"Shadows On The Ice" Creepypasta Scary Story

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  • Опубликовано: 12 ноя 2024
  • CREEPYPASTA STORY Author► Banned in CP
    Creepypastas are the scary stories and campfire tales of the internet. Horror stories spread through Reddit r/nosleep, forums and blogs. Whether you believe these scary stories to be true or not is up to you.
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Комментарии • 231

  • @jeremytaft8247
    @jeremytaft8247 2 года назад +174

    As a hunter nothing pisses me off more than clowns pointlessly killing things and calling it “hunting”. Great story by the author and another superb narration CGS

    • @coffeezombie6032
      @coffeezombie6032 2 года назад +7

      I agree 💯 percent! These guys were idiots!

    • @basghettipolicy8094
      @basghettipolicy8094 2 года назад +18

      Right! Poachers are responsible for so many extinctions, and in doing such, they have given hunters a bad rap.

    • @tammygarrett8427
      @tammygarrett8427 2 года назад +8

      I don't hunt but i am glad that most hunters are not like them and respect nature

    • @mscutie-rd3vn
      @mscutie-rd3vn 2 года назад +15

      Facts I thought it was just me. When they shot the crying calf I didn't care when happened to them.🙄

    • @mscutie-rd3vn
      @mscutie-rd3vn 2 года назад +6

      @@tammygarrett8427 I agree no need to kill for no reason

  • @michaelcarey3105
    @michaelcarey3105 2 года назад +175

    These guys were easy to dislike! I like a story where I feel impelled to root for the monsters! Great story!

    • @teslastellar
      @teslastellar 2 года назад +5

      I felt the same. They deserved what they got.

    • @nickgill1609
      @nickgill1609 Год назад

      Absolutely they deserved it

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад

      ​@@nickgill1609
      And The Waheela Wolves did nothing to them.

    • @kirstenornelas881
      @kirstenornelas881 Год назад +2

      I was thinking the same. Like idk if I feel sorry if anything bad happens to these a holes anyhow very early on is how I felt in the story line. I’m a large game hunter though and by what day five they had taken even packed meat to feed up to at least 4 families plus helping out some neighbors by then. I don’t care what happened to a bunch of poachers let nature take them out

  • @Bigfootbeliever2022
    @Bigfootbeliever2022 2 года назад +57

    I hope I’m not the only one who felt more sadness for the animals deaths than the boys… amazing story telling friend! Thank you!

    • @mscutie-rd3vn
      @mscutie-rd3vn 2 года назад +7

      No your not, after they took out the crying calf I was done with them!!!

    • @jeannewoods3940
      @jeannewoods3940 Год назад +2

      I agree. I was appalled when they shot the calf.

    • @franciscastiglione5832
      @franciscastiglione5832 Год назад +1

      💯 as a hunter who happens to be from Tennessee, if I had observe Thea clowns kill 4 and only keep one, the next time they went out, I’d leave three of them down in the snow.

    • @chiefslief1886
      @chiefslief1886 2 месяца назад

      ​@@franciscastiglione5832❤😊

  • @Falsh125
    @Falsh125 2 года назад +112

    Loud, disrespectful,, cruel, vindictive, and wasteful characters created and killed with haunting perfection. Great story, awesome narration.

  • @wendigo95
    @wendigo95 2 года назад +156

    Damn, not even 5 minutes in and I'm already rooting for them to get hunted down by a monster. And that's coming from a hunter.

    • @dianarendon4037
      @dianarendon4037 2 года назад +22

      Me too, hunting for food is a good normal thing but killing four adult elks and taking only one? smh

    • @wendigo95
      @wendigo95 2 года назад +10

      @@dianarendon4037 that and they don't even have the decency to be good shots and kill them quickly. They hit them wherever and let them suffer

    • @marywiegand2050
      @marywiegand2050 2 года назад +6

      Me too!!!!! 😤

    • @___LC___
      @___LC___ 2 года назад +15

      It’s worse for responsible hunters to see characters portrayed as such complete dickheads, who are so wasteful and cruel.

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 2 года назад +3

      Hi ❤👋

  • @roadscapehorror-talesofterror
    @roadscapehorror-talesofterror 2 года назад +25

    A sign of good writing and narration when one becomes invested in wanting a character to die off. Well done.

  • @PucKitt
    @PucKitt 2 года назад +49

    I rarely root for the character to get offed, but damn if I’m not eager to hear them die.

