@@Rhombus209Hey Rhombus the title kindaaaa....doesnt fit with the song like It fits like a "Walkway of memories" cuz It kinda fit with Memories right?, Like tbh when i play this music, i create a animation inside my Head, is like a hero turning to a villain but this song starts to play and here start to remember everyone he love and everyone he saved and then he start Rebel Against the villain inside him. (Ik is kinda boring Reading this but only to Let my opinion) Thx for Reading.
speaking of risk and reward, everytime I fail at something and start feeling down I just have to remind myself that "Masters have failed more than a beginner has even tried,"
Hey man, it’s great that you can express yourself so well via music that you share here. I like your spirit, stay strong in school and honestly it will get better once you find people who are really worth your time and energy. Sometimes it takes a really long time but it’s really worth it ❤
I like how you used the full range of the piano, I think that kept the melody very clear. And I also love the way you adjusted the reverb/echo effect as it went through. You clearly put a lot of thought and effort into it. I don't have any suggestions but I look forward to seeing what you do next :)
great message, and "I added reverb and started to like it" sounds like something my music producing suitemate would say XD. Thanks for sharing and good luck out there
I honestly love this and I agree with this notion! I hope youre doing well X3 Maybe for a beat, if you ever wanna add one, it could be a ticking clock? Something to keep the rhythm.
I'm glad I got to see this video, better said that it got recommended to me. Hey, shit happens, but let me tell you what happened today to me. My school had a festival, and I asked a group of girls who wants to play some Uno since I was bored as hell. One of them decided to 1v1 me and we continued the 1v1 until the festival was over, 45 minutes, up to an hour overtime. I got absoloutely demolished, 12-3. She violated me in Uno, man. But it was fun as hell. Though, I got to know her a bit better. Remember, He who fears being conquered is sure of defeat. - Napoleon Bonaparte Always take opportunities and risks if there's nothing significant such as pride to lose from them. Sometimes they pay out and they end up to be worth it. Never fear the new. Peace out. I'll sub too, nice song.
I always watch with subtitles on but assumed this one didn't have any I saw the message. Thank you, Rhombus. I will next time. And yes, I did enjoy the rest of the song.
Nice work man! I personally think you could've played a lot more with the dynamics though, because right now the piano sounds quite aggressive at places where I feel a more held back piano would with the vibe more. Other than that I love the composition! :0
Sounds interesting and has potential, but the chords are kind of random sometimes and don't make that much sense together harmonically, though it overall has a nice and very specific vibe, maybe somewhat similar to Minecraft or something like that I guess.
I don't at the moment. I think I should start a discord server it would be cool to talk to you guys. If and when I do I'll put a link in my about section
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Honestly I didn't look at the title, I just saw music and clicked
bro me too 😭
my brain interpreted this as that you literally SAW music
@@pisci_a ha, yeah
same
bro this sounds like a minecraft menu screen song & a legend of zelda song mixed together lol. love it, man! keep up the good work.
Thanks!
@@Rhombus209Hey Rhombus the title kindaaaa....doesnt fit with the song like It fits like a "Walkway of memories" cuz It kinda fit with Memories right?,
Like tbh when i play this music, i create a animation inside my Head, is like a hero turning to a villain but this song starts to play and here start to remember everyone he love and everyone he saved and then he start Rebel Against the villain inside him. (Ik is kinda boring Reading this but only to Let my opinion)
Thx for Reading.
@@lazarobreonss5170 yeah I see what you mean, I will keep that advice in mind for the future
@@Rhombus209 Thx Rhombus anyways this music is my favorite so far, thanks for you be so awesome!😀
yes, the reason is that he structured as a zelda song but composed as a minecraft one.
"Perfection comes from dissatisfaction" -Draedon
To true
*insert inspirational quote with a old guy narrating* with VHS vocal effect on
the title really appealed to me. Well done, you hooked me. And now I found another guy like myself doing a simular thing. Sounds pretty good dude!
Thanks!
@@Rhombus209it sounds awesome! And by the way what program do you use?
Thanks!! Also FL Studio is the programme I use :)@@IN4T_
I liked it before, but after watching it again with the subtitle.. wow...
Excellent work!
Thanks! I appreciate the support.
speaking of risk and reward, everytime I fail at something and start feeling down I just have to remind myself that "Masters have failed more than a beginner has even tried,"
True
sounds very minecraft like, i love it
your feelings are irrational
@@Fire_Axus they are rational
"I was struggling to make this song at first but then I added some reverb and I started to like it." Story of my musical composing life
Haha true
Hey man, it’s great that you can express yourself so well via music that you share here. I like your spirit, stay strong in school and honestly it will get better once you find people who are really worth your time and energy. Sometimes it takes a really long time but it’s really worth it ❤
That's true, thanks :))
I like how you used the full range of the piano, I think that kept the melody very clear. And I also love the way you adjusted the reverb/echo effect as it went through. You clearly put a lot of thought and effort into it.
I don't have any suggestions but I look forward to seeing what you do next :)
Thank you so much!
That a Masterpiece.
great message, and "I added reverb and started to like it" sounds like something my music producing suitemate would say XD. Thanks for sharing and good luck out there
haha, maybe I am him?? 🤷♂️
"Ooo Moosik!" "Me click"
Two things.
1. I feel called out
2. This sounds really nice. I'd have this on a loop for hours if I could. Great job 👍
Thanks!!
