As a screenwriting and writing teacher, I focus on the positive and the pragmatic: Watching a clip like this is a waste of time because it's keeping you from focusing on your story, your characters, the organic development of your plot - Just focus on plot as a way to solve your Hero's psychological/moral weaknesses and your plot will evolve as your character's Desire/Goal evolves. Just focus on moral dilemma; moral choices that your Hero and Opponents constantly make as your story unravels to the Climax/Battle. Get to where you dream about your characters and their arc the story is developing. Get through the process; sequence the actions/reveals and sequence the entire story line. And finally, start to write. When you've crafted a great story, you will know it. It will sell.
every writer has a unique story and personal experience with the business. The idea is Write, rewrite (as needed) and send it out, and keep doing it again and again. Perseverance and knowledge are main ingredients. You have to love the process! Even Shakespeare was rejected !!
Much of this video is eye opening and informative. A decent chunk of it speaks to making and cultivating connections to get your finished product in front of decision makers. Most writers are introverted, and shy from the marketing aspect of their work. I assume most writers don't live in L.A., so this video confirms to me that the one foolproof way to succeed is to write things that are better than anything out there, get your finished projects into competitions to generate exposure, and keep grinding (and maybe find representation using your world-class writing). It's just that simple - or difficult, depending on your point of view. Seems simple to me because ultimately, it's all about the undying passion of creating compelling content.
I think that the message of the first script has not been constructively given on this video - I do understand what they're saying about finding the voice and it will take time - there have been success stories - so please everyone who wants to be a scriptwriter here do not give up on your dream / work hard and let your talent shine x
Chris, we do appreciate you taking time to comment. Like to hear more because it is not our aim to discourage anyone. We've all been discouraged by people (some well-meaning and some with agendas who just want to shoot a poisoned arrow). For the future reference, how can we have a more encouraging but truthful video series without as you say "snobby elitism," but a helpful dose of skepticism instead? Telling someone the journey will be difficult and put time in to do research is what we thought was conveyed? No? If no, our apologies. How was this misconstrued?
RUclips comments are a snake pit of mediocre, immature people. They snipe and cry anytime you don't tell them what they want to hear. Things like perseverence and hard work don't seem to appeal to a lot of them.
Don't worry about it, reading the comments here most people never studied writing, never read the Screenwriters Bible or the Writers Market nor have they searched for an agent. You have entered the Twilight Zone
So much negativity. Sounds very clickish. I don't believe it. If a good story is rejected because it's a first script, I would fire the person who canned it!
Exactly, the tone of the beginning of this video is super negative. It's almost telling us to just lose hope in our first script. What if we write a captivating story and it does sell? It is a possibility.
Here are two videos / stories we have captured since putting this video together "Story Of A Six-Figure Sale Of A First Screenplay" ruclips.net/video/BlAf3_Lap3A/видео.html & "How I Wrote My First Script In 3 Weeks And Sold It To A Hollywood Studio" ruclips.net/video/jzuP4X0t2TA/видео.html
I think what they meant by it was that you need to polish your work because it might not have all the basic characteristics like capitalization or sensible character change in action or dialogue that readers and agents want. It can be taken as negative but I think what they are emphasizing is just be realistic with your expectations. You can write it but it's not up to you whether you get paid for it. It's up to whether a production company wants to buy it!
Robert Puleo That was wonderful, Robert! Thanks for posting. You're right. It's so easy to get cynical with all the discouraging encouragement (if that makes sense) from the video that perspective screenwriters are getting here. Got to just stay the course, put together a story you deeply care about, put it out there, and see what happens. =)
It took me a year to write my first screenplay. It is not a masterpiece, but it is better than most of the junk I see on Netflix and the other movie channels. At least I tried to say something about the human condition beyond just entertaining people. It took a lot of effort and diligence to write that manuscript. And regardless of what anyone else thinks of it, or whether it ever gets produced, I sure as hell would never have finished it if I had thought of it as "just an intellectual exercise."
Jerry Roe I agree with you 100%. If that's true then somebody tell me why do so many shit films are out there, movies that shouldnt even be made. I'm making my first, and I think it's ten times better than the movies that are coming up now.
It's definitely rare, unlikely, not impossible-Sylvester Stallone wrote "Rocky" in 3 days. Was offered a diveristy of offers. I'd believe he'd put his belief in his screenplay and we know the rest..
Diablo Cody wasn't a first time writer though. Also, a "writer selling their first script" headline is often a P.R. stunt by the manager to make the writer look naturally gifted.
The difference between me and those dudes in the beginning is that their first scripts stories were trash . I have a great idea for a series which I will put 100% into creating and I will sell it as my first
Probably the most edifying compendium of scholarship ever assembled on the fundament upon which the art of film is shrugged or architected. It's like reminding the audience that classical ballet is predicated upon the ballet barre. Most audiences haven't a clue that those utterances are derived of the writer's soul. This spectacular video clip belongs in the annals of film academia. I hold a Master's degree in film/Tv and I had never had quite this arc of wisdom in one place, so simply, so generously offered, so FREE. Bravissima!! - Godfrey Silas
Godfrey Silas You put that into words much better than we ever could. That was fun to read! We're glad you stumbled upon the video and we're just as grateful to have you take the time to comment. Please keep writing.
