Concept of the song is killa...love it...End of the bass line groove should be tweaked...and the cut would be perfect....It really sets the mood...more of it should ride... Elongate the backing vocals & add some strings ...to hold the mood.... It's a really beautiful song
Melody... Instead of running....Have you ever considered...BIKING....I used to run...but I noticed it was making bulky instead of lean...and I had less injury and impact on my joints....& best of all .....I covered more ground, saw more Chicago, less effort...and more slim down results....Even if weather doesn't permit...I put the time in on the layed back bike in the gym....Just try it for a little bit instead of the run...and pay attention to the faster and better results
6:35 nice shot & you should send it to him and his momma 😂
@@JordannAlexander 🤣
I dig the song,esp the background vocals you did!!💜🖤
@@jamaalmoses8821 Thanks. When I finish adding the layers and arrangement it should be a decent song 🎵
👋 Mss pretty , your eyes your lips your hair all is amazing 💖
Stay well ✌️
That song is amazing! So much feeling and passion! You will be on national TV one day for sure. 😎👍🎸🎶
@@paulkrapp Thank you 🙏🏽
Concept of the song is killa...love it...End of the bass line groove should be tweaked...and the cut would be perfect....It really sets the mood...more of it should ride... Elongate the backing vocals & add some strings ...to hold the mood.... It's a really beautiful song
@@troyprince1569 I was just showing how I get my idea down, that was just a loop. Sorry for the confusion
Melody... Instead of running....Have you ever considered...BIKING....I used to run...but I noticed it was making bulky instead of lean...and I had less injury and impact on my joints....& best of all .....I covered more ground, saw more Chicago, less effort...and more slim down results....Even if weather doesn't permit...I put the time in on the layed back bike in the gym....Just try it for a little bit instead of the run...and pay attention to the faster and better results