The #1 Secret to Writing Iconic Characters

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  • Опубликовано: 24 ноя 2024

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  • @TylerMowery
    @TylerMowery  Год назад +7

    Get Practical Tools to Write Your Great Screenplay: www.practicalscreenwriting.com

  • @victorase
    @victorase 2 года назад +215

    My dream was always be a writer, unfortunately, in my country we don´t have a strong cinema industry, and only a few people (rich people) can actually have some success in this field. But, i still wanting to tell stories, and that's why i thank you for your videos, and specially for your bibliographie, it's been really useful for me.
    Greetings from Colombia!

    • @alpha8here
      @alpha8here 2 года назад +32

      Keep at it, dude. It is people like you that have unique stories that people yearn for. Hold out, and go through it

    • @maf7742
      @maf7742 2 года назад +11

      Same here, but thanks to the internet, it's not impossible for us anymore, even if it's harder than average. You can do it!

    • @antigrav6004
      @antigrav6004 2 года назад +13

      Books exist and are easier than ever to publish yourself. Don't let yourself be limited by medium.

    • @alpha8here
      @alpha8here 2 года назад +1

      @@antigrav6004 True words! There are different ways/mediums to tell stories.

    • @gristlevonraben
      @gristlevonraben 2 года назад +3

      Do you have any samples of your writing online? I have poetry on a site called allpoetry. I would love to read some of your writings. I would like to do movies one day too.

  • @sacha7958
    @sacha7958 2 года назад +131

    When you started talking about four corner opposition I thought the characters would have been:
    Protagonist,
    Externally and philosophically in conflict (Antagonist),
    Externally in conflict but philosophically in agreement,
    External ally but philosophically in conflict.
    Despite this not being what the video was about I do think it does still hold some merit as a useful way create or analyze characters.

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  2 года назад +41

      You are essentially saying the same thing. And it can definitely work that way. - Whiplash works exactly how you have laid out

    • @paulkanja
      @paulkanja 2 года назад +4

      then you have arcane and its lack of a clear protagonist (still follows a version of tho with "eight" corners instead)

    • @ASmartNameForMe
      @ASmartNameForMe Год назад +1

      @@paulkanja Arcanes protagonist is pretty clearly Vi. Yes were not seeing her pov 100% of the time but it starts and ends with her and almost all of the conflict one way or another started with her and Silco, the antagonist. The philosophical views are 2 opposing beliefs here: Silco believing in a lack of trust and running away from pain vs Vi who defiantly faces that pain and uses it to make reality better. All of the characters even not connected share some take on this view. Jayce tries to face the disaster that Zaun is in and make things right whereas Heimerdinger is too afriad of the past to try and make anything better. Jinx is the only one who really goes back and forth.

    • @paulkanja
      @paulkanja Год назад +1

      @@ASmartNameForMe It's actually doesn't have a protagonist per se,, or rather, the role of protagonist is filled by different characters at different times. Vi, Jinx, Pretty Boy, and Silco pop up most of the time, but some other characters like Victor, Ekko, Mel, and Caitlyn do get their moments
      The conflicts we experience in the story are varied,, from Jinx's internal breakdown, to Mel's division on her stance on warfare: the entire plot is sitting on the Zaun-Piltover conflict
      All these characters grow as well (yeah except Jinx, but that's kinda the point seeing as how she's still mentally a child) Professor Snuffles sees there can be beauty in the present, Jayce understands that science can also harm, Vi learns to deal with her loss, Mel gets to resolve her family trauma, Catelyn learns to put aside wealth and look past the cover, Sevika grows into her character and shows this in her sadly misplaced loyalty, even Silco's understanding of family deepens (also Ekko doesn't grow, but again kinda the point since we meet him after he is already grown)
      {I'd say that Vi and Jinx are definitely the protagonists for the first series, though other series may have something different to say :)}

    • @ComplexAce
      @ComplexAce Год назад

      @@paulkanja any info about that 8 corners version and the formula of Arcane? I'm more interested in that dynamic than the clear protagonist antagonist plot

  • @miggseye
    @miggseye 2 года назад +268

    What a fantastic demonstration of how to simplify yet deepen the thematic conflicts of one’s stories. I’d love to see a whole series of these 4 character analyses. Cheers.