Way to discourage new writers! Best way to keep your role where you are, I guess! You can absolutely sell your first script, if it is very good. Just like any script. Make it as good as it can be!
Sure tell them it will be hard, but if you put the work in, do your research, make numerous drafts, and network well, there is no reason that a first script can't be a success. Honesty is fine, but outright discouraging new writers should not be the desired impact of these videos. People wont finish scripts, or put a full effort into a project that they believe is doomed to fail from the outset. I appreciate the work that is put into this series, but this was screenwriting snobby elitism at its worst. I hate to say it.
Abdul J Thanks Adbul. We're certainly proud of the way this came out. Great to see others enjoying and benefiting from it. What other topics would you like to see us do like this?
Film Courage I'd be open to all and any if I'm honest. It comes off as if this was the way it was supposed to be edited to begin with! The format lends itself to a better viewing/listening experience too imo. But obviously I can appreciate how time-consuming and difficult it must be to have it come out right and realistically these are probs one-offs. Good job once again, anyway!
Come prepared with at least with six projects, this way your chances increase. Write from the heart. There is no one like you. Don't follow trends, but follow your heart.
Reading between the lines, never say it's your first script and have some other work to back it up. Oh also studying the art of screenwriting and write... a lot.
Love the end - Richard Walter's comment. Reminds me of the mentor character turning back a protagonist. Of course in most feature film that only creates more determination in the protagonist.
My take away was that one should write the best first screenplay you can, then write a few more -- build a portfolio to offer immediately upon any agent/studio/actor or actress interest. Be prepared at a moments notice to deliver samples of your work -- your calling card, your voice. Keep writing. Never let the bastards grind you down. NO is an opportunity to learn and improve. YES is an opportunity to learn, improve, and build more relationships. Always be learning. No response is not a NO, it is an invitation to ask again. Move to L.A. to build face to face connections, and/or use social media if you want/have to live elsewhere. It is truly "who you know" -- be known. Prepare yourself mentally for rejection and for success -- have an inner plan and motivation for your outer objectives. Write every day, hone your craft: "Love all, trust few, do good"; be the best you can be in all areas of self. Stay positive, forgive yourself, and always keep trying until they pry your pens from your cold dead hands. Good luck!
It can be done. We made this video years ago before we had spoken with anyone who had sold their first screenplay. Overall the message of this video is that for the majority of writers their first script sale is not the first script they wrote. Here is the story of a writer who sold his first screenplay - ruclips.net/video/jzuP4X0t2TA/видео.html
It's all Bs, these people are just connected to someone to a "producer" or something, I've written a couple of movies, and the people I've tried to worked have done everything to discourage me from working and selling them, and they weren't even in the Industry, they were screenwriters and editors. These people do these videos to discourage aspiring writers and artists.
Patrick Fox Perfect! You are one of the ones we made this video for. Hopefully it gives you some motivation to work on your craft and enjoy the process.
Film Courage And I am glad you make these videos. It's because of your videos I sent my Screenplay to a consultant. Got really good feedback and now working on making my screenplay better. It does give me plenty of motivation and I love writing and learning. You guys really make great videos and really help out writers and film makers. Thank you.
Patrick Fox Great news on the positive feedback. That has to feel good. What is the main question you have about screenwriting, whether creative or business?
Simply Scripts only has completed screenplays with all the camera directions on them. Are there any raw like scripts that I can read? Ones before all the editing?
You are welcome. We love being able to put these kinds of videos together. That's what we're trying to do, give you a little more perspective. Well put.
Really enjoyed the documentary! I think I learned a thing or two from this. But I have question- I have a bunch of spec screenplays (Action/Scifi, Thriller/Horror,Myth,etc), but I live in Belgium, so networking or going out and trying to meet the right people is a no go. Any advice on what may be the best approach to get representation or my screenplays out there(companies/agencies,or interesting sites)? Again, Loved the documentary!
Maybe try sending your scripts out to competitions after you copyright them; hopefully if they win some awards, agents/managers will be open to flying you out for proper meetings
I always hear writers say "read scripts", but where do u get them? I can find maybe a dozen online but if I wanted to read one script (old or new, that's good) where would I go to find these?
Hi Maurice, there are a lot of sites that have scripts... maybe start with www.imsdb.com - You can also try Script O Rama and Simply Scripts (looks like those sites are still up and running)
It's not easy as they say, I have more than 20 scripts I went to Disney studios they don't want to see my work or pay attention to my self. I went to film festival and no one wants to talk to you if you are not famous
Hi i have a question to ask. As a beginner professional screenplay writer how much money can we demand for our screenplay if it gets selected or is this is decided by the producer how much to pay to a beginner writer and can we negotiate the deal as well? Waiting for your response Thank you
This is disconcerting. The theme keeps repeating “it’s who you know” - but we also know it’s “who you’re willing to sleep with” - I have and will continue to write, but my integrity may keep me and my stories out of Hollywood. Time will tell ;)
Just my opinion: I'm in Act 3 of my life and gearing up to write again....To protect my future works I'm adapting screenplay to book and publishing my stories first. I was warned several times that Hollywood is a very close knit community and doors are not so easily open to agents and producers... Maybe Hollywood Studios should open the door to creators and cut $$ deals with them to pitch only and then turn over these projects to their more experienced film writers. Ideas cannot hold copyright...just saying.
