Tecnicaly, Curse Word's name has a double meaning. A: She curses alot, I.E. Sh*t, f*ck, ect. B: Her words are cursed. Those who hear her stories are damned to a troubled destiny. Smart.
@@helpersmultiuniverse9645 Is it? Tell me, Helper, have you had any cursed events since you've heard this story? Because I have. Five months after hearing this tale, my grandmother died. How's that for a joke, bro?
I love this story. The double meaning of Curse Word’s name, the twisted nature of how the mind breaks down on itself, using faulty bandages so it doesn’t die completely. The lies Curse Word tells tells herself, on how the murder she’s committing atones for her sins. This is beautifully narrated and written. Amazing job!
"She spoke her mind and didn’t care what others thought, even if she offended the ponies around her. She honestly believed that words were just words; powerless little entities that only had meaning if you gave them that power". I think you and me are going to be best friends if this is really how you are.
I think it was very, VERY clever to have the end say "Her fate is nothing compared to a loss of a beloved." That brings about a lot of shock to the audience once they realize their fate. Mwa ha ha. Excellent work :)
By far, the greatest dark back story i've ever heard. It's so sinister, yet i can't help but to feel empathetic twords Curse Word. A soul is a terrible thing to become lost.
Oml... I'm a 14 y/o guy who barely ever cries during movies or books etc, but when Curseword had forgotten her and Beloved's anniversary, I was on the edge, and then when her Beloved had been erase... I kinda maybe started bawling. Props you, Lost, my favorite pony/creepypasta/etc Fanfic reader for writing, and reading this. I have to admit this was one of your absolute best readings, and I think you did an amazing job. Congratulations on making a grown man/teenager cry XD. PS. If and I say If with emphasis, I ever complete any of my fanfic projects, I would totally turn to you first to read it if you like, because I would die if you agreed. It is sort of a chapter-based reading, and the chapters are only approx. four thousand words long, so they may be shorter video readings, and I haven't seen many channels do things like that, so I understand if you'd say no, but I'd honestly like to say you'd make my entire year if you ever agreed to do it. (IF I ever complete them... XD.) Anyways, yeah, I loved the redon so, so much, keep doing what you're doing, and love ya!
Celestia has to know Curse Word's tale. She has the right to know. Someone must show The Lost Narrator that she can learn to control her magic. I feel so sorry for Curse Word. 😟
Celestia has to know about Curse Word. She would've helped her control her magic. Plus, she'd find a way to bring back her husband. Why would you say such an insulting thing? 😠
How did you know about the mirror? What are you doing in this world? Why do you tell us your stories? Do you believe that we, your viewers, have all committed horrendous acts only redeemable by death? Because if so, we've survived your stories for as long as you've been telling them. Do you believe that, due to the fact that your powers have had no effect on us, that we will be unharmed? Because if so, what purpose do you have for telling us your stories? Do you believe that only those who dislike your stories are effected? It seems likely, but I have no way of knowing, Whatever reason you may have, your stories have entertained thousands of the humans in this world, and I am no exception. ((You're a great writer.))
What she speaks is true it's happened to me I am scared cowering in my own fear for every time I searched up nothing comes but dread Terror.I only leave likes for I do not wish to die
You're right! How is it when we hear the tales, she doesn't curse the dislikers? How come her tales don't affect any of us? If she's still alive, why hasn't any of her listeners told Celestia yet? Or the Mane 6? Luna? Cadince? Anyone? 😕
"But still... Her fate is nothing, compared to the loss, of a beloved." fucking genius. *_FUCKING GENIUS!_* _AM I THE ONLY ONE THAT LOVES THAT ENDING?!?!_
Wow, Love this story. It's chilling and it's got great elements in it. The love themes made this very relocatable and enjoyable to see her struggles and regrets. But enough of me babbling on. Overall, I liked this story a lot. Keep up the fantastic work
(Dont read this if you haven't watched at least half of this story) Now I have a not creepy alternative ending . Here goes... So curseword is telling a story of her beloved no one is listening anymore,but another pony walks by and say she feels connected to the stories of cursewords beloved . Cursewords tells the pony one of those stories not knowing what she meant (since her memories are fading away ) curseword goes to sleep that night and remembers her beloved then it hits her that was her beloved! Curseword was enraged by how she couldn't recognize her beloved ! The next day her beloved came back wanting to talk about why she feels connected to cursewords stories , but curseword knows why but refuses to tell the truth due to fear of the other pony laughing at her knowing if the other pony laughed she would possibly snap and kill her so curseword didn't tell her but was thankfull that her beloved ... Was still alive ... Somewhere else. If you enjoyed losties video then like it and subscribe to her! She would appreciate it !