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  2 года назад +21

      Glad you enjoyed it!

    • @theosophicalwanderings7696
      @theosophicalwanderings7696 3 месяца назад

      @@TylerMowery Loved this breakdown too! Is it possible to have a character embody the positive of viewpoint 2 and the negative of viewpoint 1? I am working on a coming-of-age story in which the protagonist's best friend has both a positive and negative influence on his life.
      Here's what I mean: Though he doesn't know it, the protagonist in my story is ultimately seeking meaning and purpose. And he thinks he'll get this by hanging out with a group of brilliant but reckless outcasts. So thats viewpoint 1 of the protagonist: Meaning and purpose will come by being a part of this group of outcasts. But because this group takes things too far and ends up having a negative influence on the protagonist's life, they embody the negative of viewpoint 1.
      But heres where it gets tricky. Within this group is also the protagonist's best friend, who even though he engages in some of the same reckless behavior, he also talks about living a moral life, which inspires the protagonist. In fact this is the direction the protagonist ultimately takes in the end, after he realizes that meaning and purpose cannot come through the reckless lifestyle of the group. It can only comes from a moral life. So even though his best friend doesnt live up to the standard of a moral life, he still embodies its influence, as it ultimately inspires the protagonist to walk away and seek better.
      So does it make sense to have a character exist in two of these corners like this? Or am I putting the wrong people in these corners?

  • @badconnection4383
    @badconnection4383 2 года назад +31

    The most important thing is to have good contrasts not just to morals and philosophy but personality as well. This is why buddy-cop duos always consist of a loudmouth jokester and a stoic professional. The two ideas bounce off each other, and this leads to very interesting character interactions.

    • @aarkmish8087
      @aarkmish8087 Год назад +3

      Thank you for sharing this

    • @encouraginglyauthentic43
      @encouraginglyauthentic43 3 месяца назад +1

      Characters should have more values than the ones that drive the conflict, that is what makes them round

  • @fatgonzo
    @fatgonzo 2 года назад +101

    Not many shows have nailed their finales but Last Kingdom didn't disappoint, hard not to get emotional when the rain starts (that shouldn't really spoil anything)..all the more potent if you have been following Uthred's journey, great character.

    • @MuhammadAli-qh8tg
      @MuhammadAli-qh8tg 2 года назад +5

      He is written incredibly well. Amazing arc

    • @azrulashraf00
      @azrulashraf00 2 года назад +2

      I only watch 2 season and I don't like it

    • @sunriseparrabellum5505
      @sunriseparrabellum5505 2 года назад +3

      @@azrulashraf00 damn that’s crazy, who asked?

    • @handle3210
      @handle3210 2 года назад +2

      So true. I highly recommend the books.

    • @jonherron7418
      @jonherron7418 2 года назад

      Cant wait for the movie to close it out

  • @XX-sp3tt
    @XX-sp3tt Год назад +17

    While this makes for epic story telling. Not every conflict NEEDS to be this. You can tell a great story with a duet as much as a quartet.

  • @RustBrand777
    @RustBrand777 Год назад +10

    It’s interesting to think about because technically speaking a antagonist can fall anywhere along the spectrum.

  • @micotellsart
    @micotellsart 2 года назад +64

    I think this video has literally saved the story I'm going to write for the NaNoWriMo Challenge hehe. I had a protagonist with viewpoint A (Control and Security) Positive, the antagonist (who is also his partner) with viewpoint A Negative, and another antagonist with viewpoint B (Liberty even with risks) Negative, and I also had a lot of characters that only reiterated in a more extreme way those 3 viewpoints and KINDA make the protagonist view that neither of those viewpoints was correct, but I didn't have a character that actually showed the protagonist what the positive side of viewpoint B (Liberty even with risks) could be, but after seeing this video, I could make a strong 4th main character and eliminate some characters that didn't add up to much to the 4 viewpoints.
    Thank you so much!

