When Your Half Brother Kicked You out of the house While Snowing Heavily

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  • Опубликовано: 15 янв 2025

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  • @LoveStance
    @LoveStance Год назад +39

    Two things to our wonderful author here....
    1st. I'm so glad I made sure I had no distractions while I watched this through. You write well all the time, but the subtle darkness that progressed throughout this piece was exemplary.
    2nd. I'm very glad you gave no hint about the background of the families, making all the readers take a big....Oh....Ahhh...when her parentage was revealed.
    While this is fiction, this is a reminder of how children's perceptions can be easily led astray and how cruel they can be when angered, jealous, or just 'cuz'.
    I was REAL happy that Yn didn't die outside, as that would have been sadly tragic, and her step-siblings might have felt bad for leaving her outside, but they'd have not understood the full impact of their actions if they'd not seen how terrorized she'd become of them.
    Part of me would like a bonus to explore how their lives unfolded over the years, but another part likes exactly where you left things.
    You've done an exceptional job with this.
    - St@nce

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +4

      Why am I smiling so big while reading your comment? 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @LoveStance
      @LoveStance Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 Because you know you made a FINE piece of work, and you were gifted with some personal validation for all the toil and...turmoils you experienced putting your world into print for us to enjoy with you!! :)
      xoxoxox
      - St@nce

    • @silviazakir3899
      @silviazakir3899 4 месяца назад

      Im so sad my baby cousin was such a distraction whilst watcing this absoloute masterpiece. I should of done what you did and maybe waited until night to watch it :(

  • @nynyrackzz2407
    @nynyrackzz2407 Год назад +27

    it’s giving part two because that’s a lot to take in as a four year old child I want to see her reaction to them as a teenager

  • @nohway07
    @nohway07 Год назад +7

    I'm crying rn! This is such a good story! I felt like i was actually reading a book.

  • @KINGBITIS
    @KINGBITIS Год назад +7

    Your every story have always made me cry no matter what.................
    I just loved the way you put sooo much details in your every story and how you just make up the actual scene.......................
    Mind-blowing ✨
    Well, I actually fell more emotional then any other person because I am also a story writer just the thing is I haven't made any story on internet, I have them in a book but absolutely the stories are also deep meaning one, so I really like your stories a lot

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      Awww. Thank You so much for appreciating the way ai write. It really makes me happy 💜💜💜

  • @ian2aneaan
    @ian2aneaan Год назад +3

    Author really can make me cry . I did cry I'm not lying

  • @Myriamele
    @Myriamele Год назад +15

    Absolutely perfect, as always. My emotions took a rollercoaster ride, I am glad to see how it ended. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @cookiebts7743
    @cookiebts7743 Год назад +2

    Author nim!!! Y do u always make me cry??!!! 😫😫💜✨

  • @melodyshortcuts4225
    @melodyshortcuts4225 Год назад +2

    I never felt so happy to cry 😭 love u author

  • @le-anne4309
    @le-anne4309 Год назад +2

    This is a beautiful story ! A masterpiece !!!!! A fairy tale .I suggest you make an animated movie or a picture book of it. The story is too beautiful to let it be just a story !🥰💞

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      I agree. I'm actually talking to some of my friends who knows how to animate or to make it like a manhua but unfortunately we all have hectic schedules. But who knows. Maybe someday

  • @radhagupta9162
    @radhagupta9162 Год назад +7

    You never fails to make me cry 😭

  • @Saanvigattani
    @Saanvigattani 11 месяцев назад +1

    Now this is what a masterpiece called! 😭 you will become a great Author one day😭❤❤

  • @jVt1306..
    @jVt1306.. Год назад

    I was literally crying 😭 hard entire the video....... . I am not lying, seriously ..... It just touched my deep inside heart ...

  • @purpleaftons8438
    @purpleaftons8438 Год назад +1

    Your the best unnie sometimes I wonder I do u think of these ideas
    May I ask how old are u?if it's fine😅

  • @bagntanplaylistsforyou
    @bagntanplaylistsforyou Год назад +11

    ok how about you tell me all the things you are good at including writing absolute masterpieces and making me cry, like author nim don't you know how big of a trouble i would be in if my mom walked in on me crying while staring at my screen. Also author nim, what did poor y/n did to you, you're always giving her trauma and ptsd and anxiety, like what did she ever do to you. this was amazing, keep writing author nim, ill be here to read your stories.