Act 3. Time to get what you want, eh? All the very best with it. I'm just starting out , but then again, I didn't attend a university until I was 39. It's never too late, unless you're dead.
Excuse me can you tell me how and where can I make a book? Me and my sons also have many scripts done and want to film, but we first want to make a book. Thanks
noe gomez When I wrote "Samuel Tilden the Real 19th President" book, I used the screenplay I wrote as an outline to guide me through each chapter. I worked for a small publisher for several years and learned a lot about the industry from them. Google these words "Bascs in Publishing" and it should bring up several websites with how to information. :)
i've lost track of the scripts I wrote, my first script was a crappy holocaust film, 13 or 16 scripts later my first one is awful, my newest scripts is called Felidae and no i don't mean from 94, it's a found footage horror script and it kicks ass.
Hey I'm 15 and I'm looking to become a film maker in the future. I'm still learning how to write and format screenplays and I was wondering if I could read anyone's scripts just to get an idea of what most screenplays are like
Garrett Popejoy Go to Simply Scripts and find a PDF screenplay. Try and find a more recent movie that's not written by a director, that should give you a great insight on flow, framing devices and overall tone of today's scripts.
i dont agree with contests. I doubt scripts such as pulp fiction or sling blade would place on those contests, considering how unconventionally written those scripts are. An idiot reader would probably pick up those scripts and say "this is proposperous, the blocks of dialogue.. just ridiculous.. who would make this? hahahahah" Then those same scripts they rejected end up winning oscars.
Why are they all so negative? They keep saying that they don’t know anyone who sold their first script. They must not have heard anything about Sylvester Stallone and how he sold his first script for “Rocky” (1976)
@Dariuswilliams if that is submit them to competitions. you can copy write them at wga.org, but if you want them read and known and possibly passed to someone who has the slightest bit of "power", submit.
I get really discouraged when i hear "its about who you know not what you know". Why it is always like that? I mean EVERYWHERE... so what about brilliant people who live faraway from LA and have no connection in the Hollywood world? should they quit ? Should I quit just because I live in a small city in a small state ?
This is negative talk from the cut throat Hollywood self preservationist. Just think about all of the uninteresting, boring crap on TV . Writing is a artform and every artist is different. So why should I write the way someone else writes simply because their script was purchased? Just work hard and stay consistent. Selling your first script is irrelevant.
I watched for the first 9 minutes.. what I got out of it, other than negativity is... the film industry seems to resemble the structure of America... "good old boys club" not willing to embrace change, stuck in it's own way... but if we would have asked these same people in 2007 if a black man runs for president, would he stand a chance... all these same people on camera would have said.. no, no way .. not the first one, maybe the 9th or 10th black person could succeed but never the first one.... moral of the story is, if it's great its great... PERIOD..
Reading the comments here I'm guessing half of you never trained. These writers aren't negative. They are truthful. They've been there. They sold, still, they have a day job... That makes you wonder why they're advising you to concentrate mainly on your work, not the sale. The spelling here sets my teeth on edge as well 😭 Confidence is great, but not when gift wrapped in mediocrity. Sorry amigos
I was recently nominated for 'Best Screenplay' for my first script in the 2015 Hoboken International Film Festival. Check it out! facebook . com / 1.7AlphaMovie
Bottom line: if you don't know anyone, you probably won't sell anything. It's not impossible, but very difficult especially if your script is not exceptional. saved 1 hour.. so go write.
"I literally dont know anybody , literally anybody to sell the first script ".......last night i was told they sold their first script .....but that was so long ago ....honestly how pointless ....seen enough vids here of people that have , work hard, follow the rules ,write with passion , get it into the right hands and you will succeed
really... sharknado? how the hell does that idea even get one word on paper, watch a movie called rubber, first five seconds you'll see how even a stupid idea can make a movie. people here are so negative and seems like they have a click they discourage others to join.
this reminds me of almost making your first scrip A THESIS......... I am writing a few scripts but....I'll never say their my first.... Thunder Levin is adorable....................
Practice makes perfect Start with the bathroom mirror And if you win enough screenwriting awards, representation might want to reach out to you instead of vice-versa
I'm thinking "Uncharted", "Silent Hill", etc. Of course, that is a good market, I suppose, and to me it's growing. You still have to work within the premise of the actual video game. That means game programmers, producers, and graphic artists are all part of that beginning process before they even need a writer. Once it gets to that point, it's the same as anything else. They probably give out a call for writers to write the script. It goes on from there, so there may be lots of rewrites before it actually makes it to the VG. there are actors, sound engineers, directors, sound studios, etc before it's a completed project.
I have 9 treatments to include children's and comedy TV show, a horror and suspense movie, and juicy love triangle. :). Hopefully one will get picked up. Positive Vibes!!
