"War Poetry" Raw Oldschool HipHop Beat
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- Опубликовано: 7 фев 2025
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ok got it I don't see you have the website
Hey, i used this beat for a song, and i was wondering if it would be okay to send it in as a demo so i can try and get booked for a club performance but i wont use the song at the club during the performance i'll be using some other songs
This has been stuck in my head for years. Awesome beat
Don't let people hate ur lyrics. You post that shit and be proud of your craft, it's your vice don't let anyone take it from you. Much love bless 🙏
I have been RUclips since it first opened slapping instrumentals and BluntedBeatz makes some of the most consistently dope shit I've heard. Slap hard enough to get your head bobbing, but complex enough they aren't boring. Simple enough you can find a sweet flow on it, but complicated enough you need some skill to do so.
The haters are clueless. Liked, favorited, all that good shit.
It's been 10 fckin years for me already since i discovered this shit (and BluntedBeatz to begin with), grinding destiny 1 while still hiding from family having a smoke of the green on the balcony. Just feels like yesterday man, good good times. Time fricking flies!
BluntedBeatz
Sore feet, Dirtied clothes
The highs are gone and I'm laying low
Sound - friend or foe?
I won't risk a check while I'm alone
Cold fingers with dreams of going home
Sky lit up with either bombers or drones
War Poetry,
Writing in the blood of fallen friends
War Poetry,
Send a letter praying it would end
But there ain't no god In these badlands
No more serenades and music with jazz-hands
Mind set, back straight,
Survival of the fittest, no such thing as mates
TheShadeGamer This is the best one.
Yeah
TheShadeGamer u
This beat out of many beats brings out a great story and sparks creativity. I never came across a better beat
why is this so good? seems like a rapper would pay alot of money for this beat.
i love this beat, im trying to make a rap song about the war and violence that's happening in the world right now with it
@@bonafidehadez312 I am writing about your health issues how you became sexually active so early.....
I'd definitely pay for this to make some cash off it, if I cared bout that but instead I just killed it for free for fun cause it's what I like to do check it out man you won't regret it, Saint Vine out!
m.soundcloud.com/fallensaints-saint-vine/war-story
@@scottparker1541 please do
@ Saint Vine
Bruhh
That was so weak, I peeped that shit. Ruined the bear for me.
beats oddly hypnotic , keep coming back to it
Inspired by THC. I love that
THC?
@@ManjunathManja1227 Ganja!
my favorite rap beat of all time
This is dope as fluck bro! Especially those first few chops at the beginning. Are you doing some collabs? We could definitely make some heat together.
bored? Search for instablaster on google. =)
Haha seeing you ask someone to Collab is rare , good luck mix (5yrs later lol)
Haven't had a beat give me so much motivation and boost in a long time... Thank you. I will hopefully have version done soon. Stay up 🙏
this has such a necro's album gory days groove i love it
30 second advert this better be the best beat i ever heard in my life lol.
fire as freak man keep making more like this
Easily the hardest best I've ever heard man great work
if you like that boombap shit check out the last track i put up love to know what you think, Thanks in advance Peace!
Have you never heard wu tang, Thats Really Hard beats
listening to this instrumental is like listening to an old 90's hip hop beat
That's what I'm talking about may
Old school ,aye 💪🏼🎧
I killed this a long time ago happy new year blunted beats
Bringing Jesus to this Beat his word needs to be heard
Yo. Yo, check it.
Yo.
Yo.
This is the Clusive, spitting 'War Poetry'
Shredding up these BluntedBeatz, everybody know its me
I'm the dude all the little kids hope and wanna be
I'm the dude all the girls say that they gotta meet
Listen up, i got something that I need to say
Take seats, and listen to this lecture that I preach today
This is 'War Poetry', not for the faint of heart
We storm beaches, and see our homies get blown apart
That's some real shit that a lot of people don't know
This is real life, not that game Call of Duty 4
The Sarge barking orders, and I'm running for my damn life
Hoping and praying I'll get the chance to see my wife
I take cover, and join the gunfire symphony
Wit enough ammo to make my enemies memories
This is my destiny. This war-life is testing me.
I gotta stay headstrong so I can get off this beach.
Boom. A mortar shell just hit near-by
I fall to my back and I can hardly see through my eyes
What I do see, is a few dudes burn and die
I'm pulled to my feet, but I'm still asking God why
"You wanna live!?... Get your ass off the beach!"
With no hesitation I'm pacing and moving my two feet
I'm operating strictly off of instinct and im scared to death
The sand is soaked with blood and i just might lose my damn self
In front of me, I see a pile of dead bodies
It should touch me, but all it does is just remind me
I gotta stay moving if I dont wanna die horribly
ClusiveC, coming with this real 'War Poetry'.
yo.. To be continued man...
fuck yeah dude....
