I was very surprised to see another person inspired by the original dark storyteller Deku. Funnily enough, I also have a story in my plans inspired by the original, just changed to have an original touch.
interesting changes, I can see how you're connecting the story from the original, and the areas you choose make it different. the character "Smaug" is the same as the coin and how they changed, but the obvious difference comes from changing Mei to a steampunk inventor instead of the creator of Frankenstein, but you also change the invention from "Frankenstein's monster" to "Gear shatter". Nice choice to make Izuku come to the USJ due to the situation the other sibling was in. The original story kept the sibling's relationship strong and that seems to be a continuous theme for the story. Nice job, keep up the great work. :)
I’m glad to see someone remembers the original story and also enjoys My remake. Also glad to hear my changes are doing well. I’m glad I’m keeping you entertained and I’ll try to keep it up
Another comment from me lol. Just telling how I found the current episodes compared to what I remember from the original. I like some of the changes to the story, like Snipe being part of the team and the auctioned-off Todoroki being Smaug. Even though I liked the ship of Sauron and Smaug in the original, I will say I don't have the best memory of the original. The story seems very fast-paced. For future episodes and series, I would suggest slowing down a bit and extending some scenes more. Also, a scene I found weird was the one where Izuku stabs Bakugo, then Izumi runs home, and there's already a letter saying he's gonna become a villain. I don't know if this scene was just explained badly or it was a bad way to introduce the letter scene. From what I gathered when I read it, Izuku stabbed Bakugo, then either ran home faster than Izumi and left the letter, or had already left the letter and then went on to stab Bakugo. It seems unnecessary for him to first stab Bakugo when he threatened Izumi. Also, I think you should continue doing what you didn't really do with Mei, which is explaining which character they become. I like the fact that you came up with an excuse for why they changed their look when they become the character because I kinda disliked that nobody pointed it out in the original.
First off, Lot of information😅, but second of all, there were some lines I forgot to put into episode one, so I do now see why it doesn’t make much sense after the stabbing, so thank you for bringing this to my attention, and I also apologize if the series is going by fast, I’m just going off what I mostly remember from the original and to be honest, I’m not the most creative but I’m glad to see you are still entertained
I was very surprised to see another person inspired by the original dark storyteller Deku. Funnily enough, I also have a story in my plans inspired by the original, just changed to have an original touch.
interesting changes, I can see how you're connecting the story from the original, and the areas you choose make it different. the character "Smaug" is the same as the coin and how they changed, but the obvious difference comes from changing Mei to a steampunk inventor instead of the creator of Frankenstein, but you also change the invention from "Frankenstein's monster" to "Gear shatter". Nice choice to make Izuku come to the USJ due to the situation the other sibling was in. The original story kept the sibling's relationship strong and that seems to be a continuous theme for the story.
Nice job, keep up the great work. :)
I’m glad to see someone remembers the original story and also enjoys My remake. Also glad to hear my changes are doing well. I’m glad I’m keeping you entertained and I’ll try to keep it up
Please make a part 7
We need more this is 🔥🙏🏽🔥
It’s in the way!
I love it. Great job
Glad you like it! I’ll keep up the work for you!
Another comment from me lol. Just telling how I found the current episodes compared to what I remember from the original. I like some of the changes to the story, like Snipe being part of the team and the auctioned-off Todoroki being Smaug. Even though I liked the ship of Sauron and Smaug in the original, I will say I don't have the best memory of the original. The story seems very fast-paced. For future episodes and series, I would suggest slowing down a bit and extending some scenes more. Also, a scene I found weird was the one where Izuku stabs Bakugo, then Izumi runs home, and there's already a letter saying he's gonna become a villain. I don't know if this scene was just explained badly or it was a bad way to introduce the letter scene. From what I gathered when I read it, Izuku stabbed Bakugo, then either ran home faster than Izumi and left the letter, or had already left the letter and then went on to stab Bakugo. It seems unnecessary for him to first stab Bakugo when he threatened Izumi. Also, I think you should continue doing what you didn't really do with Mei, which is explaining which character they become. I like the fact that you came up with an excuse for why they changed their look when they become the character because I kinda disliked that nobody pointed it out in the original.
First off, Lot of information😅, but second of all, there were some lines I forgot to put into episode one, so I do now see why it doesn’t make much sense after the stabbing, so thank you for bringing this to my attention, and I also apologize if the series is going by fast, I’m just going off what I mostly remember from the original and to be honest, I’m not the most creative but I’m glad to see you are still entertained
finally a villain that isnt part of LOV
I guess snipe watched too much Netflix and got his redesign. He is now Idris Elba
💀HUH😂
Hey I was actually I was the first subscriber who subscribed to Showman's theater and it's nice to see the old series again
Omg! Glad to see someone who still knew the channel! I hope this is up to expectations, or at least close! If so, I’ll do my best to keep up the work!
@@Master_Story_Teller yeah it's faithful enough to the original
@@TheGreatestTextingTheater Glad to hear that, thank you🙏
@@Master_Story_Teller no problem it's faithful enough to the original I can enjoy