Study Time #9: English Language Paper 2, Question 5

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  • @mkaif6446
    @mkaif6446 3 года назад +643

    This guys rated i did my exams in 2019 and passed cuz of him he predicted the correct poems I remember sitting in the exam and laughing at myself when i saw the poems😂💯

    • @Bibbaro0
      @Bibbaro0 3 года назад +52

      glad you got so lucky

    • @anstinantony4779
      @anstinantony4779 3 года назад +15

      damn I have my mocks today.

    • @Bibbaro0
      @Bibbaro0 3 года назад +7

      @@anstinantony4779 good luck broski

    • @anstinantony4779
      @anstinantony4779 3 года назад +4

      @@Bibbaro0 thank you bro 15 mins till

    • @Bibbaro0
      @Bibbaro0 3 года назад +6

      @@anstinantony4779 how did it go bro alhamdulilah hopefully u passed bro

  • @navnax9339
    @navnax9339 3 года назад +355

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    • @hritikjeswani8249
      @hritikjeswani8249 2 года назад +3

      for real lmao

    • @emaanfaruki6846
      @emaanfaruki6846 3 месяца назад +1

      probably aqa disliking cos he is gonna get everyone the grade 9s 😭

  • @aiyanyaqoob2203
    @aiyanyaqoob2203 Год назад +59

    Learnt more from you in 23 minutes than my teacher for 1 year

  • @DSGDolphin
    @DSGDolphin 3 года назад +155

    I have my English Language Exam tomorrow. I'm peeking at a Grade 8, this has made me feel more confident, thanks.

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  3 года назад +22

      You’re welcome

    • @itzevan3168
      @itzevan3168 2 года назад +6

      how much did Mr everything English help for you and what grade did you finally get?

    • @DSGDolphin
      @DSGDolphin 2 года назад +2

      @@itzevan3168 oh sorry for not replying i've been busy with A levels. I got a grade 8 at GCSE. his channel was really useful for nailing the structure of GCSE style essay writing

    • @DSGDolphin
      @DSGDolphin 2 года назад +1

      @@walterwhite59499 I got a grade 8 at GCSE. i'm not the smartest person in the world, that was my best grade out of everything. Mr everything english really helped

    • @dapo7930
      @dapo7930 2 года назад +7

      Hope we all get great grades and we will in Jesus name amen

  • @emilyjeffri
    @emilyjeffri 3 года назад +92

    ayo i just wanna thank you for repeating certain words and phrases!! i tend to get distracted because of my add so it genuinely really helps me focus! :)

  • @LeviParsons31
    @LeviParsons31 3 года назад +90

    I am in year 10 doing my English mocks next week (unfortunately cause its my birthday) and am expected grades 8s and 9s when I do my GCSEs, but my English teachers are terrible and contradict each other every other lesson. Your videos have greatly helped and I look forward to using them a lot more in the future when I am preparing for my actual GCSEs

    • @aqeel6440
      @aqeel6440 2 года назад +15

      holy shit, not many people revise in year 10, i respect that

    • @mirshathmohamed2814
      @mirshathmohamed2814 Год назад

      What grades did you get in your final GCSE?

    • @LeviParsons31
      @LeviParsons31 Год назад +5

      @@mirshathmohamed2814 got a 7 in English lit and an 8 in English Lang! Was so happy with those results!

    • @Napoloen08
      @Napoloen08 Год назад +1

      @@LeviParsons31 happy for you man

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Год назад +10

    Brother your teaching is like a medication for my anxiety, thank you teacher, blessings 🎉

  • @blankpain1581
    @blankpain1581 2 года назад +20

    I literally went from a Grade 4 to a Grade 8 in just a few videos watching this guy

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Год назад +10

    Great teaching gift brother, please educate the nation through your teaching, God bless brother Amen 🎉

  • @illiagorenkov7491
    @illiagorenkov7491 6 месяцев назад +3

    I just want to say the huge thank you for this video. Im not fluent english speaker and Im still learning the language. But I got 32/40 for this question on my mocks. Its my biggest reason to be proud at the moment

  • @PA5S
    @PA5S 2 года назад +26

    2 hour until exam. This really helped.

    • @aminmouici7534
      @aminmouici7534 2 года назад

      which exam are you doing aqa retake ?