+ijfharvey NOOOOOO SHE FOUND WHERE I HID THE MIRROR?!?!?!?!?!?! IT WAS THE BEST HIDING PLACE IN THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE ONLY OTHER PACE THAT IS JUST AS GOOD AS WHERE I HID IT IS IN DISCO - WAIT WAIT WAIT. THAT A GREAT IDEA! I'M DISCORD'S VERY BEST FRIEND! NO, I AM NOT FLUTTERSHEE. I WAS DISCORD'S FRIEND BEFORE FLUTTERSHY WAS EVEN ALIVE.DON'T WORRY PEOPLE! I ALREADY AM CURSED, SO CURSE WORD'S MAGIC WON'T HAVE EFFECT ON ME. BESIDES, I CAN ALWAYS FO TO THE FT(FAIRY TAIL) WORLD. I'LL TRACK HER DOWN AND SHOVE HER BACK IN THE MIRROR. THEN, I'LL TURN OFF TWILIGHT'S BOOK PORTAL MACHINE THINGY THAT GOES AGAINST THE FOURTH DIMENSION, THE THIRD DIMENSION, AND PHYSICS.WAIT WAIT WAIT. CURSE WORD'S STORIES ONLY HAVE EFFECT IF YOU SEE THE STORY AS WELL. SO IF SHE'S IN THE HUMAN WORLD, HOW WILL SHE MAKE THE PICTURES?
This was a nice way to start Halloween off a bit early. Also your dark version of your OC reminds me of Scarecrow from Batman, especially when you said that her mask fused to her face. :3
This was a good spooky story , I enjoyed it to be honest! I love listening to creepy pastas - especially when it’s in the Halloween season heh. The art work was beautiful! I’m a new fan of yours now 🥰💛
I freaking loved this story XD it was so captivating and well written. I also really enjoyed getting a little back story from Curse Word too X3 she is officially the all powerfully story teller lol
It's that time of year again and with the hindsight of the dark year of 2020 I shall look to the past and say that the thumbnail of this video is terrifying
I must admit, nice play on the name, there, whether it's intentional or coincidental. Shakespeare is surely saluting in his grave, cause Curse Word has CURSE(D) WORD(S)! :3
I agree with you! This game me chills as well. I feel bad for Curse Word. Oh, and a word of caution--never insult her or she'll make you sorry you were ever born! 🎃
when curseword said "Just leave me alone!" I was like, "She's gone." when she went looking outside for her beloved I was like "she's gone." when she realized what I had realized I was like:"I fucking knew it."
If anyone pays attention in the beginning lost says that curse word would say a phrase "nothing can compare to the loss of a beloved" and at the end of her story she says that phrase. Has the lost narrator damned us all? Her "listeners". She has told us her story of pain, loss and sorrow. She has told us the story of how she was a story teller that was lost in their own stories. How she has become a legend.
Bro, this is amazing!! Honestly, Lost, you are an amazing storyteller and I can only imagine how you do when coming upon other people's stories of their own OCs for MLP. I honestly thought of doing a story but I could never think of a theme. Maybe you could give me some pointers? Or anyone can
I already had an OC from another MUCH darker fandom, where i am more active then in the MLP fandom. I wrote a FanFic where my OC, who only knows war, death and destruction from his universe, was send to Equestria and given a pony body by Cegorach "the laughing God". This added up pretty good, since Cegorach is known for ruining and twisting peoples lives. Just like TheLostNarrator, only that he does it for his own amusement instead of punishing someone. I focused on the moral conflict of someone landing in a (debatebly) peacefull world, who is used to kill everything diffrent on sight (especialy if it´s magical) just in case it could attack him or humanity. Maybe try something in this direction.
i loved it, i really did... PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! okay, all joking aside i enjoyed this story very much so, very well crafted, it's a real breath of fresh air seeing stories like this! a fan fic that revolves around an OC who's life isn't insanely perfect. i also loved how it's told like an urban legend, very nice :)
I love all the story's they are amazing! At first I knew of Lost and what she does but I wasnt a fan of listening to story's, but one day I had nothing to watch so, I thought why not listen to one of Lost's storys for the first time, and I loved it so much that everytime I play some kind of a game I always listen to Lost's story's. So Lost, keep up the good work!