This sounds like minecraft music!
learning this on a piano straight away
I made it in midi so I'm not sure how hard it will be to play but that will be SO COOL!!!
happiness has to be fought for
True
very very pleasant, quite relaxing even!
Finally a fellow subtitles user!!!
I like them, it adds a whole new dimension to the song!!!
super in living,lost in hell
This is like a Minecraft song 😂
The captions made me about cry jfc. Needed to hear that. Thank you for sharing, the tune really got better the more it progressed!
Thanks :)
@@Rhombus209 Np! It really is impressive how the song got more cohesive the more it went on. Keep doing what you do!
I honestly love this and I agree with this notion!
I hope youre doing well X3
Maybe for a beat, if you ever wanna add one, it could be a ticking clock?
Something to keep the rhythm.
Good idea
I feel like i'm in a cutscene recapping my life while i'm ascending
Wow that's a cool it made you feel that :)
I'm glad I got to see this video, better said that it got recommended to me. Hey, shit happens, but let me tell you what happened today to me. My school had a festival, and I asked a group of girls who wants to play some Uno since I was bored as hell. One of them decided to 1v1 me and we continued the 1v1 until the festival was over, 45 minutes, up to an hour overtime. I got absoloutely demolished, 12-3. She violated me in Uno, man. But it was fun as hell. Though, I got to know her a bit better. Remember,
He who fears being conquered is sure of defeat.
- Napoleon Bonaparte
Always take opportunities and risks if there's nothing significant such as pride to lose from them. Sometimes they pay out and they end up to be worth it. Never fear the new. Peace out. I'll sub too, nice song.
That's awesome dude :)
It sounds super good, you should make the subtitles longer tho :p
Lovely, good job 👏👏👏
Bro this is so beautiful!
Thanks :)
I always watch with subtitles on but assumed this one didn't have any
I saw the message.
Thank you, Rhombus. I will next time. And yes, I did enjoy the rest of the song.
Good to hear!! :)
Nice work man! I personally think you could've played a lot more with the dynamics though, because right now the piano sounds quite aggressive at places where I feel a more held back piano would with the vibe more. Other than that I love the composition! :0
Thanks, I'm still learning so thanks for the feedback :)
This is beautiful! Keep on going!
Thanks :)
Earned yourself a sub...thanks so much, love the subtitles
Thanks!!! I appreciate it
ok I have no idea why, but when I heard 0:36 I thought of Pikmin
Wow
How calming
Thanks :)
This is really good!
this is beautiful dude, nice tune! 🫶
Thank you :)
...I needed that. Thank you.
Hope it helped you!
I like it
i like it a lot!
The captions were really sweey
Hello fellow piano player. Great stuff; keep it up!
Thanks fellow player :)
OMG THIS IS TOO UNDERRATED
Thanks! I appreciate it
@@Rhombus209 No problem !!!
I have no knowledge of making a good melody at all my instrumentals are so trash 😅, hope i can reach this level someday.
You totally can, I've been doing this for just over a year now and I'm basically completely self taught, all you need to do is stay persistent :)
sounds so pretty!!! keep going
Thanks!
VERY GOOD! Kinda hard to make improvements, I would add if needed a quite bass in the background.
Thanks for the feedback :)
beautiful, dude. Is it okay if i can use this in a short film that i am working on? I think it will fit beautifully.
That would be awesome! feel free. just make sure to credit me! :)
comment a link when you're done, that sounds really cool!
I subbed
I'm your 318th sub :)
awesome shit.
this video needs more views
Thanks
@@Rhombus209 its true tho, the smaller channels always make the best music. excited when i get a new channel on my feed.
nice job
Sounds interesting and has potential, but the chords are kind of random sometimes and don't make that much sense together harmonically, though it overall has a nice and very specific vibe, maybe somewhat similar to Minecraft or something like that I guess.
Yeah I always notice loads of things I could improve on in the song after I publish it 😭
wow!! awesome ;)
Thanks!!!! :D that means alot!!
keep going.
i think that his crush rejected someone
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TURN ON CAPTIONS!
need midi to try making a song pls pls pls it's so good
If you want to talk to me or get some files of the video then you will need to join the discord server discord.com/invite/yDAbw7BP
thx!@@Rhombus209
I like your sense of music, you are indeed a talented individual.
Do you have any way to socialize ? I would like to talk to you.
I don't at the moment. I think I should start a discord server it would be cool to talk to you guys. If and when I do I'll put a link in my about section
All set up now
You'll find the one
❤
add velocity changes to the notes - it will make it sound more emotional and powerful, compared to this piece, which i feels sounds very hollow
Thanks for the advice. I will do in the future
fucked up the end
Music
Bro this got hella views. What's your secret?
Just stay consistent and try to keep improving I guess!
so i can use this for the game im making?
Sure just make sure to credit me in some way
@@Rhombus209 ok :D
Names if u want! (Even tho u got one lol)
The Pain of Perseverance
The Risks and Gains
Eh idk lol
I like them
@@Rhombus209 i wanna make more but i cant think well lol, and thanks!
Is the thing in the cober a vulture? sure does look like one
You have confused me lol. Please explain
@@Rhombus209 the thumbnail, it looks like a vulture
@@Rhombus209 but you have to really squint
@@HimariShimizu wait i see what you mean now lol. It was all intentional song design..... obviously 🦅🦅
The music is pretty but I just don't get why you chose this particular title for it.
I wanted to make a message with it I guess lol. Read the subtitles for the message if you haven't already.
Dude this is so good
Thanks :)
cool
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Wow!