  • @rasko125
    @rasko125 2 года назад +67

    I honestly think Brida should be there instead of Ragnar. She is the negative view of that world. Ragnar has been far more tolerant than her.

    • @yemiisthebest1
      @yemiisthebest1 2 года назад +10

      I would agree if he didn't specify season 3 because Ragnar was the head of the army who would be fighting the Saxons, so when Uhtred left, it felt like he was mostly betraying Ragnar especially after he proclaimed him as the head of the army that would be directly opposing Alfred and the Saxons

  • @Jack_OLanterns
    @Jack_OLanterns Год назад +4

    This reminds me of two other 4 corner story structures (for lack of a better term.) One being the value system proposed by Robert McKee. Which is almost verbatim this, I love how it works actually the same way as this video essay. The other one being Dramatica, a very in depth and supposedly complete desconstruction of story theory, that goes into a granularity that makes beach sand look like boulders.

  • @PuppetSquid
    @PuppetSquid 2 года назад +5

    I'm sure this has been mentioned but Netflix's Daredevil has this (or something very similar) across almost every member of its core cast. There's probably even a seperate quad for DD and Murdock by the time you reach the final season (Fisk, Punisher, Elektra/Bullseye; Foggy, Karen, Misty) and I think that's a large part of why so many people love the show.
    Falcon and The Winter Soldier actually also had this, with basically every supersoldier Sam interacts with showing a different aspect of Cap's legacy. The show isn't handled as well, i'm sure, but it was something I very much appreciated and part of why I think it's either under-rated or just in need of a slight polish.

  • @SilverDragonAcademy
    @SilverDragonAcademy 2 года назад +3

    Finally! Someone is talking about my favorite show. Destiny is all!

  • @squali1930
    @squali1930 10 месяцев назад +10

    Bro plz write a book, going over all this in as much detail as you can. I will buy it.

  • @johngammon963
    @johngammon963 2 года назад +3

    Proper respect to Tyler for creating such an epic channel.

  • @uWu-fp2lc
    @uWu-fp2lc 16 дней назад

    I am genuinely mind blown by this video. I badly needed this to kickstart my writing. Thank you very much for this!

  • @inaede
    @inaede 2 года назад +12

    This was incredible! Ideas that I’d had in bits and pieces for some time coalesced and flooded my mind as I watched the video

  • @dnnkay855
    @dnnkay855 8 месяцев назад +2

    This was hugely helpful to be to grok what Truby was saying in his book. Thank you!!

  • @allanreele8352
    @allanreele8352 2 года назад +7

    Thanks for this video, it really helped me start to get my acts together better! I've got a bunch more ideas to add to my characters now

  • @sirukural4338
    @sirukural4338 2 года назад +16

    Actually when the guy with popcorn hits Jim at his intro scene, Jim never says sorry. But we can see the normalcy of Jim as he didn’t react to it.

    • @GomteshUpadhye
      @GomteshUpadhye 7 месяцев назад

      Watch again. He does say Sorry.

  • @esterahavristiuc7774
    @esterahavristiuc7774 2 года назад +8

    Wow! Amazing! Keep going Tyler!

  • @s0urp0wer5
    @s0urp0wer5 19 дней назад

    This video is blowing me away. Cannot wait to implement this strategy into my own stories!

  • @yasutakeuchi
    @yasutakeuchi 2 года назад +2

    seriously, this is one of the most helpful, inspiring videos I've yet seen pertaining to how to write a compelling story. Got my sub.

  • @Ahill57
    @Ahill57 2 года назад +2

    Great video. Seeing a way to dive deeper into the pros/cons of a protagonists drive and how it affects the world around them makes for much deeper storytelling.

  • @abhishekpandit2261
    @abhishekpandit2261 4 месяца назад

    Thanks so much for this clear explanation, Tyler. These principles work across all kinds of stories, not just screenplays. I applied a similar framework with 4 characters in my very first musical. It’s already been selected for a theatre festival in NYC. Couldn’t have pulled that off without your pointers here. Keep up the great work!

