It feels like the story is missing pieces here and there unless it's intentionally jumping around it feels like its missing sections and transitions but other a decent story so far
I know I shouldn't talk because I haven't written one of these before but it sounds more like a robot riding this than anything else because it just stays the name and the action there's no real flow between the characters or the chapters you know what I mean
Episode 2 Please 😊❤❤❤😊
Bro is fighting for his life 😂😂😂
It feels like the story is missing pieces here and there unless it's intentionally jumping around it feels like its missing sections and transitions but other a decent story so far
I know I shouldn't talk because I haven't written one of these before but it sounds more like a robot riding this than anything else because it just stays the name and the action there's no real flow between the characters or the chapters you know what I mean