  • @m0nsoon660
    @m0nsoon660 3 года назад +19

    Juss published this before my assessments (important for my final grades because TAGs), what a goat 🐐

  • @kaik0567
    @kaik0567 2 года назад +17

    extremely helpful and I feel really good and confident for my mock exam tomorrow

  • @fizz_xs
    @fizz_xs 2 года назад +27

    This really did help, I have my mock for paper 2 tomorrow, I hope it goes well. Wish me luck!!

    • @fizz_xs
      @fizz_xs 2 года назад +2

      @@walterwhite59499 Honestly? It went pretty okay, it wasn't as intense as paper 1. I'm just waiting for my results now. I got a 7 last time, I have no idea what I'll get this time...I just hope it's at least a 5 😂

    • @aliakram478
      @aliakram478 2 года назад

      @@fizz_xs lol i got a 4 in paper 1 and 7 in papper 2

    • @fizz_xs
      @fizz_xs 2 года назад +1

      @@aliakram478 Woah that's a big jump, well done! I got the same as last time, I got a 7 again which i wasn't really pleased about as I expected higher but at least I'm consistent.

    • @aliakram478
      @aliakram478 2 года назад

      @@fizz_xs nice

    • @rydondeznuts1455
      @rydondeznuts1455 2 года назад

      @@fizz_xs what was your question 5 bro

  • @bo-katankryze4486
    @bo-katankryze4486 3 года назад +18

    I got 27/40 right after watching this last minute ,thank you so much, I had to watch this again for my mocks

  • @amii.na_b
    @amii.na_b 3 года назад +16

    fam I wish he was my English teacher instead. Actually payed attention throughout the entire video and understood a lot. Thank you so much!

  • @shaaravguha3760
    @shaaravguha3760 2 года назад +7

    These videos have helped me produce the most useful/concentrated notes ever; before this I've only been able to get 8s and 7s, but I'm gonna try for a 9.

    • @xoxox3658
      @xoxox3658 2 года назад +3

      how do you even manage to get 7s i got a 4😭😭

  • @madiha6282
    @madiha6282 3 года назад +10

    Thank you so much sir, because of your videos i went from a what was a 3 to now a 6 and maybe better, I feel way more confident in English because of you, Thank you so much

  • @tremexslayze8538
    @tremexslayze8538 3 года назад +104

    Me: doing this question tomorrow, allowed a plan.
    Me: watchs guide for grade 9 hoping for a 4 👀🤞😭

    • @tremexslayze8538
      @tremexslayze8538 3 года назад +10

      I forgot my plan for the test, i failed 100%

    • @Nayvixs
      @Nayvixs 3 года назад +2

      @@tremexslayze8538 unlucky, did you?

    • @tremexslayze8538
      @tremexslayze8538 3 года назад

      @@Nayvixs got like 7 marks, mind went blank and got a migraine 😭

    • @Nayvixs
      @Nayvixs 3 года назад +5

      @@tremexslayze8538 Bro, I feel bad for you. Don't worry if you practise an essay once a week you will do well.

    • @tremexslayze8538
      @tremexslayze8538 3 года назад +1

      @@Nayvixs bro wdym i only got couple weeks of school n did most of my english n got no mores tbf

  • @tkmobz7337
    @tkmobz7337 3 года назад +15

    im watching this guy on the morning of my year 10 mocks hoping for a 9 even though ive never gotten higher than a 7 in english.

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Год назад +1

    Smart teacher with great wisdom, excellent teaching method brother, may God bless, thank teacher 🎉

  • @SLonxxxx
    @SLonxxxx 2 месяца назад

    You are an absolute rock star! I had my English GGCE Equivalency exam this morning and I have a great feeling about it thanks to your videos. I only wish I had found you sooner. Thank you!

  • @Sadera23
    @Sadera23 3 года назад +26

    your videos are too sick, got me 34/40 on this question on my last mock, got another one soon

  • @gennybetwana9620
    @gennybetwana9620 2 года назад +3

    I am very much avisual learner so this video has been very helpful for me. The expkanations are simple but clear so thanks

  • @wooshpush8469
    @wooshpush8469 2 года назад +1

    I cannot thank u enough u have helped me with all the questions in my paper 2 gcse today. I applied all structure plans u said and I’m very confident.