Tom Cooper lol thanks man, this started out as a freestyle then i decided to put somewhat of a story to it
dope as fuck, if you can actually rap with your voice you should use that somewhere. Sweet
quit postin your lyrics on youtube man people steal that shit like its nothin. I really dig the flow homie, i spit it out loud and it sounded pretty good. hmu on twitter @mac_radikal maybe we could get a track together
this rap is actually pretty bad ass.
yooo...9ys ago, whaat, now thats grind
damn this shit is raw. I really, really, like this beat. this beat just made me come up with potentially one of the best multi syllabics I've written in like 7 years...
this song actually deserves that tittle tbh..
What's the issue you never seen me this crazy before ? Related through the pain
How many of yall got caught in the game
22$ and Nike shoes
Cut throat pirates
Let me hear it bang
Heaven rang
Let's go up in flames
Marching to the intro of revolution
Warriors sun
Rising in the east
Got me feeling so special with the beat
Got your voice on repeat
I think I lost my mind
But would you look at the time
Sounds about right
War poetry
This shits on sight
Hunger games and I ain't feeling no hunger pains
We love old school
//PERSONAL PRACTICE//
Its tongue and cheek
The way I speak
A verbal assault ensures defeat
Hotter flames still raise the heat
My voice gains intense deceit
"Come with me, it's your turn to die"
Uncle Sam made an apple pie
Another man steps to the line
Unsure of the fate he'll find
Missiles shriek over head
Kid's a thinkin' he'll end up dead
Body blown to bits with a faceless plaque instead
Family sent an empty box; a timeless seal with absent locks
Death by savior spreads like a pox
How can the prey outwit the fox?
The warrior listens to the voice in the box
He reaches for control, but I hold the remote
Whispering knowledge from my ancient throat
Make your choices wisely, this is proverbial poison ivy
Red mist will come to seek and soak
Every single stitch of your nation's cloak
Run a different song cause the station's broke
Pick to choose a life or a dead man's coat
Make up your mind, this is no joke
Your heart could stop with a single stroke
You could live life in another bloke's show
Take a march around the land with a horn to blow
Time's runnin' out and the flames are startin' to grow
The war drum is beatin' and we face our foe
Arrange ourselves under the missile's glow
Father says he loves us but mother cant throw
The children all fell right out the window
Times let loose now our blood does flow
We cant pick apart our hands from our toes
Fire
Ayo this nigga got a flow
That drop is hard af it inspire me so much!
keep it up ! wonderfull image also
Dangg motivating me to work harder on my beats ⚡️
lmao the ad before this. youuu got what i need.
Vinnie Paz and Jus Allah rapping over this would be golden
I love you
with ra the rugged man
Yo i was just saying this some Jedi Mind Tricks type beat
Black Thought and LockSmith would destroy this🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Immortal tech could tear this shit up
BluntedBeatz, Keep up the good work Gs, Mad instrumentals 💯👏👊
No likes in 3 years damn.
Remember the Simple Days
I remember the simple days
Me and the boys are never fazed
Just constantly getting blazed
Your heart is clay
A simple beauty
I change you in every way
Like directing a movie
I found myself
Im protecting my wealth
Fuck hiding on the shelf
Don't like me then melt
I remember the simple days
Finding love in various ways
Ive been thrown away
Now sex makes love decay
Not a worry in the world
Im stronger its the pain i curl
Time for a new obstacle
Moving out of this shit hole is impossible
My mind adapts to thinking
When it stops i start sinking
Constantly running worried about seating
My soul is the only thing worth keeping
Im a lone wolf
Always howling at night
Got all this kush and
Never had to fight
Even when my intuition is right
She be cutting me with that knife
Got no where to run so i take flight
Im just doin my way of life
I remember the simple days
Poppin pimples was your only faze
Damn you gotta be kiddin me
Lately the days are all a haze
Except the one when u finished me
You could say my words are visionary
Always lookin ahead the unknown is scary
Swears she got it handled
Hand held by a fairy
Well your wrong
You fucked up
Now its your own heart your tearing
Light up the candle and blow away the scandals
Ignite me
Excite me
You dont like my words
Fight me
In fact
Bite me
No one gives a fuck about your opinion
Your perfect until your caught sinnin
Im just writin words not carin
I found happiness im winnin
I can tell your mad keep starin
Its my voice im blarin
Light up the night with my soul flarin
Remember the simple days
Beautiful girl has gone away
Beautiful me has come to stay
Thats life and its stupid ways
Throwin pain till you degrade
Witherin away nah
You froze me but i thawed
Im dark and creative like saw
I cant be conquered its law
I wish i could like this more than once!!
