Hey Atousa, first I would like to say thanks for this video. I have watched many videos regarding motivational letters. And I would say that they were all good, but your video is much more informative. You explained it quite well. It really tells what should be included and how it should be included. I appreciate your effort. Thanks.
I watched your video a couple of months ago and found it incredibly helpful. Today I received an offer to a postgraduate course at King's. :] Thanks for sharing your tips.
Thank you for sharing Atousa :-) The Questions 1. Why do you want to study this course? 2. Why have you chosen this particular institute? 3. What initially sparked your interest in this area? 4. What experiences do you have? (first or second hand) 5. What is your overall purpose for doing this course? 6. What skills are required and do you have them? 7. What specific method or techniques are required for this course? 8. Wha would you get out of this course? 9. What are your future career goals, and how will this course help?
Thank you for sharing Atousa ❤️ The Tips: 1. State your intention right at the start 2. Adopt the "hourglass" structure (in the order of the questions given) 3. Be sure to "talk up" the institute you're applying for 4. State what you have learnt from your experiences 5. Don't overuse "passion", "enthusiastic", or "interested" 6. Don't sound like a "know it all" 7. Be as Authentic and as Genuine as you can!
I have put off writing my personal statement for a month now and it's just led to increasing anxiety about it in the back of my mind. Thank you for this video! it's given a lot of guidance and given me confidence. I've answered the questions and i'll now attempt to finally write my statement
HI Artousa, I just wanted to say thank you so much for your videos and sharing your experiences. Although this was made in 2017, all the information here is still relevant in 2021. I used this vid and your 'Reading my Master's Personal Statement' vid as guidance to write my personal statement for an MSc conversion course and received an offer from my first choice at a top ten university. Once again thank you for putting out such valuable content!
Hi dear Atousa! About three months ago, I wrote my personal statement for a master program at LSE by following exactly your recipe, step by step. I just heard from the admissions office that I got in! I just wanted to thank you so much! If it was not for this video, I would not be able to write such a good personal statement. I am so grateful to you! I watch your videos in my free time, you are an amazing person. Thank you and keep doing amazing videos!😘😘😘😘
Hi! I watched your video and took your tips to write my personal statement and have been accepted to my choice school and masters course :) thank you so much!
Thank you so much for this, I got into all the universities I applied for and got to pick my favourite. I had to come back and let you know this video really helped...💕 starting a masters in public health
You're a life-saver. I've had all the info I needed, obviously... just didn't quite know where to start. This is so helpful. Thanks you so much! You're a star!
Thanks for the video! I really appreciate it. Literally just started my personal statement today for grad school. Application is due March 1st, 2020. This really helped especially because I didn't know how to start it or what details to give. So thank you!
Thank you so much for your video! Your tips helped me a lot in writing my personal statement and I've recently gotten an offer to a master's at UCL. :)
Atousa this is to say THANK YOU. I have been trying to write my personal statement for long to no avail, but I started and finished mine same day I watched your video. I am pleased to let you know that I have gotten 2 admissions with the personal statement format I watched on your RUclips channel and still expecting more admissions. Thanks again for all your effort. Be rest assured that your effort is appreciated by me.
You video is really helpful to me, I don’t think I have adequate word to praise and thank you with. Almost 2 years, I ‘m applying for master’s degree but up till now I haven’t got any. I have a good feeling in mind this is I‘ve been missing and will be my solution to my problem. I owe you a huge debt of gratitude. Thank you
This was MASSIVELY helpful! tysm Atousa!!! I got into QMUL, KCL and UCL for a Masters! honestly felt so lost until I came across this video, actual lifesaver 💜
Thank you, I’ve been finding it a bit hard to start my personal statements for weeks and this just broke everything down for me, now I can start writing. Thank you
This video was so helpful for all Masters applications (I'm applying got an MA in Writing for Children) and even though your examples were science based they were great at getting my mind going and figuring out my own! Thank you so much!
