|𝗦𝗵𝗼𝘄𝗲𝗿 𝘀𝟯𝗫 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝗺𝘆 𝗘𝗻𝗲𝗺𝘆 𝗮𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗴𝗳 𝗰𝗵𝗲𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗼𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝗺| J. jk oneshot part 2/2

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  • Опубликовано: 29 окт 2024
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  • @aurvlex1354
    @aurvlex1354 2 года назад +110

    i cant be the only one who’s thinking about how much water their wasting 👁👄👁

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +6

      😂😂

    • @maelia4209
      @maelia4209 2 года назад +2

      Same🤣😅

    • @Sura_minie
      @Sura_minie 2 года назад +7

      Nah bro I was thinking that too and then I saw ur comment and I was like
      I am not alone 😭

    • @zamiyakhan9914
      @zamiyakhan9914 2 года назад +1

      No your definitely not the one

    • @gheorghemacai8697
      @gheorghemacai8697 2 года назад

      Me too 😂

  • @me-ln2oi
    @me-ln2oi 2 года назад +67

    Doesn't change the fact that he used her just to get over his ex and yes in start as a toy for his needs to I thought yn would not be innocent, he would not be her first but again she was innocent ass and he was her first while she let's not talk

    • @nyes8079
      @nyes8079 2 года назад +9

      I felt that too... I think author should a make a bonus of jk pov... Like he said he never felt that with his ex.. N maybe he was troubling yn to get her attention which he unknowingly liked very much... N his ex was fed up listening to him talking about yn all the time.. So she cheated... N jk thought of first girl to seek comfort was yn...then he also knew all about her so he knew she had that phobia so he went to check on her.....then he just followed what his heart said..... Then he actually realised that all this time yn was the one he loved... N about the gf i think that gf was the one who proposed him n he just accepted to try... N he got used to her(ex) so he felt bad when she cheated.....
      Pin me author if this can be explaination that jk didn't just use yn to get over his ex...

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +12

      Yo guys chill it's a fan fiction only but ur right gurl!! I guess I should have explain more!!

    • @farihamim9847
      @farihamim9847 2 года назад +16

      @@YUNKISM I don’t know why every author just say one dialogue “it’s just a fanfiction” like come on just bcz it’s a ff u can’t just put any story right?? There should be justice for both male and female characters...

    • @jen4677
      @jen4677 2 года назад +6

      @@farihamim9847 exactly you can tell that's a dialogue of every incapable author

    • @RakeshKumar-cx9mo
      @RakeshKumar-cx9mo 2 года назад

      SooobabuyoomeeLikeyoosoogoyoobtsLife🙏🙏

  • @zainabbohra3715
    @zainabbohra3715 2 года назад +9

    7:36
    y/n's mom:- how could u do such thing y/n.... even i never tried that with your dad😂🤣🤣😂

  • @wendselcurly7334
    @wendselcurly7334 2 года назад +4

    The fact that my uncle and dad is soldier HAHAHA

  • @Babymon-112
    @Babymon-112 8 месяцев назад +4

    I love how you make it funny too not just s3x and other stuff bruh

  • @jeonsjungkookie3788
    @jeonsjungkookie3788 2 года назад +6

    JEON JEALOUSED JUNGKOOK😂🌚

  • @pjmmyg4890
    @pjmmyg4890 2 года назад +10

    It's just romantic and gentle💜

    • @karthikae238
      @karthikae238 2 года назад

      This is really romantic ?

    • @durga6958
      @durga6958 2 года назад

      U sure? Btw love ur profile pic 🤣

  • @everybody9236
    @everybody9236 2 года назад +29

    Well, the story is fantastic author nim, but it`s incomplete cause you just showed how he used her and suddenly 5 years later they were getting married like it didn`t sit together. There were so many things like - did he even like her at that time, why were they enemies what happened, later on, how did Y/n fell in love with him, and everything. It was like reading the first chapter of the story and skipping the whole book and then to the last page of the book where they both lived happily ever after.

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +6

      It's because.. Yeah I am sure it's incomplete... I wanted to explain many things but I had exam so I just had to finish as soon as possible!

