I wrote my college essays on learning to love my multicultural identity and being adaptable in spaces through home cooked meals and years of playing soccer. Good luck everyone!
Writing a college essay or research paper can be exhausting. If you're feeling stuck or you just don't have the time to come up with a quality paper, email me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com, and I will do it for you. Don't hesitate to contact me: maryjoykimmy@gmail.com. And guess what? With me, you're guaranteed to get good grades. I help with all sorts of homework including essays, term papers, discussion posts, exams, and more. I promise that my service is great, and that contacting me will be the best thing you'll do to ease the burden and burnout associated with assignments. Lots of love to you.
I'm still in the process of writing my essay but it's going to be about my reframing what communication is as someone who loves learning languages through my relationship with my nonverbal sibling
I wrote about my pigeon farm in China and using pigeon's symbolic meaning of adaption and resilience to show how I achieved "flight" after immigrating to the United States.
Hey :), I’m a Freshman in high school currently with not the greatest grades, only in one honors class, but Cornell has been my dream since 5th grade. I know it probably will never be a reality but hey, if you don’t think wishfully you’ll go nowhere. Anyways your videos have given me a lot confidence in my abilities and I absolutely adore your personality. Also love your hair! I hope you have a good day!
hi :) Cornell can definitely be a reality, you are a freshman with your ENTIRE high school experience ahead of you! You don't have to have the best grades but I would encourage you get involved in extracurriculars as well! I'm glad you've enjoyed my videos and if there's any more content that you'd like to see from me please let me know :)
I love you www you have delivered such a sweet and powerful message🥺🥰I am applying to Cornell through early decision this year and thank you so much for this!
could you post your essay or make a video analyzing every paragraph of it? i need some help when it comes to word count and the outline and what exactly i should be letting the reader know
usually people start writing their essay their junior year / latest before senior year. i think you could just always have it in the back of your head and just think about what you want to write about. i know you'll do great!
thank you for making this video sm!!🌟💕💓 i’m still writing my essay 🥲💀💀this helped get me back on track and back to who my authentic self is. i love ur channel and appreciate the word vomit advice lmao *also you are GORGEOUS ohmygoddd what a cutie🥺
awwwhh thank you so much!!! and highkey don't stress at all i didn't apply to my first university until December 18. i'm glad you found this helpful please let me know if there's any videos you'd like to see from me :)
I’m also writing my college essay on my curly hair. I’m south Asian and it’s very uncommon for us to have curly hair, yours is so good! Congrats on Cornell 🎉
Thanks dear, for the confident and bondless energy in your speech! I was hesitating and not sure enough to start writing my personal statement because I felt I was not ready enough or maybe I couldn't, but after watching this video, I got the courage to be myself and put my mind and heart into it. 💕💖
Hi fam. I enjoyed the content! 😂 You have to put out more videos! The skit at 1:22 is too funny. You should totally collaborate with the crazy team Bad Friends. Their pranks low-key are similar to Danny Duncan mixed with a lil bit of Mike Majlak! They are an insane friend group in SoCal. You should see their YT out and give the boys a subscribe! 👉 #BadFriendsVids
im glad you figured out what to write about!!! and unfortunately, I don't know anyone who edits / reviews college essays when i was a senior i just asked my english teacher and a speech therapist that i was close to at my school :)
Hey! We will have an ex-YALE admissions officer REVIEW your essays!!!! Sorry to drop in your comment but do you want help with your common app essay editing or SAT (Math) prep? Checkout www.fiverr.com/shreyashree17?up_rollout=true#
you most definitely can! if you're doing that I think it'd be easier to do it in the college of arts & sciences as opposed to the college of engineering
Ur one of the most beautiful woman I’ve seen on yt
thank you :)
I wrote my college essays on learning to love my multicultural identity and being adaptable in spaces through home cooked meals and years of playing soccer. Good luck everyone!