  • @thescreenchronicles
    @thescreenchronicles Год назад +3

    Great video! Some if TLK names you got wrong, most notably confusing Aethelflaed and Aethelwold around 17:00 but great video highlighting TLK

  • @BhaiyaGamingTX
    @BhaiyaGamingTX Год назад +1

    Love how your first shot in the video was dark knight. When I read your title/thumbnail my immediate thought was the 4 character structure of Batman begins.
    Great video. Best wishes to you ✌🏼❤️

  • @caseycoker1051
    @caseycoker1051 2 года назад +1

    Just picked up anatomy of a story last week. This was a nice view into what I can expect out of it.

  • @alexmaloney2144
    @alexmaloney2144 2 года назад +2

    This is a great video, thank you for making it! I’m trying to implement this concept with a dnd party, and using this 4 corners concept to create interesting faction leaders they can choose to help or harm. I’m still grappling with which 2 opposing ideologies I want, but I’m very excited to keep thinking about it!

  • @Shka_maru
    @Shka_maru 2 года назад +5

    Okay. Beautiful video. I had read Truby's book before and thought the method was interesting but would have liked more examples of its use. PLEASE do a follow up applying what you did here to a couple other films/series (maybe more widely viewed ones....Star Wars, The Sopranos, Breaking Bad..). I'd rather love to see it to help drive this method (tool) home.

    • @mrgreenskypiano
      @mrgreenskypiano 2 года назад

      For Star Wars, the viewpoints seem to be around hope and believing in what you can't see, but Star Wars doesn't really do it that way. Luke would be on the positive "hope" side and Vader on the negative "no hope" side, but most, if not all, of the other characters also fall into one of those two, like Leia, Ben, and Han.

  • @38kdoncorleone
    @38kdoncorleone 2 года назад +2

    These video's are extremely underrated

  • @carverkain5226
    @carverkain5226 Год назад +10

    I really like this. My only question is should a character stick to one corner? Like let’s say your character starts off as Normal- then becomes the embodiment of Success+ but bumps their head and experiences Success- and then back ultimately make it back to Success+ would that still be considered good writing if don’t correctly?

  • @birdvatcher7424
    @birdvatcher7424 9 месяцев назад +2

    holy shit, what a fascinating video. will take some annotation and rewatches to work with. really great content. seen your vids before on other topics but this one really struck a chord with me. new sub. good shit

  • @macmcleod1188
    @macmcleod1188 2 года назад +4

    Jk. Simmons is just so damn good on actor. And he never looks it. The man just burns with talent and charisma for some reason. He can project confidence and then turn it off completely and be a nebish. He can be the most serious dramatic actor and then turn into a total goofball.
    That aside, this is a really well made, thoughtful, engaging video. I can see why you have 250k subscribers. I just wonder why you don't have a million yet. But you will.

  • @KutWrite
    @KutWrite 2 года назад +3

    Wow! This is a great help for my sci-fi novel. Thanks!

  • @jjhh320
    @jjhh320 2 года назад +3

    What a cool concept. Great way to structure character and thematic conflicts already swimming in my head for my story.
    Love the Last Kingdom too!

  • @IkennaVisuals
    @IkennaVisuals 2 года назад +6

    Damn, this was such a valuable video Tyler. I learned so much, thank you!

  • @SheegogProductions
    @SheegogProductions 2 года назад +4

    Thank you so much for this! I've been enjoying your content for a few years, and I love the way you break down these concepts to make them so easy to digest.
    I have a question: Does this structure only work for if the protagonist's view will not change through the course of the story? Or can this work with an arc if he ends up siding with one of the other three corners?

  • @krypto-s-olus
    @krypto-s-olus 2 года назад

    I'm a simple man, I see Uhtred and I click! Great video!

  • @felicebritton8881
    @felicebritton8881 2 года назад +4

    This is brilliant!