  • @___LC___
    @___LC___ 2 года назад +35

    I’m pretty sure that most hunters would have hunted these guys down, but they wouldn’t get the suffering they deserve.

    • @franciscastiglione5832
      @franciscastiglione5832 Год назад +1

      I couldn’t agree more. But they could; lure them out into the woods, either destroy the knee or cut the Achilles, then simply walk away: let the winter finish it.

  • @basghettipolicy8094
    @basghettipolicy8094 2 года назад +18

    What a beautiful story about justice.

  • @es6986
    @es6986 2 года назад +36

    The way they were hunting,just for the glory of shooting something,I'd say they got just what they deserved. Maybe if they had read further in the book they would have learned that the creatures only manifested when these kind of circumstances called for it

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 2 года назад +2

      Hi ❤👋

    • @es6986
      @es6986 2 года назад +1

      @@sexygrandmadarkness2722
      Well hell again! 😁

    • @es6986
      @es6986 2 года назад +2

      That should have said hello!

  • @earndoggy
    @earndoggy 2 года назад +35

    Awesome, these guys are absolute tools and deserve everything they got!

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 2 года назад

      Hi ❤👋

    • @oliviam7226
      @oliviam7226 2 года назад +5

      Altho in my opinion they deserved to suffer a lot more for all the carnage they happily caused.

    • @earndoggy
      @earndoggy 2 года назад +5

      @@oliviam7226 I agree.

    • @earndoggy
      @earndoggy 2 года назад +1

      @@sexygrandmadarkness2722 keep it to yourself please. This is not a dating site.

    • @tammygarrett8427
      @tammygarrett8427 2 года назад +2

      @@oliviam7226 i agree

  • @Nvaus1
    @Nvaus1 2 года назад +19

    Those dudes kind of deserved all that they got.

  • @punkyreggaeparty8786
    @punkyreggaeparty8786 2 года назад +19

    It's below zero outside and snowing...I'm inside by the fireplace, tumbler of whiskey nearby and a warm blanket, completely enjoying your voice narrating this tale. Perfection. Thank you so much.❄️❄️❄️💗

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 2 года назад +1

      Hi ❤👋

    • @rickyhurtt5568
      @rickyhurtt5568 2 года назад +4

      Damned that sounds nice. Got the whiskey and blanket but in Bama it's never really cold

    • @punkyreggaeparty8786
      @punkyreggaeparty8786 2 года назад +4

      @@rickyhurtt5568 Just the whiskey is always enough. 😉

    • @rickyhurtt5568
      @rickyhurtt5568 2 года назад +2

      @@punkyreggaeparty8786 yes but I'd love to see some cold weather. Always wanted to see Maine or Alaska or such places. Might have a change of heart after one winter but I'd like to see it

    • @punkyreggaeparty8786
      @punkyreggaeparty8786 2 года назад +1

      @@rickyhurtt5568 It's beautiful. But it can be wearing when you have things to do and everything is shut down. 😅

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter 2 года назад +14

    Nothing annoys me more than killing an animal and then not using it for food etc

  • @rockinbobokkin7831
    @rockinbobokkin7831 2 года назад +30

    I'm fairly certain that the point of view character is a real tool that deserves anything bad that happens to him and his party.

  • @MatthewCharmanadventures
    @MatthewCharmanadventures Год назад +2

    The characters are unpleasant, cruel, stupid, and cowardly when faced with something that can fight back. I really enjoyed hearing them get dismantled.

  • @lizbmusic11
    @lizbmusic11 2 года назад +4

    These guys had it coming and I was cheering for the monsters! Love from New Zealand. Great story!

  • @chewkuilan9939
    @chewkuilan9939 2 года назад +10

    waaw ! don't mess with nature and the unknown , we don't know what going to mess us in return , always respect the forest we don't know what lurk in there , thank you for the story .

  • @jasonnelms4556
    @jasonnelms4556 2 года назад +2

    These guys made it very easy to root for the monsters.

  • @maximk9964
    @maximk9964 Год назад +3

    In Canada it's illegal to hunt with pistols, or even take them you on such trips. But I guess these guys don't care.

  • @druidictroy1157
    @druidictroy1157 2 года назад +15

    I think the author just finished their class on how to make the most hated characters ever. Pretty sure most people wanted the monsters to make them suffer after killing the calf.
    And on a personal note, I can't fathom how anyone could kill a wolf or big cat (small cats either for that matter) unless it was in self defense (or defending someone else). Can't wrap my mind around it.