It feels just like yesterday that I was sitting at my computer and listening to these stories. It feels just like yesterday that this story came across my feed. Yet six years have passed. Where has all the time gone
What makes it so sad is how anger seems to be the trigger for the power. Would it bring her beloved back if she said in seething anger "I just want her to come back!" If so that is tragic she never realized that.
Been a while since I listened to this. I figured this was the perfect time because well, this series has mentions of abuse, something I feel like I’ve been experiencing most of my life. “All those pretty little hammers of control” that abusers love so much. I never thought I would be SA’ed but what can you do, life is a mess and all you really can do is try to move on without letting it happen again. And, I think you and Mag have found the ability to move on with each other :)
Awesome!!!!! wait am I gonna suffer her story now? They say it happens to those who listen and when she ended reading it and said the phrase those would suffer the punishment. So we are gonna suffer the same story? We are gonna have an awesome power?! COOL! Thanks Lost! ( but seriously this is a great backstory for your character! )
Was that you? Are you Curse Word? This Lost Narrator kind of reminds me of you since you are known for telling stories to several people. I have a feeling this story is more than just a story. 🤔
that plot twist at the end thought!!! At the beginning it said that her tails always ended with "It's nothing compared with the lost of a beloved" and I was like: "Shoot..." I love the writer now.
![A Beloved's Curse [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/tcrWKXoWiDQ/mqdefault.jpg)
![A Beloved's Curse [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)](/img/tr.png)
Tecnicaly, Curse Word's name has a double meaning. A: She curses alot, I.E. Sh*t, f*ck, ect. B: Her words are cursed. Those who hear her stories are damned to a troubled destiny. Smart.
I'm letter A
**hears the end**
Wait, were we just cursed?
Excuse me, I do not appreciate being cursed.
Relax, she would've said a phrase at the end.
It’s a joke bro
Or is it
Mmm
@@helpersmultiuniverse9645 Is it? Tell me, Helper, have you had any cursed events since you've heard this story? Because I have. Five months after hearing this tale, my grandmother died. How's that for a joke, bro?
I love this story.
The double meaning of Curse Word’s name, the twisted nature of how the mind breaks down on itself, using faulty bandages so it doesn’t die completely. The lies Curse Word tells tells herself, on how the murder she’s committing atones for her sins. This is beautifully narrated and written. Amazing job!
"She spoke her mind and didn’t care what others thought, even if she offended the ponies around her. She honestly believed that words were just words; powerless little entities that only had meaning if you gave them that power". I think you and me are going to be best friends if this is really how you are.
Nolan Crush literally same
Nolan Crush same
All of us
6:05
6:53 6:53 6:53 6:59
"Just leave me alone!"
oh god what have you done
I think it was very, VERY clever to have the end say "Her fate is nothing compared to a loss of a beloved." That brings about a lot of shock to the audience once they realize their fate. Mwa ha ha. Excellent work :)
“It’s just a story to get foals to listen to their parents.”
The same thing was said about the Candy Mare, but we all know how that turned out.
Or rainbow factory
By far, the greatest dark back story i've ever heard. It's so sinister, yet i can't help but to feel empathetic twords Curse Word. A soul is a terrible thing to become lost.
"Curse Words". Curse Words... Clever.
I get it too,wow I wonder if it was a coincidence?
thats the name of her pony oc. If you look at her cutie mark, its (#,!, and a ?).
