I actually enjoy the rules stories as long as there's substance to them, rather than just reading them off. But it's always good to have a change of pace!
I usually write stuff when listening to creepypastas, this is the few stories where pay attention to the *whole* thing, kudos to the author, this story is amazing!
Wondering how they were able to inject her with all those syringes, but she broke the bone saw. Also, why would they even try to use a bone saw directly on her skin, when bone saws are specifically designed to NOT cut skin?
Long Stories are the best, because they can properly *convey* a story. The short stories aren't bad, but you can hardly get invested if the story ends before you get the chance
YES!! I know I’m not the only one who is SO happy you decided to do this story. It started as the most ridiculous one I’ve ever read but somehow got pretty interesting over the span of subsequent posts. I have so many questions but I suppose judging by the ludicrous nature of the tale I really shouldn’t have asked anything at all. So bizarre, love it. Thanks for doing this!
Thank you Thank you! Been waiting for the complete. I swear your narrations give such life to your characters that I wonder about them. Some of them I even finish their stories in my head. 😅
Same here! I always want to know what happens with the characters in the end and just come up with something myself. I have listened to a few of his longest ones this week and started having dreams about them, complete with the type of images that came alive as a result of his fantastic narration.
@@g.h.7661 😂 me too!! I have vivid dreams anyway and when I spend hours in his narrations (and some others : Lighthouse Horror especially) I inevitably carry the characters into the spirit (dream) world with me.
I have been looking at these for about two months always leave a big like never made a comment tho but on this story had to love had me on ropes every second 💯💯💯💯💯💯
A most excellent narration! Great story. I did not see the end coming. The only part I think could have been better written, was where the EMTs, after failing to extract Marcie from the wall, just call it a day and go home. That is not the way first responders go about their work. But other than that small criticism, I think it will make an excellent narration to plaíy for kids Sat night before Halloween. Though I prolly should have them line their sleepimg bags with some plastic bags. Me: Kids, do you know why there's no monster under your bed? Kids: (blank stare) ME: Because last night, the monster in the wall ate him!!! Bwahahaha.
The EMTs probably just gave up like that because they were under the influence of the house, it's said in the story that it has the ability to influence people's thoughts
I love this story all the pastas I've been listening to have been weak lately,you brought me back from the edge🙏💯 Good show my boy jolly good show👏👏👏👏👏
Not even 10 mins in but how is their 2nd thought amputation!? Then no sedation!? Then the paramedics are the ones doing it!? Not actual surgeons!? How is this a paranormal horror story, but the real world logistics are what’s turning me away from it!?!? God I hate my brain sometimes...
I was already out when they went for a sledgehammer when anyone who is even remotely familiar with construction would just cut a neat little square with a sawzall or a jab-saw, or and other number of tools lol
There’s an explanation near the end of the story as to why the paramedics are acting in such an unrealistic way. It’s not a perfect explanation, but it’s an explanation nonetheless.
That's what was bothering me as well. And they should have contacted authorities. Call the cops, news station, whatever. There's a bit in the story where the husband makes an excuse as to why he's missing work and I'm just thinking "why?" You should tell your work your daughter's arm is stuck in the wall. The whole ordeal should have gotten national attention.
Such an interesting and fascinating story, props to the author and the narrator; you both had me on the edge of my seat/bed for the entire 1+hours! Not that it's a bad thing, I was only curious, why you were talking so fast - admittedly, for a very short time, I'd mixed you up with CreepsMcPasta, which baffled me even more - but I noticed my mistake very quickly; now I get it though, different narrator with a different style. However you did a great job narrating this mysterious story!
I don't get it. If Jasper had already been missing for six years and his dad was in prison for admitting to kill him, how does the story that the mom and dads brother story make the dad sound like a child molester? Did I miss something there?
Big stretch here but I guess because the dad disappeared after she found a kid in her wall (who wouldn't have survived or stayed in the wall without someone keeping him there and feeding him) that had been missing for years makes it seem like he's guilty
I can see it being shot entirely in one room and on a single set, with an ensemble cast, it wouldn’t cost a lot of money. The digital stuff would be a bit more work but potentially it could be done simply with old fashioned special effects like in Poltergeist but on a minute level
Cool story. Barely into it so far...EMTs would definitely not be doing this and she'd definitely be asleep. Also, wouldn't they try to break the wall first or did I miss that.
