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Really really thought for a few moments there that Ellie would go through the door and either become the Silver King (to keep the timeline from having two of her living in tandem) OR save her brother and HE would get the choice to live as the Silver King (again to not mess up a timeline where he wouldn’t have lived)…. Yes? No? anyone else have thoughts because of the similar name?
This was well worth my time. Well written and well read. I, as well, as others love the rules stories. Even though they have me screaming at the characters for not adhering to the rules
37:14 “Each mind is a tapestry of mental scars that are at once both public and invisible. The richest portraits speak volumes in the silence between words… and most of us are paralyzingly afraid of hearing ourselves if we listen too closely.”
@JordanGrupe I hope you don't mind Jordan, I just wanted to add to the above comment that Noodle made. I'm in a bit of mental turmoil ATM. Cancer has a little to do with it, chemo's a bitch. My point is that there are times when the right string of words can bring memories or answers to questions you've been asking for a very long time. 3 hours with your familiar voice and this brilliantly write story has slapped me with a profound answer that has given peace. Thank you to you and a very intelligent author. Suzzanne 🇦🇺
@@JordanGrupe no need to thank me it's your listeners that need to thank you for providing such an amazing channel. You narrate such great stories I especially love hollows end thank you so much please never stop posting 🙏
Unfortunately I'm still at work so can't listen until I get home 😢. Can't wait to listen ❤❤. Thank you Jordan for everything you do for us!! We appreciate you so much ❤. I hope you are doing well ❤️🫂
Not being able to handle certain aspects of the job, especially concerning kids, is part of why I never went into the medical field. I still remember my doctor asking why I never went into that field, and telling them that first time I had to tell a kid they had cancer, or were otherwise terminal, would be the last thing I did on this earth. I have the utmost respect for the people that can handle it. They are amazing.
I had to stop being an EMT due to an accident involving children in a church short bus crash. Still have fukn horrific nightmares and insomnia nearly 20 years post incident. I can handle anything, gore etc etc but the innocent being hurt... just absolutely fukd me up. Nothing but respect and admiration for those that can compartmentalize to that extent.
@roninwandering thanks, Finally in the past year I asked for help and it's starting to work some. I was hard headed old school I'll figure shit out myself, ignorance at its finest. But thankfully ignorance can be fixed with education:) much love. TNJR
OMG I freaking love this story! Excellent narration!! At first I thought the descriptive details were a lil gruesome (cremation scene) but by the end of it I was loving everything about it!! Great Job!! Thank you!!
Hello J.G.🙂 I have been following you since you had 1200 subs and look at your channel now.. Goddamn you are all grown up😉 Mr. Unstoppable🤘 Keep up the great work.👍
I really love this one. I've listened to it before and it's just as amazing every time I hear it. Thanks for putting together this long video of this fantastic tale. It's just so good and HOT off the Jordan presses. ❤
I never knew I liked cookies till I ate them !?.... . Clear case of think before u speak or think before u write a comment 😢. Obv u dont know if u like something till u try it ( exception unless u have a unresolved fear of it or something) . Weird thing to say .😮
Charleston is an hour away, St. Francis Hospital provides actual creep factors as this story portrays. 😂 For anyone wondering, yes it's a real place. Though the people in that area are scarier yet 😅
Can someone please explain like im in kindergarten? How was Ellie in the hospital after a bus crash, getting an appendectomy at the same time she was at home yelling for her brother to jump out of his window so he wouldnt burn to death?
Charleston...West Virginia. Lol They always hire contractors because they are not hired to the actual hospital. Why???? Because the hospital has been sued to much. Malpractice.....they changed so many people to die....that the hospitals only have 4-5 actual doctors and everyone else is a private contractor or with a contractor company. You are my favorite...and...you made a story about one of my old job sites....lol Laundry attendant. : ) nursing school drop out. Your the Best!!!!!!!! Promise!!!!!
