The Young Alien Princess Was Drowning on Earth Food, So the Young Human Guest Does the Unthinkable..

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  • Опубликовано: 11 дек 2024

Комментарии • 14

  • @thomasbailey7505
    @thomasbailey7505 11 дней назад +5

    Your print is twice as fast as the narrative fix it please as it ruins the story!!!!

  • @roserea3156
    @roserea3156 10 дней назад +1

    Where is his father with all this going on?

  • @jazsimea
    @jazsimea 11 дней назад +3

    The writing is too fast for me to read, how do I slow it down,

    • @debrobertson-positivedirec5898
      @debrobertson-positivedirec5898 10 дней назад

      It's not in sync with the audio. Try in settings. The little wheel icon top right. Then "play back speed" and adjust it down to 75% or 50%. That might help reading, but audio will be slow then.

  • @heatherkoutny2620
    @heatherkoutny2620 11 дней назад +3

    how do I remove the writing?

    • @jimsavage147
      @jimsavage147 11 дней назад +2

      I think it's embedded in the video. I wonder what the thinking was, deliberately formatting it with graphics and then obscuring those graphics makes no sense and it's really annoying

  • @WayneMcNab
    @WayneMcNab 11 дней назад +1

    Terrible ending. How do they build a future walking back into the drones they ran away from, when they have nothing to defend themselves against them. Makes no sense!

  • @marjiscriven9657
    @marjiscriven9657 11 дней назад +1

    Again, a story narration that is different or not in sinc from the written story!

    • @FictionalReimagined
      @FictionalReimagined  11 дней назад

      I'm correcting it, it's not going to happen anymore. But if it happens in one or the other, forgive me!

  • @iainrumsey7672
    @iainrumsey7672 10 дней назад

    Drowning of food? Don’t you mean choking?

  • @ChristHedler-h2j
    @ChristHedler-h2j 11 дней назад

    You have the makings of about six different story lines here. Pick one and focus on building that plot. You have enough kernels to seed a wide universe of stories but this is just random brainstorming that jumps in different directions and doesn’t actually go anywhere. I’m not trying to be harsh as there is potential but you either have to cut the fat or add ALOT to the story to flesh out the different plot lines then tie them together.