「テンプレのこの部分を変えてもよいのですか？」という質問が頻繁に来ます。 結論：全部自分好みに変えて良い！ in terms of → such as が好きなら変えてOK in terms of → , including が好きなら変えてOK in terms of の後に長いアクションフレーズ入れるなら、むしろ , includingの方が良い drawbacks → disadvantages が好きなら変えてOK 全部OKよ♪ 試験前などには,100件を越えるコメントをいだだき，大変感謝しております♪ ”返信に500分掛かります”ので，返信が遅れることをご容赦ください。すべてのコメント，しっかり読んでおります♬
問題 When people want to buy clothes, many go to stores that sell the latest fashions or order their favorite brands online. There is also another choice. Some people go to used-clothes stores to buy their clothes. People buy used clothes for different reasons. For example, some people like brand-name clothes but cannot buy them because they cost a lot of money. They can get such clothes for low prices at used-clothes stores. Also, some people like clothes with old designs that are no longer sold in other stores. They can often find the designs they like in used-clothes stores. Nevertheless, used clothes may have holes in them or have buttons missing. Also, it is difficult for people to find clothes that fit in used-clothes stores, since each item is usually only available in one size. As a result, people sometimes cannot get the clothes they want. 回答 many people go to used-clothes store by doing so they gain some advantage such as they can getting clothes for low price and they can find the old designs however it has several drawbacks in terms of used-clothes many having holes or buttons missing and difficult for them to find best size clothes 添削して頂けると嬉しいです 現時点だと何点くらいになりますかね
冠詞忘れてるけど、いったん置いといて、 文法的に使えないことはない。 「彼らは外国語を話せないから、いくつかの欠点に直面するかもね」 っていってる。 多分だけど、こう書きたかったんじゃないかしら？ They may face drawbacks in terms of their inability to communicate. 彼らはコミュニケーションが取れないといった欠点に直面するかもね。
文法的に入れることが可能かな？ という質問であれば可能ですけど、ものすごく不自然な英文になる可能性もあるから注意してね、あと要約は短くしないといけないから、あまり語数盛るとオーバーしちゃう 良くない不自然な例 In terms of being not able to finish the project, we need to reconsider the timeline. 自然な英文 In terms of our inability to finish the project, we need to reconsider the timeline.
@ 例えばですね、people can try on clothes to make sure that they are the right size and that they like how the clothes look before buying them.という利点でsuch as の後は名詞にしないといけないとおっしゃっていたのでどう言い換えをしたら良い回答になるのでしょうか？？長文失礼しました。
もともとの英文が25語で such as でまとめると16語、シンプルだけどこれで伝わると思う もっと減らしても良いけど、16語でも語数オーバーしないわよ、きっと♪ people gain some advantages, such as size confirmation and checking whether the clothes suit them beforehand. 人々は、サイズの確認や服が自分に似合うかどうかを事前に確認できるといったメリットを得られます。
英作文 It is often said that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree with this opinion? 私の意見 I disagree that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. I have two reasons to support this idea. First, they should’t throw away food because it leads to happen environment issue. It’s uncomfortable for them to increase it. Second, they can do to reduce a lot of activities. For example, they are able to put on food to buy costumer. Therefore, l disagree that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. 最初の文をめっちゃ使っちゃいます、、 どうしたらいいですか？
I agree with this opinion. First, significantly reducing the amount of foods are comfortable the quality of life for citizen. Although the problems, such as food loss and influencing environment frequently caused by shops are troubling them, this measure will solve these issues. Second, reducing foods makes them happy to protect lead to animal. For example, they will be able to preserve from dirty environment. It is important for them to provide safety place. Therefore I think that restaurants and supermarkets should reduce the amount of food. 動画参考にさせてもらい、いっぱい真似しちゃいました。
School trips are one of the main events at school. By visiting historical sites, buying souvenirs, and chatting through the night with friends, students can make one-of-a-kind memories. Recently, however, school trip destinations have shown a new trend: More and more schools are now choosing to go to foreign countries for school trips. Going overseas on a school trip offers many advantages. Everyone can be given opportunities to enjoy foreign cultures. Also, even when students might face difficulties, for example, getting lost or miscommunications in foreign languages, they can help each other in a group and overcome the difficulties together. On the other hand, there are some problems with choosing foreign destinations for school trips. Traveling overseas usually costs more than domestic trips. Furthermore, students have to prepare their own passports and travel insurance, which adds additional cost. In fact, because of these reasons, some students give up going on school trips. More and more schools are now choosing to go to foreign countries for school trips. By doing so, there are some benefits such as having fun for foreign cultures and overcoming the difficulties in a group. However, it has several drawbacks in terms of costing a lot of money and preparing own passports and travel. これです。
