Ok this 1 is better than the other only half as long but u only did 30 min fight with end of naruto b4 he arrived fighting sasuke. It is far better to have him kill the traitor then destroy the body. Cause yeah a psycho uchiha shoyld not beome vamp esp when he wants the world dead or submitting to him. Even more so if he can steal anyones unique gift after they turn cause his op eye. Its a shame the writer dropped this and rewrote it so he survived and naruto gets turned vamp. I think this version was better as he removes a serious prob. I feel the issue is making it the end of naruto meeting the end of twilight both were at the final bit when u combined both so u had nowhere to go with it. U should have had naruto end sasuke and war then show up in time to save Alice with their arrival whether intended or not during the newborn army attack. So u had most of twilight to go with by adding naruto into things and focus on him and alice with a bit of bellas stuff going on at same time so u know where in her story it is. Even have it so he had alice and that 1 wolf girl that lost the alpha she loved to her cousin cause of the wolf mate thing have him bridging the gap between them as a immortal and change the wolf pair system so lifespan is tied to the mate so immortal naruto whose immune is so high the venom cant turn him or can only make him half and turn immortal so his blood isnt driving vapms crazy. That way naruto gets love and alice accepts cause she can c all 3 happy together. Whether u make it true 3some or 1 where he just has 2 wives that share him separately. I think that would work well.
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Part 2 please this story was rather good
Part 2 please
Yo this is same one i just watch but a lil different
Ok this 1 is better than the other only half as long but u only did 30 min fight with end of naruto b4 he arrived fighting sasuke. It is far better to have him kill the traitor then destroy the body. Cause yeah a psycho uchiha shoyld not beome vamp esp when he wants the world dead or submitting to him. Even more so if he can steal anyones unique gift after they turn cause his op eye. Its a shame the writer dropped this and rewrote it so he survived and naruto gets turned vamp. I think this version was better as he removes a serious prob. I feel the issue is making it the end of naruto meeting the end of twilight both were at the final bit when u combined both so u had nowhere to go with it. U should have had naruto end sasuke and war then show up in time to save Alice with their arrival whether intended or not during the newborn army attack. So u had most of twilight to go with by adding naruto into things and focus on him and alice with a bit of bellas stuff going on at same time so u know where in her story it is. Even have it so he had alice and that 1 wolf girl that lost the alpha she loved to her cousin cause of the wolf mate thing have him bridging the gap between them as a immortal and change the wolf pair system so lifespan is tied to the mate so immortal naruto whose immune is so high the venom cant turn him or can only make him half and turn immortal so his blood isnt driving vapms crazy. That way naruto gets love and alice accepts cause she can c all 3 happy together. Whether u make it true 3some or 1 where he just has 2 wives that share him separately. I think that would work well.
Part 2 okay👌
p2
Part 2 please