I liked Richard Walters advice the best, don't write the screenplay TRYING to sell it. That will ruin all sense of creativity. These other people are almost telling you the opposite which is annoying as hell. Working on scripts over and over until they seem like they're what hollywood is looking for sounds like the formula to make another shit blockbuster that everyone outside the production office knows is gonna be shit or bomb completely. Hollywood's arrogance is infuriating, they are still mostly just a bunch of old (not gonna mention race but we all know it starts with a J) people who are so out of touch with society they didn't even realize Asians could make movies that weren't about Kung Fu till about last week.
Don't let anyone tell you ,you wont sell your script blàhblàh Believe in yourself,God has a way of doing things,it might not have sold their first script that don't mean it's going to be the same for you
It happens, but very rare. And who did Donald know? How did he get his script in front of someone? How did he hone his craft? Did he go to college for being a writer? How much did he write before that? How long did it take for him to actually sell that script? Someone can say, "Yes, they sold their first script right off the bat". However, i"m sure it's a 1 out of 2,000,000 chance your are going to do that as a first time writer. It's definitely not the norm, but can happen.
ET. Is the easiest read ever. But no script is "holy shit" awesome to read. It's just little bits of ink on a white piece of paper. and the first studio turned down ET .. it was a pass... but in competent hands it was THE highest earning film ever (at 4% inflation). some people like Scripts. but it's random. The dumbest script in the world (not bad just not great) will seem really awesome to somebody who likes movies about clowns who kill people, or just really interested in a kid who hast to move several times but eventually finds a young love interest ... If you like the genre, you might love the script but there's no guarantee. So it's a business of log lines, if they even let you in the business, do you have a grandmother that used to live in Europe? Maybe you could be in Hollywood.
Darius you need to get an agent first. They are the gatekeepers. An agent will help sell you scripts to the studios if they are really good and have potential. So start with an agent. Good luck.
What a bunch of crybabies .. Humans are supposed to be showing us how you do it what crybaby crybaby about the bad stuff you got let’s not let us know what’s happening come on spill the beans
This is just negative bullshit. Why should anyone try to be a screenwriter listening to this crap? If Film Courage's goal is to stop people from entering the business, this video is great towards that end.
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As a screenwriting and writing teacher, I focus on the positive and the pragmatic: Watching a clip like this is a waste of time because it's keeping you from focusing on your story, your characters, the organic development of your plot - Just focus on plot as a way to solve your Hero's psychological/moral weaknesses and your plot will evolve as your character's Desire/Goal evolves. Just focus on moral dilemma; moral choices that your Hero and Opponents constantly make as your story unravels to the Climax/Battle. Get to where you dream about your characters and their arc the story is developing. Get through the process; sequence the actions/reveals and sequence the entire story line. And finally, start to write. When you've crafted a great story, you will know it. It will sell.
62flamenco I agree
💯 agreed, you'd must believe 💯
What if you've done all of that and now you're ready to sell it?
Exactly
every writer has a unique story and personal experience with the business. The idea is Write, rewrite (as needed) and send it out, and keep doing it again and again. Perseverance and knowledge are main ingredients. You have to love the process! Even Shakespeare was rejected !!
im gonna try to sell my first screenplay anyway
Go strong brother
Did ya do it?
That’s the attitude 👍
Never give up on your dreams I’m on your side no matter how long it takes
I've done it
I feel conflicted about taking advice from the writer of Sharknado lmao
Who is it?😂. The movie was so bad so if something like that gets maid, everything is possible
@@CrazyBoy-zu5ox exactly! Some movies in Hollywood make me ask one simple question. "How?"
I mean they did manage to sell it
It probably went this way:
I made this shit
Why should I buy this shit?
REVERSE UNO CARD
This shit is so bad it's funny. Funny is good.
SOLD.
@@LAdiartos you clearly didn't watch carefully then. He explained exactly how it went down.
I written 44 screenplays period!!!! #I love writing screenplays, this all I got!!
+Darius Willams What do you plan to do with all of those scripts?
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I will sell my first script
roger8654 me too, if you need a reader, let me know email me Gmarylan92@gmail.com
***** thanks, you'll be the first person I send it to.
가사 시나리오 작가/프로판 늑대 하나님 that is the idea. You want people to steal them.
Good luck my friend
roger8654 let's do it!
Much of this video is eye opening and informative. A decent chunk of it speaks to making and cultivating connections to get your finished product in front of decision makers. Most writers are introverted, and shy from the marketing aspect of their work. I assume most writers don't live in L.A., so this video confirms to me that the one foolproof way to succeed is to write things that are better than anything out there, get your finished projects into competitions to generate exposure, and keep grinding (and maybe find representation using your world-class writing). It's just that simple - or difficult, depending on your point of view. Seems simple to me because ultimately, it's all about the undying passion of creating compelling content.
I think that the message of the first script has not been constructively given on this video - I do understand what they're saying about finding the voice and it will take time - there have been success stories - so please everyone who wants to be a scriptwriter here do not give up on your dream / work hard and let your talent shine x
Chris, we do appreciate you taking time to comment. Like to hear more because it is not our aim to discourage anyone. We've all been discouraged by people (some well-meaning and some with agendas who just want to shoot a poisoned arrow). For the future reference, how can we have a more encouraging but truthful video series without as you say "snobby elitism," but a helpful dose of skepticism instead?