If Ellie did What she had to do to change her brothers fate it may have cost more than the life she saved. In more ways than one. So the question would be, Is she strong enough to abandon her duty to the patients to save her brother?.
Love your stories, but I love most sleepy hollow. Please add more sleepy hollow stories especially about the grandma and delivery service, maybe find that grandson a love interest a fairly or vampire like Mistress of the dark? It be great.
Well. She wasted 26 years of her life, and if not for me painting miniatures while listening, I’d say I just wasted 3 hours of mine. Man I fucking hate time travel stories. Second only to tales where “nothing really happened”. But, I’ll give it a like, for the sake of this comment not wasting your time.
Ngl, I actually learned a life lesson from this story. Knowing when to walk away and accept what is happend won't define what is now and that it is necessary to be the best individual self you can be using the past to make better decisions on the future.
2:40:57 am I going crazy now??? So Ellie went back in time into a different body and then became herself and someone else as well??? What the hell. Please explain!!!
Its a time loop. She keeps the same body, theres just two of them. When we first meet Ellie, she's young...like early 20's. By the time she goes back into the past years have gone by, and she's in her late 30's, so she looks different/older. She travels 26 years into the past, but her body doesn't lose any of its age, so when she shows up in the past she's still in her late 30's. At that point she takes on a new name and begins a new life, aging normally from her late 30's into her 60's. That's why the janitor said she'd only come back to the present the hard way...i.e. aging normally. At the same time, as she ages from her late 30's into her 60's, her younger self is also there, aging from being a teenager, into a young doctor in her early 20's, and eventually into a doctor her late 30's...at which point the loop starts again
Interesting story but I guess I’m not smart enough to understand it. Time traveling? MC is dead? Story wasn’t about Ellie or was it? I’m just confused. Can anyone explain? Please and thanks
SPOILERS - My understanding is that the main character IS Dr. Scritt and she is stuck in a time loop. I think this is because she went through the 1913 door which the rules said you should NEVER do. but I could be totally wrong too lol
She made wrong choice i feel. Cause the loop continues untill the house doesnt burn down. If went back as old woman and saved young self then the version who was young may not become doctor and end loop. And the last chief of medicine will end with one who went through this time around. And tbh old version going back knowing wat happens can live a rich life invest bitcoin and now your retired in the past. Ik just a story but it be very satisfying to see hersee her young self and also the one who takes doctor spot. As now the older one retires.
The time travel was SO DUMB, the story was close to prefect but no they had to just shoe horn in the elements that go AGAINST what the story and character development was pushing towards! WHY!
This was a great story however the author is detached from reality in their views of how we as people think and want and even our instincts. At least they are with mine and others I know
Please SUBSCRIBE and leave a COMMENT! It really helps the channel grow and reach a larger audience. Thanks so much for watching everyone. What did you think of the story? =D
Really really thought for a few moments there that Ellie would go through the door and either become the Silver King (to keep the timeline from having two of her living in tandem) OR save her brother and HE would get the choice to live as the Silver King (again to not mess up a timeline where he wouldn’t have lived)….
Yes? No? anyone else have thoughts because of the similar name?
This is a lot of build up for.... something? You need to start with heavier stories and you will do much better.
@@crystalm4324yes same like I really got some silver king vibes
Well, I must not know shit, I think that was amazingly well written. But I also connected with it once I realized this wasn’t a ‘horror’ story.
This was well worth my time. Well written and well read. I, as well, as others love the rules stories. Even though they have me screaming at the characters for not adhering to the rules
37:14 “Each mind is a tapestry of mental scars that are at once both public and invisible. The richest portraits speak volumes in the silence between words… and most of us are paralyzingly afraid of hearing ourselves if we listen too closely.”