  • @HeroicPlights
    @HeroicPlights Год назад +1

    Love this concept! Although, I notice your examples here apply to characters whose viewpoints and beliefs stay pretty static throughout their respective stories (which is fine in itself; I've seen and enjoyed both!). I'm trying to apply this concept to characters in my story whose viewpoints and beliefs change over time, and so I'm finding the process of nailing down who goes where a bit difficult. I would love to see some examples explained by you using characters who really arc and change over the course of the story. Thanks!

  • @odotawaissaku3755
    @odotawaissaku3755 2 года назад +1

    Wow! This was a fantastic video and will probably be a massive help for my own stories

  • @BKPrice
    @BKPrice 2 года назад

    Very interesting. I have been writing a novel for a while now without knowledge of this technique. Almost immediately I was able to pair up opposites on both sides, although the pairing wasn't what I would have initially thought.

  • @nafi8567
    @nafi8567 2 года назад +11

    So my question is: in which corner I place the protagonist when his belive is wrong?
    Because in the beginning of the story my protagonist belives in the lie. Only at the end he learns the truth.

    • @antigrav6004
      @antigrav6004 2 года назад

      Sounds like you'd just be flipping their place to the negative of their perspective

  • @spiderman9
    @spiderman9 2 года назад +5

    Thank your for this very helpful video

  • @emmanuelgonzalezcaseira9141
    @emmanuelgonzalezcaseira9141 2 года назад +12

    I have to say, while with the first example I was a bit lost, the second clarified a TON of stuff. It was pretty clear the cause and effect between all characters and a true example of an inciting incident that kickstarts the story. It also helped understand a bit more the first example, but I have a question: While explaining the 4 corner opposition at first, you mention that your protagonist is in the PRO side of Viewpoint 1, and the antagonist is in the CON of Viewpoint 2, but with the first example both the Protagonist and the Antagonist are on the same Viewpoint 1, but on opposite sides. Does this mean that I don't need to give my main Antagonist the other Viewpoint of the story as long as it is on an opposite side to my Protagonist? if so, the first explanation is for the sake of simplicity?
    Know you have your stuff to do, so I'm grateful if you spare me a little time to answer this. Either way, this video has clarified me something that I was trying to grasp about stories that I quite didn't know how to put into words. Great video.

    • @mrgreenskypiano
      @mrgreenskypiano 2 года назад +5

      The antagonist in Whiplash has the same viewpoint as the protagonist, so Tyler clearly sees this as an ok move (I think so as well) but make sure they're still different sides of that viewpoint so you get that juicy conflict! But yeah, if you want to have them have the same viewpoint go ahead -M

  • @TheRedBrain
    @TheRedBrain 2 года назад +1

    Very interesting!
    I'm not a writer or anything in that direction but you had my undivided attention!
    Also very glad that The Last Kingdom gets more recognition, as it truly deserves it
    Cheers!

  • @JacobPatrick1
    @JacobPatrick1 Год назад +1

    I've recently watched "Everwood," (Saw Whiplash years ago) They share a theme/conflict that's similar.
    What could've happened if Ephram got in to Juilliard and Amy went with him to New York...

  • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
    @TomEyeTheSFMguy 2 года назад +4

    I don't know why, but I thought Fargo (1996) would be an example in this video.

  • @yasutakeuchi
    @yasutakeuchi 2 года назад

    Fantastic video. Thank you so much!

  • @yourpalthepadawan3839
    @yourpalthepadawan3839 Год назад +1

    At 17:14 mixed up aethelflaed and aethelwold a couple times (forgive misspelling)

  • @suryakanth8443
    @suryakanth8443 2 года назад +2

    I wonder why can't Tyler mowery writes Hollywood movie scripts he has great knowlege

  • @AStarlessReader
    @AStarlessReader 2 года назад

    just found your channel, thanks for sharing your insights!

  • @LeviPhotenhauer
    @LeviPhotenhauer Год назад

    Literally as you were describing 4 corner opposition I thought, Whiplash does that!

  • @adjutantreflex9406
    @adjutantreflex9406 2 года назад +3

    Having read Truby's 'Anatomy' more than once, I'm familiar with this technique. But I can't help but think it really backfired in the Hobbit movies. Building opposition in characters like Elrond, Thranduil, and Laketown (where the book did not have it) really just ended up bloating the movie and hindering our ability to connect with these side characters. And in ROP, it seems to have just made everyone an a-hole and utterly unlikable.