    • @tiaislam645
      @tiaislam645 2 года назад +1

      Plz give an update when u get ur results 🙏

  • @matildadcosta7450
    @matildadcosta7450 3 года назад +9

    I'm so greatful to have found you . I am learning a lot. Many thanks 😊

  • @lollipop1185
    @lollipop1185 2 года назад +9

    im currently at a 4 for english lang so im hopping to get better grades. i have my feburary wave exams soon and will study from these videos. thanks a lot :)

  • @anonymooseuser2150
    @anonymooseuser2150 3 года назад +14

    Thank you sir! I was able to get 37/40 with your videos

  • @Feral2k4
    @Feral2k4 3 года назад +24

    You’ve got yourself a new subscriber bro I am going to tell my friends to watch your channel also this channel has seriously been beneficial as I have exams in 2 weeks time I think I’ll pass by watching your videos I am glad that you upload this content please keep grinding and I hope you achieve your goal successfully in the future thanks a lot 🙏💪

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  3 года назад +9

      Thank you 👊

    • @Feral2k4
      @Feral2k4 3 года назад +2

      @@MrEverythingEnglish no problem I got a question do you bring in the experts for this question

    • @leticiastar30
      @leticiastar30 2 года назад +1

      @@Feral2k4 did u pass?

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Год назад +1

    Brother I can’t stay away not listening to your teaching, I have exam today, I am going use your technique and ace it, thank you brother 🎉

  • @isabellewrightson5845
    @isabellewrightson5845 2 года назад +3

    i went from a 3 to 6 from this thank you so much omg

  • @theboredreaper5902
    @theboredreaper5902 3 года назад +20

    This looks quite handy, I've got my final assessment that goes towards my final gcse English lang grade coming up in a month and a bit and I'm currently sitting on a 7 /A thanks for the great video this structure you layed out could really help me push for a 8-9

  • @aerz8420
    @aerz8420 3 года назад +7

    Found it useful to generate more ideas and having a clear plan

  • @q415y6
    @q415y6 Год назад +1

    Beautiful stuff, really helped me understand all the techniques and I learnt a lot of new Paragraph structures!

  • @somyagarg2811
    @somyagarg2811 3 года назад +39

    We did this question as a mock and somebody wrote about cats.

  • @heathersisto1119
    @heathersisto1119 Год назад +1

    Yes, this channel is very beneficial for learning a lot and Thank you for it ! ...

  • @yajatmahalingam8723
    @yajatmahalingam8723 3 года назад +2

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  • @MM-lr5hv
    @MM-lr5hv Год назад +1

    Yep getting there, understood, you are definitely good, following, hopeful, many thanks 🙏 ❤

  • @rohan_n23
    @rohan_n23 3 года назад +13

    The goat is back!!!

  • @afghancook3146
    @afghancook3146 Год назад +1

    Thanks 🙏 you explained the best way

  • @Sxlanki._x
    @Sxlanki._x 2 года назад +1

    Watched a few videos now, most definitely subscribed.

  • @jessica8615
    @jessica8615 3 года назад +2

    so helpful. imma recommend this channel to my teacher!!

  • @alij1272
    @alij1272 2 года назад +3

    brilliant. I learned, soo much from you sir. Thank you! ;D

  • @MZ-hs8od
    @MZ-hs8od 2 года назад +1

    Mara praa,got an Exam tomorrow and kasam you've backed it differently.Allow Mr Bruff.All about Mr Everything English

  • @zaheer6435
    @zaheer6435 2 года назад +1

    He makes it look so easy. Thanks for the help

  • @Ali-ye4nv
    @Ali-ye4nv 2 года назад +3

    You are really helpful guy thanks bro 🙏👍🏻
    Subscribed and Thumbedd upppp !

  • @ameliamorton-peel2357
    @ameliamorton-peel2357 3 года назад +9

    Got my assessment tomorrow on this so let’s hope this sticks in my head

  • @emilinthomas9499
    @emilinthomas9499 2 года назад +1

    Thanks this helped a lot ill update what I got in my mock!

  • @sullymlg9785
    @sullymlg9785 Год назад

    Hey we have mock exams in our school and have just done the first section of the exam you've linked in the description. Think question 5 will be the one you've linked LOL. Congrats on 100k, you've 100% deserved it man.

  • @sweet.8
    @sweet.8 3 года назад +1

    You're the best explain paper 2 question 5.

    • @yeahitsmeex7542
      @yeahitsmeex7542 3 года назад

      You know how u planned for not banning cars ,are you supposed to start with the word convenient twice for the second paragraph when u plan do we do the same begin convenient and think of other ideas or start a fresh new idea to plan for your second paragraph please reply

  • @Nayvixs
    @Nayvixs 3 года назад +3

    I really wish you were my teacher! Best help I have had.