This guy is a fantastic writer I must say. Just drops bombs like that casually all the time
@JordanGrupe I hope you don't mind Jordan, I just wanted to add to the above comment that Noodle made. I'm in a bit of mental turmoil ATM. Cancer has a little to do with it, chemo's a bitch. My point is that there are times when the right string of words can bring memories or answers to questions you've been asking for a very long time. 3 hours with your familiar voice and this brilliantly write story has slapped me with a profound answer that has given peace. Thank you to you and a very intelligent author. Suzzanne 🇦🇺
Above "Quote" Could Explain how Civilation Turned Apathetìc w/a COVID Push.
My girlfriend is not a fan of Jordan because since I found his channel I'm always listening to his stories 🤣
XD thanks for listening! Sorry @mickfagan7567's girlfriend
@@JordanGrupe no need to thank me it's your listeners that need to thank you for providing such an amazing channel. You narrate such great stories I especially love hollows end thank you so much please never stop posting 🙏
Yeah, the gf has to go. If she's jealous of a story....
@@srmj71 😂 it's not just a story I have my air pods in my ears for like 8 or 9 hours a day listening to him
@@mickfagan7567my hubby feels same away about my gaming. She either leave or get over it!
Unfortunately I'm still at work so can't listen until I get home 😢. Can't wait to listen ❤❤. Thank you Jordan for everything you do for us!! We appreciate you so much ❤. I hope you are doing well ❤️🫂
Not being able to handle certain aspects of the job, especially concerning kids, is part of why I never went into the medical field. I still remember my doctor asking why I never went into that field, and telling them that first time I had to tell a kid they had cancer, or were otherwise terminal, would be the last thing I did on this earth. I have the utmost respect for the people that can handle it. They are amazing.
That would be so incredibly difficult especially with kids
I had to stop being an EMT due to an accident involving children in a church short bus crash. Still have fukn horrific nightmares and insomnia nearly 20 years post incident. I can handle anything, gore etc etc but the innocent being hurt... just absolutely fukd me up. Nothing but respect and admiration for those that can compartmentalize to that extent.
@@TNJRSFFS Wow, I'm sorry to hear that. My best wishes in the emotional healing process.
@roninwandering thanks,
Finally in the past year I asked for help and it's starting to work some. I was hard headed old school I'll figure shit out myself, ignorance at its finest. But thankfully ignorance can be fixed with education:) much love. TNJR
Thanks!
Thank you so much!
I'm so glad your stories are on You tube and not in a book that I have to wait for it to be published
OMG I freaking love this story! Excellent narration!! At first I thought the descriptive details were a lil gruesome (cremation scene) but by the end of it I was loving everything about it!! Great Job!! Thank you!!
How did we get so lucky?!? A long story?! WIN.❤
I love the rule stories, so creative!!! Keep them coming!!
Love this Channel and the Stories ❤
From west texas, can confirm the trees grow crooked here.... but he's also describing the people
Hello J.G.🙂 I have been following you since you had 1200 subs and look at your channel now.. Goddamn you are all grown up😉 Mr. Unstoppable🤘 Keep up the great work.👍
Thanks so much for the continued support! It means a lot =D
I really love this one. I've listened to it before and it's just as amazing every time I hear it.
Thanks for putting together this long video of this fantastic tale. It's just so good and HOT off the Jordan presses. ❤
I can't get enough of the rules stories 🫶. Never knew that I liked them until I started to hear them. Anyone else?
I adore them especially this one!
They're my favorite type of creepypasta.
Exactly it's like missing something you never knew you needed and then you just found it one day 🎉🎉🎉
I never knew I liked cookies till I ate them !?.... . Clear case of think before u speak or think before u write a comment 😢. Obv u dont know if u like something till u try it ( exception unless u have a unresolved fear of it or something) .
Weird thing to say .😮
Odd...there my least favorite...
Wonder if you others are bots.....
This is such a unique take on the rule stories. That last part really just connected everything so well
That was such a beautiful and heartfelt story! The author did an incredible job and your narration was amazing!
Glad I waited til I could watch this in one go. Really enjoyed this!