Hey, I never comment on youtube videos but I HAVE to tell you - thank you so much for your helpful videos. I love them - I am graduating in July with BSc Biology. Using your advice in this video, I have successfully obtained an offer to study MSc Medical Science at Newcastle University!
aw this is so lovely here, and congrats on graduating soon! what an amazing achievement :) and that makes me incredibly happy! best of luck for your masters!!!
@@atousa5752 could you help me to provide a demo of masters application proper personal statement, my study field is mechanical engineering and email address; uddinrasel412@gmail.com. I’m waiting for your lovely response
Thank you for posting this video! It helped me a lot with my statement. Everything else I've read (including "helpful" comments from college websites) didn't seem to help but the way you made the information concise and easy to understand really helped. Thanks!
You're just amazing. Thank you very much for sharing your experience and giving such specific explanations about each section! I was so confused about starting the PS, but after this video I feel absolutely confident about getting it right!
Just finished my first draft and found this vid. Fortunately, every question was already answered in my preliminary statement. I hope I'm in the right track. Thanks! :)
Atousa, this video has been of great help to me for writing a personal statement! I am about to start my studies in MSc Clinical Dermatology at KCL. Many thanks for your tips and the great job you do ☺️🙌🏽
Aww those are wonderful tips! thank you so much and honestly you made me feel less stressed about my own personal statement because I was so worried even though my application is excellent for the major!
You are adorable! The same questions are written in my statement of intent but only with your video I finally understood what I need to write! Thank you!!!
thank you so muсh for your video! i've started writing my essay and motivation letter for a master's degree sсholarship recently, and I got kind of stuсk midway ahah, your tips made it much clearer for me in terms of what to do next. thanks again!!
I love this! I've rewritten my statement one too many times and felt that I was starting to lack clarity. This has helped a lot! I also think a useful question to add would be: What will the institution gain from having me there? (Include what unique perspectives you can bring to the course, particularly certain modules; maybe a sense of community that you could bring... etc)
Thanks for the video! I've never written a personal statement before and really had no idea where to begin. Your video helped me a lot! Thanks again :)
Thanks for your video, you gave me to much to think about my personal statement. I am from Mexico but I am applying for a master´s degree in neuroscience at McGill University in Canada, wish me luck!! It´s harder when English is not your first language...
Did you use one main personal statement and just made edits for each application? Or did you really write 8 completely different personal statements for the different institutions?
Hi, thank you for your video. Actually I was thinking to change my course for postgraduate and this video really help me to think few points for my personal statement. ✨
Great video - great pointers too, best Ive seen so far✌️💜😊 Could I just ask how many words you were allowed for your PS please 🤔🤞 I did see, when I quickly looked, that you studied at and graduated from the UoB too (congrats), thats my Alma Mater as well (and my GP's and several of my old mentors). Its a small world💜 Ive fond memories of the area and friends there as well💜✌️
Hello! I am applying for masters courses for 2020 entry and stumbled across your videos as I prepare to start writing my personal statement! I'm applying to about 6 school, 3 are for Psychology (Conversion) Msc and others are Business Psychology, Psychology and Economic Behaviours. I suppose for each school I apply to the statement should differ as it should be specific to the school and course... wondering if you wrote 8 different statements? Or used a template then switched it up a little? Thank you in advance!
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Hey Atousa, first I would like to say thanks for this video. I have watched many videos regarding motivational letters. And I would say that they were all good, but your video is much more informative. You explained it quite well. It really tells what should be included and how it should be included. I appreciate your effort. Thanks.
I watched your video a couple of months ago and found it incredibly helpful. Today I received an offer to a postgraduate course at King's. :] Thanks for sharing your tips.
AppleJax congratulations
Congratulation man, and thanks for comment, cause your comment validates this video. This video in itself is awesome.
People really need to wait anxiously for a postgraduate course offer? wow, how pathetic are we as human beings?