  • @Blessingstevens06
    @Blessingstevens06 2 года назад +1

    when writing about how cars are safer you can also use statistics

  • @medhesshsureshkaran2269
    @medhesshsureshkaran2269 2 года назад +3

    I had a pratice test on this and got a grade 7, this video really helped me thanks bro

  • @BeaconofMotivation-1
    @BeaconofMotivation-1 2 года назад +2

    ‘All sport should be fun, fair and open to everyone. These days, sport seems to
    be more about money, corruption and winning at any cost.’
    Write an article for a newspaper in which you explain your point of view on this
    statement.
    (24 marks for content and organisation
    16 marks for technical accuracy)
    [40 marks]
    You are advised to plan your answer to Question 5 before you start to write.
    Can you tell me what plan would you use please.

    • @OrangeDude7
      @OrangeDude7 2 года назад +2

      its pretty easy when you label each word out
      fun - people having a good time
      fair - equality and respect
      open - no matter ur background
      money - some can't afford - people just see it as buisness
      corruption - not really sure for this one ( lead people to depression and poverty?)
      winning at any cost - no sportsmanship, people would cheat and get away with it just to win

    • @BeaconofMotivation-1
      @BeaconofMotivation-1 2 года назад

      thank you

  • @freyatebbutt9844
    @freyatebbutt9844 Год назад +1

    Thank you very much - extremely helpful!

  • @dani_e_t2138
    @dani_e_t2138 Год назад +1

    they should ask us: which player is better Messi or Ronaldo. I will get 41 out of 40 if that was the case.

  • @rihana6787
    @rihana6787 3 года назад +2

    i finish this question in 20 mins. should i write more paragraphs or spend more time on other questions?

  • @JessieArt
    @JessieArt Год назад +1

    Legend. Mock tomorrow :)

  • @abusyofficial
    @abusyofficial 2 года назад +2

    very useful sir thanks a lot

  • @discobutterfly
    @discobutterfly 3 года назад +1

    Very engaging and clear.

  • @uhmkiki1057
    @uhmkiki1057 2 года назад +2

    this is so useful for my exam tomorrow!!! thank you, your videos are great keep going :)

  • @burakasik3937
    @burakasik3937 3 года назад +2

    cramming for my TAG tomorrow

  • @myleshayhurst7526
    @myleshayhurst7526 3 года назад +1

    close to taking mr salles glory

    • @roma7823
      @roma7823 3 года назад

      he’s surpassed mr salles glory by loads

  • @ultimaterevision437
    @ultimaterevision437 3 года назад +3

    Very beneficial channel, thanks 😊

  • @ivvister2303
    @ivvister2303 3 года назад +1

    here before my english language PPE mock tomorrow , 18th march 2021

  • @HH-zr1iu
    @HH-zr1iu 3 года назад +4

    great vid - just what i needed

  • @thinktalk9250
    @thinktalk9250 3 года назад +2

    thanks it was useful

  • @Adil_67x
    @Adil_67x 3 года назад +2

    Can you please make a video on writing a speech??

  • @covenantezeh
    @covenantezeh Год назад +2

    I though you said we should not go against the question

  • @qasimpatel2647
    @qasimpatel2647 3 года назад +1

    This is the same question coming up on my exam tomorrow 😃

  • @MentalMax9
    @MentalMax9 3 года назад +1

    Brilliant video! I'm feeling very euphoric and will definitely subscribe.

  • @noahsamuel9780
    @noahsamuel9780 2 года назад +1

    Hey guys I’ve got English mock today wish me luck going for that grade 7 or 8

  • @mkfitnessandyoga5030
    @mkfitnessandyoga5030 3 года назад +1

    Thank you. This was super helpful especially that my Paper 2 exam is coming up. 👌

  • @peaceadeoye247
    @peaceadeoye247 Год назад +1

    Thank you so much

  • @annoymuss
    @annoymuss 9 месяцев назад

    Just got my Mock results and was close to a grade 4 how can i secure a grade 7 in the next mocks?. BTW your videos actually helped me because i used your structure in every question in paper 2

  • @rohaankhan8469
    @rohaankhan8469 3 года назад +2

    would have loved if you did this video last week! I got a grade 6

  • @dhanushparthiban9803
    @dhanushparthiban9803 3 года назад +2

    cyamooooon

  • @Abc78633
    @Abc78633 Год назад +1

    Can you do a counter arguement then disprove the arguement?

