I see both sides to this arguement Louis and Harry's. But if Louis goes back to those old ways I'm scared for what is going to happen to him..He needs Harry. And I need the next chapter!! (:
Omg i feel like I wanna cry!!NOOO hellll nooo!! i need the next part asap!!! Btw you are one of my favorite writers!You are so good and talented and besides you make the story very realistic! xou are just perfect and you definitley desrve more readers! :$ Can't wait the next
I'm so on Louis' side and I don't even know why I am but OMG this story is the best thing ever. Like it's so freaking original and unlike anything I've ever read in my life and I love how you keep going with this! It's incredible! Lovely work and keep going!!xx
6:45 Ouch! THAT Part was soo rude if Louis! I think they just made each other more mad than they were and Harry originally didn't want a fight, so I'm on Harry's side, but ugh... The ending! Zayn has something really creepy about him in this story... Can't wait for the next episode!
Oh the beginning :DD i love it (: yeah, maybe i'm a bit on Harry's side, because I don't want him to get hurt, and Zayn and Louis are total assholes right now xD but on the other hand, I'm on Louis side... And I don't even know why :D I love this story, please please, keep it going, i really want you to keep this going :)
i feel like crying although Zayn is really hot in the story i still want harry an louis to be together so when he said louis back! an he had smirk on his face made wanna scream at the screen )':
Okay, I'm absolutely in love with your videos and writing. I've told a lottt of people to read/watch your videos when they ran out of written fanfics to read. A few people though told me they would rather read it on Wattpad or something like that instead of watching it. So, I was wondering if I could put your stories on Wattpad? I could write them so you wouldn't need the visuals to know who was speaking. Anyways, would this be okay with you? I would give you 100% credit for it. Let me know :)
well let's be honest...I am on louis' side why is Harry always thinking that Louis is doing something with zayn??!!!! this isn't trust at all and he was right when he told him that he didn't tell him so as him not get hurt again...why is the Hell harry isn't believing this ??? and btw GREAT EPISODE MORRRREEEE PLEEEAASE :)
oh my heart!!! i mean im on no ones side but if i were to choose it be Harry i mean he has every right to be mad and yes louis was doing it to protect him but he could of at least told him instead of Harry finding out my his bastard of a father and the comment about having Louis chase Harry oh god i want that! no zouis pleaseeeeeeeeeee lol and I'm pretty sure 60 people are reading this series because this series is AWESOME!
I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT LOUIS CARED ABOUT HARRY MORE THAN THAT. THE SMIRK AT THE END TO ZAYN, OH MY GOD. I THINK LOUIS SHOULD CHASE AFTER HARRY, JEALOUS LOUIS WOULD BE A GREAT IDEA.
Arghhhhhh they needa sort it out Lou shouldn't have lied he should explain everything to Harry his comments were a bit over the top grrrrr upload fast pleasssse love the story plz keep it going xxxx
I do love your stories, it's just hard to comment cause this iPad won't always let me :/ Hmm I'm on Louis's, Harry's kinda over reacting.... I think xD
Harry is just hurt, bt deep inside he knows that Louis ws protecting him. Here the only problem is Zayn: he still likes Lou, so he enjoys his time alone with him and is so jealous of Harry. In my opinion ZAYN SHOULD MOVE ON AND EVEN BE THE ONE TO MAKE LARRY BE TOGETHER AGAIN. If not, he's mostly a jealous character. It ws just an idea Alice, keep writing, u r good =D
tbh at first i couldn't really decide if i'm moer on Louis side or Harrys bc they are both understandable, well kind of but with the end you made me absolutly jump on harrys side, i mean wtf LOUIS!!! go after him, work things out, i want Larry, I dont want the evils to win and tbh within the last few parts i really start to unlike zayn...
I'm not in one side. But Loui should open and tell all the truth!!! It makes me so angry!! Louis didn't tell he didn't want Harry see a bad part of him. His past.. gooood!! I love this but I wanted to know how Louis felt in that moment. For the resto it's perfect.! Really...
