Wow, you ladies are awesome. I very much appreciate the thorough and useful critique. Bullseye on "clawing."I will definitely be making a couple of changes. This project is currently in the query trenches and it's been hard but thankfully I've been receiving some requests. Once again, I appreciate the time you all took. God bless.
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Wow, you ladies are awesome. I very much appreciate the thorough and useful critique. Bullseye on "clawing."I will definitely be making a couple of changes. This project is currently in the query trenches and it's been hard but thankfully I've been receiving some requests. Once again, I appreciate the time you all took. God bless.
Those query trenches are the worst!
Glad we were able to help! It's a great piece and hopefully it'll land somewhere!