  • @Ragnar009
    @Ragnar009 2 года назад +11

    Reminded me of when I find garbage in the forest. I do my best to remove it too.

  • @iskra6264
    @iskra6264 2 года назад +5

    The deaths they got were infinitely quicker and more merciful than any of them ever deserved. Trash like this should be flayed alive, inch by bloody, agonizing inch, with all the care in the world given to keeping them alive for as long as only possible.
    All the love to the author for their sheer skill in writing, though. It is not an easy task to write characters that are so easy to hate and yet remain so believable; a truly magnificent job.

  • @soulreaver1983
    @soulreaver1983 2 года назад +10

    Absolutely outstanding video thanks so much for these these amazing stories!!!🙂👍👍

  • @barkingbunny2928
    @barkingbunny2928 2 года назад +8

    Oooohhh! I liked this one a lot!

  • @caymens604
    @caymens604 2 года назад +4

    I have no sympathy for those guys. You should only kill an animal if you're going to eat it, or it's trying to kill you. Doing otherwise is just sickening

  • @normansmith7517
    @normansmith7517 2 года назад +10

    These are the guys who give hunters bad names

  • @dylancampbell1165
    @dylancampbell1165 2 года назад +3

    They said they wanted vengeance but they are the ones who started it!

  • @riptantorn5337
    @riptantorn5337 Год назад +2

    The story in the story is amazing.

  • @AestheticWaif
    @AestheticWaif 2 года назад +8

    Awesome! Sweet nightmares y'all!

  • @teresakirkland995
    @teresakirkland995 2 года назад +6

    Just when I needed a new vid!!

  • @Sienisota
    @Sienisota 2 года назад +2

    I don't know how I missed this story. It's great 👍

  • @VinhNguyen-mm7xi
    @VinhNguyen-mm7xi 2 года назад +2

    Nothing more shameful as a hunter than to kill more than you need and to not use every piece of it. Basically a heavy sin in the hunting community.

  • @michaelrae2497
    @michaelrae2497 2 года назад +11

    No hunter would behave that disrespectful. Hunters conserve the land harvesting for meat and not overkilling for "sport". I know it's just a story but just wanted to set the record straight. Also, if you leave carcasses lying around you will attract wolves.

  • @luxvella1598
    @luxvella1598 2 года назад +3

    This is a happy story. I'm so glad the monsters took care of those arrogant jerks. Ha Ha!

  • @shakeybill82
    @shakeybill82 2 года назад +1

    Such a satisfying ending, couldn't have happened to nicer people 🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @ldannu5627
    @ldannu5627 2 года назад +6

    Loved this!! Listened to it so intensely!! You're the best, my favorite now!

  • @rebekaheastman3279
    @rebekaheastman3279 2 года назад +8

    GOOOOO BEASTIES!!!🥳😈☠️

  • @chiefslief1886
    @chiefslief1886 Год назад +2

    Very exciting story with a natural karma return..
    Thank you❤️

  • @insekta1701
    @insekta1701 2 года назад +5

    I hate every single one of the characters.

  • @Calthrow
    @Calthrow 2 года назад +10

    Hmm 😒 I do not root for the monster offen but this time I am. I am all for hunting but to waste a kill like there guys...well they get there reward

  • @mph9493
    @mph9493 2 года назад +1

    Great story and superb narration!

  • @skrappyjon2019
    @skrappyjon2019 2 года назад +3

    Awesome story!

  • @donaldmccleary9015
    @donaldmccleary9015 2 месяца назад

    Good story and narration.
    Thanks!

  • @rickyhurtt5568
    @rickyhurtt5568 2 года назад +2

    Now I see why everyone made the comments. It's bad when people are so bad you want the creature to win

  • @andylipsco9783
    @andylipsco9783 2 года назад +3

    I hate Hunters that kill and leave the meat behind kill just for the sake of killing I've always said someone should hunt them I hunt to survive I take no pleasure in killing anyting

  • @johnwesch5926
    @johnwesch5926 2 года назад +1

    Great story. I like these kind.

  • @nicolehowell6064
    @nicolehowell6064 2 года назад +2

    It's amazing how many times cussing can be head in the narrative but a word like Bit€h can't be typed in the comments

  • @scarletlove8778
    @scarletlove8778 2 года назад

    Most awesome story and as usual amazing narration CGS!!!