No one side Cuz harry and Louis love each other When Harry haven't to stay away louis gonnA start missing Harry might stop doing things with Zayn idk need more I been waiting and waiting keep going
hahha i laughed more than i should at the beginning.. i mean. louis rolling on oney.. i can imagine him doing that hahhahahahahhaha :D why is zayn so happy about harry leaving? shouldn´t he be sad bc larry broke up? well.. i can understand both of them.. i mean.. i would be angry too.. but i think louis really wanted to protect harry.. so.. yeah.. idk.. they are both right.. :/ i can´t wait to read the next part bc i really wanna know what´s happening with zouis.. :D
I don't think it's Louis's or Zayn's fault and I can't believe that people hate them for what they've done. On the other hand I kind of sympathized with Harry. Everything's so confusing! :D I currently like Zouis that much so I don't mind Harry's being mad at Louis. Everybody's gonna hate me for saying that :') but it was worth it.
Right now, I'm siding with Harry. He's proven he's willing to accept Louis no matter what negatives things he is involved with. He's asked more than once for Louis to be up front with him. I think Louis was trying to protect Harry, but he has to see that even Harry can only be pushed so far. I think Harry has proven his love . . . Zayn's constant interference is irritating! His jealousy if flaring. And, what was up with Louis' smirk?
Louis should realize what he has done and should chase after Harry, not the other way, Harry has a good reason to be pissed off. Louis is being a real asshole, make him chase Harry and make him apologise .. :)
I am on noone's side They both have their rights ans wrongs. Louis is trying to protect Harry and I know he loves him but he is doing it in wrong ways because once lost trust is almost impossible to gain back and Harry is reasonable pissed off but from other side he is too stubborn to even try to understand Louis' motives. This way he pushes Louis back to Zayn because with Zayn everything is easier as Louis starts to think. So these are my thoughts. Btw my book is almost finished.
ok well, I think zayn likes Louis. But Louis likes Harry, and they are dateing still, right? well I want to know what they mean by 'Louis is back' does it mean that he will be back into doing drugs and fighting? omg I think it will be cool if Louid gets into a fight and harry finds him and takes care of him. I mean, Louis is so tough in this story right? So how bout a scene where he breaks down? I love this story!
i'm definitely on harry's side. i agree with the protecting part but what louis said was just a dick move. i hope harry doesn't chase after him. i like the other way.
I'm on Harry's side. I personally don't like Zayn very much in this story. I just feel like Zayn has been waiting for this to happen so he could get Louis back. I don't want Zouis. I want Larry. Please don't have Zayn and Louis get together. Have Louis chase after Harry. That'd be cute. If you're stuck on writing harry, maybe you can do like a filler episode that's only like four minutes long or so about Niam.... :)
im on team Louis because first off all Harry hes trying to protect you he obviously dosen't want u getting hurt in anyway and what there doing could get u hurt so calm down and realize Louis LOVES YOU.
Ahhhh. x.x I just wanna slap Zayn for what he said. I don't like that Louis. I like Louis in love and happy with Harry. Louis just had to make it worse.. iawjifaoiwj;caecfs
Omg please don't stop writing!!! Im on Harry's side cuz Louis is being a little dick I mean Harry was already pissed and Lou could've been a little nicer about it. And am I the only one who really doesn't like Zayn in this story?? Pllz don't put zouis together!! I think Lou should realized wtf he did and chase after Harry. There like Elena and Damon from the vampire diaries they complete each other by giving the other what they don't already have by themselves. Zayn just needs to move on
"we do have some respect for ourselves" low fucking blow. im on harry's side
Love this ...and I guess Harrys side because I can understand why he freaks out ...but louis ...ahhhh to be honest I don't know :c
I think Harry's just trying to defend himself. Like he said he doesn't need protection he needs trust. "He's not ten years old."
Love it!!!! I little drama is good but I still want harry and Louis to get back together MORE PLEASE YOUR KILLING ME!!!!!!!
I see both sides to this arguement Louis and Harry's. But if Louis goes back to those old ways I'm scared for what is going to happen to him..He needs Harry. And I need the next chapter!! (:
Babe trust, people are watching ! Die-hard fan right here.
This is soooo crazy pleeeeaaase update fast !!
omg what did just happend?! NOOO please dont fight. omg
Moreeeee please your killing me!!!!!!!!!