timeless Battlefields are the scene
we stand in the modern day
Life in motion
Is War in poetry
letters the bullets
commas,comas mostly comotion
load up ma alphabet gun n pull it
slowly
faster than slow motion
phrases out pour to put it boldly
syllables unloadin coldly
just as quick as they console you
that shit could control you
grips they hold so tight
some have the power to give the word to take a life
you see Words are quite like knifes they can stab but just as fast they can slice
or just the same there like feathers they tickle and when your playin they excite
can be as tough as leather
like some cliques can be fickle about the ones that come together
Get 4 guns in the car think theyll go far on a stick up fuck it let um get it
metal sticks out the window quick bruv wet it
rainin down the terror
they clutch there chrome hunched backs the shrapnel roams
no matter the weather
av got a hunch it will land in his dome expand n settle
skull crunch as it blasts that zone except its ricochetin and floatin
Diminishin the final flourish of the last poets poem fuck that ma next chapters open
trying to figure out why a wrote this poem
probably because a got bored of the boredom
Plus Av noticed the floors gettin closer
The ceilings been bolted
The windows are shut every last one has been boarded
Each of our feelins deported
its clear We Need some healin imported
Medias got us realin back weepin distorted
They keep on dealin in corpses
Keep on stealin our minds with pain
Theivin attention again
attention span stuck on the muck that there sprayin
stuff that there sayin
keepin there subliminals playin
elongation of pain is the game
they never focus on the love
the good that grows in this world
instead they just show us the woes that un furl
psychological blows that they unload when they hurl
of course we all want to know
we should all be told
though when thats all that we see
then thats all that we can know
the show must go on forever The show is murder rape n terror
the fear implodes were scared
the minds been bent
sights that scar some for life
But what then
life goes on alas the war can commence
we’ll start to care when the action comes just past our fence
as if that was a first offence yip well all stand up then
jump to action
demandin an end
but no sooner lifes alright until then
after all its only the news
not like its right at our feet
fuck them man got ma own boots
made it easy for us to deplore the blues kick back n then hand back the shoes
its only the news ignore your dues
theyve felt more than just a bruise
bring them aboard in there 2s fuck that
just get them aboard as fast as you can
am gettin so sick a yous
thats right you fukin heard me every one a yous you use
whats your excuse dont fukin spare me
Movin on aint carin
am gettin so sick a yous
so Dont fukin spare me
Thats right you fukin heard me
each n every one a yous you use whats the excuse youll use
dont you dare
movin on aint carin
you all fukin heard me
save the bullshit excuse
dont fuckin spare me
Wanna use this lyrics
Should I?
Please
69 elsk de fuf shaba
Matthew FaT CaT Quinn doooope!
This is the best beat I have ever heard.
Extra, extra the news paper is here
Get your ass out side, over come your fear
Let the sun light hit your rear
Kick back in a lawn chair with a beer
You gotta look up to the sky and know
That life isn't jack shit if you move too slow
We move fast like ninjas in the shadows
Well trained to deal with all these battles
Bills, death, drugs, loves...
What's the difference when your life's a buzz?
These bitches swarm me like some bugs
Damn bro, this is incredible! I never heared a beat like this! 10/10 dude...
sitting in this chair as i listen to majestic tunes,
listen to these notes as it fills every room,
i double dog dare me to sit and let me ponder,
let the smoke clouds rise and see what i can conjure,
nature is a drug of choice if i smoke much longer,
as i jump clouds playin' games with Frogger,
have my mind so timed out that i sit and speak with toddlers,
copy that, roger,
have so much experience that they call me Godly Father,
Roaming thru the streets like i'm strolling thru a garden,
Gandalf clouds, sailing ships, I'm far in, throw your bars in, if you so beg a pard'in,
there is no "sir" when you're speaking to a Sergeant,
time is only sand that seems so priceless, so you can get with Archer and team up with Isis, a new world crisis, but toss that aside and take me where the dice is,
2 sticks and a bowl i wanna go where the rice is, so i might get,
a new world eye-lid, and a superhero sidekick, and look into these things like that one movie "SpyKids", as i bust of gnarly speeches that sound so righteous,
and maybe one day the majority of these people will like it.
-CodyGSK
lol. just decided to type something up. these beat's pretty gnar
bro that's gangstaaaa!!!!!!!!