  • @puca7908
    @puca7908 2 года назад +7

    Lol, as I read down through the comments, I was happy to see just about everyone commenting felt the same as I did toward these sadistic a$s hats! I don't hunt myself, but the majority of my extended family always has. The killing of the calf set me off, but then hearing how they just went on a killing spree simply for the joy of taking lives - and wasting meat after needlessly killing those animals! Well, the hunters in my family would have taken these boys "out to the woods.." and taught them it's not acceptable to abuse & waste animals! I loved the responses, especially from the hunters that commented! Great story! Excellent writing and narration! Thank you so much for this one!

  • @raymondmckinney1565
    @raymondmckinney1565 2 года назад +3

    My stupid notifications didn't go off dang.

    • @raymondmckinney1565
      @raymondmckinney1565 2 года назад +4

      The hunters in this story are bad examples of what a real hunter is . I hunted most my life and would never do the things these poor examples of humans did in the story.

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 2 года назад

      Hi ❤👋

    • @raymondmckinney1565
      @raymondmckinney1565 2 года назад

      @@sexygrandmadarkness2722 hello

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад +2

    The Waheela Wolves would be awesome Creepypasta Animals themselves in Creepypasta Land in The Creepypasta Series.

  • @friendlyman9032
    @friendlyman9032 2 года назад +1

    One of those stories that they deserve what they got..the hunters become the hunted...great story...

  • @maxxxy79
    @maxxxy79 2 года назад +4

    Great story, I just finished reading a book called the legends of the Nahanni valley in this book there is stories about the headless valley and a chapter all about the waheela. Great read

    • @VictoriaMarch13
      @VictoriaMarch13 2 года назад

      I watched an awesome video here on YT about a year ago on that whole subject. Still freaks me out. Great watch!

  • @dianaburda5292
    @dianaburda5292 2 года назад +3

    Good! Good boys

  • @christinaphx
    @christinaphx 2 года назад +2

    Thanks

  • @billydrybread8317
    @billydrybread8317 29 дней назад

    I enjoyed it very much.

  • @momof2boys437
    @momof2boys437 2 года назад +1

    Perfect ending!!

  • @certified_geek7536
    @certified_geek7536 2 года назад +2

    The last words damn lol

  • @missmiagi2147
    @missmiagi2147 2 года назад

    39:45 "SnowBallHead Fight!" Hehehe 😂⛄❄🐺😊

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 2 года назад +1

    Got My Fix, thx ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

  • @johnwesch5926
    @johnwesch5926 2 года назад

    Thank you

  • @jagofjokester1127
    @jagofjokester1127 2 года назад +3

    These are the type of guys we need in weak modern world.

  • @dianaburda5292
    @dianaburda5292 2 года назад +3

    Good poochies !

  • @evalinebetterfly1507
    @evalinebetterfly1507 2 года назад +3

    Seriously no one has been to Michigan? Ha

  • @coffeezombie6032
    @coffeezombie6032 2 года назад +1

    Oh man... what an ending

  • @hatusnee
    @hatusnee 2 года назад +1

    Justice has been served

  • @ionebarker1407
    @ionebarker1407 2 года назад

    Grate stories

  • @michaelmcdowell7096
    @michaelmcdowell7096 2 года назад

    That ending ❤️

  • @WhyteLis21
    @WhyteLis21 2 года назад +1

    Stories like these reminds me when we humans become an extinct specie, I won't feel bad for some.
    Respect nature and those around you as much as possible.
    Because, in the end, we are going to be buried in it, anyway.

  • @loripeters3133
    @loripeters3133 2 года назад +1

    Killing a wolf pup and a very young deer? How “manly” of them.

  • @justinmiller8249
    @justinmiller8249 2 года назад

    I have been a hunter since i was a small child... believe hunting so be sacred...it is very much a spiritual thing...its no small thing to take a life...life is sacred...i was taught from a young age never to kill just to kill...you kill to eat or kill for defense...you take a life to sustain your own and or your family..it is the way of nature...we as humans are still part of nature...we are not aliens to this planet....i think most people forget that or have never thought about it

  • @sydneyrose6455
    @sydneyrose6455 Месяц назад

    I felt like maybe 1 one of those so called hunters had some semblance of morals not wanting to shoot the calf but nope. I’m glad the forest spirits seemed to have gotten revenge for all the poor wildlife the ‘hunters’ killed.