This one was really good- unfortunately, the ending kind of let that whole thing down in a wacky manner, but at the very least it was an enjoyable and tense journey.
@@peachyyaudio The ending is, that Jasper is still dead, the House or whatever it is created a spawn that is puppeting his body to spread to another house.......
Theory: The house is an Eldritch being of unknown origin that was trapped\sealed in the house by Noah by sacrificing his son to prevent it from feeding off of anyone else. Then Marcy's family was convinced to buy the house by the shady real estate agent that could have been under the being's control. Then when it got the chance it began to drag Marcy into the wall to feed on her and by time. Then whenever it was harmed or felt anything, it made Marcy feel it as well. As soon as it took over Stan's mind it took its chance and made Stan kill himself to set it free so it could roam the earth again. It also somehow made new wallpaper appear over the old to cover up the evidence of what previously happened with Noah and Joel.
This story was so full of evil connotations that i found myself not breathing , on the verge of passing out a couple of times. Evil, though will have its way unless good people rise up against it. How terribly sad and ironic that it choses the most innocent to prey upon. Be happy as much as you can. Evil shadows us all just waiting for the right moment to strike. Please be safe healthy and happy. God bless you all.
Wait a sec... if female protag's husband took the fall for Jasper's disappearance and all that. Wouldn't that mean Jasper's dad would get his sentence commuted and he'd be let out? Regardless of his admittance of guilt. Plus he'd get his kid back after some time in foster care.
No parent would sleep, and paramedics would never leave. Also agree, I hate the list stories. Might as well be here is the future of the story, plz memorize
Ohhh my physics teacher told us about and how it theoretically could be possible to merge your arm with the wall if the attoms arranged just right, or more like just wrong. Im getting this is where the author got the idea
so noah got permanently affected by the house since he killed his son before the house completely consumed him. and what ? noah is gonna do the same thing again in a different house ? the houses power can travel ? what was up with the priest ? i have many questions.
I think he is saying that the house manifested itself as Jasper. It made Stan believe he had to kill himself to free the two kids...well Noah really did kill his son Jasper so JAsper couldn't have 'escaped'. The house used Jasper's appearance so it could go infect other people's homes. Presumably the foster family's house.
so there's this wall that seems indestructible that has the ability to make the bodies of people who are effected by it also indestructible? *the government would like to know your location, but they already do*
Jasper was actually dead the whole time,and it was the entity of the house that transformed itself into Jasper. The entity is free to infest other places since it's no longer binded to the house.
40:40 I find myself agreeing with the father on this one. Idk but John Wayne as it is, if the house doesn't want to negotiate, if it responds to their pleas to know what it wants with intimidation, then the house is the one being unreasonable and I'd find myself doing much the same. What else could you do in that situation? It's a mad gambit but as things stand at this point in the story, they're ALREADY gonna lose their daughter, so a desperate attempt to demonstrate that very desperation seems totally appropriate. Sometimes the one holding the hostage has to watch said hostage's loves ones walk through fire, risking even the hostage, before they realize they've pushed someone too far. Daddy's just walking through fire. If it takes his daughter, the house's only leverage, then it's done fucked up. Let's hope he commits to it because nothing is more damaging in this kind of situation than an empty threat.
The blade oscillates back & forth only a couple of degrees at a very rapid rate. So, even when it's loaded with a sharp circular saw blade, it won't cut flesh. It just sort of jiggles your skin. Tons of "not gonna happen" in this story. Was well narrated,but not well written....
Very few atheists are buried. People who go their whole lives as staunch atheists often change their tune when they know for a fact they're on death''s door. People who are on their death bed often confess their sins and try to make amends for their past misdeeds. People who are about to crash their car fatally usually say "oh God" seconds before their death. I find that fascinating.