マーライオンです 設問文の提供に関し、感謝申し上げます 70％というコメントは、つまり16点満点の要約で11点が出てしまうということですね。 ステップ１として「アプリの精度チェック」を行います マーライオンがアリスさんのテンプレを使って 「これなら14点は出るだろう」と狙って書いた英文を添付しますので、一度打ち込んでみてください。もしそれで、11点というアプリ診断が、まったく変わらなかったら、再度コメントいただければ幸いです。 Recently, an increasing number of schools have been choosing overseas destinations for their school trips. By doing so, students can gain some benefits such as opportunities to enjoy foreign cultures and the ability to solve challenges. However, students face several drawbacks, including the high cost involved and the complexity of the preparation process. 最近、修学旅行の行き先として海外を選ぶ学校が増えています。これにより、生徒たちは外国文化を楽しむ機会や、課題を解決する能力を得るなどの利点を得ます。しかし、一方で高額な費用や準備の複雑さといったいくつかの欠点にも直面します。
コメントにある「オンライン授業で対面で授業することが減って寂しくなる」というのは、たぶんデメリットの項目に入れたいという事でしょう Recently, more schools have been adopting online classes. By doing so, students gain some advantages, such as 名詞 and 名詞. However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of 名詞 and the loneliness due to the reduction in face-to-face opportunities. こういう事を聞きたかったのだと解釈 語数盛りも入れました コピーは、1文まるまるだとダメ 理想は、4つ以上単語の並びが連続したら変えたい マーライオン
これは動画のテンプレとおんなじ英文が良いということでいいのかしか？ Recently, more people have been using electronic money. By doing so, they gain some advantages, such as protecting their money from theft and the lack of a need for cash. However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of monitoring the tablet's battery level and dealing with cash-only stores. 49語 これぐらいで良いかも、もっとシンプルがよかったら 銀行の話→not needing cash. ぐらいでも通じる（不自然な表現だけどゴリ押し） 充電の話→バッテリー残量を監視することがデメリットと言い切っちゃう、 詳しく書こうとすると、いくらでも詳しく書けるけど語数超えちゃう。
問題 When students go to college, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are choose, too. These days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates. What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign language skills. On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watchs TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house. As a result, they have to spend a lot of time cleaning the house by themselves. 要約 Recently, some students rent a home to share with roommates.By doing so, they gain some advantages, such as teaching a lot of things and talking with foreign people. However, they may face several drawbacks in team of losing enough sleep due to staying up and becoming dirty room. 添削お願いします🙇。
問題 When students go to colleges, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are other choices, too. There days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates. What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign language skill. On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watches TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house. As a result, they have to spend a lot of time cleaning the house by themselves. 書いてみた要約 Recently, some students rent a home to share with roommates. By doing so they gain some advantages such as teaching a lot of things and taking with foreign people. However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of losing enough sleep due to staying up and becoming dirty room.
問題 When students go to college, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are other choices, too. There days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates. What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign languages skills. On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watches TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house. As a result, they have to spend a lot of time coming the house by themselves. 書いてみたやつ Recently,some students rent a home to share with roommates. By doing so they gain some advantages such as teaching a lot of things and taking with foreign people. However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of losing enough sleep due to staying up and becoming dirty room.
「文法的に可能か？」 という質問であれば 可能です、でも文法的に可能という事だけ記憶するのではなく、不自然な英文になることもあると合わせて記憶しておいてください。 良い例文 The policy was effective in terms of not increasing pollution. その政策は汚染を増やさないという観点では効果的だった Some decisions, such as not investing in risky ventures, can save money. たとえば、リスクの高い事業に投資しないといったような決定が、節約につながる場合があります 次に「自然な英文かどうか」という点で書くと 悪い例文です You should avoid activities such as not exercising.例えば運動しないといった活動を避けるべきです （すごく不自然） 良い例文 You should avoid a lack of exercise. 運動不足を避けるべきです この表現の方が自然
「テンプレのこの部分を変えてもよいのですか？」という質問が頻繁に来ます。
結論：全部自分好みに変えて良い！
in terms of → such as が好きなら変えてOK
in terms of → , including が好きなら変えてOK
in terms of の後に長いアクションフレーズ入れるなら、むしろ , includingの方が良い
drawbacks → disadvantages が好きなら変えてOK
全部OKよ♪
試験前などには,100件を越えるコメントをいだだき，大変感謝しております♪ ”返信に500分掛かります”ので，返信が遅れることをご容赦ください。すべてのコメント，しっかり読んでおります♬
問題
When people want to buy clothes, many go to stores that sell the latest fashions or order their favorite brands online. There is also another choice. Some people go to used-clothes stores to buy their clothes.
