As a writer, sometimes, I'll watch something happen, and my brain goes "LETS PUT THIS SHIT INTO WORDS". So this is the ending from George's POV: Dream appeared in the room, in an orange prison outfit, but the zipper was down, revealing tight bandages. They were an off white, like they were new. Had he hurt himself on accident? The creator laughed nervously, quickly zipping him back up. She clapped her hands together, as to say 'my work here is done'. Then, she left. Dream's expression quickly changed from panic to welcome, but it seemed forced. "Hi guys!" His voice was cheery, but it had a nerve to it, like he didn't know what to say. I could have sworn I heard his voice crack, but it was hard to tell. Quiet, I walked up to him. He saw it in my eyes. He knew I was concerned. I took off his mask, expecting him to push me away, but he didn't. He just turned his head to the side, wincing. Fear flooded me when I saw a few burn marks, maybe a few scars, laid over his face like scarce snow. It didn't look like nothing, but it seemed small, like it was an accident. Based on the videos I saw earlier, I knew they weren't. If he covered his face with a mask, why would he barely hurt himself? It'd most likely be the last place to check. *Last place to check* A suspicion rises in me, and I look down, unzipping his prison shirt. Underneath are bandages. He mumbles something incoherant, but he only stays there, like he was scared of pulling away. Like if I stopped touching him, I'd leave. Not that he didn't want me to stop either. I slowly reached for the bandages, and slowly undid them. He flinched when I felt his skin underneath. I felt his shiver and tremble, but he didn't move. Only continued to wince and flinch. Finally, with a falling dread in my gut, all the bandages dropped at once, revealing his chest. He was littered in bruises and fresh cuts, slashes. To my relief, only a few were new, but they were there. They looked old. He wasn't alright. My face paled as he whimpered something. Everyone else, leaned in to look, and they had the same look as me. I heard the faint click of a camera, but that didn't change the fact that my best friend was bruised and beaten. Even the fact that he had tried to hide it, not bothered to tell *someone* about it, that's what made my dread pool further...
@@blep0 Quite honestly, it just happens. I'm walking down the street? Brain: The wind whistled through the trees, making them shiver. Reading a book? Brain: The pages crinkled in my hand- Sleeping? Brain: I laid there in silence, unrecognizable thoughts floating through my head. I um... I don't know
This is amazing, it truly is. This interested me even though it was based on my own video. I can't believe you made all of this on one scene, I would love to check out any more writing you've made ^^
I just have one thing to say that is not criticism it is advice! SapNap has black hair and his band is normally under his hair. I wanted to tell you this because if you are new to watching these things people might not know who it was. If I where you I would change it. Just some advice from a viewer that does not want you to get hate! Philza also has dark grey wings he looks weird with white. Not sure why but he looks different.
Damn George really be undressed Dream in-front of everyone 😏 (BHAHAH I KNOW THIS SI MEN TTO EB SERUSIN BUT ITS 3 INT EH MORNING AND IM TRIERD AND CANT REALY SEE STRAIHT BUT I DONT WANNE SLEPE RN PLAESE HELP ME LMAO) Edit: hehehe it’s now 6 I .pn the morning and I stil haven’t slept P.ease hlp me Lamo
3:30 FINALLY, SOMEONE WHO MADE THEM REALIZE THE SMILE
Ikr
Yeah!
U have a stack of likes
ikr you just sit here like- HOW DID THEY NOT NOTICE THAT VERY OVIOUS SMILE
@@Anormalweirdo hahhaha
As a writer, sometimes, I'll watch something happen, and my brain goes "LETS PUT THIS SHIT INTO WORDS". So this is the ending from George's POV:
Dream appeared in the room, in an orange prison outfit, but the zipper was down, revealing tight bandages. They were an off white, like they were new. Had he hurt himself on accident?
The creator laughed nervously, quickly zipping him back up. She clapped her hands together, as to say 'my work here is done'. Then, she left. Dream's expression quickly changed from panic to welcome, but it seemed forced.
"Hi guys!" His voice was cheery, but it had a nerve to it, like he didn't know what to say. I could have sworn I heard his voice crack, but it was hard to tell.
Quiet, I walked up to him. He saw it in my eyes. He knew I was concerned. I took off his mask, expecting him to push me away, but he didn't. He just turned his head to the side, wincing.