I personally love how absurd it is. If you don’t take it too seriously and look at it as a purposely ridiculous ghost story like Grey Michael it’s actually really entertaining
@@goldh2o543 If you've seen the movie E.T. I would imagine it would turn out similarly. The CDC would be in there as soon as the paramedics made a report. The entire house would be covered in a bubble and the only people allowed in would be doctors and scientists in biohazard suits.
@@geminiadastra8662 Bone saws (also called oscillating saws) move up and down but don't rotate in a circular way. They're very effective against wood, casts, bones or similar hard material. But against human skin? It's highly unlikely to even break the skin let alone cut.
The ending made little sense…if Noah was the evil presence of the house embodied then he would have to disappear again at the next house he went to or maybe he could cause people to die with his presence but in either case it just doesn’t track well.
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Long stories are the best. I'll always listen to MCP.
the book end annoys the hell out of me though. the worst thing for insomniacs.
Same fam
MrCreepyPasta's impression of a child sounds exactly like Adam Sandler scowling at a golf ball
Dude the more I think about it the more my brain hurts
In the future: “Welcome to the justice league! How did you get your powers again?”
Marcy: “A wall.”
finally something that isn’t “i found this list of rules…” lol
For real. So tired of copy and paste pastas.
For real, it was refreshing!
Thank you!
I HATE those rules stories. Way too many of them.
I actually enjoy the rules stories as long as there's substance to them, rather than just reading them off. But it's always good to have a change of pace!
I ordered tea from your wife last week, and it's coming in a few days. I can't wait. Keep up what you are doing. You rock
I usually write stuff when listening to creepypastas, this is the few stories where pay attention to the *whole* thing, kudos to the author, this story is amazing!
SPOILER
I love how the mother refused to post a video of her daughter on the internet, that little detail make her so so much more loveable
Yeah... at a certain point, you have to ignore the scream. If you're drilling meters away, you just keep going. Not stopping at every yelp
Thts what I was thinking as well lmao
Exactly!! So frustrating
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Yep i feel that at the dentist everytime i go there to that retched place.
Wondering how they were able to inject her with all those syringes, but she broke the bone saw. Also, why would they even try to use a bone saw directly on her skin, when bone saws are specifically designed to NOT cut skin?
The person who wrote this doesn't seem to have the best medical knowledge 😂
Wow, this story was absolutely incredible!!! ❤
Much love from Colorado!
That was THE best story I've ever heard on creepypasta.
Long Stories are the best, because they can properly *convey* a story. The short stories aren't bad, but you can hardly get invested if the story ends before you get the chance
This story is by far one of the best written and told. Would make an amazing movie!
YES!! I know I’m not the only one who is SO happy you decided to do this story. It started as the most ridiculous one I’ve ever read but somehow got pretty interesting over the span of subsequent posts. I have so many questions but I suppose judging by the ludicrous nature of the tale I really shouldn’t have asked anything at all. So bizarre, love it. Thanks for doing this!
So happy I waited for the complete story.
Thank you Thank you! Been waiting for the complete. I swear your narrations give such life to your characters that I wonder about them. Some of them I even finish their stories in my head. 😅
Same here! I always want to know what happens with the characters in the end and just come up with something myself. I have listened to a few of his longest ones this week and started having dreams about them, complete with the type of images that came alive as a result of his fantastic narration.
@@g.h.7661 😂 me too!! I have vivid dreams anyway and when I spend hours in his narrations (and some others : Lighthouse Horror especially) I inevitably carry the characters into the spirit (dream) world with me.
Their daughter was getting slowly pulled into the Backrooms.
I have been looking at these for about two months always leave a big like never made a comment tho but on this story had to love had me on ropes every second 💯💯💯💯💯💯
Did you ever think of just having her apologize to the house? It's not the craziest idea I've ever heard...
A most excellent narration! Great story. I did not see the end coming.
The only part I think could have been better written, was where the EMTs, after failing to extract Marcie from the wall, just call it a day and go home. That is not the way first responders go about their work. But other than that small criticism, I think it will make an excellent narration to plaíy for kids Sat night before Halloween. Though I prolly should have them line their sleepimg bags with some plastic bags.
Me: Kids, do you know why there's no monster under your bed?