People buy used clothes for different reasons. For example, some people like brand-name clothes but cannot buy them because they cost a lot of money. They can get such clothes for low prices at used-clothes stores. Also, some people like clothes with old designs that are no longer sold in other stores. They can often find the designs they like in used-clothes stores.
Nevertheless, used clothes may have holes in them or have buttons missing. Also, it is difficult for people to find clothes that fit in used-clothes stores, since each item is usually only available in one size. As a result, people sometimes cannot get the clothes they want.
回答
many people go to used-clothes store
by doing so they gain some advantage such
as they can getting clothes for low price and they can find the old designs
however it has several drawbacks in terms of used-clothes many having holes or buttons missing and difficult for them to find best size clothes
添削して頂けると嬉しいです
現時点だと何点くらいになりますかね
あっ、この練習問題と添削、動画で使って良いかしら？
@ 是非お願いします
ありがと～。
明日公開するね♪ 試験明日だったりしない？試験日大丈夫？
@ 来週なので大丈夫です！楽しみにしてます
すご
本当にこの視聴者（受験してきた子）すごいんですよ♪
私より、テンプレ活用してる！
From Alice
2:42の時の文章の黄色のマーカーと赤文字と青文字のところは出た問題のメリットやデメリットを自分で考えて書いてそれ以外はもう同じように書いていいってことですか？
いいわよ♪一文目は、設問本文の完全コピーは良くないから、少しまとめて変化させてね。
もちろん、テンプレは自分で改良して使うものだから、好きなフレーズとかあったら変えてもOK!
From Alice
前回落ちちゃったんで今回は絶対合格します‼️
前回落ちても関係ないのよ、最後に合格すればいいの♬
追加説明のためのdue toは肯定の時にも使えますか
使える♪
they may face several drawbacks in terms of not speaking foreign language の表現って適切ですかね？
冠詞忘れてるけど、いったん置いといて、
文法的に使えないことはない。
「彼らは外国語を話せないから、いくつかの欠点に直面するかもね」
っていってる。
多分だけど、こう書きたかったんじゃないかしら？
They may face drawbacks in terms of their inability to communicate.
彼らはコミュニケーションが取れないといった欠点に直面するかもね。
代名詞は使わない方がいいと聞いたのですが使っても良いのですかー？
1回目の登場は普通。
2回目の登場は、代名詞に変えて良いわよ♩
building connectionsの部分はmaking friendsでもよろしいですか？
意味が違うでしょうか？
設問文を要約しないといけないので、making friends だと、設問文と少し異なります。
（設問文は載せられない）
in terms ofなどの後はbeing not able to 動詞で繋げられますか？
文法的に入れることが可能かな？ という質問であれば可能ですけど、ものすごく不自然な英文になる可能性もあるから注意してね、あと要約は短くしないといけないから、あまり語数盛るとオーバーしちゃう
良くない不自然な例
In terms of being not able to finish the project, we need to reconsider the timeline.
自然な英文
In terms of our inability to finish the project, we need to reconsider the timeline.