*WHAT THE CURSE WORD!!!?!?!?*
ITS THE NAME OF HER OC!!!!!!!1
K. Ann K. Clever gal
Oml... I'm a 14 y/o guy who barely ever cries during movies or books etc, but when Curseword had forgotten her and Beloved's anniversary, I was on the edge, and then when her Beloved had been erase... I kinda maybe started bawling. Props you, Lost, my favorite pony/creepypasta/etc Fanfic reader for writing, and reading this. I have to admit this was one of your absolute best readings, and I think you did an amazing job. Congratulations on making a grown man/teenager cry XD.
PS. If and I say If with emphasis, I ever complete any of my fanfic projects, I would totally turn to you first to read it if you like, because I would die if you agreed. It is sort of a chapter-based reading, and the chapters are only approx. four thousand words long, so they may be shorter video readings, and I haven't seen many channels do things like that, so I understand if you'd say no, but I'd honestly like to say you'd make my entire year if you ever agreed to do it.
(IF I ever complete them... XD.)
Anyways, yeah, I loved the redon so, so much, keep doing what you're doing, and love ya!
Celestia? Doing something?...... Hahahahahahaha!! You've got quite the imagination there!
Best comment of 2015
The Fan Of ey
Autumn Dragon 😂😂
Celestia has to know Curse Word's tale. She has the right to know. Someone must show The Lost Narrator that she can learn to control her magic. I feel so sorry for Curse Word. 😟
Celestia has to know about Curse Word. She would've helped her control her magic. Plus, she'd find a way to bring back her husband. Why would you say such an insulting thing? 😠
How did you know about the mirror? What are you doing in this world? Why do you tell us your stories? Do you believe that we, your viewers, have all committed horrendous acts only redeemable by death? Because if so, we've survived your stories for as long as you've been telling them. Do you believe that, due to the fact that your powers have had no effect on us, that we will be unharmed? Because if so, what purpose do you have for telling us your stories? Do you believe that only those who dislike your stories are effected? It seems likely, but I have no way of knowing, Whatever reason you may have, your stories have entertained thousands of the humans in this world, and I am no exception.
((You're a great writer.))
ijfharvey Now I want to go check the dislikes. I have noticed the dislike bar seems to grow shorter and shorter as of late.
What she speaks is true it's happened to me I am scared cowering in my own fear for every time I searched up nothing comes but dread Terror.I only leave likes for I do not wish to die
Those are a lot of questions. I wish I could answer that question. 😞
You're right! How is it when we hear the tales, she doesn't curse the dislikers? How come her tales don't affect any of us? If she's still alive, why hasn't any of her listeners told Celestia yet? Or the Mane 6? Luna? Cadince? Anyone? 😕
I got decapitated 😵🙃
WOW. Beautiful imagery and irony! You tie your OC together with such clever and fine details.
Also, jeez Lost Narrator. What happened to you?
"But still... Her fate is nothing, compared to the loss, of a beloved."
fucking genius.
*_FUCKING GENIUS!_*
_AM I THE ONLY ONE THAT LOVES THAT ENDING?!?!_
+TheLostNarrator OMG that tumbnail give me the chills good job :)
this is the most unique OC story I've ever heard!
star girl you r so right
Note to self,do not mock the Lost Narrator's story telling
So is that what happens when you accidentally eat a death note? haha XD
+Sonicring123Dubs haha i get it
Yes yes it is
So true
+Sonicring123Dubs Yes, yes it would be. XD
+Sonicring123Dubs you need to....you need to leave
Holy shit. That story, was, amazing. I can't imagine how much time went into this master piece. Just, amazing.
Here listening to this story from the beginning to see how everything came to be. This is amazing.
Did you listen to the ending, and did anything happen to your loved ones after listening?
Wow, Love this story. It's chilling and it's got great elements in it. The love themes made this very relocatable and enjoyable to see her struggles and regrets. But enough of me babbling on. Overall, I liked this story a lot. Keep up the fantastic work
(Dont read this if you haven't watched at least half of this story) Now I have a not creepy alternative ending . Here goes... So curseword is telling a story of her beloved no one is listening anymore,but another pony walks by and say she feels connected to the stories of cursewords beloved . Cursewords tells the pony one of those stories not knowing what she meant (since her memories are fading away ) curseword goes to sleep that night and remembers her beloved then it hits her that was her beloved! Curseword was enraged by how she couldn't recognize her beloved ! The next day her beloved came back wanting to talk about why she feels connected to cursewords stories , but curseword knows why but refuses to tell the truth due to fear of the other pony laughing at her knowing if the other pony laughed she would possibly snap and kill her so curseword didn't tell her but was thankfull that her beloved ... Was still alive ... Somewhere else. If you enjoyed losties video then like it and subscribe to her! She would appreciate it !
