Although almost everything else in this video is great and to a very high standard too, what immediately stands out to me is the color-grading. Just simply amazing work there. As for one part to improve in (the part that is "only" good but not great): Either a bit more variation in the scenes or a bit better use of these few scenes or in other words, I felt that we cut back to the live-performance on piano a bit to often and it therefor felt a bit like filler. Like you started with a timeline with only this clip and then laid the other once on top at the positions where they made sense but not really as if there is a very good and planed out structure to all the scenes. The three parts how you could improve this without going to more locations is by changing the perspective as much as possible between different scenes at the same place (as you did pretty well with the scenes sitting in the theater in my opinion), secondly through more interesting and varied transitions to this live-scene and finally by just making a few longer scenes and not as many short scenes although this of course also creates the problem of a very boring scene.
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I really liked this. Your voice is great, and really nice video!
Wow! I really enjoyed watching!
very emotional song
Although almost everything else in this video is great and to a very high standard too, what immediately stands out to me is the color-grading. Just simply amazing work there.
As for one part to improve in (the part that is "only" good but not great):
Either a bit more variation in the scenes or a bit better use of these few scenes or in other words, I felt that we cut back to the live-performance on piano a bit to often and it therefor felt a bit like filler. Like you started with a timeline with only this clip and then laid the other once on top at the positions where they made sense but not really as if there is a very good and planed out structure to all the scenes. The three parts how you could improve this without going to more locations is by changing the perspective as much as possible between different scenes at the same place (as you did pretty well with the scenes sitting in the theater in my opinion), secondly through more interesting and varied transitions to this live-scene and finally by just making a few longer scenes and not as many short scenes although this of course also creates the problem of a very boring scene.
Thanks a lot for your feedback, it’s highly appreciated!