Write a grade 9 A Christmas Carol paragraph with me (FREE paragraph for you to use)

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  • Опубликовано: 18 янв 2025

Комментарии • 44

  • @dylanoliff
    @dylanoliff 8 месяцев назад +62

    i refuse to believe that you can use ostracisation that many times in one paragraph

  • @matilda2811
    @matilda2811 11 месяцев назад +10

    yes please more essays please

  • @RhiHolly
    @RhiHolly 9 месяцев назад +14

    Loved this! I was 2 marks of a grade 9 in language but cant get passed a grade 5 or 6 in my literature. This was amazing thankyou

    • @Zero1._
      @Zero1._ 8 месяцев назад +2

      How language, any q5 tips or anything?

    • @dylanoliff
      @dylanoliff 8 месяцев назад +2

      @@Zero1._ i got 38/40 on Q5 and tbh i would say spend more time on it and ensure to be using the sophisticated vocab to get all the spag while mixing all your language techniques. Dont forget the simples like onomatopoeia and metaphors though too because although not difficult you have to make sure to bring them up

    • @Zero1._
      @Zero1._ 8 месяцев назад +1

      @dylanoliff yh I already spend the most time on it def but I can never break into the 30s, I'm always 25-29 and rlly wana surpass that

  • @xoxoxoxoxo3261
    @xoxoxoxoxo3261 11 месяцев назад +18

    she deserves more views

    • @easycraftydesigns3141
      @easycraftydesigns3141 11 месяцев назад +4

      Way more

    • @thelightuphub
      @thelightuphub  11 месяцев назад +4

      Thank you! Do share this channel with your friends 😊

    • @Divinarium1
      @Divinarium1 8 месяцев назад +1

      @TheProdigy-sg5ns It's highly predicted. But I know aqa always throws in the themes that are the most unexpected. Don't be a one theme wonder. Revise quotes for everything/

  • @AtinderPal-u1u
    @AtinderPal-u1u 11 месяцев назад +9

    can you make a video on how to do the GCSE OCR inspector calls question, please!! I'm gonna buy your membership soon. literally gonna save my life this year

    • @cxindy.x
      @cxindy.x 8 месяцев назад +2

      they is literally nothing for us at all it’s horrible. Honestly our schools should really pick AQA they are honestly making our life’s harder

    • @AtinderPal-u1u
      @AtinderPal-u1u 8 месяцев назад

      @cxindy.x literally preach. But good luck for tmrw

    • @cxindy.x
      @cxindy.x 8 месяцев назад

      @@AtinderPal-u1u Thank you soo muchh you tooo!!❤️🙏🏾

  • @talia-s4d
    @talia-s4d 3 месяца назад +2

    id the question was show how dickens shows scrooges change through the whole novella and in the text you get given how many of these paragraphs would you do and what for ?

  • @easycraftydesigns3141
    @easycraftydesigns3141 11 месяцев назад +8

    Do you do just 1 of these or multiple per question?

  • @khushiparekh-f2e
    @khushiparekh-f2e 15 часов назад

    how long should it take to write one of these paragraphs?

  • @levi-sr8kd
    @levi-sr8kd 2 месяца назад +1

    how many times do you have to do this petaetacwl per text?

  • @AyshaH246
    @AyshaH246 Месяц назад

    My teacher would mark me down for keep repeating one word and my feedback would be used varied vocabulary for isolated

  • @talia-s4d
    @talia-s4d 3 месяца назад

    if the question was show how dickens shows scrooges change through the whole novella and in the text you get given how many of these paragraphs would you do and what for ?

  • @matilda2811
    @matilda2811 11 месяцев назад +7

    how do you word so advanced

    • @thelightuphub
      @thelightuphub  11 месяцев назад +6

      Lots of practice and learning! On the Lightup hub we have grade 9 key word sheets for every text (with definitions and examples) so you can mirror these too 🫶🏽

    • @EmmanuelYonas-g5t
      @EmmanuelYonas-g5t Месяц назад

      @@thelightuphub Thank you! you really helped on my exam!

  • @xoxoxoxoxo3261
    @xoxoxoxoxo3261 11 месяцев назад +2

    is this english language or English literature

    • @thelightuphub
      @thelightuphub  11 месяцев назад +2

      Literature!

    • @dylanoliff
      @dylanoliff 8 месяцев назад +2

      are you joking mate

    • @Divinarium1
      @Divinarium1 8 месяцев назад +6

      @@dylanoliff He lowers the grade boundaries for everyone. Don't interrupt a person helping everyone else

  • @easycraftydesigns3141
    @easycraftydesigns3141 9 месяцев назад +1

    Could this work for language just remove the context part? And would it work for most questions? Mr salles says to just write every sentence as PEE or just write as many explanations as there are marks (E.G 8 explanations for 8 marks), so I don’t know which one to follow.

  • @Mustaqeem-sw5yg
    @Mustaqeem-sw5yg 7 месяцев назад

    @The Lightup Hub how much time should you spend on each paragraph using this structure?

  • @muscabyare-v3z
    @muscabyare-v3z 11 месяцев назад +2

    you are so beutifull😘

    • @hotshothustler6582
      @hotshothustler6582 11 месяцев назад +3

      Fr she is so gorgeous

    • @SGG-h8d
      @SGG-h8d Месяц назад +2

      No way is she gorg!!! 🙅‍♀️

    • @SGG-h8d
      @SGG-h8d Месяц назад +2

      Never

    • @SGG-h8d
      @SGG-h8d Месяц назад +1

      Eww

    • @SGG-h8d
      @SGG-h8d Месяц назад +2

      Don’t chat with my prettiness

  • @elliottberger9748
    @elliottberger9748 10 месяцев назад

    'promo sm' 🎉

  • @SGG-h8d
    @SGG-h8d Месяц назад +2

    Im gonna do the loudest fart in the garden (💨💨x2🪴