Thank you for sharing Atousa :-)
The Questions
1. Why do you want to study this course?
2. Why have you chosen this particular institute?
3. What initially sparked your interest in this area?
4. What experiences do you have? (first or second hand)
5. What is your overall purpose for doing this course?
6. What skills are required and do you have them?
7. What specific method or techniques are required for this course?
8. Wha would you get out of this course?
9. What are your future career goals, and how will this course help?
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Thank you for summarising these :D
Thanks for your efforts
Thanks for this effort man, Great Job
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Thank you for sharing Atousa ❤️
The Tips:
1. State your intention right at the start
2. Adopt the "hourglass" structure (in the order of the questions given)
3. Be sure to "talk up" the institute you're applying for
4. State what you have learnt from your experiences
5. Don't overuse "passion", "enthusiastic", or "interested"
6. Don't sound like a "know it all"
7. Be as Authentic and as Genuine as you can!
I have put off writing my personal statement for a month now and it's just led to increasing anxiety about it in the back of my mind. Thank you for this video! it's given a lot of guidance and given me confidence. I've answered the questions and i'll now attempt to finally write my statement
HI Artousa, I just wanted to say thank you so much for your videos and sharing your experiences. Although this was made in 2017, all the information here is still relevant in 2021. I used this vid and your 'Reading my Master's Personal Statement' vid as guidance to write my personal statement for an MSc conversion course and received an offer from my first choice at a top ten university. Once again thank you for putting out such valuable content!
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Hi dear Atousa! About three months ago, I wrote my personal statement for a master program at LSE by following exactly your recipe, step by step. I just heard from the admissions office that I got in! I just wanted to thank you so much! If it was not for this video, I would not be able to write such a good personal statement. I am so grateful to you! I watch your videos in my free time, you are an amazing person. Thank you and keep doing amazing videos!😘😘😘😘
That's amazing to hear!! huge congrats to you :) I wish you all the very best
Hi! I watched your video and took your tips to write my personal statement and have been accepted to my choice school and masters course :) thank you so much!
aw that's so good to hear! and also that's amazing, well done for getting accepted!! :)
Thank you so much for this, I got into all the universities I applied for and got to pick my favourite. I had to come back and let you know this video really helped...💕 starting a masters in public health
Hey can you please help me out in this
Congratulations. Am also watching this video because am applying for a masters in public health as well.
I hardly comment on youtube but your videos is clarifying and very resourceful .Thank you and Allah bless you
You're a life-saver. I've had all the info I needed, obviously... just didn't quite know where to start. This is so helpful. Thanks you so much! You're a star!
I wish you all the very best!! :)
Thanks for the video! I really appreciate it. Literally just started my personal statement today for grad school. Application is due March 1st, 2020. This really helped especially because I didn't know how to start it or what details to give. So thank you!
Thank you so much for your video! Your tips helped me a lot in writing my personal statement and I've recently gotten an offer to a master's at UCL. :)
aw that's amazing to hear!! well done for getting your offer!! :)
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Atousa this is to say THANK YOU. I have been trying to write my personal statement for long to no avail, but I started and finished mine same day I watched your video. I am pleased to let you know that I have gotten 2 admissions with the personal statement format I watched on your RUclips channel and still expecting more admissions. Thanks again for all your effort. Be rest assured that your effort is appreciated by me.
You video is really helpful to me, I don’t think I have adequate word to praise and thank you with. Almost 2 years, I ‘m applying for master’s degree but up till now I haven’t got any. I have a good feeling in mind this is I‘ve been missing and will be my solution to my problem. I owe you a huge debt of gratitude. Thank you
This was MASSIVELY helpful! tysm Atousa!!! I got into QMUL, KCL and UCL for a Masters! honestly felt so lost until I came across this video, actual lifesaver 💜
I'm so so pleased for you!! All the best, I hope you have a fantastic year studying your masters :)
GOD Bless U Atousa, very insightful delivery.
Literally just got an unconditional offer using your format.Thank you so so much
Thank you, I’ve been finding it a bit hard to start my personal statements for weeks and this just broke everything down for me, now I can start writing.