We need more of this, real talk🔥
Chợt tỉnh giấc khi nghe thấy mùi khói cần
Nhìn xung quanh anh em thằng nào cũng đần
Thằng nào cũng tươi vui, mặc kệ cho thời gian trôi
Đưa cho tao cây boong để tao nhét cho mày thêm 1bi vì cuộc đời này có đáng là bao
Sống nay chết mai, trẻ không chơi già hối hận về sau
Vậy ta chứ chơi chứ không có gì mà phải xoắn
Dù miệng toàn vị đắng thì cũng thức trắng vì có anh em hút chung vì tao gọi đó chính là may mắn
[Acy:]
Ranh giới giữa ngày và đêm đang tan biến
Răng tao đang nghiến vì phê vì tê hay vì mp3 trên loa đang vang tiếng
Bùm đờ ba bà đa bà đùm
Đầu thì nhịp tay đưa tùm lum
Điếu đừng đưa mà đưa thì chơi, chơi thì đưa vòng sau dài 3 lần ra hàng K đừng pha nhá
Scotch và sprite là 3/2 và pha đá
Đó là tao và 2/3 là tha hóa
Lũ quỷ nhỏ của đất SG thay phiên nhau ra giá
Cho những gì mà tụi tao viết
Cho những gì mà tụi tao biết
Cho những gì mà tụi sao siết, siết siết vô trong phổi
Khung cảnh này lại xoay, chỉ có tao là không đổi, đứng lên không nổi
Thấy ông sao chổi và thấy trong thay đổi.
Thấy thư thái, thấy nhẹ nhàng, thấy cuộc sống không tin nổi
Scotch và sprite là 3/2 và pha đá
Đó là tao và 2/3 là tha hóa
Quỷ dữ sẽ lại đến và ra giá, khá mà
[MEKEEZY:]
Là Cam là K hay Thái, loại 1 hay là loại 2
Mà sao mới hút 1 cái lại thấy càng lúc càng bay
Mới có 1bi ngập khói lại khiến khóe mắt lại cay
Tất cả như muốn sập tối, ta đang ở trên 9 tầng mây
Mà sao giờ đây tao thấy mọi thứ nghiêng nghiêng đảo đảo
Miệng thì cứ luyên thuyên về những chuyện nó điên điên ảo ảo
Ngồi thì cũng không yên, cứ đi qua xong lại đi lại
Đi lại xong lại đi qua, vòng tròn cứ thế lặp lại
Và sau đó là tao lại hút
Điếu lại tới lại hút rồi với ca nước tao uống một chút
Lại đốt lại kéo lại siết lại hết lại cuốn và hút
Khói ngập phổi, dù có choáng vẫn phải ráng vì đêm nay
Ngoài cỏ còn có lẫn men say
Là lon 33 nằm trên tay
Trôi là trôi về đâu khi mà giờ đây nó phê gì đâu ( ối giời :)) )
Ôi trời ơi nhìn đâu cũng thấy đầy sao ở trên đầu tao
Nhìn anh em mình có thằng sắp gãy, thằng thì quá chảy
Nhưng cứ bình tĩnh khi đêm còn dài anh em mình cứ từ từ mà chill
i think i recognize this everytime it comes on love it
This beat is so fucking dope and raw. Damn
this is tha heat beat uld evea made of all time mane I watch itz !!!!!!
who here in 2019 obvious no 1 good enough lol...
xD
Damn I was too busy nodding nice, then I read the online publishing date 5 years later saaay
Donald FUnk imma murder this shit
『SINIOR』 〖MAFIA_DZ〗 💀 indeed.
Scroll up check me out and give me some constructive criticism lol
King Los murdered this beat. "Look in the Mirror, and thats the nigga you spoil"
"I'd love to change the world" by ten years after right?
Howbout now
that SNARE!!!
Well as soon as a soldier join the army he is no more human but a weapon of his commanders
I'm sure that anyone who knows anything about war knows that soldiers are commanded by others, no one knows more than I'm sure that anyone who knows anything about war knows that soldiers are commanded by others, no one knows more than the commanders.
I think BluntedBeatz accompaniment is very praise
el mejor instrumental que he escuchado 👌
YO IFUCCZ WIT YAL PRODUCTION SO HARD NICCAS NEED TO INVEST IN YAL CUZ YAL GOT DA SOUND DA GAME MISSING DA NATURAL ROOTS OFHIPHOP IS WAT I GET N FEEL WHEN LISTENING TO YAL BEATS KEEP DAT REAL MUSIC CUMIN...REAL SHYT BEEN MEANING TO HEAR SOMETHING LIKE THIS FOR A LONG TIME NOW
Momma said i should
probably go and find a lady,
no disrespect to her
but damn she talkin crazy,
i talked to every label
but none em wanna pay me,
rappin makes me stable
when you said i wasnt able,
still tappin in the well
of unlimited potential
keep it flowin through my mental,
feels like im up against the devil,
i know im all good
cause i got a lead foot,
keep the pedal to the metal
i got medals and plaques
i aint talkin bout your teeth
im just sittin countin racks
never count me out
if you didnt do the math
How do I unread this
Beats sooo smooth
you dont wanta go to war with this poetry
make ya quiver like cold rivers come and flow with me
ahead of my time the future looking old to me
stop em right in his tracks like freeze tag nobody cold as me
and im, so fire from the top at the same time
im dope also, no wonder why my brain fried
my style, dogging bitches like a k9
somebody let the kid off the leash no need to tame mine
they prescribed me prescriptions so they could tame minds
tryna stop my fly putting holes in my hang glide
but yo
i keep it moving like a army brat
i tell em "wake up pussies" im alarming cats
im from a place where they starving at
looking for the crops and the green like where they farming at
+Golden Aura you trynna collab with me?