I was born at the exact same hospital November 25th 1984
Thankyou Jordan. Love long stories ❤
Charleston is an hour away, St. Francis Hospital provides actual creep factors as this story portrays. 😂
For anyone wondering, yes it's a real place.
Though the people in that area are scarier yet 😅
😮😮😮😮😮😮😮
This guy is definitely in my top three narrators of all time. I get the notification and it's certain that I'm listening
I absolutely love these long stories. You are an amazing narrator
Thank you so much!
That was such a moving story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us ❤
I always look forward to 4 pm!! Thank you Jordan for giving me something to look forward to every day ❣️
This one was good...really good. It was more sad than scary, but is probing, moving, suspenseful, and impactful.
Another story about....
*DA RULES!!!*
3 hours!??!??
::we’re not worthy! We’re not worthy!::
This author likes Scrubs as much as me. Put J.D in there and even put the whole Dr Cox you will eventually kill a patient speech
i was lookig for a comment about scrubs, finely somw one has the same obsession.
Epic story !! Loved every second of it. I love the strange rule stories.
Omg, horror version of scrubs!! 😆
Thank you for the great stories brother. 👊🏼
Hi Keith 👋❤
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Hey there Kimberly 👋🏻😁
@@keithblount229I hope you are doing well ❤️🫂
THANK YOU for watching Keith! You're the man!
Thank you Jordan for your hard work, I hope you have great success 🙌
Me still greedily munching on the Night King 8 hours special : *Turns around* Did someone say...RULES??
I have heard this one before. ... i swear by jordan. So much deja vu.
I think Lighthouse did this a few months ago- it made me think once I was listening!
RomNex did this on her channel
@@joshuatamarit1112This.
Great story!!!!
This was crazy good, I love the twists.
Thank you so much these stories get me through my nights get me through days and intrigued my imagination
Awesome story! Thank you for your wonderful narration.
44:44 “That B*tch” for me is my mom lmfao 🤣
Predestined paradox hurts my head.😂😂
Or maybey just maybey without being morbid but maybey dieing is exactly how we prove we are real
One of your best efforts
Thanku for anorher awesome story n narration
This was incredible. Mind-blowing wonderful insanely well written peice
Hello I'm a comment. Good night!
This is the best rules pasta I have ever heard.
👍👍marvelously unsurpassable, excitingly thrilling this series iwas awesome. I loved and enjoyed this series. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
One of the best rules story ever. ❤❤😅 :)
THE TWISTS AND TURNS!!!
This is awesome work absolutely 💯 flames 🔥 🙌 👌 😀 ❤
Can someone please explain like im in kindergarten? How was Ellie in the hospital after a bus crash, getting an appendectomy at the same time she was at home yelling for her brother to jump out of his window so he wouldnt burn to death?
Those were her at different points in her life actually. Her appendix burst after the incident. Hope this helps!
0:26 I’m in the mental hospital right now! Fuck my Day.
Charleston...West Virginia. Lol
They always hire contractors because they are not hired to the actual hospital. Why???? Because the hospital has been sued to much. Malpractice.....they changed so many people to die....that the hospitals only have 4-5 actual doctors and everyone else is a private contractor or with a contractor company.
You are my favorite...and...you made a story about one of my old job sites....lol Laundry attendant. : ) nursing school drop out.
Your the Best!!!!!!!! Promise!!!!!
Thanks so much!
It's hard to make me cry in life is so hard I know that but this story broke me
woof - that is some complicated incepcation like time travel story xp
Let's here it for CANADA 🎉🎉🎉🎉
I enjoy this channel a lot I just wish there was a lot more longer videos
I'm working on more! They take a lot longer to produce but I try to do a longer one every week or two
LOVE these rules stories...fricken AWESOMENESS!!!!
Like the psychological aspects of this story. You narration gives it that little extra
If Ellie did What she had to do to change her brothers fate it may have cost more than the life she saved.
In more ways than one.
So the question would be, Is she strong enough to abandon her duty to the patients to save her brother?.
...wow. Great writer this one.