Fear flooded me when I saw a few burn marks, maybe a few scars, laid over his face like scarce snow. It didn't look like nothing, but it seemed small, like it was an accident. Based on the videos I saw earlier, I knew they weren't. If he covered his face with a mask, why would he barely hurt himself? It'd most likely be the last place to check.
*Last place to check*
A suspicion rises in me, and I look down, unzipping his prison shirt. Underneath are bandages. He mumbles something incoherant, but he only stays there, like he was scared of pulling away. Like if I stopped touching him, I'd leave. Not that he didn't want me to stop either.
I slowly reached for the bandages, and slowly undid them. He flinched when I felt his skin underneath. I felt his shiver and tremble, but he didn't move. Only continued to wince and flinch.
Finally, with a falling dread in my gut, all the bandages dropped at once, revealing his chest. He was littered in bruises and fresh cuts, slashes. To my relief, only a few were new, but they were there. They looked old.
He wasn't alright. My face paled as he whimpered something. Everyone else, leaned in to look, and they had the same look as me. I heard the faint click of a camera, but that didn't change the fact that my best friend was bruised and beaten. Even the fact that he had tried to hide it, not bothered to tell *someone* about it, that's what made my dread pool further...
Jesus christ that's good
How did your brain create this....
You should write storys this is really good with the detail and stuff!
@@bellaquijada Thank you! I do write stories, though it's always those 2 minute scenes that are the best.
@@blep0 Quite honestly, it just happens. I'm walking down the street?
Brain: The wind whistled through the trees, making them shiver.
Reading a book?
Brain: The pages crinkled in my hand-
Sleeping?
Brain: I laid there in silence, unrecognizable thoughts floating through my head.
I um... I don't know
This is amazing, it truly is. This interested me even though it was based on my own video. I can't believe you made all of this on one scene, I would love to check out any more writing you've made ^^
2:09 idk why but I'm bursting in laughter when he bangs his head on the table...
Ikr same 😂
same idk
😂😂😂
So true-
SAME-- When I listen to that audio, I hit my bang too
its supposed to be funny anyways isnt it?
YAY you didn't end it off as george surprised and showed us what he was surprised about
Yea
instablaster...
yess a new one! are u sure your making a part 2 tho?
I most likely will, it may take a bit though.
@@respectthedripkaren3400 That is fine if it takes a while, I can wait for a part two 😊
Take all the time you need ❤️
@@respectthedripkaren3400 how long also I love your name ♥️❤️💓🙌🤲👏👏👏✨
@@ario2223 same
OMG YES THIS IS SO EPIC I hope you'll make a part 2 👉👈
She said she is making a part two, but she said it’s going to take a while to make it. Just letting you know 😊
@@Only.that.ace7 oh- thanks for telling me that!
@@hotmilqx No problem! Just keeping you informed! Have a nice day!
@@Only.that.ace7 you too!
:o you used my video. Thats pretty pog lol. Good job on the video!!
I love your videos!
When George looked under dreams bandages I thought he was staring at his 6 pack not the bruises. Anyway amazing video
*Respect the Drip KAREN. :)*
the best intro i have yet to see in many years on youtube
nice meme :)
edit:dorime
4:33 look at george...
That man be plotting murder
I want part 2 aswell I'm a new subscriber btw and I just want to say that I like your characters :))))
this youtubers intro...... is so perfect....
*IM SUBBING-*
ughhh I need part 2...pretty pleaseee
The Angsty short and rushed sound like how I was born
I’m not crying. I just have something in my eyes. (For most of the angsty stuff)
I’m surprised George didn’t hug Dream ;w;
Can you PLEASE make a part 2 I LOVE this video
The intro is the best
POG ALSO I LOVE YOU INTROO
Can you make pt. 2?
Im exited♎♎
Please part 2 dis was amazing and is so underrated i liked the vid when it was at 225 likes
I love the spiritual cult audio in the intro 👌
I just have one thing to say that is not criticism it is advice! SapNap has black hair and his band is normally under his hair. I wanted to tell you this because if you are new to watching these things people might not know who it was. If I where you I would change it. Just some advice from a viewer that does not want you to get hate! Philza also has dark grey wings he looks weird with white. Not sure why but he looks different.