  • @CNinjaa
    @CNinjaa Год назад

    lol the author sure knows how to motivate listener/reader engagment. I'm glad they're fictional characters!

  • @claireredfield6676
    @claireredfield6676 2 года назад +1

    You reap what you sow.

  • @MsNevermore19
    @MsNevermore19 2 года назад

    To the "hunters" in this tale, I say, "Good riddance to bad rubbish."

  • @MochaMela
    @MochaMela 2 года назад +2

    Jaykee the Wolf: hey, luis. this guy ripped off jefrrey lewis story telliing style, que no?
    Luis: yep. and, shamefully at thatt!!

  • @AParallelReality
    @AParallelReality 7 месяцев назад

    The guys renting the cabin were the villains and garbage humans

  • @sunandsage
    @sunandsage 6 месяцев назад

    It didn't take me very long to stop liking these guys. I have nothing against people hunting but shooting an animal then leaving it to rot?!?!

  • @nickricci19
    @nickricci19 2 года назад +1

    Who moves from Tennessee to Manitoba wtf. Good story tho

  • @novanocturn
    @novanocturn 2 года назад +4

    For the Algorithm God’s

  • @Stardust_7273
    @Stardust_7273 2 года назад

    Ugh, these guys got what they deserved. Killing for sport like this is the most horrible thing you can do, completely unnecessary and cruel 😡

  • @missdolittle
    @missdolittle 6 месяцев назад

    If guys think that killing an animal makes them manly, I got news for you. Taking an innocent unarmed creature is cowardly, far from manly.
    I wish there was a heads up that a story involves animal abuse so I can skip it.

  • @realism51
    @realism51 2 года назад

    Some should make a story about the headless men

  • @HappyJames420
    @HappyJames420 Год назад +1

    I got no problem if they had just killed one adult elk illegally for food, but as soon as the main character killed a youngin I prayed the author would kill him off at the end. 😂

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter 2 года назад +5

    Still don't understand the mindset that hunting down an animal you clearly outgun is manly 🧐

    • @sexygrandmadarkness2722
      @sexygrandmadarkness2722 2 года назад +1

      Hi ❤👋

    • @adamthompson9286
      @adamthompson9286 2 года назад +3

      I grew up hunting and surrounded by hunters; we all hunt to feed our families, not to feel manly. Cheers.

    • @loripeters3133
      @loripeters3133 2 года назад

      Talk about toxic masculinity! 🤨

  • @rebekahzwink8278
    @rebekahzwink8278 Год назад

    Insert "Goodbye Earl" here

  • @dentoncustoms
    @dentoncustoms 2 года назад

    These dudes were not hunters. They just wanted to kill and didnt have the stones to kill humans.

  • @donutpredator4945
    @donutpredator4945 2 года назад +4

    Great story even with the stupid decisions they made

  • @jeremybennett3909
    @jeremybennett3909 2 года назад

    cool

  • @robertleamon1419
    @robertleamon1419 2 года назад +2

    I could’ve gotten out of there.

  • @GarryDKing
    @GarryDKing 2 года назад +1

    A very unlikable cast of characters, pretty glad none survived.

  • @penniemanley9723
    @penniemanley9723 Год назад

    Nope 😢all done😊

  • @avionkeach2152
    @avionkeach2152 2 года назад

    40:00

  • @LuisaD93
    @LuisaD93 2 года назад +2

    😊🌹

  • @einienj3281
    @einienj3281 6 месяцев назад

    They got what they deserved

  • @josephinaalvarado6566
    @josephinaalvarado6566 2 года назад +2

    I would take out anyone who takes out my wolf brother! Masquelero Apache, we are related to wolf brother & bear sister. 😠

  • @lizzieisbaked
    @lizzieisbaked 2 года назад +1

    Lol owned

  • @goblinofsharksnacks
    @goblinofsharksnacks Год назад

    At least do research before writing about animals
    Alpha isn't a thing in wolf packs, its parents, siblings and young

  • @michaelhutchinson3877
    @michaelhutchinson3877 2 года назад

    I have NO SYMPATHY for these foul mouthed,SADISTIC Cold Blooded Poachers; Murderers! I would’ve at least Read that Bible & Prayto GOD for Protection, Forgiveness & SALVATION.