Kyle Gaspers (K-Gas) yeah, hit my email k_washington21@yahoo.com
and should I bring my gat I try not to lac shooting up first class people say my verses are wack fuck that pop a tic tac make you have a heart attack all I hear is ahhh that's the sound of me completing a contract haha
lol just a little add on to your rap I wasnt going just messing around lol
+Golden Aura
Where they farming at?
I'll make their head spin like a laundromat
freestyles stocked in my mind like I harbor raps
the steps in my shoes leave signs of me like an autograph
sick with the rhythm and I lock it with my poetry
I sit and relax and breathe as I stay focusing
like wolverine I slash through samurais and ronin teams
rolling dreams and stones as I carry my tone
the ghosts of my past haunt me, so I'm barely alone
Wow best beats ever
Vou escrever uma música com esse instrumental, simplesmente incrível..
this beat cranks something serious
TAGALOG/Filipino Language
Game simulan natin sa pampagana lang
Subukan mokong tapatan puta mangangapa kalang
Diba feeling rapper ka oo sarap mong balatan
Mukhang walang makain parang araw araw ramadan
Kaya mokong angatan nako
Nagkakamali ka
Galing mo mag patawa dina
kailangan ng sativa
Magtanong ka muna parang naligaw ka sa manila
Pinauna lang kita kasi kailangan mo partida
Puro lang pa baby puro padin basic
Ako simula pa nung una mala tupac na makaveli
Pag nasubukan mona ko sa duwelo
Payuyukuin ka na parang barbero
Diko naisipan tumapak sa preno kaya sigurado diretso impyerno
Oh, oh ano manahimik ka kasi baka pag kami sumikat puta dina gumabe,ngayon dami konang tanong ibang iba na panahon,puro pabida sige tira pero linya patapon! Uh! Baryo berde pare pwedeng penge ako niyan,pedeng grabe pedeng simple pede kong mas lakasan,diko na pinapatulan gusto ko lang turuan tong isang batang mahangin na respeto nalimutan,grabe manlait puta lakas mamintas sa mga sinabi ikaw di nakaligtas feeling magaling feeling Gwapo wag masyadong abusado aminin gustong gusto moko maka colabo
Tablado puta hindi ako interesado,magaling kadaw sabi ng mga kamukha mo
Ginamit sa bawat bara tinta di nabubura,maging bano ba uso na putangina matuto ka
Allen Polintan ahahhahahahahaha tang ina it was written
ito yung kay RAFF E ng baryo berde
yo you stole that shit
Sa "Casa Concordia" yan ahh, kay Raff E ng Baryo Berde. Nakaw lines amp
Sa it was written yan ah HAHAHAHA nakaw lines amputa
i LOVE these flows on here. great writing hahaha. very entertaining
One day my momma told me that i was failing/At the point i couldnt handle myself so i set sailing /Out to the earth where i could be known to the world /that when i grow old i could call someone my little girl/i wouldnt expect my life to really end like this/as im falling down and goin' to die to the abyss/i fought my sister once and said i wouldnt do it again/hoping when i tell the story somone would be my friend/its funny how my raps could change my life story/ but i knew my life would change and it will end in glory/ if something could be changed i would not be the same/im the beast from the east that u might have to tame/ as im taking the walk shame/while my raps are owning the hall of fame/i feel the pain/and u know how i feel, i go insane/cuz i never ever wanted to really diss you/i thought it would never be meaningful and hurt you/now im down and im crying and I really really/ Miss you/my raps are real and they are all incredibly true/ending my life with an ak47 through my head/pulled the trigger now u hear the story of me when im dead.
We fight our wars so hard that we bludgeon each other’s souls but our love for each other has gone dry so much that if we fight hard enough the clouds depart and you can almost see the heavens beyond the sky
beat foda, pedrada na cara, mta vibe
Amazing track, cheers from Poland.