I *still* listen to this. I don't listen to creepypasta anymore. Rarely. Especially mlp creepasta. But this...I love this. It's so beautiful.
WHAT IF CRUSE WORD WAS TELLING THIS TALE RUN FOR YOUR DAM LIVES AHHHH
+Espin Hollon She must have found the mirror.
+ijfharvey GOD DAMIT MIRROR
AHHHHHHHH MY WATERMELON!!!!!!
+Espin Hollon SHE WAS NARRATING IT!!!!!!!! THE USERNAME OF THE PERSON WHO MADE THIS VIDEO IS THE LOST NARRATOR. THE LOST NARRATOR(TLN) IS CURSE WORD.
+ijfharvey NOOOOOO SHE FOUND WHERE I HID THE MIRROR?!?!?!?!?!?! IT WAS THE BEST HIDING PLACE IN THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE ONLY OTHER PACE THAT IS JUST AS GOOD AS WHERE I HID IT IS IN DISCO - WAIT WAIT WAIT. THAT A GREAT IDEA! I'M DISCORD'S VERY BEST FRIEND! NO, I AM NOT FLUTTERSHEE. I WAS DISCORD'S FRIEND BEFORE FLUTTERSHY WAS EVEN ALIVE.DON'T WORRY PEOPLE! I ALREADY AM CURSED, SO CURSE WORD'S MAGIC WON'T HAVE EFFECT ON ME. BESIDES, I CAN ALWAYS FO TO THE FT(FAIRY TAIL) WORLD. I'LL TRACK HER DOWN AND SHOVE HER BACK IN THE MIRROR. THEN, I'LL TURN OFF TWILIGHT'S BOOK PORTAL MACHINE THINGY THAT GOES AGAINST THE FOURTH DIMENSION, THE THIRD DIMENSION, AND PHYSICS.WAIT WAIT WAIT. CURSE WORD'S STORIES ONLY HAVE EFFECT IF YOU SEE THE STORY AS WELL. SO IF SHE'S IN THE HUMAN WORLD, HOW WILL SHE MAKE THE PICTURES?
This was a nice way to start Halloween off a bit early. Also your dark version of your OC reminds me of Scarecrow from Batman, especially when you said that her mask fused to her face. :3
24:51, you can hear the faint tune of "Sweet dreams are made of screams"
I think this is one of my favorite fanfic at the moment
this was the most amazing and interesting horror story I ever heard I loved it you did a great job
This was a good spooky story , I enjoyed it to be honest! I love listening to creepy pastas - especially when it’s in the Halloween season heh. The art work was beautiful! I’m a new fan of yours now 🥰💛
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying my content :)
@@thelostnarrator holy - I wouldn’t expect you to reply to my comment 😭💛
I still think she's beautiful, with or without the mask, that pony is lost, but she will always be a somepony to me
Yo, give an update brotha, anything happened to any of your loved ones resently, since listening to this story?
These stories really help me overcome writers block!
3:14 FINALLY SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS, CURSEWORDS OR CURSEWORDS BECAUSE WE SAY SO
And that was the day I almost died inside. It's just a mares tale... Right?
Little did Jolo know that this was the beginning of an epic series.
I got to say that this is my favorite mlp creepy pasta horror just because of the agony and the brutality in it that just gives it a W
This is one of my favorite MLP Creepypastas :D
I just found this story and I cant stop listening to it it's my favorite
Your not you when your hungry have a snickers
thanks.
Has anything bad happened to any of your loved ones since this video?
I freaking loved this story XD it was so captivating and well written. I also really enjoyed getting a little back story from Curse Word too X3 she is officially the all powerfully story teller lol
It's that time of year again and with the hindsight of the dark year of 2020 I shall look to the past and say that the thumbnail of this video is terrifying
That was great! The tone and tempo that you used was so fitting for how the story progressed. Thank you for sharing this.
