hi, for your first song this is great! but quick tip, you dont need to overdo it. youve used tooons of instruments for this one song alone, and a lot of them dont go that well together. but other than that, it does have relatively proper composition, pretty good for your first track.
Thanks!! i agree with all that, i put so many elements that started to get a little confusing, but i made this song in a lots of different days, each day i was differently inspired, i think i learned from 1:40 onwards, i honestly think i made a good melody and just used 3 or 4 instruments, and its way better than the rest of the song
hi, for your first song this is great! but quick tip, you dont need to overdo it. youve used tooons of instruments for this one song alone, and a lot of them dont go that well together. but other than that, it does have relatively proper composition, pretty good for your first track.
Thanks!!
i agree with all that, i put so many elements that started to get a little confusing, but i made this song in a lots of different days, each day i was differently inspired, i think i learned from 1:40 onwards, i honestly think i made a good melody and just used 3 or 4 instruments, and its way better than the rest of the song