  • @Novastar.SaberCombat
    @Novastar.SaberCombat 2 года назад

    Better yet, write absolutely powerful, yet still mysteriously intriguing themes.
    Reflection is key. Humanity should dare to look deep within, but it should also understand that more than the mere physical aspect of such Reflection is required for true, celestial enlightenment.
    "Before I start, I must see my end. Destination known, my mind's journey now begins. Upon my chariot, heart and soul's fate revealed. In Time, all points converge; hope's strength resteeled. But to earn final peace at the Universe's endless refrain, we must see all in nothingness... before we start again."
    🐲✨🐲✨🐲✨
    --Diamond Dragons (series)

  • @remem95
    @remem95 14 дней назад

    This has helped me *immensely*, because, as it turns out, I tend to put my protagonists on anything but the 'pro' of Viewpoint 1 at the start of the story. Oops.

  • @user-microburst
    @user-microburst 2 года назад +3

    Was that a fragment of my beloved District 9??

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  2 года назад +4

      I have a whole video on District 9. Check my channel!

  • @ChumblesMumbles
    @ChumblesMumbles 2 года назад +1

    I guess viewing the protagonist in the last kingdom as a representation of a viewpoint makes sense - my biggest gripe with the show is that he wasn't behaving like a rational human being, but if he's not meant to be one, then that works.

  • @raminagrobis6112
    @raminagrobis6112 2 года назад

    I don't need such videos. I am studying the scripts for "Rings of Power" as models of exquisite subtlety. Thanks anyway! 😁

  • @deckerjake438
    @deckerjake438 2 года назад

    Great video🎉🎉 thank you

  • @ahmedtarekhassan6562
    @ahmedtarekhassan6562 2 года назад

    Epic bro
    ❤❤

  • @iNostraD
    @iNostraD 2 года назад +6

    The Last Kingdom thumbnail? Instant like & subscribe.

  • @xXESproductionsXx
    @xXESproductionsXx Год назад

    I'm loving this video. I'm studying it closely for a story I'm writing.
    One thing I don't get is, why is Ragnar a con of loyalty? It sounds similar to Alfred, just for the Danes instead of Saxons

  • @JuanluMorales
    @JuanluMorales 2 года назад

    this is gold

  • @dileephr844
    @dileephr844 2 года назад +2

    @TylerMowery please suggest books ok writing

  • @faaf4950
    @faaf4950 Год назад

    Existing elswith in the show is great sometimes she frustrates me and sometimes she is right, she is a good example of pro and cons of a character, I like edward for the same reason sometimes he is good and sometimes very bad

  • @thewritingsoff.c.williams830
    @thewritingsoff.c.williams830 9 месяцев назад +1

    I am working on a project and would love assistance, as I believe that the topic of this video would aid in makingmy idea soooo much better. I look forward to hearing back from you oat your earliest convenience

  • @mintee8638
    @mintee8638 Год назад

    One idea I would like to explore further is if you have 2 philosophical conflicts with this 4 corner method, are there configurations that would add to the overall quality.

  • @tevaleetvtev7073
    @tevaleetvtev7073 10 месяцев назад +1

    thanks a lot!!!!1

  • @k_alex
    @k_alex 5 месяцев назад

    It's interesting to see this "four corner opposition" concept being introduced as something profound, when in reality it is a shallow, modified, and misunderstood copy of the original.

    • @dfid5518
      @dfid5518 5 месяцев назад

      What is the original? I'm actually curious

    • @r_t_m
      @r_t_m 3 месяца назад

      @@dfid5518 Robert McKee's thematic square

    • @tenchan634
      @tenchan634 Месяц назад

      I'd like to see you explain it better.

  • @juju10683
    @juju10683 2 года назад

    This is amazing

  • @AntoniyoGreenwood
    @AntoniyoGreenwood Год назад +1

    Im doing a manga but im only with the main bullet points, would I still be able to get help with its pacing and what not?