Telling someone the journey will be difficult and put time in to do research is what we thought was conveyed? No? If no, our apologies. How was this misconstrued?
RUclips comments are a snake pit of mediocre, immature people. They snipe and cry anytime you don't tell them what they want to hear. Things like perseverence and hard work don't seem to appeal to a lot of them.
Don't worry about it, reading the comments here most people never studied writing, never read the Screenwriters Bible or the Writers Market nor have they searched for an agent. You have entered the Twilight Zone
So much negativity. Sounds very clickish. I don't believe it. If a good story is rejected because it's a first script, I would fire the person who canned it!
Exactly, the tone of the beginning of this video is super negative. It's almost telling us to just lose hope in our first script. What if we write a captivating story and it does sell? It is a possibility.
Here are two videos / stories we have captured since putting this video together "Story Of A Six-Figure Sale Of A First Screenplay" ruclips.net/video/BlAf3_Lap3A/видео.html & "How I Wrote My First Script In 3 Weeks And Sold It To A Hollywood Studio" ruclips.net/video/jzuP4X0t2TA/видео.html
And......don't forget Harry Potter.
I think what they meant by it was that you need to polish your work because it might not have all the basic characteristics like capitalization or sensible character change in action or dialogue that readers and agents want. It can be taken as negative but I think what they are emphasizing is just be realistic with your expectations. You can write it but it's not up to you whether you get paid for it. It's up to whether a production company wants to buy it!
Robert Puleo That was wonderful, Robert! Thanks for posting. You're right. It's so easy to get cynical with all the discouraging encouragement (if that makes sense) from the video that perspective screenwriters are getting here. Got to just stay the course, put together a story you deeply care about, put it out there, and see what happens. =)
It took me a year to write my first screenplay. It is not a masterpiece, but it is better than most of the junk I see on Netflix and the other movie channels. At least I tried to say something about the human condition beyond just entertaining people. It took a lot of effort and diligence to write that manuscript. And regardless of what anyone else thinks of it, or whether it ever gets produced, I sure as hell would never have finished it if I had thought of it as "just an intellectual exercise."
Jerry Roe
I agree with you 100%. If that's true then somebody tell me why do so many shit films are out there, movies that shouldnt even be made. I'm making my first, and I think it's ten times better than the movies that are coming up now.
I completely believe that your screenplay/film is better than what's out there. It's the industry, not the "new" writers who are screwed up.
A good script is a good script...period, don’t let ppl kill your hope
Facts
It's definitely rare, unlikely, not impossible-Sylvester Stallone wrote "Rocky" in 3 days. Was offered a diveristy of offers. I'd believe he'd put his belief in his screenplay and we know the rest..
Super bad was Seth Rogen first screenplay, it just wasn't his first one made into a film, so it has definitely happened
What about Diablo Cody (Juno) and Jonathan Perera (Miss Sloane). Not saying one should expect it right off the bat, but it's not impossible.
Diablo Cody wasn't a first time writer though. Also, a "writer selling their first script" headline is often a P.R. stunt by the manager to make the writer look naturally gifted.
Cody had a popular blog already when she did Juno. Her large fan base is a large part on why she was given a chance
The difference between me and those dudes in the beginning is that their first scripts stories were trash . I have a great idea for a series which I will put 100% into creating and I will sell it as my first
Probably the most edifying compendium of scholarship ever assembled on the fundament upon which the art of film is shrugged or architected. It's like reminding the audience that classical ballet is predicated upon the ballet barre. Most audiences haven't a clue that those utterances are derived of the writer's soul. This spectacular video clip belongs in the annals of film academia. I hold a Master's degree in film/Tv and I had never had quite this arc of wisdom in one place, so simply, so generously offered, so FREE. Bravissima!!
- Godfrey Silas
Godfrey Silas You put that into words much better than we ever could. That was fun to read! We're glad you stumbled upon the video and we're just as grateful to have you take the time to comment. Please keep writing.
+Film Courage eddyvalenzuela
Godfrey Silas simplify your language. You're trying to hard.
Godfrey Silas j
Tongue in cheek?
Way to discourage new writers! Best way to keep your role where you are, I guess!
You can absolutely sell your first script, if it is very good. Just like any script. Make it as good as it can be!
Rather tell the truth and prepare people or no? What was your experience like selling your first, second or third script?
Sure tell them it will be hard, but if you put the work in, do your research, make numerous drafts, and network well, there is no reason that a first script can't be a success.
Honesty is fine, but outright discouraging new writers should not be the desired impact of these videos. People wont finish scripts, or put a full effort into a project that they believe is doomed to fail from the outset.
I appreciate the work that is put into this series, but this was screenwriting snobby elitism at its worst. I hate to say it.
This is fantastic. Great to see all the pieces put together like this.
Abdul J Thanks Adbul. We're certainly proud of the way this came out. Great to see others enjoying and benefiting from it. What other topics would you like to see us do like this?
Film Courage I'd be open to all and any if I'm honest. It comes off as if this was the way it was supposed to be edited to begin with! The format lends itself to a better viewing/listening experience too imo. But obviously I can appreciate how time-consuming and difficult it must be to have it come out right and realistically these are probs one-offs. Good job once again, anyway!