Thank you
This video was so helpful for all Masters applications (I'm applying got an MA in Writing for Children) and even though your examples were science based they were great at getting my mind going and figuring out my own! Thank you so much!
Aw you are more than welcome lovely! and best of luck with it!! :)
Hey, I never comment on youtube videos but I HAVE to tell you - thank you so much for your helpful videos. I love them - I am graduating in July with BSc Biology. Using your advice in this video, I have successfully obtained an offer to study MSc Medical Science at Newcastle University!
aw this is so lovely here, and congrats on graduating soon! what an amazing achievement :) and that makes me incredibly happy! best of luck for your masters!!!
@@atousa5752 could you help me to provide a demo of masters application proper personal statement, my study field is mechanical engineering and email address; uddinrasel412@gmail.com. I’m waiting for your lovely response
Hey can you please help me out in this
Thank you for posting this video! It helped me a lot with my statement. Everything else I've read (including "helpful" comments from college websites) didn't seem to help but the way you made the information concise and easy to understand really helped. Thanks!
You're very welcome! and aw I'm so glad you find it informative!! :)
@@atousa5752 I just found out that I got into the Masters program that I applied for! :D Thank you so much for your help!!!!
You're just amazing. Thank you very much for sharing your experience and giving such specific explanations about each section! I was so confused about starting the PS, but after this video I feel absolutely confident about getting it right!
aw I'm so happy to hear this! I wish you all the best with it, I know how tricky starting can be! :)
Hey, I got in to an MSc course at King's College London thanks to your Personal Statement TIPS! Thanks a lot :)
Thank you so much. I'm considering a master and was totally clueless how to go about the personal statement. Your video is so helpful ❤
Just finished my first draft and found this vid. Fortunately, every question was already answered in my preliminary statement.
I hope I'm in the right track. Thanks! :)
Waaaay better than many videos out there about personal statements. Actually helped guide the direction of my statement! :)
Atousa, this video has been of great help to me for writing a personal statement! I am about to start my studies in MSc Clinical Dermatology at KCL. Many thanks for your tips and the great job you do ☺️🙌🏽
You might want to check this out ruclips.net/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/видео.html
Th energy helped more than the structure. Thank you for this!
Thank you for making this video! I have been putting off applying to a uni for a month now because of having to write a personal statement.
Aww those are wonderful tips! thank you so much and honestly you made me feel less stressed about my own personal statement because I was so worried even though my application is excellent for the major!
You are adorable! The same questions are written in my statement of intent but only with your video I finally understood what I need to write! Thank you!!!
Aw I am so glad this could be of use! Thank you for being sweet and I wish you the best with whatever you are applying for!! :)
oh, I love you so much! It gives me a lot confidence!
Thank you so much! I'm currently applying for my MA, and i find this video very helpful!
thank you so muсh for your video! i've started writing my essay and motivation letter for a master's degree sсholarship recently, and I got kind of stuсk midway ahah, your tips made it much clearer for me in terms of what to do next. thanks again!!
I love this! I've rewritten my statement one too many times and felt that I was starting to lack clarity. This has helped a lot! I also think a useful question to add would be: What will the institution gain from having me there? (Include what unique perspectives you can bring to the course, particularly certain modules; maybe a sense of community that you could bring... etc)
I'm glad to hear! and yes I agree, it's a good way to explore your experience more :)
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Thanks for the video! I've never written a personal statement before and really had no idea where to begin. Your video helped me a lot! Thanks again :)
Exactly What I AM looking for!!! Thanks a lot!
Thank u so much your vidio has been so helpful to me, now i feel more confident about what to I will write in my motivation letter
This is soo helpful, I will be making lots of changes to my statement! Thank you!!
Thank you so much for this video. Learned a lot especially for people like who is struggling with their PS
You are more than welcome lovely!
Thank you for this video currently applying for post graduate course in Marketing
Thanks very much for this informative video. I will take all your tips on board for my cover letter.
Thank you for your video, Atousa!