これの本文はどこでみれますか
公式サイトです♬
ありました😭ありがとうございます！！金曜テストでだいぶ心やられてますが本気で頑張ります！！
この時期は、みんなテスト連続よね～
夜遅くに失礼します🙇
この動画とは違う問題なのですが、利点のところで･･･such as finding the best deals easily ･･･と書いてみたのですが、easilyの位置というか、なんかおかしい気がして、改善点を教えて欲しいです！
Online shopping has many benefits, such as finding the best deals easily. オンラインショッピングには多くの利点があって、例えば簡単にお得な商品を見つけられるわよ
こんな英文でいいのかしら？
このままでいいわよ。
@@Eiken.Goukaku.Channel 本当にそんな感じの問題です‼︎そのままでも良いんですね！安心しました。あとadvantageをbenefitで書き換えるのも良さげで、加えて勉強になりました。丁寧にありがとうございます😭🙏明日英検なので本当にありがたいです。
はーい、頑張ってきてね♬
@@Eiken.Goukaku.Channel ありがとうございます！最善を尽くします💪
これってone’sの部分は、問題によって変えて、people’s の部分は、問題によらず、変えませんか？
テンプレを変えたいという事かしら？
良いわよ、変えても♪
ちなにみ2025年バージョンはメリット＆デメリット挿入表は削除だから、特に使わない。
使ってもいいですか？
いやそのこれを使いたいのですが、
これone’sをそのまま入れて使うのですか？
この便利分の部分をそのまま使うのですか？それとも問題によって少し変えるのですか？
自分の書きたい英文で変えるんだけど、どういう英文を書きたいのか
一度書いてみてくれる？
前回要約問題対策しないでいって、落ちてしまったのですが、これ覚えていったら、ある程度取れますかね？
ベーステンプレ文章は基本的に
「問題を見る前に作ってる文章」
だから、本番の設問本文に合わせて単語変化させてね♪ そしたら、この受験生みたいに高得点まで狙える。
一番マズイのは、テンプレを完成まで持っていけない事だから、本文のメリット・デメリットはしっかり読解してね、From Alice
Canを使いたい時はどうやって名詞にしたらいいんでしょうか？？
日本語でも英語でもよいので
どんな表現を書きたいか教えてくれない？
@ 例えばですね、people can try on clothes to make sure that they are the right size and that they like how the clothes look before buying them.という利点でsuch as の後は名詞にしないといけないとおっしゃっていたのでどう言い換えをしたら良い回答になるのでしょうか？？長文失礼しました。
もともとの英文が25語で
such as でまとめると16語、シンプルだけどこれで伝わると思う
もっと減らしても良いけど、16語でも語数オーバーしないわよ、きっと♪
people gain some advantages, such as size confirmation and checking whether the clothes suit them beforehand.
人々は、サイズの確認や服が自分に似合うかどうかを事前に確認できるといったメリットを得られます。
@ ご丁寧にありがとうございました！！！しっかり理解できました！！
英作文
It is often said that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree with this opinion?
私の意見
I disagree that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. I have two reasons to support this idea. First, they should’t throw away food because it leads to happen environment issue.
It’s uncomfortable for them to increase it. Second, they can do to reduce a lot of activities.
For example, they are able to put on food to buy costumer. Therefore, l disagree that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away.
最初の文をめっちゃ使っちゃいます、、
どうしたらいいですか？
このスタイルを変えないで欲しいという事で添削すると。
「I disagree」から間違ってるから、一度導入と結論を全部変えた方が良いと思うわ。
設問は
「レストランやスーパーマーケットは廃棄する食品の量を減らすべきだと言われることがよくあります。この意見に賛成ですか？」と聞いてるから
本論で「廃棄物を減らしたい」と書くなら
最初の導入で
I agree と賛成したほうが良い♪
点数が向上するなら全然変えたいです。この前置きを書いてしまったら大幅に減点されてしまうのですかね、？
本論に関係ない語数稼ぎは省いた方がよいでしょう。あとは本論が短いので増やす。
この2点が英検の最新スタイルだから、模範解答そっくりに仕上げたいなら変えるべきだし、試験直前すぎて時間ないなら、このままで受験して、リスニングとリーディングで高得点を狙う。
総合得点で合格するのも作戦の１つよ♪
リスニングが終わってて、全部自信なくて、ライティングがんばって少しでも点数上がるように頑張ってみます。
書き直したのまた送ります。
I agree with this opinion. First, significantly reducing the amount of foods are comfortable the quality of life for citizen. Although the problems, such as food loss and influencing environment frequently caused by shops are troubling them, this measure will solve these issues. Second, reducing foods makes them happy to protect lead to animal. For example, they will be able to preserve from dirty environment. It is important for them to provide safety place. Therefore I think that restaurants and supermarkets should reduce the amount of food.