  • @legendaryfight1846
    @legendaryfight1846 Год назад

    You saved my life!

  • @hazerabegum3184
    @hazerabegum3184 Год назад +1

    Everyone make dua for me to do well in my GCSE'S cos I'm scared wallah 😓

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  Год назад

      🤲

    • @hazerabegum3184
      @hazerabegum3184 Год назад

      @@MrEverythingEnglish In my mocks I got a 5 in both English literature and language but I was close to a 6. I'm really hoping to get a 6 in the real exams, inshallah.

    • @yehiak8711
      @yehiak8711 Год назад

      @@hazerabegum3184 insha allah brother pray for me too

    • @hazerabegum3184
      @hazerabegum3184 Год назад

      @@Virgilioo I'm hoping for a 5 or a 6 if I'm lucky

  • @hypxrfishy
    @hypxrfishy 3 года назад +1

    i got grade 6 or 7 by using this structure only in paragraph 1 and some around my letter.

  • @rajansinghbhamra9445
    @rajansinghbhamra9445 2 года назад

    thanks mr eveything English best english teacher out there. In the essay do you have to say why the cars are a bad thing as well

  • @oliviadixon5777
    @oliviadixon5777 3 года назад +1

    thankyou this is actually so much more useful than anything ive seen

  • @alfieluke7339
    @alfieluke7339 Год назад

    you saved my grades brother- predicted a 4 and got a 7!

  • @thesimple1818
    @thesimple1818 2 года назад +2

    I always get stuck on writing intros. I don't know what to put in the intro, or how to make it compelling. do you have any advice on how to write a quick effective intro?

    • @FlawlessPlayZzz
      @FlawlessPlayZzz 2 года назад

      You don’t get marks for the into or conclusion so it doesn’t matter. If u do it say “I believe that so and so is the correct way for the society due to the beneficial”…….. just like 1 or 2 sentences

  • @mrfreerunners1
    @mrfreerunners1 2 года назад +1

    as aqua have released advance info about P2 Q5 being article, can you do a video solely on that ?

  • @ultimaterevision437
    @ultimaterevision437 3 года назад +2

    Could you maybe provide an example of what an intro would be like please?

  • @ManpreetKaur-kg2gn
    @ManpreetKaur-kg2gn 2 года назад

    Hello thank you so much this video really helped me

  • @prod.byMali
    @prod.byMali Год назад

    idk why but "it is almost like imaging a world without water" made me laugh 💀

  • @bigts4231
    @bigts4231 3 года назад +4

    0:23 You kept saying what is Paper 5 Question 2 instead of Question 5 paper 2😂😂😂

  • @nightskorpion1336
    @nightskorpion1336 11 месяцев назад

    Well done sir

  • @Zaki-O
    @Zaki-O 3 года назад +1

    Blessed vid

  • @zg1161
    @zg1161 3 года назад

    What’s the difference between conclusion and the main paragraphs because your basically writing your opinion on the paragraphs

  • @mohammedkahir5540
    @mohammedkahir5540 3 года назад +1

    i get most of it but dont understand how we write a one line paragraph because the marks are for varied length paragraphs, you said 4 main paragraphs? pls reply asap as exam tomorrow thanks:)

  • @funminiyisekoni2926
    @funminiyisekoni2926 2 года назад +2

    Does this apply to Edexcel exam board

    • @BladeConnors
      @BladeConnors 2 года назад

      i think so i am doing edexel the examiners arnt going to harsh this year

  • @shylahazaria
    @shylahazaria 3 года назад

    So do you choose 4 main arguments or 2 because what do you write in your one line paragraphs

  • @inori_yuziriha
    @inori_yuziriha Год назад +1

    AQA loves cars XD

  • @frontlinefn7046
    @frontlinefn7046 3 года назад +2

    Super helpful thank you very much :)

  • @jackoman-xg5dv
    @jackoman-xg5dv Год назад

    Should i still spend 10 mins on the one line paragraphs or allocate some of that time to other paragraphs

  • @joshwalker6584
    @joshwalker6584 3 года назад +1

    I’ve just had this question as an article and I have realised that I didn’t completely stick to the statement given and it only vaguely links to my answer will this affect my grade or am I ok?