I offer these comments as a constructive critique. 1 The music is great, Concentrate everything on the music. 2 The title is wrong, see 1 above, lose the productivity bit, and change the demand to an invite 3 The photo is awful, Lose the distracting backdrop and the flickering logo.. The face and hair lighting is ok, but you need gloss on the sax and lips, the front light kills it. The posture is all wrong. Lips to mouthpiece, and position of hands. Maybe angle of the sax. 4 I've done my share of studying, and marketing, last thing I needed was distractions. See 1 above, its all about the music and the atmosphere it provides. 5 First impressions count, if they don't like the shop window, they walk on by. I hope this is helpful, best wishes . EJ
Thank you so much for your thoughtful critique, EJ! It means a lot to me that you took the time to share your insights. I'll work on improving those aspects!
I offer these comments as a constructive critique.
1 The music is great, Concentrate everything on the music.
2 The title is wrong, see 1 above, lose the productivity bit, and change the demand to an invite
3 The photo is awful, Lose the distracting backdrop and the flickering logo.. The face and hair lighting is ok, but you need gloss on the sax and lips, the front light kills it. The posture is all wrong. Lips to mouthpiece, and position of hands. Maybe angle of the sax.
4 I've done my share of studying, and marketing, last thing I needed was distractions.
See 1 above, its all about the music and the atmosphere it provides.
5 First impressions count, if they don't like the shop window, they walk on by.
I hope this is helpful, best wishes . EJ
Thank you so much for your thoughtful critique, EJ! It means a lot to me that you took the time to share your insights. I'll work on improving those aspects!