  • @pakhigupta3001
    @pakhigupta3001 Год назад +1

    This is what I mean to say, when I talk about a perfect fanfiction

  • @dianalechuga5523
    @dianalechuga5523 Год назад +1

    Wow! This one had my heart ache for her. She is so little, and they had no understanding in them. I hope school is going well. Please take care of yourself❤💜❤💜❤💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      I'm already in a vication, sweetiee. So no worries. And thank Youu. I hope you're doing good at school aswell 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @dianalechuga5523
      @dianalechuga5523 Год назад +1

      @Miss Random thank you, but I have already graduated with my masters degree, so I remember a lot of the pressure to finish work.

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Ohh. I guess you're ahead and older than me. Well then. I wish you all the best

  • @XG71
    @XG71 Год назад +20

    I Know It's Gonna Be Masterpiece

  • @namjooniee7
    @namjooniee7 Год назад

    This FF was masterpiece...💜

  • @justtt_jiwoo
    @justtt_jiwoo Год назад +1

    Anytime you realese anything unnie, it's a masterpiece
    i love ur work so much unnie

  • @Arashi777C.Y.L
    @Arashi777C.Y.L Год назад +1

    You're an exceptionally good author but your music choice is also top notch!

  • @ShaSha-256
    @ShaSha-256 Год назад +1

    Stop it’s illegal to write this awesome 😭😅😅 !!!!!!

  • @Darkpagesunfold
    @Darkpagesunfold Год назад

    Another beautiful story

  • @zenia2310
    @zenia2310 Год назад +1

    Curiously waiting for the next masterpiece

  • @maitrisharma1851
    @maitrisharma1851 Год назад +4

    I never comment on ffs usually but I badly want a ff of middle child problems can you please make a ff on that topic and that too of jin or any hyung line member please 🙃🙇

  • @fehmidashaikh8120
    @fehmidashaikh8120 Год назад

    I was crying 😭 my mom started to get tention 😂

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      HAHAHAHA why watch sad ff, sweetie hile you're Mom is around? I can't with yoy HAHAHAHA

  • @GoldenRoses-u9v
    @GoldenRoses-u9v Год назад +3

    so, im a new subscriber and your never fail to make something soo incredible and good... i knew it was going to be good just seeing the thumbnail.... Keep making these amajin stories.. i will always root for you.. borahee💜💜

  • @tvishaagarwal3018
    @tvishaagarwal3018 Год назад +2

    UNNIE! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS!
    how can you write soo amazing stories, as always, it was a masterpiece. Can't wait for the upcoming awesome stories. Borahae unnie 💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @tvishaagarwal3018
      @tvishaagarwal3018 Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @jinspinkslipper8133
    @jinspinkslipper8133 Год назад

    I swear i never really cry reading a book or ff hell i don't even cry watching a very sad movie but this shit i felt like i was really the one suffering and i freaking cried like a baby in this onee ....author u r so good at it like woowwww😮😮

  • @rimilulaji4909
    @rimilulaji4909 Год назад

    This was a sad story 😢 but l love it 💜. Unnieee you are the best. Can't wait for the next story.

  • @zenia2310
    @zenia2310 Год назад

    It was truly a masterpiece..like this time yn didn't became an assassin(which i think feels unrealistic) i enjoyed alot . Keep making this kind of masterpiece author 👍

  • @ritulal8071
    @ritulal8071 Год назад +1

    This is my new obsession

  • @LOVELYKPOP286
    @LOVELYKPOP286 Год назад +1

    All i can say us wow i have no other words to describe this it so sad but happy at the same time i loved it 😊 ❤

  • @Sarah-Zhao
    @Sarah-Zhao Год назад +2

    I am getting confused here, I need a family tree please to get this on my mind! 😅
    Ok I get now... 😊
    But seriously my heart is so emotional 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Once again, I am not disappointed and falling in love with the author's magical stories ❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜💜

    • @Sarah-Zhao
      @Sarah-Zhao Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 No, thank you for making me live the beautiful magical fantasy 😘😍☺😍😘😘😳❤❣️💝💕

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Thank You for supporting me doing one of what I love to do💜💜💜

  • @yeonapark
    @yeonapark Год назад +1

    Can't wait for an amazing story again!! 💜💜💜

  • @sakshikataria4479
    @sakshikataria4479 Год назад +2

    Can you make next part or a bonus please 💗💗💗it's me infront of my father. It's like so traumatic. I really like it . I want to see them 4 to be happy with eachother. Also the girl lj have to apologise to her . Please can you 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌼🌼🌼🌼

  • @Coffeekindagal
    @Coffeekindagal Год назад

    I love you soooo much youre the best ff writer ever

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      thank you so much and I love you moree💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @bdarmy_ro1588
    @bdarmy_ro1588 Год назад

    Ur ffs are so underated

  • @revathirevathi5281
    @revathirevathi5281 Год назад +3

    Always your ff make my tears burst out 😢😢but so good sissy 💜💜

  • @ustadsahab618
    @ustadsahab618 Год назад +2

    As always, I cried😢 but its so beautiful like it's real....
    I followed your insta gram too😉

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Thank you, sweetieee💜💜💜

    • @ustadsahab618
      @ustadsahab618 Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 but you don't seem that much active on Instagram 🤔😞

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Yes, sweetieee. Unfortunately I forgot the password so I wasn't able to open it again😂

  • @neetigarg1032
    @neetigarg1032 Год назад

    *Unnie aap ki writing itni achchi hai ki aapko jail ho jaani chahiye...* ❤❤💞💞
    Translation( if you don't know Hindi) - Unnie your writing is so good that should be sued for that...❤❤💞💞
    Like how can someone write this good??! Had me in tears, honestly✨✨
    You know I'm also thinking about writing ffs on Wattpad but I don't have courage...🌹
    But no matter what, your long duration ffs are so good like they always make me switch on my AC at 16 degrees so that my tears dry up faster hehe😅🤧

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Awww. Thank You, sweetieee 💜💜💜 I wish you goodluck with your writing 💜💜💜

  • @DeepakRout-lo3hc
    @DeepakRout-lo3hc Год назад +1

    Its so good unnie 💜💜💜💜

  • @iam_32
    @iam_32 Год назад +2

    You know what?? I won't even say anything about it. You already know what I am gonna say right??*takes in a lonnnngggg breath and..* ...I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING AND TAKE CARE😚🤧🤧🤧 💜💜💜💜💙💙💙💙💖💖💖💖it is still lacking the hearts I wanna give to you. Yk?

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Thank you, sweetieee and I LOVE YOU MOREEEEEE💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @iam_32
      @iam_32 Год назад

      Do you remember? The use of the account@the nature 5207.haha. Tbh my gf would accuse me of cheating as I never said I love you as many times I said to you to her. But still I can't resist saying it. You're the best ❤️

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      I can't with you HAHAHAHA. Keep showing your girl how much love her

    • @iam_32
      @iam_32 Год назад

      Sure..👌👌I will even make her read this and your ffs so that she can also say the same.👍👍👌

  • @milicavelisavljevic4582
    @milicavelisavljevic4582 Год назад +1

    I love your masterpiece's so muc unnie😊💜

  • @ashmikashiv4415
    @ashmikashiv4415 Год назад +1

    Masterpiece ✨✨✨ , love it

  • @Malohalim17
    @Malohalim17 Год назад

    What happened to vmin at the end

  • @swatisharma-es9fk
    @swatisharma-es9fk Год назад +1

    I can't wait for the next masterpiece 💜💜 Sarangheyo unnie💜💜

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Thank Youuu and Nado Nomu Nomuu Saranghaee💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @RohitVerma-ut9cy
    @RohitVerma-ut9cy Год назад

