched his date to be with reyah. And he left y/n on that night because of reyah, didn't i mentioned that another person called him to be with reyah??
@injuche that's what I'm asking 😂😂 I'm sorry I think you're not understanding my question, at first he ditched the date to be with his gbf right??? So did he do it intentionally?? To spend time with his gf eating pizza?? or did he forget the date or what?? Because when he came to the restaurant you mentioned that he was stuck somewhere what do you mean by somewhere ?? and forgot his phone. And the second time when he left her he first cut his gbf call then received some unknown number, who was that???
And if he intentionally left Yn both the time to be with his gbf then why did he claim to love Yn???
@sushmita699 the genre or concept of this ff is thriller, mystery and dark romance. There's some circumstances that'll leave without any answer. You can work with your own imagination if it's not contained inside the story. I hope this helps you to sort things out about this topic, thank you 🎀
Ohhh myy GAWDD I am surprised 🙀 like the ending was unexpected I just loved it.... Ummmmm ik that I am the only one asking this but I thing that it needs a bonus ? Cause I wanna see what actually happened between Reyah and Jimin and ofcourse Y/N did she actually died ? Cause there were two I got confused hehehe lol 😂
wahhh dudeee the ending tho!!! was that a ghost of y/n?? and who was with him then after the accident!?? im confused tho!! but anyways it was amazing!🤭😘😆
Huh???????clearly, it was YN.. 🥴
@@amibangtan3503 but both were not y/n rgt so who was the other one? i was asking that!!
@tanushreepoojary-f3u It was both y/n bestie, ghost can teleport anywhere
@@injuche ohhk i got it!!
It was both yn obviously she got hit but the story got short cut she bcome ghost instantly and appear to jimin as if nothing happen to her as jimin didnt see her lifeless body he thought that is not yn got hit but in reality she is and her ghost bcome selfish now not leaving him forever 😁
Loved it💜💜💜
Caught you in 22 minutes
Plzz don't make ffs like not ending up together happily..
I know these are also good but being an soft hearted girl i can't see them separating 😊🙏
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