Come prepared with at least with six projects, this way your chances increase. Write from the heart. There is no one like you. Don't follow trends, but follow your heart.
I've been writing for 30 years and wrote about four scripts. Took 30 years to master this shit. Damn!
Reading between the lines, never say it's your first script and have some other work to back it up. Oh also studying the art of screenwriting and write... a lot.
@14:38 is the crux of it. It just has to be undeniably excellent to have any shot.
Follow your dreams guys, Orson Wells, James Cameron did it and Jordan Peele is another good example. Work your ass off and create your own luck.
Love the end - Richard Walter's comment. Reminds me of the mentor character turning back a protagonist. Of course in most feature film that only creates more determination in the protagonist.
Well if the odds are against writers at this rate then maybe we should be talking more about how to raise the funds to get it made yourself.
My take away was that one should write the best first screenplay you can, then write a few more -- build a portfolio to offer immediately upon any agent/studio/actor or actress interest. Be prepared at a moments notice to deliver samples of your work -- your calling card, your voice. Keep writing. Never let the bastards grind you down. NO is an opportunity to learn and improve. YES is an opportunity to learn, improve, and build more relationships. Always be learning. No response is not a NO, it is an invitation to ask again. Move to L.A. to build face to face connections, and/or use social media if you want/have to live elsewhere. It is truly "who you know" -- be known. Prepare yourself mentally for rejection and for success -- have an inner plan and motivation for your outer objectives. Write every day, hone your craft: "Love all, trust few, do good"; be the best you can be in all areas of self. Stay positive, forgive yourself, and always keep trying until they pry your pens from your cold dead hands. Good luck!
So negative, I'm going to sell my first screenplay.....it's going to happen. 💖
It can be done. We made this video years ago before we had spoken with anyone who had sold their first screenplay. Overall the message of this video is that for the majority of writers their first script sale is not the first script they wrote. Here is the story of a writer who sold his first screenplay - ruclips.net/video/jzuP4X0t2TA/видео.html
You can do it! This was 5 years ago... so many streaming platforms have evolved/been created
It's all Bs, these people are just connected to someone to a "producer" or something, I've written a couple of movies, and the people I've tried to worked have done everything to discourage me from working and selling them, and they weren't even in the Industry, they were screenwriters and editors. These people do these videos to discourage aspiring writers and artists.
An excellent video and some fantastic advice.
Patrick Fox Thanks Patrick. We haven't looked it up, are you a screenwriter or filmmaker?
Film Courage
A screenwriter. Working on my first screenplay now.
Patrick Fox Perfect! You are one of the ones we made this video for. Hopefully it gives you some motivation to work on your craft and enjoy the process.
Film Courage
And I am glad you make these videos. It's because of your videos I sent my Screenplay to a consultant. Got really good feedback and now working on making my screenplay better.
It does give me plenty of motivation and I love writing and learning. You guys really make great videos and really help out writers and film makers. Thank you.
Patrick Fox Great news on the positive feedback. That has to feel good. What is the main question you have about screenwriting, whether creative or business?
Simply Scripts only has completed screenplays with all the camera directions on them. Are there any raw like scripts that I can read? Ones before all the editing?
There's so much hustle involved. Sucks if you're shy
This first guy is so funny without even meaning to be. Love him.
Damn that guy was working as an AD and writing at the same time? how da heck do you do that working 75 hr weeks. Only on the weekends?
Thank you so much for the excellent video. I like when you do a montage of the different testimonies. It gives PERSPECTIVE.
You are welcome. We love being able to put these kinds of videos together. That's what we're trying to do, give you a little more perspective. Well put.
really great information and very insightful.
thanks for putting this together
Thank Autumn, this is one we'd like to update. Hopefully we can do that sooner than later.
Times change my friends...believe in your art, I’m gonna sell the first script I ever wrote after I sell the second one I wrote.....think about that
Soooo how cha doin?
They're being realistic. I think this is very good advice.
REALLY enjoyed this video. Tons of relevant info. Soldier on!!
Learn from the writer of "Sharknado" - why do I get the feeling I should be aiming higher?
Really enjoyed the documentary! I think I learned a thing or two from this. But I have question- I have a bunch of spec screenplays (Action/Scifi, Thriller/Horror,Myth,etc), but I live in Belgium, so networking or going out and trying to meet the right people is a no go. Any advice on what may be the best approach to get representation or my screenplays out there(companies/agencies,or interesting sites)? Again, Loved the documentary!
Maybe try sending your scripts out to competitions after you copyright them; hopefully if they win some awards, agents/managers will be open to flying you out for proper meetings
The order of emotions
I always hear writers say "read scripts", but where do u get them? I can find maybe a dozen online but if I wanted to read one script (old or new, that's good) where would I go to find these?
Hi Maurice, there are a lot of sites that have scripts... maybe start with www.imsdb.com - You can also try Script O Rama and Simply Scripts (looks like those sites are still up and running)
So what I've gathered is, this is a compilation of a bunch of writers who either have never made a real movie, or never made a good movie.
Tayler Sheridan did it!!
