I know nothing about music theory, but for some reason it feels unsatisfying, like I'm constantly waiting for the next part to come together nicely but it never really comes.
Its in a major and I fact checked it I played it correctly I have no clue why y'all for some reason think its out of key I CANNOT hear it idk if I'm just tone deaf or something tho
also I'm going to a production lesson in a few hours so if I find out what u guys are talking abt then ill update you but I don't really hear it so idk what the issue is tbh
Hey, when u say it’s out of tune, what do you mean, because I thought I did the scale correctly when I was putting in the notes. And I don’t personally hear anything off.
@@toniwackerzyyt hi! i think they meant that some of the notes in your melody are non chord tones so they are more dissonant sounding over your chords, but i personally think that gives it a lot of character. it's definitely not a bad thing, it just takes practice to get the hang of. you've got a great start here!
I'll love seeing you grow
Sounds great!
Why tf are there haters here? You did good.
Better than my first melodies, but yeah this is really good for a beginner
Nice job it sounds really good! Hope one day when you’ve made it big you can look back on this and see where you began
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CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is welcome don’t be afraid to comment if you want to give me feedback
I know nothing about music theory, but for some reason it feels unsatisfying, like I'm constantly waiting for the next part to come together nicely but it never really comes.
this makes more sense but idk what people are talking abt when they say its "out of key" thx for the constructive criticism tho ❤
idk why people are being so mean but i think it sounds pretty cool
IS THIS AN UPCOMING ARTIST I SEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
They grow up so fast 🥹
Talent :o chat we’re keeping an eye on this one
very nice, just something to know is you should keep your notes in the same key and scale as your chords otherwise they clash and sound dissonant
Its in a major and I fact checked it I played it correctly I have no clue why y'all for some reason think its out of key I CANNOT hear it idk if I'm just tone deaf or something tho
also I'm going to a production lesson in a few hours so if I find out what u guys are talking abt then ill update you but I don't really hear it so idk what the issue is tbh
ok i just found out what u mean but i still think it sounds good :/ ill try doing something different next time.
this is really cool, it reminds me of minecraft in a way
This is fucking banging!
ts ass twin give up on yo dreams❤
@@blehblehblehblehblehblehblehbwtf does that mean 😭
i like the overall feel but some parts are out of tune
Hey, when u say it’s out of tune, what do you mean, because I thought I did the scale correctly when I was putting in the notes. And I don’t personally hear anything off.
@@toniwackerzyyt hi! i think they meant that some of the notes in your melody are non chord tones so they are more dissonant sounding over your chords, but i personally think that gives it a lot of character. it's definitely not a bad thing, it just takes practice to get the hang of. you've got a great start here!
@ yea, I don’t necessarily look up the chords I just put together scale degrees until I think it sounds good lol
try to be different and sample stuff
@bleudie173 its a melody tho 😭
this is horrid
Bot ass melody