  • @Duy3n_19
    @Duy3n_19 2 года назад +3

    1:02 got me grabbing my bed sheet

  • @ansparkle_ffs3934
    @ansparkle_ffs3934 2 года назад +17

    OMG, you are absolutely an amazing ff writer. I discovered you through your latest KTH_ff and slowly exploring your other videos and girl the way you write them literally give butterflies in my stomach.💜💜💜👍👍👍

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +2

      Thank you so much 🥰💖

    • @thangavelk2210
      @thangavelk2210 6 месяцев назад

      ​@@YUNKISM umm unnie, can you tell me that first song name...??

  • @Anjali-bf5nm
    @Anjali-bf5nm 2 года назад +8

    It's just I don't have words for it ❤️❤️💜💜💜

  • @hyun_berry
    @hyun_berry 2 года назад +46

    Now you know what I'M GONNA FOLLOW YOU 🤣🤣it was so gooood that even God can't explain it ✨💜 love it author you are nice 👍✨💜😘

  • @angleshorna3192
    @angleshorna3192 2 года назад +6

    unnie make a bonus part plzzzzz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzz It's amazing

  • @dhruvaprajapati4435
    @dhruvaprajapati4435 2 года назад +1

    Yaah!! Wait m i the only one who noticed that the mother was ashamed of yn doing this with her in the bathroom but she was not ashamed of saying that she never tried to do that with her father...what logic is that...🤣😂

  • @queenofjimin7288
    @queenofjimin7288 Год назад +1

    Aww so cute and best ending ever 😍💖💓💕❤

  • @SaeBae2332
    @SaeBae2332 2 года назад

    jk and yn doing something
    Le shampoo bottles and other lotions :uhmm.......we didn't see anything

  • @hannahwatson9858
    @hannahwatson9858 2 года назад

    Y/n could taste the banana milk lol

  • @noorafshan8517
    @noorafshan8517 2 года назад +3

    It was awesome I just loved it . I don't think it needs more explanation the part where he came to her house without knowing when his ex ditched him shows that he likes YN in his heart already he just didn't realized that he likes her he came to her house Bcz he know he'll fell comferted with her by his side. And when the electricity gone he go to help YN bcz she has phobia not bcz he just want to use her to get over his ex, it's just that in that situation the moment got heated up. And also he was going to propose to YN in the shower but unfortunately her family suddenly came so he just can't do it. But I like the ending that they were together for 5 years as GF and BF, got engaged and going to marry each other. Not as strangers just having "One night stand" Opps sorry "One shower night stand "😁😁. Great work author loved your FF 😘😘

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +1

      Thank you so much for understanding 😭but I should have done better! Really sorry for this one-!!

    • @noorafshan8517
      @noorafshan8517 2 года назад

      That's Okk u'll do better next time. But this FF was really great. U have done a good job 😍😍

    • @karthikae238
      @karthikae238 2 года назад

      Kk she had phobia but that doesn't having sex is only way to make her calm...I know people always defend male lead ..wat we can except from like u people ..always romantize bet,abusive rape ,force .nowdays FF is getting worse

  • @annymirae6177
    @annymirae6177 2 года назад +2

    Everyone talking about he used her to get over his ex but what I think he has hidden feelings for y/n* as he was always teasing y/n* like who boy after having a gf teases another girl all the time. IT's obvious he wanted to be near her. Secondly, after being cheated on by his gf he came to y/n house .WHY? I mean Think Why?? Because when a person is sad ,heartbroken they goes to their most trustworty or Close one. So I think he had hidden feeling for her but he gave a different name 'enemy' to that relationship..💜💜.. l like your work..

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +2

      Thanks for understanding 🥺😭💖

    • @karthikae238
      @karthikae238 2 года назад

      Kk even he had hiding feeling u can't deny how he use her and again u said if he had a hiding feeling why he has gf ...don't defend him like how he used her and as always y/n has nothing only male lead puppet

    • @annymirae6177
      @annymirae6177 2 года назад

      @@karthikae238 I don't disagree with you ! I Think the other way around..Y/n already knew that his gf is cheating on him....and I think a/n should made Jk personality clear..As he is enemy or was just acting around...I personally thought that way. Well it's a ff so we can make our opinions.