It's not easy as they say, I have more than 20 scripts I went to Disney studios they don't want to see my work or pay attention to my self. I went to film festival and no one wants to talk to you if you are not famous
Thank You So much for this video. Owe you. +film courage
Hi i have a question to ask. As a beginner professional screenplay writer how much money can we demand for our screenplay if it gets selected or is this is decided by the producer how much to pay to a beginner writer and can we negotiate the deal as well? Waiting for your response
Thank you
This is disconcerting. The theme keeps repeating “it’s who you know” - but we also know it’s “who you’re willing to sleep with” - I have and will continue to write, but my integrity may keep me and my stories out of Hollywood. Time will tell ;)
14:45 best inspiration ever 😍
I don't anyone would be screenwriter after watching this.
Just my opinion: I'm in Act 3 of my life and gearing up to write again....To protect my future works I'm adapting screenplay to book and publishing my stories first. I was warned several times that Hollywood is a very close knit community and doors are not so easily open to agents and producers... Maybe Hollywood Studios should open the door to creators and cut $$ deals with them to pitch only and then turn over these projects to their more experienced film writers. Ideas cannot hold copyright...just saying.
Act 3. Time to get what you want, eh? All the very best with it.
I'm just starting out , but then again, I didn't attend a university until I was 39. It's never too late, unless you're dead.
Excuse me can you tell me how and where can I make a book? Me and my sons also have many scripts done and want to film, but we first want to make a book. Thanks
noe gomez When I wrote "Samuel Tilden the Real 19th President" book, I used the screenplay I wrote as an outline to guide me through each chapter. I worked for a small publisher for several years and learned a lot about the industry from them. Google these words "Bascs in Publishing" and it should bring up several websites with how to information. :)
+Nikki Oldaker thanks god bless
So basically make a kick ass screenplay and sell yourself ! I feel that
How do I make contacts in Hollywood when I'm in New Hampshire>\?
Lots of good info thanks
Good advice. Thanks.
Any body sold a first script here or at least tried?
i've lost track of the scripts I wrote, my first script was a crappy holocaust film, 13 or 16 scripts later my first one is awful, my newest scripts is called Felidae and no i don't mean from 94, it's a found footage horror script and it kicks ass.
Hey I'm 15 and I'm looking to become a film maker in the future. I'm still learning how to write and format screenplays and I was wondering if I could read anyone's scripts just to get an idea of what most screenplays are like
Garrett Popejoy Go to Simply Scripts and find a PDF screenplay. Try and find a more recent movie that's not written by a director, that should give you a great insight on flow, framing devices and overall tone of today's scripts.
i dont agree with contests. I doubt scripts such as pulp fiction or sling blade would place on those contests, considering how unconventionally written those scripts are. An idiot reader would probably pick up those scripts and say "this is proposperous, the blocks of dialogue.. just ridiculous.. who would make this? hahahahah"
Then those same scripts they rejected end up winning oscars.
Which production company should I sell my screenplay?
Why are they all so negative? They keep saying that they don’t know anyone who sold their first script. They must not have heard anything about Sylvester Stallone and how he sold his first script for “Rocky” (1976)
@Dariuswilliams if that is submit them to competitions. you can copy write them at wga.org, but if you want them read and known and possibly passed to someone who has the slightest bit of "power", submit.
anyone know how to contact directors or big film companies
Win indie/festival awards, it gains people’s attention
I get really discouraged when i hear "its about who you know not what you know". Why it is always like that? I mean EVERYWHERE... so what about brilliant people who live faraway from LA and have no connection in the Hollywood world? should they quit ? Should I quit just because I live in a small city in a small state ?
Send your writing to competitions after you copyright them. If you win enough awards, representation might want to meet with you afterward
This is negative talk from the cut throat Hollywood self preservationist. Just think about all of the uninteresting, boring crap on TV . Writing is a artform and every artist is different. So why should I write the way someone else writes simply because their script was purchased? Just work hard and stay consistent. Selling your first script is irrelevant.
thank you for having women's POVs!
I watched for the first 9 minutes.. what I got out of it, other than negativity is... the film industry seems to resemble the structure of America... "good old boys club" not willing to embrace change, stuck in it's own way... but if we would have asked these same people in 2007 if a black man runs for president, would he stand a chance... all these same people on camera would have said.. no, no way .. not the first one, maybe the 9th or 10th black person could succeed but never the first one.... moral of the story is, if it's great its great... PERIOD..
Reading the comments here I'm guessing half of you never trained. These writers aren't negative. They are truthful. They've been there. They sold, still, they have a day job... That makes you wonder why they're advising you to concentrate mainly on your work, not the sale. The spelling here sets my teeth on edge as well 😭 Confidence is great, but not when gift wrapped in mediocrity. Sorry amigos
I was recently nominated for 'Best Screenplay' for my first script in the 2015 Hoboken International Film Festival. Check it out! facebook . com / 1.7AlphaMovie
Hello Myron Davis. Iam a sreenwriter too. Nice 2 meet u. Can make friend with me to improve screenwritting skill.
Bottom line: if you don't know anyone, you probably won't sell anything. It's not impossible, but very difficult especially if your script is not exceptional.
saved 1 hour.. so go write.