動画参考にさせてもらい、いっぱい真似しちゃいました。
要約は結局こういったテンプレ使った方がいいですかね…。
別に使わなくて大丈夫♪
明後日の5、6限目(昼食後)が本番なんですけど、あまり前回から成長した感じがしなくてかなり不安です…。前回のリスニングのトラウマが残ってそうで心配なんですが、本番全力を尽くせるように頑張ります。
ランチ後なのね、1日だけだから、ランチ少しだけにして、その時間でリスニング練習もいいわね♪
1日だけだもの
in terms ofをincludingに変えたらカンマいらないですか?
カンマ付ける。
レシピーというアプリの要約練習でこのテンプレを使っているのですが大抵70%なのですが大丈夫でしょうか？
判定するときに打ち込んだ、設問文とjorkさんが書き上げた完成要約文を見てみたいんだけど、良いかしら？
School trips are one of the main events at school. By visiting historical sites, buying souvenirs, and chatting through the night with friends, students can make one-of-a-kind memories. Recently, however, school trip destinations have shown a new trend: More and more schools are now choosing to go to foreign countries for school trips.
Going overseas on a school trip offers many advantages. Everyone can be given opportunities to enjoy foreign cultures. Also, even when students might face difficulties, for example, getting lost or miscommunications in foreign languages, they can help each other in a group and overcome the difficulties together.
On the other hand, there are some problems with choosing foreign destinations for school trips.
Traveling overseas usually costs more than domestic trips. Furthermore, students have to prepare their own passports and travel insurance, which adds additional cost. In fact, because of these reasons, some students give up going on school trips.
More and more schools are now choosing to go to foreign countries for school trips.
By doing so, there are some benefits such as having fun for foreign cultures and overcoming the difficulties in a group.
However, it has several drawbacks in terms of costing a lot of money and preparing own passports and travel.
これです。
ありがと～♬
マーライオンに相談してみる！
マーライオンです
設問文の提供に関し、感謝申し上げます
70％というコメントは、つまり16点満点の要約で11点が出てしまうということですね。
ステップ１として「アプリの精度チェック」を行います
マーライオンがアリスさんのテンプレを使って
「これなら14点は出るだろう」と狙って書いた英文を添付しますので、一度打ち込んでみてください。もしそれで、11点というアプリ診断が、まったく変わらなかったら、再度コメントいただければ幸いです。
Recently, an increasing number of schools have been choosing overseas destinations for their school trips. By doing so, students can gain some benefits such as opportunities to enjoy foreign cultures and the ability to solve challenges. However, students face several drawbacks, including the high cost involved and the complexity of the preparation process.
最近、修学旅行の行き先として海外を選ぶ学校が増えています。これにより、生徒たちは外国文化を楽しむ機会や、課題を解決する能力を得るなどの利点を得ます。しかし、一方で高額な費用や準備の複雑さといったいくつかの欠点にも直面します。
あの、people’s と、one’s の部分は、問題によって、theyなどに変えるのですか？それともそのまま、people’s やone’sのまま使うべきなのですか？
変えるかどうかは、自分の書きたい文章で変わるから、変えて良いのよ。theyにしたら減点されそうだから気を付けてね♪
繰り返しになるけど、もう1回言うと。
2025年テンプレでは、メリット＆デメリット挿入表は使わないわよ。たぶん1年古い動画の方を記憶してるんじゃないかしら？
@@Eiken.Goukaku.Channel 正直あんでなさそうなので、2024年版使おうと思ってます
案って基本は設問から作るからね♪ 事前に作ってある案は、外れることが多い。
わかりました
よしっ、OK♬
やはりライティングの要約問題追加は間違った選択だと思ってしまうな。
本来人の話を聞くか文を読んで要約して話すのが普通だと思うし何より実用的だなと思います。うーん英検は何を狙ってるんでしょうか
昔あった要約問題が 復活したのは、ライティング英作だけだと顕著に点数偏りがでるからでしょうね。実用面（いいかえると難易度調整）は、今後変化していくと思われます。
ライティング要約問題対策動画をいつも重宝させて頂いています。素晴らしい動画をありがとうございます😊
質問なのですが
「オンライン授業で対面で授業することが減って寂しくなる」
というような英文を要約するにはどうしたら良いでしょうか
また、「設問本文と完全一致しないように」というのは何処まで一致しなければ良いのでしょうか。
新しく文を作ったとしても英語が苦手なので間違った文法を用いて減点されてしまうのが不安です…
コメントにある「オンライン授業で対面で授業することが減って寂しくなる」というのは、たぶんデメリットの項目に入れたいという事でしょう
Recently, more schools have been adopting online classes.
