Mr. Bharat is a good speaker. Two parts to be improved: First, like the others said, the analogy that life is like camping misleads the audience about the theme. The camping story is also not compelling. Staying up all night is to avoid disturbing others. The story is not relatable. I can’t say if it is people pleasing or giving. Second, the theme is about giving, which may not appeal to a large group of people, who think I don’t have enough to give or why I should give because I have not gotten anything from others. His speech lacks a point or story that can resonate with everyone, regardless of their financial background or political views. However, I really like his humor.
I find the camping analogy to life is weak and isn’t connected very strongly throughout the story. Camping was just probably 30% of the speech and yet it was introduced right away and I thought it was the central theme of the entire speech (and it is not). He has a few jokes in the speech, but the general feeling of the speech is down for the most parts. I would like a even more positive conclusion than just a call to action. Maybe some statistic of rising number of donors over time. Then ask the audiences to join the group and be part of this donating movement. Just my opinions
I agree with Terrie. Bharat has amazing skills as speaker, but the takeaway for the audience was confuse. Give is a very general concept, needs to be more specific. One more thing. the character of Papa was built great from the beginning but suddenly disappears. Congratulations, Bharat, to be one of the best of the world!
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Mr. Bharat is a good speaker. Two parts to be improved: First, like the others said, the analogy that life is like camping misleads the audience about the theme. The camping story is also not compelling. Staying up all night is to avoid disturbing others. The story is not relatable. I can’t say if it is people pleasing or giving. Second, the theme is about giving, which may not appeal to a large group of people, who think I don’t have enough to give or why I should give because I have not gotten anything from others. His speech lacks a point or story that can resonate with everyone, regardless of their financial background or political views. However, I really like his humor.
Also instead of saying "one single thing he said one thigle thing"
Can I send you a video of my speech to evaluate please.
The sound of the videos is not good
I find the camping analogy to life is weak and isn’t connected very strongly throughout the story. Camping was just probably 30% of the speech and yet it was introduced right away and I thought it was the central theme of the entire speech (and it is not). He has a few jokes in the speech, but the general feeling of the speech is down for the most parts. I would like a even more positive conclusion than just a call to action. Maybe some statistic of rising number of donors over time. Then ask the audiences to join the group and be part of this donating movement.
Just my opinions
I agree with Terrie. Bharat has amazing skills as speaker, but the takeaway for the audience was confuse. Give is a very general concept, needs to be more specific. One more thing. the character of Papa was built great from the beginning but suddenly disappears. Congratulations, Bharat, to be one of the best of the world!
He’s my friends dad lol