Markus Redmon sold his first script
"I literally dont know anybody , literally anybody to sell the first script ".......last night i was told they sold their first script .....but that was so long ago ....honestly how pointless ....seen enough vids here of people that have , work hard, follow the rules ,write with passion , get it into the right hands and you will succeed
really... sharknado? how the hell does that idea even get one word on paper, watch a movie called rubber, first five seconds you'll see how even a stupid idea can make a movie. people here are so negative and seems like they have a click they discourage others to join.
this reminds me of almost making your first scrip A THESIS.........
I am writing a few scripts but....I'll never say their my first....
Thunder Levin is adorable....................
I will not sell my script because I already planned 16 others as sequels.
I can write my teachers and some professionals love my script but.....I can't pitch anything _sigh_
Practice makes perfect
Start with the bathroom mirror
And if you win enough screenwriting awards, representation might want to reach out to you instead of vice-versa
This is a vicious business
DO NOT WATCH THIS VIDEO..It will make you lose confidence about screenwriting.
00:37:00 People couching for you; cultivating #socialMedia contacts.
You can turn your first scripts into novels instead.
Different skillset but a great idea.
What about to do video games of off your script?
I'm thinking "Uncharted", "Silent Hill", etc. Of course, that is a good market, I suppose, and to me it's growing. You still have to work within the premise of the actual video game. That means game programmers, producers, and graphic artists are all part of that beginning process before they even need a writer.
Once it gets to that point, it's the same as anything else. They probably give out a call for writers to write the script. It goes on from there, so there may be lots of rewrites before it actually makes it to the VG. there are actors, sound engineers, directors, sound studios, etc before it's a completed project.
Work with indie developers at game-jams, if that’s your thing
I have 9 treatments to include children's and comedy TV show, a horror and suspense movie, and juicy love triangle. :). Hopefully one will get picked up. Positive Vibes!!
Positive vibes!
"Advice To Screenwriters About Selling The First Screenplay" Translated "You Can't"
Well that was a depressing hour of my life gone.
Advice is only as insightful as the people who give it
These are opinions, not laws
I liked Richard Walters advice the best, don't write the screenplay TRYING to sell it. That will ruin all sense of creativity. These other people are almost telling you the opposite which is annoying as hell. Working on scripts over and over until they seem like they're what hollywood is looking for sounds like the formula to make another shit blockbuster that everyone outside the production office knows is gonna be shit or bomb completely. Hollywood's arrogance is infuriating, they are still mostly just a bunch of old (not gonna mention race but we all know it starts with a J) people who are so out of touch with society they didn't even realize Asians could make movies that weren't about Kung Fu till about last week.
I know my films are great!
Don't let anyone tell you ,you wont sell your script blàhblàh
Believe in yourself,God has a way of doing things,it might not have sold their first script that don't mean it's going to be the same for you
Don't bring one screenplay, bring 3 to the sit down and instead of handing them your first, you give them your second and third
We don't have time to write three. If the first screenplay is good, you don't need to write two more.
'Donald Kaufman' sold 'The 3' for $1.5 million, first and only script he wrote...
It happens, but very rare. And who did Donald know? How did he get his script in front of someone? How did he hone his craft? Did he go to college for being a writer? How much did he write before that? How long did it take for him to actually sell that script?
Someone can say, "Yes, they sold their first script right off the bat". However, i"m sure it's a 1 out of 2,000,000 chance your are going to do that as a first time writer. It's definitely not the norm, but can happen.
Check out the film 'Adaptation'... Donald has a twin brother called Charlie...
Hahahahahaha Absolutely brilliant film. Kauffman is an underappreciated genius.
ET. Is the easiest read ever. But no script is "holy shit" awesome to read. It's just little bits of ink on a white piece of paper. and the first studio turned down ET .. it was a pass...
but in competent hands it was THE highest earning film ever (at 4% inflation).
some people like Scripts. but it's random. The dumbest script in the world (not bad just not great) will seem really awesome to somebody who likes movies about clowns who kill people, or just really interested in a kid who hast to move several times but eventually finds a young love interest ... If you like the genre, you might love the script but there's no guarantee. So it's a business of log lines, if they even let you in the business, do you have a grandmother that used to live in Europe? Maybe you could be in Hollywood.
You have a chance to sell your first script after you sell your 5th script.
35:26 C A T T O
Lee Jessup is really annoying, I'm skipping all of her parts.
Idk how to get my scripts copyrighted but I do want someone famous to read some of my plays. #there 61 of em I'm on my 62nd script now
Darius you need to get an agent first. They are the gatekeepers. An agent will help sell you scripts to the studios if they are really good and have potential. So start with an agent. Good luck.
+Renee Kelley excuse me, and where and how can you find an agent? Please answer. Thanks
Darius Willams you mind if I read a few?
How do movies which are obviously shit get through?
What a bunch of crybabies .. Humans are supposed to be showing us how you do it what crybaby crybaby about the bad stuff you got let’s not let us know what’s happening come on spill the beans
This is just negative bullshit. Why should anyone try to be a screenwriter listening to this crap? If Film Courage's goal is to stop people from entering the business, this video is great towards that end.
A subjective, penny pinching closed shop.