Absolutely incredible! The way you made my story come alive with your narration and the background noises. I am a strong believer that stories are meant to be presented this way. I loved it! Keep up the good work!
He was never a brave man if he couldn't handle guns being in the house. Having to lock away a form of protection up in the attic because he was squeamish when only seeing them is far from being brave.
I found this story a bit confusing. It begins with that he as eldest grandson is worried about his granddad. Then it tells about how his granddad took him in and he raised him. And at the end of the story in the attic he refers to himself as an adolescent which means in my book a young man, not fully an adult. It doesn't make sense to me where he did come from to make sure his granddad was okay through the storm. Your narration is great but the story is not logical.
Since the protagonist was essentially on his own since he was young, I think he was a little more self-sufficient than your typical teenager. I think he was living with his grandpa, but made the conscious decision to stay with him in the face of the approaching storm instead of evacuating. I could be wrong, but that's how I read it.
Hey thanks for pointing it out. I think the confusion is because I wrote the story awhile ago and then I went back and did a precursory revision. I changed a few things in it and could've been a bit more clear on that point. The kids dad dies, he bounces from couch to couch not having a place to stay, then he moves to his grandpa's where he graduates high school. After that he comes back as a young adult to help his grandpa who refuses to leave with a storm coming. Does that make sense now?
Absolutely incredible! The way you made my story come alive with your narration and the background noises. I am a strong believer that stories are meant to be presented this way. I loved it! Keep up the good work!
Thanks so much, John! I really appreciate it, and thank you so much for letting me narrate your excellent story here!
@@dark_night_tales Anytime you definitely did it justice!
^ This 🥰
Tyvm for writing this awesome piece and letting our fav naarator work his magic with it! ❤ Really fantastic reflective horror story 🤯😱👏🍿
@@TimelessEssence13 Of course! He's one of the best in the biz for sure! Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow 😮 That was beautifully narrated. Reflective and sad. I heard the emotion crack your voice slightly.
Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it! I thought the story had a lot of depth to it, which made it easy to really get into for me.
@@dark_night_tales it absolutely does. Knocked it out of the park.
It really was beautifully narrated. That Grandpa was heroic, they don't make 'em like that anymore ❤
Whoa 😮
I'm glad I saved this for when I could pay full attention. Quite an emotional and incredible tale ❤🤯
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really liked the story - it resonated with me.
Your voice is PERFECT for stories like these! 🙂 Love the background as well, excellent!
Thank you so much!
Hi Brian 👋. Thank you for another great video and narration ❤
Glad you enjoyed it Kim!
This was an incredible and powerful tale, thank you Brian! Well done! 😊
💙❤💜
Glad you enjoyed it!
You are the man😊
Thanks Summer!
😢♥️♥️ Freaking AWESOME!!!
Thank you!!
you pick such great stories, you have excellent taste!
Glad you like them!
Thanks!
Thank you so much!
Excellent
Thank you so much 😀
Nice one thanks
I appreciate it!
He was never a brave man if he couldn't handle guns being in the house. Having to lock away a form of protection up in the attic because he was squeamish when only seeing them is far from being brave.
He definitely lamented it at the end.
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I found this story a bit confusing. It begins with that he as eldest grandson is worried about his granddad. Then it tells about how his granddad took him in and he raised him. And at the end of the story in the attic he refers to himself as an adolescent which means in my book a young man, not fully an adult. It doesn't make sense to me where he did come from to make sure his granddad was okay through the storm.
Your narration is great but the story is not logical.
Since the protagonist was essentially on his own since he was young, I think he was a little more self-sufficient than your typical teenager. I think he was living with his grandpa, but made the conscious decision to stay with him in the face of the approaching storm instead of evacuating.
I could be wrong, but that's how I read it.
@@dark_night_tales that's how I understood it as well ❤
Hey thanks for pointing it out. I think the confusion is because I wrote the story awhile ago and then I went back and did a precursory revision. I changed a few things in it and could've been a bit more clear on that point. The kids dad dies, he bounces from couch to couch not having a place to stay, then he moves to his grandpa's where he graduates high school. After that he comes back as a young adult to help his grandpa who refuses to leave with a storm coming. Does that make sense now?
@@dark_night_tales Thank you!
@@johnwestrick1544 Thank you for clarifying.