Damnit yo, that story was intense.
Great story! Thanks for bringing it to life😊
They should close down this hospital. We really can’t spare the doctors to lose so many in just one shift
Love your stories, but I love most sleepy hollow. Please add more sleepy hollow stories especially about the grandma and delivery service, maybe find that grandson a love interest a fairly or vampire like Mistress of the dark? It be great.
Well. She wasted 26 years of her life, and if not for me painting miniatures while listening, I’d say I just wasted 3 hours of mine.
Man I fucking hate time travel stories. Second only to tales where “nothing really happened”.
But, I’ll give it a like, for the sake of this comment not wasting your time.
I'm guessing JD is named after the guy from Scrubs cuz his last name is Dorian too lol
Is JD from Srubs? Lol
Oh wow 👏👏👏👏
Love sleepy hollow stories!
You mean hollows end story's?
I’ve heard this on another channel but the narraters voice was AI sadly completely ruined the story
That was deep
You must live in or around WVa because several times it's in the story.btw it's my home state.
I can’t do this allll on my own I know I’m no Superman!!!
2:31:22 definitely Canadian I think Lolz
Nice
3:00:53 so enlightened yet completely confused too 😅!
i remember this story!! i heard it narrated by romnex im pretty sure
Im confused did she make any changes with the 2 doctors that had provided surgery on the 12 kids from the bus? Or no?
Zach Braff was a coward and paid for it.
Shoulda, coulda, woulda..............
I looked this hospital up creepy
30 of you didnt even hit like!!!!!
Insurance companies are the rich ones
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Love me some rules to break 💔
1:00:00
She really didn't see it at the end? She could have done both.
Ngl, I actually learned a life lesson from this story. Knowing when to walk away and accept what is happend won't define what is now and that it is necessary to be the best individual self you can be using the past to make better decisions on the future.
2:40:57 am I going crazy now??? So Ellie went back in time into a different body and then became herself and someone else as well??? What the hell. Please explain!!!
Its a time loop. She keeps the same body, theres just two of them.
When we first meet Ellie, she's young...like early 20's. By the time she goes back into the past years have gone by, and she's in her late 30's, so she looks different/older. She travels 26 years into the past, but her body doesn't lose any of its age, so when she shows up in the past she's still in her late 30's. At that point she takes on a new name and begins a new life, aging normally from her late 30's into her 60's. That's why the janitor said she'd only come back to the present the hard way...i.e. aging normally.
At the same time, as she ages from her late 30's into her 60's, her younger self is also there, aging from being a teenager, into a young doctor in her early 20's, and eventually into a doctor her late 30's...at which point the loop starts again
Interesting story but I guess I’m not smart enough to understand it.
Time traveling? MC is dead? Story wasn’t about Ellie or was it? I’m just confused. Can anyone explain? Please and thanks
SPOILERS -
My understanding is that the main character IS Dr. Scritt and she is stuck in a time loop. I think this is because she went through the 1913 door which the rules said you should NEVER do. but I could be totally wrong too lol
Ok. Thanks for that explanation. Much appreciated 😊
2:07:49 i knew it😂😂
She made wrong choice i feel. Cause the loop continues untill the house doesnt burn down. If went back as old woman and saved young self then the version who was young may not become doctor and end loop. And the last chief of medicine will end with one who went through this time around. And tbh old version going back knowing wat happens can live a rich life invest bitcoin and now your retired in the past.
Ik just a story but it be very satisfying to see hersee her young self and also the one who takes doctor spot. As now the older one retires.
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SCRUBS!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This reminded me of scrubs in the best possible way as well lol especially when they *SPOILERS* bring in the new class
The time travel was SO DUMB, the story was close to prefect but no they had to just shoe horn in the elements that go AGAINST what the story and character development was pushing towards! WHY!
There was no timestamp
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This was a great story however the author is detached from reality in their views of how we as people think and want and even our instincts. At least they are with mine and others I know