    It's a masterpiece l was literally crying 😭 while reading this

  • @Lovelybeds3109
    @Lovelybeds3109 Год назад

    This is so good keep up the good work 🎉

  • @Marichat143
    @Marichat143 Год назад

    Unnie I love your work but please try to upload fast I mean don't pressure urself but please try to upload more videos fastly🙂love you work ❤❤
    Your lovely subscriber/Fan❤❤❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      Awwww you just made me smilee. Thank You, sweetieee💜💜💜

    • @Marichat143
      @Marichat143 Год назад

      ​@@missrandom5430 my welcome ❤

  • @MBenz01
    @MBenz01 Год назад +2

    Damn, I won't be able to watch this masterpiece cause I won't be home at 7:00 pm❤😢

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Wherever you're going. Wish you'll have a safetrip💜

    • @MBenz01
      @MBenz01 Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 I watched it, it's so good❤️ I was just going to a wedding that day, thank you❤️

  • @facrojigawas1597
    @facrojigawas1597 Год назад

    UNNIE !!! You made me cry si bad 🤧😭☹🥺😣
    Overall I loved it v. V.v.v. much❤

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      Thank You, sweetieee and peaceee💜💜💜

  • @littlelifetime8095
    @littlelifetime8095 Год назад

    Hope we have a part 2 plssssss....🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @purpleday7792
    @purpleday7792 Год назад

    FRom stating to last I was feeling heavy heart and pain like I want to cry my voice cracked and don't know how and when I started crying and about the writter like how u know the real cousions sisters pain and somehow it's real to life like mine nd my cousion till the mid of story but I haven't seen the end but I guess I can happy ending till I graduate I font to be here

  • @ibagaad2157
    @ibagaad2157 Год назад

    I loved it bestie good to see u again 😊😊

  • @AgnivaModak
    @AgnivaModak Год назад

    Cant wait for your next masterpiece author

  • @pastikaluci4814
    @pastikaluci4814 Год назад

    i lobeeee it unnie

  • @laylamoriom9881
    @laylamoriom9881 Год назад

    It's so good 🥺🥺

  • @sharika._.
    @sharika._. Год назад

    How can you sleep with so much talent?

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      Oh My HAHAHA Thank Youuu💜💜💜

    • @sharika._.
      @sharika._. Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 Wellcomeee💜💜💜

  • @whosdeetya
    @whosdeetya Год назад +1

    no offense, but don't you think facing all this at the age of 4 is too traumatic for a kid? if it was a teenager it would've been better, I guess. No person with a sane mind would do this to a 4y/o lol

  • @tejasriamruta3524
    @tejasriamruta3524 Год назад

    waiiit im a princess ????

  • @wlyisqkr
    @wlyisqkr Год назад

    You're things are so inspiring! It's such a masterpiece! I actually have a request for an ff if you can do it....
    I was thinking if you could do an ff of Jimin: about how you're idol brother starts hating you because you're more popular, so you eventually get deep depression and commit su!c!de?

  • @purpleday7792
    @purpleday7792 Год назад

    M re reading it greatt😫😫

  • @satishgoyal9281
    @satishgoyal9281 Год назад

    Please make second part

  • @keerthanajayachandran6496
    @keerthanajayachandran6496 Год назад

    Next part please

  • @fehmidashaikh8120
    @fehmidashaikh8120 Год назад

    Can't wait to see 😻

  • @itzsalexzs
    @itzsalexzs Год назад

    I MISS YOUUUUUUUUUUU😢

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад

      I MISS YOUU TOOOOO💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @ellise2601
    @ellise2601 Год назад +1

    YESS UR BACKK

  • @lovelymahi7080
    @lovelymahi7080 Год назад

    Hi

    • @missrandom5430
      @missrandom5430  Год назад +1

      Hello💜💜💜

    • @lovelymahi7080
      @lovelymahi7080 Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 how are you dear ❤

    • @lovelymahi7080
      @lovelymahi7080 Год назад

      @@missrandom5430 Hi how are you now I hope you are very nice I want to be friend with you please give me your contact number?

  • @Musicallife_ML
    @Musicallife_ML Год назад

    Finally

  • @vante.07
    @vante.07 Год назад

    I'm heree

  • @forampatel6879
    @forampatel6879 8 месяцев назад

    You are so good in writing...omo.. 🤍