Kids: (blank stare)
ME: Because last night, the monster in the wall ate him!!! Bwahahaha.
How old are you?
The EMTs probably just gave up like that because they were under the influence of the house, it's said in the story that it has the ability to influence people's thoughts
Heard this story a few weeks back. It was good.
God Damn, kinda want a sequel series to this one. Excellent narration as always 💙
Well, that turned out differently than expected.
Amazed I don't see more comments talking about "This House has People in it."
Season 2, please. Thank you. Peace and much love sent from Ontario, Canada.
Hi Kat, Fellow 👾 Listener & Fellow Canadian.. /🇨🇦
I'm in Ont, near N. Falls!
I love this story all the pastas I've been listening to have been weak lately,you brought me back from the edge🙏💯 Good show my boy jolly good show👏👏👏👏👏
Not even 10 mins in but how is their 2nd thought amputation!? Then no sedation!? Then the paramedics are the ones doing it!? Not actual surgeons!? How is this a paranormal horror story, but the real world logistics are what’s turning me away from it!?!? God I hate my brain sometimes...
Oh also they’re using a bone saw to start the incision!?
I was already out when they went for a sledgehammer when anyone who is even remotely familiar with construction would just cut a neat little square with a sawzall or a jab-saw, or and other number of tools lol
Sure FIRE would use a sledgehammer, or more likely the blunt end of a halligan, but also this wasn't a burning house.
There’s an explanation near the end of the story as to why the paramedics are acting in such an unrealistic way. It’s not a perfect explanation, but it’s an explanation nonetheless.
That's what was bothering me as well. And they should have contacted authorities. Call the cops, news station, whatever. There's a bit in the story where the husband makes an excuse as to why he's missing work and I'm just thinking "why?" You should tell your work your daughter's arm is stuck in the wall. The whole ordeal should have gotten national attention.
My man mrceepypasta I been subscribed since 2017 … I got to say you helped me get through 2020 it was a rough year
Ah yes the best remedy for an achey heart is always Mr. Creepy Pasta's channel haha.
Tim changed to Tom and Marcy changed to Mercy lol. That ending though………
I love this story 💚💙💚 MrCreepyPasta, your narration is the bomb 💣💣💣 Thank you so very much!!!
Take care, stay safe and God bless you!!!
After 3 years, I finally decided to finish this story.
Such an interesting and fascinating story, props to the author and the narrator; you both had me on the edge of my seat/bed for the entire 1+hours!
Not that it's a bad thing, I was only curious, why you were talking so fast - admittedly, for a very short time, I'd mixed you up with CreepsMcPasta, which baffled me even more - but I noticed my mistake very quickly; now I get it though, different narrator with a different style.
However you did a great job narrating this mysterious story!
I don't get it. If Jasper had already been missing for six years and his dad was in prison for admitting to kill him, how does the story that the mom and dads brother story make the dad sound like a child molester? Did I miss something there?
Big stretch here but I guess because the dad disappeared after she found a kid in her wall (who wouldn't have survived or stayed in the wall without someone keeping him there and feeding him) that had been missing for years makes it seem like he's guilty
Incredible, the complete version gonna leave a like even though i already finished the series
I can't believe he chose Linda Blair as the cover photo 😅😅😅☠🤣🤣🤣
@@glitzycorpsllc.Barbie yeah I've seen it on a different creepypasta he made but i can't remember it🤔😂
I thought the title read: "My daughter's hard" ... Threw me for a loop there
Lol I was just hoping it was my daughters hand is stuck inside the wall and not some other story. I love this ludicrous, nonsensical tale!
Well, she broke a bone saw, so I guess that's technically true 😂
@@g.h.7661 samee
I would love to see this as a short film
I can see it being shot entirely in one room and on a single set, with an ensemble cast, it wouldn’t cost a lot of money. The digital stuff would be a bit more work but potentially it could be done simply with old fashioned special effects like in Poltergeist but on a minute level
Cool story. Barely into it so far...EMTs would definitely not be doing this and she'd definitely be asleep. Also, wouldn't they try to break the wall first or did I miss that.