Omg i feel like I wanna cry!!NOOO hellll nooo!! i need the next part asap!!! Btw you are one of my favorite writers!You are so good and talented and besides you make the story very realistic! xou are just perfect and you definitley desrve more readers! :$ Can't wait the next
I'm so on Louis' side and I don't even know why I am but OMG this story is the best thing ever. Like it's so freaking original and unlike anything I've ever read in my life and I love how you keep going with this! It's incredible! Lovely work and keep going!!xx
6:45 Ouch! THAT Part was soo rude if Louis! I think they just made each other more mad than they were and Harry originally didn't want a fight, so I'm on Harry's side, but ugh... The ending! Zayn has something really creepy about him in this story... Can't wait for the next episode!
moreeeeee!!! I can't wait!
gurl, please keep writing! :) your stuff is so good and it shouldn't bother you if there are less comments/likes/views - whatever. You're perfect!
This is amazing
Oh the beginning :DD i love it (: yeah, maybe i'm a bit on Harry's side, because I don't want him to get hurt, and Zayn and Louis are total assholes right now xD but on the other hand, I'm on Louis side... And I don't even know why :D I love this story, please please, keep it going, i really want you to keep this going :)
YOU FINALLY UPDATED !!!! THANK YOU OH MY GOD
i feel like crying although Zayn is really hot in the story i still want harry an louis to be together so when he said louis back! an he had smirk on his face made wanna scream at the screen )':
OMG YOU CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT. Harry and Louis have to get back together. Louis can't turn bad again.
HOW CAN YOU BE SO GOOD ON MAKING THSI! GIVE ME MORE!! PLEASE
Okay, I'm absolutely in love with your videos and writing. I've told a lottt of people to read/watch your videos when they ran out of written fanfics to read. A few people though told me they would rather read it on Wattpad or something like that instead of watching it. So, I was wondering if I could put your stories on Wattpad? I could write them so you wouldn't need the visuals to know who was speaking. Anyways, would this be okay with you? I would give you 100% credit for it. Let me know :)
Ok FUCK THIS i started crying bc Harry leaving Louis! You need to fix THIS! More pleeaaaseee
OMG!! I can't wait for the next one!!
OH GOD! IM SO HAPPY YET SAD AHHH
well let's be honest...I am on louis' side
why is Harry always thinking that Louis is doing something with zayn??!!!! this isn't trust at all
and he was right when he told him that he didn't tell him so as him not get hurt again...why is the Hell harry isn't believing this ???
and btw GREAT EPISODE MORRRREEEE PLEEEAASE :)
oh my heart!!! i mean im on no ones side but if i were to choose it be Harry i mean he has every right to be mad and yes louis was doing it to protect him but he could of at least told him instead of Harry finding out my his bastard of a father and the comment about having Louis chase Harry oh god i want that! no zouis pleaseeeeeeeeeee lol and I'm pretty sure 60 people are reading this series because this series is AWESOME!
I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT LOUIS CARED ABOUT HARRY MORE THAN THAT. THE SMIRK AT THE END TO ZAYN, OH MY GOD. I THINK LOUIS SHOULD CHASE AFTER HARRY, JEALOUS LOUIS WOULD BE A GREAT IDEA.
Omg, i like this.. I like the new Louis, he's back.
Arghhhhhh they needa sort it out Lou shouldn't have lied he should explain everything to Harry his comments were a bit over the top grrrrr upload fast pleasssse love the story plz keep it going xxxx
I do love your stories, it's just hard to comment cause this iPad won't always let me :/ Hmm I'm on Louis's, Harry's kinda over reacting.... I think xD
Harry is just hurt, bt deep inside he knows that Louis ws protecting him. Here the only problem is Zayn: he still likes Lou, so he enjoys his time alone with him and is so jealous of Harry. In my opinion ZAYN SHOULD MOVE ON AND EVEN BE THE ONE TO MAKE LARRY BE TOGETHER AGAIN. If not, he's mostly a jealous character. It ws just an idea Alice, keep writing, u r good =D
tbh at first i couldn't really decide if i'm moer on Louis side or Harrys bc they are both understandable, well kind of but with the end you made me absolutly jump on harrys side, i mean wtf LOUIS!!! go after him, work things out, i want Larry, I dont want the evils to win and tbh within the last few parts i really start to unlike zayn...
I'm not in one side. But Loui should open and tell all the truth!!! It makes me so angry!! Louis didn't tell he didn't want Harry see a bad part of him. His past.. gooood!! I love this but I wanted to know how Louis felt in that moment. For the resto it's perfect.! Really...
