Apko eska next part dana cahieya ka phir fiza or hasam ky zindagi kasa guzarti hai wo usy apnata hai kya karta hai ya tho half story lag rahi hai z next part bhi right kara
Waste of time... kuch to end sahi krte? What about hero nd heroine ? Jb proper story banani ni aati till the end than dont write.... end kaise krna o hi ni pata? Edit or remove this video so that people won't waste there time reading such stories whose end is not proper.
@KHVoice-kh I'm not following your channel dear it was my 1st and last story which I read.. this is the way u talk to your readers gr8👍. I m shocked how can u rply like that... u should take as a suggestion. Instead of saying don't read my stories try to change your behaviour towards readers and enhance your writing skills tooo. As a reader we want a stories which has some meaning, proper ending.
Hi ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Very good 👍
You are perfect
Mam or sir 😂🎉🎉🎉🎉
Thanks aloat dear
Mjy to yh story complete he lagi h r achi h r acha end hua r message b acha deya fiza r hashim aik sth end py ho gye good end tha
Amazing ❤❤❤
Good 😇
Bilkol bhi acha nahi hai yah noval thora romance bhi add kare es main
Zbrdast❤
next part fiza ki life kya bary ma dear bato story complete Kary ap
Acha
Plz next part fiza pa daya
Not interesting
Apko eska next part dana cahieya ka phir fiza or hasam ky zindagi kasa guzarti hai wo usy apnata hai kya karta hai ya tho half story lag rahi hai z next part bhi right kara
Very interesting story bs ending is couple ki thori highlight krti na ❤
Acha
Not good😢😢
Waste of time... kuch to end sahi krte? What about hero nd heroine ? Jb proper story banani ni aati till the end than dont write.... end kaise krna o hi ni pata? Edit or remove this video so that people won't waste there time reading such stories whose end is not proper.
Kindly listen to other story narrators and don't follow my channel if you don't like stories here. You can't order me to remove anything
@KHVoice-kh I'm not following your channel dear it was my 1st and last story which I read.. this is the way u talk to your readers gr8👍. I m shocked how can u rply like that... u should take as a suggestion. Instead of saying don't read my stories try to change your behaviour towards readers and enhance your writing skills tooo. As a reader we want a stories which has some meaning, proper ending.
Bakwas
Fiza Ka Kia hua ye tw bataya hi ni .... Ye ending Sahi ni thi .... Plz iska next part de k iski ending tw Achi krden
Acha g
Ap ye novels khud likhte hn??
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