U N D E R A T T E D - IT NEEDS MORE LIKESSS
Жаль что нет продолжения 😔
У тебя классные видео...✨
Wait a min HUHH I DIDNT JUST SEE THIS TECHNO IS TERRIFIED? NEVER THOUGHT HE WOULD BE-
PART 2 PLS(I'm asking nicely 🥺
It seems I am fourth..... I may be wrong tho-
Luv ur vids btw
❤️❤️❤️
Tysm!
@@respectthedripkaren3400 no problem! ❤️❤️❤️
Yesssss I love your doremah intro 😏
yaassssss plssss do a part 2+new sub
technoblade gettting ready to murder someone
Pffffft ok the intro got me 🤣
Hi! Tommy hates dream but he wouldn’t say things like that! That’s the only problem the whole video was great :D
Ur intro is amaizing :D
Part 2 plss 😗
Part 2 please and I love your videos can I get a shout out please???
Yes girl do more of these plz
This is the best video I have ever saw
A socialpath is someone who has a hard time understanding feelings as they lack some themself. that the shortest I can cut it to
Please please please please please please please part 2🥺
Can you please make a part 2 please
Part 2 plss is cool i like it
The fact that they weren't bothered by him smashing his head on the table is amazing💿👄💿
Can you make part 2 please?🥺🖤
2:25 ... wilbur oh god im getting flashbacks
PART 2 PLEASE!!
My recommendation: Dream Angst
Me: Yeah some good stuff- :)
Pt 2 if you aren't too busy pls
Awesome intro
Can you make part 2?
That was sus George, give dream his shirt back 💀 (don't come at me ik what happened its just the first thing I thought-
Intro: dorime-
Me: *joins in*
I love your videos!
DORIME...
gorl i need a aftermath
Plis part two :(
He was the traumatised one but in the end they were traumatized love that👏
I saw your channel name at the beginning of the video and at first I didn't realise it was your channel name but when I did I swear I cackled
Please a part 2 😌
Damn George really be undressed Dream in-front of everyone 😏 (BHAHAH I KNOW THIS SI MEN TTO EB SERUSIN BUT ITS 3 INT EH MORNING AND IM TRIERD AND CANT REALY SEE STRAIHT BUT I DONT WANNE SLEPE RN PLAESE HELP ME LMAO)
Edit: hehehe it’s now 6 I .pn the morning and I stil haven’t slept P.ease hlp me Lamo
Please make part 2
We need a part 2!!!
Can you do a part 2 pls
Can’t wait for part two and your the first one I see do one like this 🙃
can you pls do part 2 of reaction and the after math of the reaction
Guysss what’s more important
School Or RUclips
Ok now what’s more interesting
School Or RUclips
I would choose RUclips for both XD
School is more important
However......
RUclips is more interesting
😚
👉🏻👈🏻
Can you do part 2 please
pls part 2
UHAABUGAGBAYUA NOT ME SIMPING FOR DRESM KSJAJAAW
Your intro is perfect!
PART TWO PLEASEEEEE
Could they react to Foolish :D
(Hes cannonicaly Puffys son and Dreams brother)
Fact: sap's hair is black and nice vid
Part 2 plis
I need part 2 or i Will never breathe
I need. Part 2
El último video me hizo llorar 😭😭😭
can you make part 2
WoW SaM hAvE glASses EnDeR tHe MaSk
ItS ✨ GaChA LoGiC ✨
The end 😂😂😂😂
ANGST SADNESS REACTION i can feel it
i give it 10 out of 10
the intro is so funny
Can we.gave part 2
part 2 plsssssssssssssss
George the heck- Tommy was abused by Dream and how we he have knownnnnn aaaaaaaa
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OMG +1 sub
not me laughing at dream banging his head on the table
I luv ur intro
omg this vidio was awesome
Heh I respect the first one. Being a sociopath is fun!
İntro tho thats pog
Amazingly POG
First
Second.
@@respectthedripkaren3400 And I Oop-
Someone saying "you are Pog" or something similar to you is the best compliment ever ngl 😌👌
@@tayshaermine7053 I know, I feel so grateful. 😌
Omg this is so 😎 awesomee
I love u username man.
Part 2 plzzzzzzzzzzz
Part 2 pretty please with whipped cream and cherry on top🥺🥺❤️🍦
i like ur intro UwU
I think it's funny how they weren't concerned when he was hitting his head on the keyboard/desk
OMG THE INTRO LOL 😂 😂 😂
I subbed because your name is awesome.