I love That beat!!! So dope!!!
I like this beat..frees the mind.
THe best bars from here have dissapeared. Yo you dont wana go to war with this poetry make ya quiver and... yo why u delete ur bars? I used to use that for praktice. However you are, who wrote that. You tought me to rap, man. Doamneajuta
I know the ones
@@thenomad4936 where is it?
Excellent beats!!!
It's funny how people right there lyrics on here. All u doing is giving away ur lyrics for free. Yeah yeah u dont care until u hear it on the big tmes. Than u want credit n money blah blah blah haha...
SANTOS u got a point cuz some of dese rhemes is actually pretty dope doe
People putting their lyrics on the internet are trash anyway, nobody would steal their shit except other trash people.
Preach
@Ann Marie bruh ive never seen a talented writer post in the comments of RUclips. You can't sue someone for stealing lyrics that aren't registered, trademarked, etc. There is no proof you've written it. Half the "lyrics" i see on these videos don't even match the beat anyways, have more than a single rhyme(not the end of the world but if you seriously can't rhyme more than two things together don't quit your day job), and no sign of consistant flow anywhere. Like yall write shit like this.
"I'm trashing on all of you fake rappers.
A salad is something you see till you notice that your mom a ho."
The syllables aren't even close, and unless the best is changing up which tbh most people don't know how to write to a beat. Then changing the flow like that doesn't work.
@Ann Marie I'm just saying everyone whose willing to comment raps here. The raps ain't worth stealing. Not trying to be hostile. You have a good evening yourself Ann
This beat is what I need
Dark as a Burqa in Darfur, where Mach 4s turn up, reading Mark 4, hoping all war just burn up. Devil doin’ parkour, running on all fours, dark lord, war horse, stirrin’ like a loud Porsche, counting for that part 4, he go hardcore, senior to sophomores, sayin’ what you soft for, that’s why we fight more, Bush and Al Gore, unsure, what a vote might count for, the poor say hello- the rich say bonjour, in the end we asphalt and sulfur, a walk floor, word from Pac’s door, we’re all boars, in America, it’s sad war causes us to bond like a world tour, campfire as I tell it like a lore, while the trees in the back lookin like horror, all of us lookin like a silhouette poster, blurring all borders, Life’s a gas thang, going fast forward as Mustangs, then stall about mid-range, Life is born strange, alien to core change, so it’s more vain, dreams pour clouds, so watch the world rain, a lot of drops to the sewer drain, and only few remain.
did you spit this off the dome?
+Cade Kennedy prob not but it's some fire either way
i c u
this is good. ONLY if you can execute vocally.
This was good. Well written.
THIS IS OLD SCHOOL FOR NORTHAMERICANS!!!! THIS IS JUST REAL HIP HOP FOR US LATINS!!! IF YOU KNW THE CULTURE!!!
I heard this before from A list artists i cant remember from who
The break is sick!
Ima slender along the streets, trying to survive these times
Ima real rapper who always thinks in rhymes,
But just a poor man who just barely earns enough
All i ask for is my god, is that really too much,
And even tho my heart is quite hateful
You still love me, and for that im grateful,
But, and i warn you, if you wanna stop me
I swear to God, i'll kick your ass back to B.C.
Like, see you later, snap you like an aligator
if you prevent my prayer to my one and only saviour
And even tho i have trouble being hateful
I still know my heart, and therefore still faithful
So hear me out and take this as a lesson
You can't break me for i have a much higher connection
Superb beat!!
sometimes I sit and stare in the mirror, to figure out who I am
is this really me or just the face that I'm disguised in?
Great work.
confront the war poetry,
is my life a pure poesie?
or clean like a cup of green tea?
so i see, who you wanna be.
you want to reach it quicker,
but forgott the lemonliqoer.
your a gun without a trigger
& ur fails are bigger and bigger.
u use rpg and stinger
against the airplanes, you control it with your finger.
king los killed this beat
choppers! haha! just choppers! haha!! choppers choppers I can do flips and Willie's no gimmies more sillies straight flowing (takes a hit)
One of the best!
On the streets
Where sirens only blink
Where every day is like
the brink of death
Where crack is the only cook by a chef
Where the government is
the only ref
Don't play around in the game
With a mac I put you at the center of my aim
Because here a bullet hole is the only shame
When you are dead there is no
reclaim
This is war poetry
And the rage of these lyrics is uncontrollably unholy
and in the battle field they would rather kill you slowly
If only I tried when spitting my rhymes
Dont copy my lyrics or they will destroy your mind
or Better yet I will come and find you
And torture you and your families mind
So imma inform you one more time
This is war poetry
And the rage of these lyrics is uncontrollably unholy
and in the battle field they would rather kill you slowly
So listen when I tell you
Not to mess with me
+Sensimeleon Bars
+Sensimeleon this is bad no offense
+Kaijufan14 i agree
+Sensimeleon don't listen bro just keep on your writing
+Sensimeleon bitch
Yo bro this super ill dope bigdawg! 💯💯🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Don't need a gun, I just use my rhyme.