I'd almost entirely forgotten about this series of stories.... I used to love them so much. I still do. :)
Well then. O.o This is super creepy. I love it!
Am I going to die now? Or lose my beloved?
The thing is what if you don't have a beloved? .3. And I don't think you're gonna die (Unless you have a death wish or disease -3-)
I am scared also I think that also
I am not talking about Lost love. `^`
I must admit, nice play on the name, there, whether it's intentional or coincidental. Shakespeare is surely saluting in his grave, cause Curse Word has CURSE(D) WORD(S)! :3
-smirks- Man this creepypasta is good! Great job Losty, seriously I got chills as well as a smirk listening to ya.
Oh Lost this was both awesome and scary, now this reading is getting me to stay up all night in my bed just thinking about The Lost Narrator XD
ooh this story gave me the shivers I love this video Great job Lost😎
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I agree with you! This game me chills as well. I feel bad for Curse Word. Oh, and a word of caution--never insult her or she'll make you sorry you were ever born! 🎃
@@revaslatts8011 yea that's right
Anything bad happened to any of y'all's loved ones since listening to this video?
There 11 views but 41 likes?
Losty is a mystical narrating demon comfirmed
logic thats why
+Rodrick Lindsey for me it says 11 views 78 likes (one of those is my like)
+hunter60710 same
There's 11 views but 102 likes for me!!
illuminati confirmed?
So creepy >.< I love it. So _freaking_ awesome
when curseword said "Just leave me alone!" I was like, "She's gone." when she went looking outside for her beloved I was like "she's gone." when she realized what I had realized I was like:"I fucking knew it."
Miss Mary801 SAMEEEE!!!
Definitely one of my most favorite readings yet! You did an amazing job with this one, Losty~!
End of the story: "Well, we're fucked.."
This story is META as hell and i LOVE it!!!
If anyone pays attention in the beginning lost says that curse word would say a phrase "nothing can compare to the loss of a beloved" and at the end of her story she says that phrase.
Has the lost narrator damned us all? Her "listeners". She has told us her story of pain, loss and sorrow.
She has told us the story of how she was a story teller that was lost in their own stories. How she has become a legend.
I'm just gonna watch the whole series I'm on a playlist :3
This is so sad but also beautiful. A lost of a beloved while the other beloved has a lost soul.
When I listened to this I didn't realize you were the author! Wonderfully creepy and unique story that was exquisitely told... we need more!
After waiting for three years, it's nice that the story is complete now. I'm glad to have been around for the whole thing.
This story is so amazing! I can't believe I hadn't found this until now!
Do you regret your discission, have you been cursed or lost a family member since listening to this video?
I liked how the image transitioned from Curse Words looking cute and cuddly to just downright creepy.
Bro, this is amazing!! Honestly, Lost, you are an amazing storyteller and I can only imagine how you do when coming upon other people's stories of their own OCs for MLP. I honestly thought of doing a story but I could never think of a theme. Maybe you could give me some pointers? Or anyone can
I already had an OC from another MUCH darker fandom, where i am more active then in the MLP fandom. I wrote a FanFic where my OC, who only knows war, death and destruction from his universe, was send to Equestria and given a pony body by Cegorach "the laughing God". This added up pretty good, since Cegorach is known for ruining and twisting peoples lives. Just like TheLostNarrator, only that he does it for his own amusement instead of punishing someone.
I focused on the moral conflict of someone landing in a (debatebly) peacefull world, who is used to kill everything diffrent on sight (especialy if it´s magical) just in case it could attack him or humanity.
Maybe try something in this direction.
Brilliant as usual can't get enough you have some talent I hope you never stop
OML! THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!
I loved the spoopyness. Without looking at the picture I imagined a wicked pupeteer, master of fate and words.