By doing so, students gain some advantages, such as 名詞 and 名詞.
However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of 名詞 and the loneliness due to the reduction in face-to-face opportunities.
こういう事を聞きたかったのだと解釈
語数盛りも入れました
コピーは、1文まるまるだとダメ
理想は、4つ以上単語の並びが連続したら変えたい
マーライオン
まさに知りたかった答えを下さり感謝してもしきれません。丁寧にありがとうございます😭
最近では電子マネーを利用する人が増えているというテーマなのですが
メリット→スマホで支払うのでお金が盗まれる心配がない(ロックをかけているから) 銀行に行かなくてよい。
デメリット→スマホの充電がなくなると支払えない 電子マネーで支払えない店もある
どんな感じで要約したら良いのかわからないので教えていただけますか?お願いします😊
これは動画のテンプレとおんなじ英文が良いということでいいのかしか？
Recently, more people have been using electronic money.
By doing so, they gain some advantages, such as protecting their money from theft and the lack of a need for cash.
However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of monitoring the tablet's battery level and dealing with cash-only stores. 49語
これぐらいで良いかも、もっとシンプルがよかったら
銀行の話→not needing cash. ぐらいでも通じる（不自然な表現だけどゴリ押し）
充電の話→バッテリー残量を監視することがデメリットと言い切っちゃう、 詳しく書こうとすると、いくらでも詳しく書けるけど語数超えちゃう。
とても不安で探してた時に見つけました。
自分の書いたものをコメントしたら添削してくれますか？このテンプレを使ってみたのですが、、
コメント欄に、直接英語打ち込んでいいわよ♬
問題
When students go to college, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are choose, too. These days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates.
What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a
roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign language skills.
On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watchs TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough
sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house.
As a result, they have to spend a lot of time cleaning the house by themselves.
要約
Recently, some students rent a home to share with roommates.By doing so, they
gain some advantages, such as teaching a lot of things and talking with foreign people. However, they may face several drawbacks in team of losing enough sleep due to staying up and becoming dirty room.
添削お願いします🙇。
問題
When students go to colleges, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are other choices, too. There days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates.
What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign language skill.
On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watches TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough
sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house.
As a result, they have to spend a lot of time cleaning the house by themselves.
書いてみた要約
Recently, some students rent a home to share with roommates. By doing so they gain some advantages such as teaching a lot of things and taking with foreign people. However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of losing enough sleep due to staying up and becoming dirty room.
遅くなってしまってごめんなさい。
添削よろしくお願いします🙇
問題
When students go to college, some decide to live at home with their parents, and others decide to rent an apartment by themselves. There are other choices, too. There days, some of them choose to share a house with roommates.
What are the reasons for this? Some students have a roommate who is good at math or science and can give advice about homework. Other students have a roommate from abroad and can learn about a foreign language through everyday conversations. Because of this, they have been able to improve their foreign languages skills.
On the other hand, some students have a roommate who stays up late at night and watches TV. This can be noisy and make it difficult for others to get enough sleep. Some students have a roommate who rarely helps with cleaning the house.
As a result, they have to spend a lot of time coming the house by themselves.
書いてみたやつ
Recently,some students rent a home to share with roommates. By doing so they gain some advantages such as teaching a lot of things and taking with foreign people. However, they may face several drawbacks in terms of losing enough sleep due to staying up and becoming dirty room.
in terms ofのあとに否定語を使うのは可能ですか？
「文法的に可能か？」 という質問であれば
可能です、でも文法的に可能という事だけ記憶するのではなく、不自然な英文になることもあると合わせて記憶しておいてください。
良い例文
The policy was effective in terms of not increasing pollution. その政策は汚染を増やさないという観点では効果的だった
Some decisions, such as not investing in risky ventures, can save money. たとえば、リスクの高い事業に投資しないといったような決定が、節約につながる場合があります
次に「自然な英文かどうか」という点で書くと
悪い例文です
You should avoid activities such as not exercising.例えば運動しないといった活動を避けるべきです （すごく不自然）
良い例文
You should avoid a lack of exercise.
運動不足を避けるべきです
この表現の方が自然
@ わかりやすいです！ありがとうございます☀️
by doing so は無くても大丈夫ですか？
語数オーバーするならカットしても良いですが、
構成減点に気をつけましょう♪