  • @guesstime6445
    @guesstime6445 2 года назад

    Great video

  • @hotsauce7124
    @hotsauce7124 2 года назад

    Very cool

  • @DerrickVanderspoon
    @DerrickVanderspoon 2 года назад +434

    My favorite part of this video about creating iconic characters is that I have not a clue who anyone in the thumbnail even is.

    • @kayag8
      @kayag8 2 года назад +30

      Well yeah. You arent gonna know about every succesfull thing

    • @DerrickVanderspoon
      @DerrickVanderspoon 2 года назад +8

      @@kayag8 but you know what I am going to know?

    • @TylerMowery
      @TylerMowery  2 года назад +113

      Then you have a fantastic show ahead of you!

    • @DerrickVanderspoon
      @DerrickVanderspoon 2 года назад +19

      @@TylerMowery perfect! Lemme just sit back in my reclining chair with a cup of tea and a pocket pvssy so I can shart into said pocket pvssy and use it’s rubbery structure as a slingshot in order fling the shart at the computer screen

    • @woodsmokedrasher1577
      @woodsmokedrasher1577 2 года назад +7

      @@DerrickVanderspoon 💀💀💀

  • @phxJohn2010
    @phxJohn2010 Год назад

    Good analysis. My only critique is that at the 17 minute mark you keep saying "Ethylfled" when you mean "Aethelwold" Ethylfled is the Lady of Mercia.

  • @dohlecarnett1866
    @dohlecarnett1866 Год назад

    While I think that is a great video to a great method I think the 2nd example of The Last Kingdom is flawed. The whole problem of the series the writing. True, you can see the different viewpoints here. But the big difference to whiplash is that there is no real conflict within these characters that makes them develop their viewpoints. I haven't even watched season 3 yet (I'm at the beginning of season 2 and might leave it there) and this video here showed me that really nothing changed for anyone. Uthred is still the same as he was at the beginning of season 1. He doesn't get challenged. And all this is wrapped up in an inconsequential world with plot armor for most of the characters and especially Uthred.
    All the interesting viewpoints don't make for any quality if there is no progress, no character development and no consequences.

  • @playronestudios7574
    @playronestudios7574 2 года назад +2

    “Traumatize and monetize” normalizing torment and abuse for “greatness”.

  • @timflatus
    @timflatus Год назад

    I totally get the four cornered opposition idea. I shan't waste my time with your examples, thanks for watching them so I don't have to :D I can just imagine Ginger Baker putting up with any of that nonsense. Not.

  • @MegaMistermo
    @MegaMistermo Год назад

    Hello thanks for this video. How would it work with more than four characters. Like you had a film like Magnolia? Would more than one character fit in each corner?

  • @jakariashafin8685
    @jakariashafin8685 2 года назад

    Huh this kind of reminds me of fate stay night however the protagonist was on the conside of the view point and simultaneously on every other side of the argument I quess I mean it is a story involving alternate timelines.

  • @dangeradams58240
    @dangeradams58240 2 года назад

    damn good video, thanks

  • @dileephr844
    @dileephr844 2 года назад +3

    You stopping marking videos is my biggest nightmare

  • @rickprocure6321
    @rickprocure6321 Месяц назад

    How do you pick your viewpoints? I have a world and a hero and villian but it needs this treatment

  • @robbieshand6139
    @robbieshand6139 2 года назад +1

    17:04 "Uhtred notices that Aethelflaed is with them." Me: wait, when did Aethelflaed join this scenario?? Oh right, you mean Aethelwold. I get it, Saxon names are easily mixed up, too many Aethels

  • @lamekanvolta3197
    @lamekanvolta3197 27 дней назад

    Hello, I want to watch your videos with Turkish subtitles but I can't see the subtitles, can you solve this?

  • @jadenthakur5440
    @jadenthakur5440 2 года назад

    Cool concept, but when u said uthred hates aethelflead I broke my neck to see what u were talking about only to see aethelwold 😂

  • @Maitch3000
    @Maitch3000 2 года назад

    Isn't The Dark Knight a 4 corner template: Batman, Gordon, Harvey and Joker. What about Rachel?