THANK YOU FOR SHARING QUEENNNNNN ❤️
Writing a college essay or research paper can be exhausting. If you're feeling stuck or you just don't have the time to come up with a quality paper, email me at maryjoykimmy@gmail.com, and I will do it for you. Don't hesitate to contact me: maryjoykimmy@gmail.com. And guess what? With me, you're guaranteed to get good grades. I help with all sorts of homework including essays, term papers, discussion posts, exams, and more. I promise that my service is great, and that contacting me will be the best thing you'll do to ease the burden and burnout associated with assignments. Lots of love to you.
lmao #seniorswhostillhave'tsumittedtheirapplicationn
i applied to my first college on December 18... YOU GOT THISSSS
I’ve never heard of anyone writing about their natural hair journey for a college essay, that’s super creative!
I'm still in the process of writing my essay but it's going to be about my reframing what communication is as someone who loves learning languages through my relationship with my nonverbal sibling
that sounds amazing!
I wrote about my pigeon farm in China and using pigeon's symbolic meaning of adaption and resilience to show how I achieved "flight" after immigrating to the United States.
thank you for sharing!!! this sounds super interesting 🥺
Girl I'm out here 2 days to the deadline trying to get all of thsi stuff done.💀💀💀
I BELIEVE IN YOUUUUUUUUUUUU
heyy did u get in? because same I just have a week left
I talked about how drinking sprite with milk prompted me to seek discomfort in other areas of my life🥴
wait LOL this actually sounds dope hahaha
Hey :), I’m a Freshman in high school currently with not the greatest grades, only in one honors class, but Cornell has been my dream since 5th grade. I know it probably will never be a reality but hey, if you don’t think wishfully you’ll go nowhere. Anyways your videos have given me a lot confidence in my abilities and I absolutely adore your personality. Also love your hair! I hope you have a good day!
hi :) Cornell can definitely be a reality, you are a freshman with your ENTIRE high school experience ahead of you! You don't have to have the best grades but I would encourage you get involved in extracurriculars as well! I'm glad you've enjoyed my videos and if there's any more content that you'd like to see from me please let me know :)
“My vocabulary is limited, I’m a STEM major” 😂
My essay was basically about an encounter I had with two professors and a group of college students, which made me discover my love for technology.
thank you for sharing ❤️
what prompt did you choose?
The last prompt..
I would love to read your essay
Got accepted to cornel early decision, ayy can’t wait to see you on campus ✨✨
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! you def need to celebrate!! and yes hopefully we can run into each other on campus :)
My friend got accepted ED to Cornell too!
i got in too! 😁
I wrote about how being terrified of plants and overcoming that fear made me fall in love with environmental science lol
omg this sounds super interesting!! thank you for sharing :)
Ahhhh you responded! 🥰
Aww that sounds nice. Do you want to major in environmental science? I do as well.
omg that souns awesome can u share ur essay pls
I love you www you have delivered such a sweet and powerful message🥺🥰I am applying to Cornell through early decision this year and thank you so much for this!
Though not a complete easy I heard, but it's beautiful. I'm glad I had you to review mine.
thank youu! and im so excited for you!
gurl I loved ur energyyyy plss I might need ur help just reading my essay if u would like that ofc just tell me.
could you post your essay or make a video analyzing every paragraph of it? i need some help when it comes to word count and the outline and what exactly i should be letting the reader know
i’m so glad i found your channel today, i love your videos and your personality! 🤩 your essay was so amazing 🥰
thank you sooo much i really appreciate it ❤️
I am going to write my common app essay avout my mother's leaving her family when her son was at the age of 8
I am going to grade 9th and I am already nervous-😭when do I start writing my essay? Like I want to give my essays a time and not hurry
usually people start writing their essay their junior year / latest before senior year. i think you could just always have it in the back of your head and just think about what you want to write about. i know you'll do great!
i havent started my essay and it's due in 3 days
that's literally why i'm here, i felt that
YALL BOTH GOT THIS!!!! Just speak from your heart and try to let your voice show! and maybe yall could review each other's essays haha
@@miahsanchez THANK YOUUUU
Who wants to review, I've only done the common app essay.