Thank you for sharing this tips....now i know where to start from😊😊
Thank you for this, I am applying for an MPerf in Music and struggling with getting my personal statement started. Your video has been so useful :)
Most helpful video! I've been stressing and putting it off for a while and this is ultimate inspiration! 🙏🏼
I'm so glad you find this helpful!! best of luck!!!
Thanks for your video, you gave me to much to think about my personal statement. I am from Mexico but I am applying for a master´s degree in neuroscience at McGill University in Canada, wish me luck!! It´s harder when English is not your first language...
Which subject did you major in during your undergraduate course?
Thank you so much! Your videos helped me A LOT and apparently it worked cause I got accepted!!!1 yay
Huge congrats!! :)
Omg thank you. This totally gives me a direction! Thank you thank you!
hi this video and several other are so helpful! hopefully ur enjoying ur Medicine degree :)) and not regretting to "switch" lanes
Thank you so much you are a life saver!!!!!!
Did you use one main personal statement and just made edits for each application? Or did you really write 8 completely different personal statements for the different institutions?
Excellent video. Thanks for the guidance 😇
Its really helpfull dear ....a very convincing way you choosed to explain that make me comment to tell you about😘keep it up
Thank you Atousa, very informative
I love you, thank you so much for this
Thank you for this video. :) I hope I get accepted for my Master's
@Austin Reaser oh I wish I’ve known sooner. I already submitted mine. Please wish me luck though.🙏🏼
Thank you for this video. It helps a lot..
Thanks so much, this was really helpful... Being so scared to start writing a personal statement cause I don't have much experience but this helps
Loved your video, thank you so much 🤍
Thank you ! This is very helpful! Good luck on your academic career!
Very important and helpful video
Thank you for your help.
Hi, thank you for your video. Actually I was thinking to change my course for postgraduate and this video really help me to think few points for my personal statement. ✨
I'm glad it did! all the best with your statement! :)
It was a good idea to listen to your personal advice. Really difficult application period. Hopefully I'll move on
Thank You so much for your tips.
This is so good. Thank you.
Thank you so much for this video, you have made this so much easier and clearer for me now (slightly less panicked now) haha.
I'm really glad lovely! ( I know the panic feeling all too well haha ) x
This video is 10/10
Thank you for giving me ideas about how to write my ps!
I really love your accent and what you suggest! Appreciate!
What an excellent video! Thank you so much.
you are absolutely more than welcome! :)
Thankyou so much! Did you write a different personal statement for all the different places you applied to?
This is super helpful. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Thank you for sharing 🥰
Awesome Video!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks a lot for this, really really helped me!
You are more than welcome! I'm glad :)
Wonderful! thank you for sharing these tips :)!
aw you are more than welcome lovely! :)
Thank you so much you're a life saver.
You are more than welcome lovely :)
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So useful. Thank you!
thank you soooo much for sharing this video, I'm preparing to apply KCL, which is literally my dream school. Wish me luck😛
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Thanks a lot! That's very helpful and you're so lovely~
You are more than welcome! :)
Great video - great pointers too, best Ive seen so far✌️💜😊
Could I just ask how many words you were allowed for your PS please 🤔🤞
I did see, when I quickly looked, that you studied at and graduated from the UoB too (congrats), thats my Alma Mater as well (and my GP's and several of my old mentors). Its a small world💜
Ive fond memories of the area and friends there as well💜✌️
Don't know how this happened but this video popped up 👆 on me when I needed it. Would be making this come to fruition. Thanks 🙏
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Hello! I am applying for masters courses for 2020 entry and stumbled across your videos as I prepare to start writing my personal statement! I'm applying to about 6 school, 3 are for Psychology (Conversion) Msc and others are Business Psychology, Psychology and Economic Behaviours. I suppose for each school I apply to the statement should differ as it should be specific to the school and course... wondering if you wrote 8 different statements? Or used a template then switched it up a little? Thank you in advance!
Thank u💜💜💜💜💜
Great video, thank you! :)
Thanks a lot!