This is my first time listening to a grim dark, and I'm (kind of) glad that it's this one
this backstory is the best thing that I've ever heard
Bloody brill the story content and description is amazing how are you not a pro writer
This is amazingly awesome!!!! You're an awesome narrator!! :)
i loved it, i really did... PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!
okay, all joking aside i enjoyed this story very much so, very well crafted, it's a real breath of fresh air seeing stories like this! a fan fic that revolves around an OC who's life isn't insanely perfect. i also loved how it's told like an urban legend, very nice :)
NOW YOU ARE GETTING MARRIED TO YOUR BELOVED! CONGRATS!
Writing yourself in a grimdark holy shut that's awesome
The ending made me shudder... This was an awesome story! ~Jasmine
Ur stories are always good for a Halloween story. Rated R.
So....Mag's dead, huh? That sucks.
Okay, props for the sound design in this readin'. Very sneaky with that little Sweet Dreams bite
I love all the story's they are amazing!
At first I knew of Lost and what she does but I wasnt a fan of listening to story's, but one day I had nothing to watch so, I thought why not listen to one of Lost's storys for the first time, and I loved it so much that everytime I play some kind of a game I always listen to Lost's story's.
So Lost, keep up the good work!
That was so good and the laugh at the end was amazing ;) good job
I've read this story on FIMfiction and I must say The Lost Narrator has created and displayed a wonderfully wicked story once again!
This was awesome Lost! Keep it up!
you are flipping awesome and like my favorite RUclips person EVER!!!
her fate really did become more than just a loss of a beloved
It feels just like yesterday that I was sitting at my computer and listening to these stories. It feels just like yesterday that this story came across my feed. Yet six years have passed. Where has all the time gone
The best fucking fanfic ever, this is going in the best fanfic list
I like this one a lot! If I met her I would actually be nice to her and be happy with any story she gives me ^w^
What makes it so sad is how anger seems to be the trigger for the power.
Would it bring her beloved back if she said in seething anger "I just want her to come back!" If so that is tragic she never realized that.
I found this awesome! More tragic than scary lol, great job, Lost!
"Still, her fate is nothing compared-"
Me: *pauses video* NOPE! NOPE! Nope nope nope not today!
Great story, though! XD
this is a grate grimdark. you did a good job. can't wate to see whats next!
2:11 LEMONY SNICKETTS A SERIES OF UNFORTUNATE EVENTS
Tirzah Davis lol
i got an ad for that just before this video
Been a while since I listened to this. I figured this was the perfect time because well, this series has mentions of abuse, something I feel like I’ve been experiencing most of my life. “All those pretty little hammers of control” that abusers love so much. I never thought I would be SA’ed but what can you do, life is a mess and all you really can do is try to move on without letting it happen again. And, I think you and Mag have found the ability to move on with each other :)
This makes a lot of sense for your cutie mark and your narrations! Good job, lost. You get a cookie👍🏻
Everyone is talking about how the story is cursed
And I'm talking about how the story is so sad and that I cried during this
This is such a brilliant self-incorporating fanfiction, even if you just apparently cursed me with it.
Woah... That was... not what I expected.
Awesome!!!!! wait am I gonna suffer her story now? They say it happens to those who listen and when she ended reading it and said the phrase those would suffer the punishment. So we are gonna suffer the same story? We are gonna have an awesome power?! COOL! Thanks Lost! ( but seriously this is a great backstory for your character! )
+Emmy Higginson Nah only if they dont enjoy the story
wow... I Loved it. The story was awesome and I was hooked.
OKAY AM I THE ONLY ONE FLIPPING THE FUCK OUT???
BECAUSE THIS IS AMAZING BUT AT THE SAME TIME HOLY SHIT I DONT WANNA DIE
Was that you? Are you Curse Word? This Lost Narrator kind of reminds me of you since you are known for telling stories to several people. I have a feeling this story is more than just a story. 🤔
that plot twist at the end thought!!! At the beginning it said that her tails always ended with "It's nothing compared with the lost of a beloved" and I was like: "Shoot..." I love the writer now.
Beautiful. 11.5/10.
Whoever wrote that clearly knows what they're doing right.
Also, Curse Word? Is THAT what your Cutie Mark represents?
*Listening to the story....Hears Luigi Mansion theme song* Whoa whoa whoa...really Narrator? Really, that music?....Really?
You got a problem with that
You could just say, "Come back my beloved!"