No one side
Cuz harry and Louis love each other
When Harry haven't to stay away louis gonnA start missing Harry might stop doing things with Zayn idk need more I been waiting and waiting keep going
Please hurry and make another episode please please please with a cherrie on top :)
hahha i laughed more than i should at the beginning.. i mean. louis rolling on oney.. i can imagine him doing that hahhahahahahhaha :D why is zayn so happy about harry leaving? shouldn´t he be sad bc larry broke up? well.. i can understand both of them.. i mean.. i would be angry too.. but i think louis really wanted to protect harry.. so.. yeah.. idk.. they are both right.. :/ i can´t wait to read the next part bc i really wanna know what´s happening with zouis.. :D
We are still very much interested, don't stop writing! :D
nooooo i want harry and louis together again ughhhh whyyyyyy
I don't think it's Louis's or Zayn's fault and I can't believe that people hate them for what they've done. On the other hand I kind of sympathized with Harry. Everything's so confusing! :D I currently like Zouis that much so I don't mind Harry's being mad at Louis. Everybody's gonna hate me for saying that :') but it was worth it.
Fuck fuck is all I can say. LOUIS didn't have to be a dick and harry didn't have to go ham on his ass god. I love this story
Why are you doing this to me while I'm sick?!
Right now, I'm siding with Harry. He's proven he's willing to accept Louis no matter what negatives things he is involved with. He's asked more than once for Louis to be up front with him. I think Louis was trying to protect Harry, but he has to see that even Harry can only be pushed so far. I think Harry has proven his love . . . Zayn's constant interference is irritating! His jealousy if flaring. And, what was up with Louis' smirk?
Louis should realize what he has done and should chase after Harry, not the other way, Harry has a good reason to be pissed off. Louis is being a real asshole, make him chase Harry and make him apologise .. :)
I am on noone's side
They both have their rights ans wrongs. Louis is trying to protect Harry and I know he loves him but he is doing it in wrong ways because once lost trust is almost impossible to gain back and Harry is reasonable pissed off but from other side he is too stubborn to even try to understand Louis' motives. This way he pushes Louis back to Zayn because with Zayn everything is easier as Louis starts to think. So these are my thoughts. Btw my book is almost finished.
i love it
loved it
Nooooo they can't break up noooooooo the r to cutie together
louis sounded so rude D:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ok well, I think zayn likes Louis. But Louis likes Harry, and they are dateing still, right? well I want to know what they mean by 'Louis is back' does it mean that he will be back into doing drugs and fighting? omg I think it will be cool if Louid gets into a fight and harry finds him and takes care of him. I mean, Louis is so tough in this story right? So how bout a scene where he breaks down?
I love this story!
Jeez I meant I'm on Louis's side!!
Louis isn't being a prick... well, maybe a little but I think harry is being silly haha
Am I the only one who loves Zayn? like, lol.
Harry's side.. ugh why louis.
i'm definitely on harry's side. i agree with the protecting part but what louis said was just a dick move. i hope harry doesn't chase after him. i like the other way.
Hazza!!!!!
I'm on Harry's side. I personally don't like Zayn very much in this story. I just feel like Zayn has been waiting for this to happen so he could get Louis back. I don't want Zouis. I want Larry. Please don't have Zayn and Louis get together. Have Louis chase after Harry. That'd be cute. If you're stuck on writing harry, maybe you can do like a filler episode that's only like four minutes long or so about Niam.... :)
Why are you mean man!!!!!!!
please dont keep there fight long xx
Omg...
That photo is going to come and bite them in the ass just watch
OMFG
OMG OMG OMG
im on team Louis because first off all Harry hes trying to protect you he obviously dosen't want u getting hurt in anyway and what there doing could get u hurt so calm down and realize Louis LOVES YOU.
Ahhhh. x.x I just wanna slap Zayn for what he said. I don't like that Louis. I like Louis in love and happy with Harry. Louis just had to make it worse.. iawjifaoiwj;caecfs
Louis is actually makeing sense i'm on his side
Omg please don't stop writing!!! Im on Harry's side cuz Louis is being a little dick I mean Harry was already pissed and Lou could've been a little nicer about it. And am I the only one who really doesn't like Zayn in this story?? Pllz don't put zouis together!! I think Lou should realized wtf he did and chase after Harry. There like Elena and Damon from the vampire diaries they complete each other by giving the other what they don't already have by themselves. Zayn just needs to move on
Totally on Lou's side right now.