This is war poetry man everything is fine
Everything is fair in love and war
Gonna do what I can to score
Through the hoop touchdown
But don't frown.
Gotta love what you're doing
Or youll put it to ruin.
Don't put it to ruin.
It's getting colder, I can tell because my toes are freezing, my home depleting, my hope deceiving me, it almost had me believing she wouldn't turn to stone when the winter screamed, but everybody wants to throw their loans away, the second leaves flee from the trees and start to blow away, the days are snowed in, stuck on tangled tapes and her face is golden, trapped in rusting frames. I just think that when you get to a certain place you need to try not to hold onto this persons pain, if someone's gravity is pulling you into empty space, then maybe they're proud to be your yanking chains, keeping you bound, keeping you round, keeping you guessing whether or not they want you around, or if you're just there by default, the last to be picked in gym, the fool in the crowd, maybe I should stop reminiscing, wondering if it's my fault and just learn to be proud, stop missing what was here and turn from the ground, stare at the sky and try to be happy even though I'm still kissing the sound of her laughter, in my dreams where I found her, under me with her brown hair, splayed like leaves in the after, now that the ice has come and my life has stung me like a bee just for fun and left me gasping for air, even though I'm still breathing I'm wrung, twisted, steamed in the sun, for two hours before the darkness comes and I'm left in despair, replaying our times, missing my pride, needing her vibes and knowing that I tried my best, I gave her nothing less that perfectness and still she deserted me like I was spent, reverted me to some depressed, stressed, demented mess, freezing, my toes are still so freezing, I'm cold and still believing that I had no part in her leaving. You know every time that I think it's over she comes right back into my head, knocking at the door and then kicking it down instead and demanding that I remember all times that we spent, all those Decembers where we thawed in our one bedroom apartment, where we stalled, before we departed, when our cat napped on our laps and we weren't cold, day by day spent ignoring our tasks, just wasting time, smoking money, smoking life, smoking lovely suns to nights, two ghosts close to something light enough to fly right through the ceiling and never spite each other for leaving, she had me all wrapped up in her reasons, sorry I didn't call tonight babe, the girls were out drinking and I had one too many so then I was thinking I should just stay out and out and out until I'm spending nights on the couch without my girl wondering what I did wrong that she doesn't want me to hold her while she falls asleep, I hope she peaks at nineteen with that smolder that has guys bending their knees to carry her weak ass, at least I can walk without having to hear her tell me that I'm not fast enough, keep up bitch, maybe it's you that's too slow to walk, why do I still miss our talks? What the fuck is wrong with me that I still miss our talks? I never had to try, I never felt like I was lost, cause at least I had her eyes and at least I had our talks, the funniest part is that I can't remember a single conversation, there's just this pain in my chest because I know that I laughed and I smiled and it's been a while since I felt my mouth even try to lie, I'm in denial, piling through every morning with anger in my mind, like I'm still mourning the passing of a wife but she was nothing but a passer by, a fleeting life, one that was never met to be mine, it should be a crime, to make someone love you while you're too busy loving yourself to give them the time of day, my lines are laid, there's no point anymore trying to say how I feel, because honestly I don't know if I still love her or if I want her to fail.
Game
Simulan natin sa pang pagana lang
Subukan mo kong tapatan puta mangangapa ka
lang
Diba feeling rapper ka? Oo sarap mong balatan Mukhang walang makain parang araw araw
Ramadan.
Kaya mo kong angatan? Nako nag kakamali ka Galing mo mag patawa di na kaylangan ng
Sativa
Mag tanong ka muna parang naligaw ka sa
Manila
Pinauna lang kita kase kaylangan mo partida
Puro lang pa baby
Puro pa din Basic
Ako simula pa noon mala 2pac ko maka belly
Pag nasubukan mo na ko sa duwelo
Payuyukuin ka na parang barbero Di ko naisipan umapak sa preno
Kaya siguradong direcho impyemo Oh? Oh ano? Manahimik ka kase
Baka pag kami sumikat puta di na gumabi Ngayon dami ko nang tanong Ibang iba na panahon
Puro pabida sige tira pero linya patapon uh!