  • @stephenlambros3286
    @stephenlambros3286 Год назад

    I have a question! What if my protagonist doesn’t take one of the four corners? What if other supporting characters take the four corners, and over the course of the story, the protagonist must choose which corner to fall into? Would this still be compelling?

    • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
      @TomEyeTheSFMguy Год назад +1

      It's my own personal belief that your protagonist HAS to be in one of the four corners, for the sake of starting simple. I believe these corners are for where the characters start off in the story, not how they end up.

  • @pinakichakraborty8759
    @pinakichakraborty8759 Год назад

  • @idiotengineer3925
    @idiotengineer3925 2 года назад

    I miss king Alfred so much on the last kingdom

  • @tkjaergaardchem
    @tkjaergaardchem Месяц назад

    How can the protagonist be a corner - if the protagonist changes viewpoint through the course of the story?

  • @coffeeabernethy2823
    @coffeeabernethy2823 2 года назад

    Funny thing though... the Danes and the Saxons were two branches off of the same tree... culturally, linguistically.. they were as similar as, say... Texans and Oklahomans.
    The Last Kingdom made them so alien to each other, but in the historical context they were not. To further complicate things, Wessex was not uniformly Christian, and Denmark was not uniformly pagan.
    I realize the video is about writing compelling characters, not historical accuracy, but hey...if you're doing historical drama, please also keep in mind that some historians might actually watch or read it.

  • @tarvoc746
    @tarvoc746 2 года назад +1

    You suddenly start refering to Aethelwold as Aethelflaed about half-way through your analysis of The Last Kingdom.

    • @Dewydidit
      @Dewydidit 2 года назад +1

      I noticed that as well but acknowledge I suffer from the same dyslexia with the anglo-saxon name/ surname structure.
      An understandable mistake, but one made and should have been avoided.

    • @carnacthemagnificent2498
      @carnacthemagnificent2498 2 года назад +1

      Yes. Aethelflaed is a completely different character but she has her own complex relationship with Uhtred. For much of the story she is an unquestioned ally and friend but her overwhelming sense of duty forces her at times to turn her back on Uhtred when he needs her most, which emotionally crushes him. The original author got 13 or 14 books out of Uhtred because of how he wrote the guy winning all the time but never quite getting what he wanted out of the victory. Those books are really well done, and the show is very good.

    • @tarvoc746
      @tarvoc746 2 года назад +1

      @@Dewydidit It takes a while to get used to it.

  • @AN-zl9rq
    @AN-zl9rq 2 года назад +4

    But if the protagonist is on the PROS side of a Philosophical debate, how can we handle his WRONG BELIEF at the beginning of a story? Isn't that contradictory?

    • @angelmurphy6832
      @angelmurphy6832 2 года назад

      They’ll learn that they were wrong and they’ll change like Morgan Freeman’s character in Se7en.

    • @AN-zl9rq
      @AN-zl9rq 2 года назад

      @@angelmurphy6832 Thanks for the reply. But if they have to learn this, they're not on the Pros side at beginning.

    • @angelmurphy6832
      @angelmurphy6832 2 года назад

      @@AN-zl9rq read John Truby’s book. That should sort out your confusion.

  • @SSNewberry
    @SSNewberry 2 года назад

    The first script has a deus ex machina car crash, an annulus of boar's heads!

  • @WUODBURU
    @WUODBURU Год назад

    So it is displaying villainy in the protagonist and empathy in the antagonist to a minimal extent...making the characters feel more realistic, more organic?

  • @zethstar3475
    @zethstar3475 11 месяцев назад +1

    >realizing this applies to gurren lagann
    damn

  • @sanketvaria9734
    @sanketvaria9734 2 года назад +2

    outside from story writing. It doesn't makes sense to why andrew left nicole. she wasn't forcing him to quit or something. Today's generation has a false notion that if they get into a relationship then the partner will ask to abandon their dreams and ambitions. lmao...