    • @aytalkhurram8232
      @aytalkhurram8232 2 года назад +1

      I also thought exactly like u and I was so happy after reading this like after a long time I have read such a good ff but when I came in comment section, my mood ruined like why people are seeing he used her, he literally said that he is getting feelings which he never felt with his ex and don't know why he came to yn's house that literally explains the whole damn feelings of his towards yn 😴

    • @Kookiejaan129
      @Kookiejaan129 2 месяца назад

      If he had feelings for her they why did he make gf and also cried when she cheated

  • @qukook_2.0
    @qukook_2.0 2 года назад +8

    Big fan of yours🙌🏻🔥🔥🔥 🥵🥂

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад +3

      Thank u💝

  • @মহিদুররহমানডিকো

    I like ur ff bcz how u described everything like feelings,touching, thoughts. It’s makes realistic.... Keep going....good writer

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад

      THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THE COMPLIMENT!

  • @sweetshorts7211
    @sweetshorts7211 2 месяца назад

    lol his tongue taste like bananamilk 😂😂😂

  • @ashokshetty6110
    @ashokshetty6110 2 года назад

    Ohhhhh God I guessed the correct title same thing with y/n guessed😌😌😌😶😶

  • @ShrutiBadar
    @ShrutiBadar 2 года назад +4

    Why are you not posting the Mafia husbend part 3 please post soon as possible please 🙏🙏

  • @zeha97
    @zeha97 2 года назад

    Hey babes
    Can we get a bonus part 〽️〽️ please
    Praying in lachmimolala style

  • @karendelapaz714
    @karendelapaz714 Месяц назад

    Can you re-upload part 2? The words are blurry

  • @savagequeen389
    @savagequeen389 2 года назад

    Can we get a bonus part please please 😭😭☺️🥰🤔😭

  • @amanarif4135
    @amanarif4135 2 года назад +3

    Great ending

  • @Edithtta
    @Edithtta 2 года назад

    This ff is so good Im actually shocked how I never found your videos before they are good u know what I'ma subscribe to ur channel 🤗

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад

      Thank you so much!!! ✨💖

  • @Youarealoser97
    @Youarealoser97 2 года назад

    Y/N’s self respect was 👎🏼 He literally used her as a rebound bc who sleeps with another person right after breaking up with their partner? He didn’t even give himself a break. It’s just confusing how they got together. Idk about this ending..

    • @YUNKISM
      @YUNKISM  2 года назад

      Uhh.. You probably saw a part where "he was about to propose y/n" But couldn't finish because of you know.. So.. Yeah.. Also I couldn't finish explaining! So it's surely my fault!!

    • @Youarealoser97
      @Youarealoser97 2 года назад

      @@YUNKISM no worries! I figured it out lol

  • @sooyaabeans
    @sooyaabeans 2 года назад

    You got my trust authornim hope you make more 😉

  • @mort7686
    @mort7686 6 месяцев назад

    5:26 song?

  • @bangtangirl7326
    @bangtangirl7326 2 года назад

    Yaaah!! U'r so fuckin gud 😩 keep going 🛐

  • @lovelydestination8011
    @lovelydestination8011 2 года назад +3

    Nice.. Keep going.. It's just a ff. So everything is fare in this bcz it's just a imagination.. Imagination can be anything,... Well I liked it... Borahae💜

  • @adelinesiwu6414
    @adelinesiwu6414 2 года назад

    u nice keep going

  • @kanikagupta6824
    @kanikagupta6824 2 года назад +4

    Wooohooo so good 😊❤️

  • @manjurawat7340
    @manjurawat7340 2 года назад

    My soul be lile :- thori toh sharam kar lo abji toh CHOTTI BACHI HO !!

  • @AliButt-wv7xl
    @AliButt-wv7xl 2 года назад

    💋💋