Baryo berde pare pwedeng penge ako nyan? Pwedeng grabe, pwedeng simple, pwede kong
mas lakasan
DI ko pinapatulan, gusto ko lang turuan Tong isang batang mahangin na respeto nalimutan
grabe manlait. Puta lakas mamintas Sa mga sinabi mo ikaw di nakaligtas Feeling magaling, feeling gwapo Wag masyadong abusado Aminin, gustong gusto mo ko maka kolabo Tablado, puta hindi ako interesado
Magaling ka daw sabi ng mga kamuka mo Ginamit sa bawat bara tintang di nabubura Maging bano ba uso na putangina matuto ka
eto yung kila mike swift eh
Makabelly HAHAHAHA. Nadali ka ata ng auto correct.
I extremely wish you had something in between the 'Basic Lease' and the 'Exclusive Lease" your offering on your site. That 'Basic Lease' doesn't allow for much, but that 'Exclusive Lease' is just too expensive for your average money-is-usually-tight kinda person. If you ever offer up some kind of non-exclusive unlimited lease, I'd be all over a bunch of your beats.
It's just like the kids it's just like the son it's just like them true bloods coming from the sun
What the hell are you talking about
🔥🔥🔥🔥 THIS IS FIRE.
get cannibalistic the lone wolf as Hannibal lived it..
have I been lifted? no slums the hitmen are bums said I was gifted..
if that's the truth I'd had to re gift it
if I hadn't have survived
my brothers would have to relive this..
can't break free from the chains in my brain
can't break from the pain in my birth name
in my mind dyings glory
think now, what's the dirt made
theirs blood mixed in the mud
as I'm leaving I'm reading what the dirt say. woke in a rush suspicions risen cause felt a touch
my lady got my heart locked I don't trust nobody else
I did the dirt by myself ain't need nobody help
I did it that way until I was met with my death
+Daniel Mendiola yassss!
one of the dopest beats💣💥
"Camp fire flow, marshmallow my foes, burn the instrumental like shmores,
carry ammo like I'm ready for war, but my bullets are words, my guns are my gutts, my ego the boat that keep me afloat, prayers to God, ask to keep my predator away as I feed of my pray,
bless the pillow which my head lays, keep all my thoughts to myself cuz now a days haters don't just hate, they shoot but i always retaliate"
This is sick
Millions of thoughts My mind is pillaged
Privilege no origin from a village
Religion only thing keeping me form killin
No doubt imma need a fillin
But I got a message loud and clear and I want you hear this here yo
Don't let this in one ear and out the other
Hasn't even been a year doing this for my mother
I have a greater purpose with these rhymes
Of course I wanna shine with lyrics so divine
My lyricism on point, like Damian "I guard this Joint" Lillard
So now you see Im the point.
Your number two pencil is sick but let me stencil this out for you Im it, get it?
Y'all say Kendrick is hard, and Im a fan no disrespect to his lard
He's the man, blacker than the heart of an Aryan
But man what's your master plan?
The faster you land those flows encourages me
To go blow something so loud the whole crowd just won't back down
You'll hear my sound all around now think
What if you just hit the ground?
And everything you stood for could no longer be found?
I understand your oppression no dawg Im not a fan don't get the wrong impression
But Im fresh and take flesh, so why can't I be part of the rest
just steadily deadly dapper.
So they smokin weed/ doesn't mean they're smoking fiends/ choken on broken dreams/ cuz they always broke it seems/
Yutes gettin props for blasten cops, learned it from they blocks/ pay back for all of the wrongful blood at the traffic stops/
Staying alive seems harder and harder/ Rest in peace Dubose, Gurley, Rice, Brown, and Garner./
Fearin anther black death- and last breath- when i'm passed press/ white man can't understand-- any of the black stress.
No black press avoid mentioning the blackness/ Police believe nothing wrong with what they practice.
Let me quick spit a lesson / Crips and Bloods where protection/ against 1960's white oppression
Heron, crack, you looking for the saddest stories/ Spoiler alert, made in white laboratories...
In court seems the rich be pressing on immunity, while they rob and steal from all the poor communities.
12 year old with a bb gun,deadly combination/ gun rights activists, a friendly conversation.
Cops roll and patrol in the projects/ seems to suit prison industry complex
More to come :)
+Dale Smart this actuallly pretty dope i can hear this in my head
+Dale Smart I normally don't like people on RUclips postin' bars but those multis you busted out were 100% dope
+YeahZ OG respect bro
+YeahZ OG respect bro
Ay, I actually know of this rap site for you, It was made in 2013 but the new updates are dope, We got producers and other rappers here, And I'd love to collab with you, You could make written raps like what you made and you could record, I usually do written, Still don't have a mic www.rappad.co
*Look for me on there btw boyo* I'm the guy calling people boyo btw
Love this! Totally going to use this for inspiration.