The ending to this one was insane!!!
There's no way that didn't go viral in like a hour of ems arriving
This one was really good- unfortunately, the ending kind of let that whole thing down in a wacky manner, but at the very least it was an enjoyable and tense journey.
i didn't get the ending
@@peachyyaudio The ending is, that Jasper is still dead, the House or whatever it is created a spawn that is puppeting his body to spread to another house.......
Holy shit is was amazing how this video doesn't have more views
Not even 10 minutes in and im uncomfortable (in a good way) love this story so far
Theory: The house is an Eldritch being of unknown origin that was trapped\sealed in the house by Noah by sacrificing his son to prevent it from feeding off of anyone else. Then Marcy's family was convinced to buy the house by the shady real estate agent that could have been under the being's control. Then when it got the chance it began to drag Marcy into the wall to feed on her and by time. Then whenever it was harmed or felt anything, it made Marcy feel it as well. As soon as it took over Stan's mind it took its chance and made Stan kill himself to set it free so it could roam the earth again. It also somehow made new wallpaper appear over the old to cover up the evidence of what previously happened with Noah and Joel.
@boo it's not a loophole. It's just a theory I was thinking about after listening to this story.
@boo it's cool, I like coming up with possible explanations for stories like these.
I''m sorry. "MY BODY SOUNDS LIKE RICE CRISPIES?!" roflmao
Excellent!
I just wish you could add timestamps for your completed series.. Oh well!
This is an interesting take of "making a house a home." Normally putting yourself into your home isn't this literal.
After two minutes of hitting a wall the fire department suggests amputation. Nope, not going there.
This story was so full of evil connotations that i found myself not breathing , on the verge of passing out a couple of times. Evil, though will have its way unless good people rise up against it. How terribly sad and ironic that it choses the most innocent to prey upon. Be happy as much as you can. Evil shadows us all just waiting for the right moment to strike. Please be safe healthy and happy. God bless you all.
Caught the atoms lacking
Wait a sec... if female protag's husband took the fall for Jasper's disappearance and all that. Wouldn't that mean Jasper's dad would get his sentence commuted and he'd be let out? Regardless of his admittance of guilt. Plus he'd get his kid back after some time in foster care.
Well yeah that’s what she suggested, but the kid is now the evil entity so I don’t think the father dad wants to deal with the kid now.
No parent would sleep, and paramedics would never leave. Also agree, I hate the list stories. Might as well be here is the future of the story, plz memorize
Ohhh my physics teacher told us about and how it theoretically could be possible to merge your arm with the wall if the attoms arranged just right, or more like just wrong. Im getting this is where the author got the idea
Yeah, we also get to see such fusion in Cloverfield Paradox.
Yo m.c.p finally I'm getting your notifications again don't know what was going ! Maybe it was out of our hands 👻💀☠👣 lol! Anyway love the narration 💜
Wow. PART 2 PLZ
As negative and crappy the parents we’re being towards everyone trying to help, I would cuss them out then leave 😡
Kinda reminds me of Monster House
Damn what a crazed story
Agreed makes you wonder what happened to the priest 🤔
so noah got permanently affected by the house since he killed his son before the house completely consumed him. and what ? noah is gonna do the same thing again in a different house ? the houses power can travel ? what was up with the priest ? i have many questions.
I think he is saying that the house manifested itself as Jasper. It made Stan believe he had to kill himself to free the two kids...well Noah really did kill his son Jasper so JAsper couldn't have 'escaped'. The house used Jasper's appearance so it could go infect other people's homes. Presumably the foster family's house.
Maybe she shouldn’t have put her hand on the wall?
Biggest overreaction to someones arm stuck in drywall. lol
Yo me mrcreepypastas can get me to listen to anything
You rock
The writer clearly doesn't know what a house foundation is lol. Good story tho.
Well they should have said crawl space instead of foundation
I'd let them take the arm, she'll live
Has Amityville horror vibes
so there's this wall that seems indestructible that has the ability to make the bodies of people who are effected by it also indestructible?