lol same
Great informative video, love your energy as always
thank youuu!! let me know if there's any content you wanna see from me. I appreciate it :)
thank you for making this video sm!!🌟💕💓 i’m still writing my essay 🥲💀💀this helped get me back on track and back to who my authentic self is. i love ur channel and appreciate the word vomit advice lmao *also you are GORGEOUS ohmygoddd what a cutie🥺
awwwhh thank you so much!!! and highkey don't stress at all i didn't apply to my first university until December 18. i'm glad you found this helpful please let me know if there's any videos you'd like to see from me :)
Looking back I would so do my Med school essay over. I don’t even remember my college app essay. I which I had these tips then
I’m also writing my college essay on my curly hair. I’m south Asian and it’s very uncommon for us to have curly hair, yours is so good! Congrats on Cornell 🎉
ok i just found u & i love your videos
ahhh thank you so much 😊❤️
Is overcome a stuttering an interesting topic? Great vdo btw!
i think that's a great topic! especially if it's really personal to you
@@miahsanchez thanks really appreciated
how do you like computer science?
I’m thinking of going into it but I’m not sure!
Here what I want to say, I like your hair 😂
hahah thank youuuu ❤️
Thanks dear, for the confident and bondless energy in your speech! I was hesitating and not sure enough to start writing my personal statement because I felt I was not ready enough or maybe I couldn't, but after watching this video, I got the courage to be myself and put my mind and heart into it. 💕💖
do you know anyone who could review my Personal Statement :)?? ✨💫🤍love your energy by the way girl!
i dont im sorry :( when i was in HS i asked my english teacher to look over mine!! also im glad you enjoy ! lmk if you ever need anything else ❤️
This is so helpful !! Thank you so much. I finally know what to write about 💕💕.
I love this ! If I sent you my essay do you think you would be able to read it?
aggghhh i try not to read / edit essays (im not good at it lol) but if you DM me on IG we can talk about it a little more!
Thank you for posting this video. Your energy, your advice,,, I truly appreciate it!
awwhh ofc, i hope it helps and thank you for watching!
Hi fam. I enjoyed the content! 😂 You have to put out more videos! The skit at 1:22 is too funny. You should totally collaborate with the crazy team Bad Friends. Their pranks low-key are similar to Danny Duncan mixed with a lil bit of Mike Majlak! They are an insane friend group in SoCal.
You should see their YT out and give the boys a subscribe! 👉 #BadFriendsVids
I love your essay. I wish you could add subtitles
Now i know what to write thank you so much 💕 if i want some help would you help me please 🙏
im glad you figured out what to write about!!! and unfortunately, I don't know anyone who edits / reviews college essays when i was a senior i just asked my english teacher and a speech therapist that i was close to at my school :)
@@miahsanchez ok nice ♥️
Hey! We will have an ex-YALE admissions officer REVIEW your essays!!!!
Sorry to drop in your comment but do you want help with your common app essay editing or SAT (Math) prep? Checkout www.fiverr.com/shreyashree17?up_rollout=true#
Awesome video sis 🥰
Could u like double major in cs and economics?
you most definitely can! if you're doing that I think it'd be easier to do it in the college of arts & sciences as opposed to the college of engineering
You're so beautiful!!
Great video! What was the essay prompt?
YOOOO MIAH! THIS MORNING I GOT MAIL FROM GOOGLE TO SCHEDULE INTERVIEW! THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR HELPING WITH THE CURRICULUM IM SO HAPPY !!!!
I LOVE TO HEAR IT!!! Good luck with the interview and if you have any questions please let me know!
Omg I also wrote my common app essay about my natural hair too but like a metaphor I’m awaiting results currently lol
Did it relate to the community?
love ur video thank you for all the tips! I was wondering what common app question did you answer when talking about ur hair journey
Can someone help me I don’t know how to start my essay 😭
Your hair is really so gorgeous
Is it ok to write about an extracurricular as part of the essay?
if that's what you naturally feel inclined to write about then I don't think there's anything wrong with that!
@@miahsanchez thanks!
Your hair is so beautiful
Awesome video sis 🥰
ahh thank you!!! ❤️
Is the transfer essays the same structure as this one?
im actually not sure! i would assume so but you should def double check
Thank you so much I recently got accepted to the university of Florida and use all your tips !!!