*the government would like to know your location, but they already do*
can someone explain the ending to me? how it was a trap and they let it out to spread
Jasper was actually dead the whole time,and it was the entity of the house that transformed itself into Jasper. The entity is free to infest other places since it's no longer binded to the house.
Yellow Pages! You'd be surprised what you can find in the classifieds in the Old Farmers Almanac
Looks like another job for Grey Michael.
mercy😂
Is it misspelled on purpose so it’s like AWAL? Or is it supposed to be A Wall? I’m probably just being an idiot hahahaha
You are an amazing story teller you had my full attention the hole time 👏👏👏👏👏🥰🥰
40:40 I find myself agreeing with the father on this one.
Idk but John Wayne as it is, if the house doesn't want to negotiate, if it responds to their pleas to know what it wants with intimidation, then the house is the one being unreasonable and I'd find myself doing much the same.
What else could you do in that situation? It's a mad gambit but as things stand at this point in the story, they're ALREADY gonna lose their daughter, so a desperate attempt to demonstrate that very desperation seems totally appropriate.
Sometimes the one holding the hostage has to watch said hostage's loves ones walk through fire, risking even the hostage, before they realize they've pushed someone too far.
Daddy's just walking through fire. If it takes his daughter, the house's only leverage, then it's done fucked up.
Let's hope he commits to it because nothing is more damaging in this kind of situation than an empty threat.
So a very constrained version of The shining...
The blade oscillates back & forth only a couple of degrees at a very rapid rate. So, even when it's loaded with a sharp circular saw blade, it won't cut flesh. It just sort of jiggles your skin.
Tons of "not gonna happen" in this story. Was well narrated,but not well written....
Tim.....Tom
The reading is great but I wish the author didn't admit so many times.
Twist endings¡!!!
I have adhd and literally have no idea what happened because everytime I try to put the peices together my brain falls apart TwT
Very few atheists are buried. People who go their whole lives as staunch atheists often change their tune when they know for a fact they're on death''s door. People who are on their death bed often confess their sins and try to make amends for their past misdeeds. People who are about to crash their car fatally usually say "oh God" seconds before their death. I find that fascinating.
Someone call the scp foundation.
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I’m confused by the end. I missed something
Insert kira yoshikage:
Plot holes... so many plot holes this is basically un listenable
I personally love how absurd it is. If you don’t take it too seriously and look at it as a purposely ridiculous ghost story like Grey Michael it’s actually really entertaining
I didn't notice plot holes, what are they?
@@goldh2o543 If you've seen the movie E.T. I would imagine it would turn out similarly. The CDC would be in there as soon as the paramedics made a report. The entire house would be covered in a bubble and the only people allowed in would be doctors and scientists in biohazard suits.
@@marlonreynolds5422 but wheres the fun in that story
The author put "admitted" so many times. It made me not want to listen to it anymore. It's a good story just annoying
I really think they shoulda just sawed her arm off right at the beginning, pain be damed tbh lmao
Real world logic aside. An ok story, but is the first kid alibe or dead?
Why are you using a bone saw against human skin? That won't cut human skin
I'm pretty sure a bone saw is capable of cutting human skin
@@geminiadastra8662 Bone saws (also called oscillating saws) move up and down but don't rotate in a circular way. They're very effective against wood, casts, bones or similar hard material. But against human skin? It's highly unlikely to even break the skin let alone cut.
@@sebastianacevedo9444 Now i want to see a bonesaw cut through a Pig Corpse
43:30 Where I left off.
Lmao
Bruh im confused
Why! Just why 😢
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the ending makes no sense
Marcie should apologize to the house. Children these days. Need to realize their impact on their environment.😂
sus
WAL?
Am I the only one that thinks the narrator reads and talk’s way to fast at times, he sounds weird when he does this 🤷🏻♀️
Initially downvoted. Changed to neutral. Not something I'll listen to again but the real ending was unexpected
The ending made little sense…if Noah was the evil presence of the house embodied then he would have to disappear again at the next house he went to or maybe he could cause people to die with his presence but in either case it just doesn’t track well.
The son? Well it's possible for that to happen or it was simply trapped in house form so now it can cause people to kill themselves for it to feed
the kid jasper is the evil presence.