He Married the Alien's Ugly Daughter but when They Left the Ceremony They Were Speechless! Sci-Fi
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It's all good until The Devil comes around in his Motor Boat...
Love does not depend on the physical attributes. Knowing this, I would have a better chance of marrying this alien woman.
true love depends on connected parties having the equivalent of a "brain"--an obviously physical attribute.
So a space gun wedding 😂 and my man still didn't his coffee sucks 😂
I hope there is. Part 2 at least to this story you have seemed to leave us dangling in mid air to wait to know what happens next
You and me both. To bad we can't be analyzed and paired with the right person first time around.
An interesting story that needs a much better AI narrator
This story needs part 2.
loved the story enjoyed the narrative
All these words and I'm left in a ship travelling to ..... who knows where. They're going on their Honeymoon? I don't know what the Orator thought but it was quite important. I loved the Characters but you drug them along without them knowing where they were going, where were they going to live, is intimacy compatible? You spent so much time around the marriage then blew it leaving the story without Resolution. If there is a Part 2 I would be happy at the prospect.
Borrowed from Star Trek + Snow White: reverse the polarity + love conquers all => Ultimate Stupidity. Physics does not work this way. Especially gravity.
Again a serpentine species with mammaries?
SEQUELS- Some humbly offered suggestions: PART 2- Gravitational Anomoly has taken them off course and vectors them to a confrontation with thousands and thousands and thousands of couples that seem to be exactly like themselves. They sense Alternates from other SPACE-TIME-ENERGY Alternates. Some of these alternates have them in deep sharing, some have them cool almost hostile to each other, some have them actually fighting drawing blood from each other, some show one very sad physical being standing next to a ghostly apparition of the other, some have both of them ghostly Dead with thousands of other possibilities. They realize the necessity of their need to interact with these other Slternate Couples. They realize they need tofocus on their own Bond and proceed to interact with the other Simularca / Alternates of themselves to smooth out any wrinkles in the Alternative Transdimensional "Realities". By doing so, they can move forward to THEIR OWN FUTURE. PART 3- they become a Family with the birth of two sets of identical twins. They must parent their children carefully. The last PART 3 episode sees them becoming GRANDPARENTS ! PART 4- They find that Einstein-Rosen-Podolsky Spooky Trransdimensional Entanglements allow for all Alternative Simularca to Interact, Share, Learn, Grow, Transmogrify into something impossible to quantify / understand. PART 5- Sees them springing into a PREQUEL ALTERNATIVE to set the groundwork for PARTS 2, 3, and 4. And it all recycles. There is no BIG BANG, but something akin to an occiliatory inversion coming out the other side almost like taking a well used pair of my socks abd turning them inside out !
The narrator never mentioned whether or not Ethan or the Princess had sex or were even capable of doing it!
True, and why leave. Where are they going to, and why? If she is a princess, he could be the consort. There are so many possibilities for the plot, and there are enough avenues for their growth, easily room for a middle, and then Ethan supporting the new queen in the end, being the diplomat/spouse/parent/and engineer. Have fun
Bad, BAD choice of narration voice and style; almost to the point of distraction. It ruined the story for me.
Is this a book?
AI 🤖
Going by the illustrations used in these stories, IMHO ALL the alien women are ugly. 😮 Don't know what they are like as people and don't really care. As the saying goes: "Beauty is skin-deep, ugly goes all the way to the bone."
I do have to question the idea in most of these stories that all these species are interfertile with humans/Terrans. Biology strongly suggests that isn't possible. We have enough problems with intraspecies fertility. I am a Terran human, yet if I had a child with another Terran human female there is a 25% likelihood that any children we had would manifest a genetic defect, and a 50% liklihood the child would have a recessive genetic defect that could show up in the following generations. It is a double recessive, so both mother and father would have to pass it on. In my case, it's a100% guarantee I would pass on the defective gene. I didn't like that, hence I never had children.
Now consider the possibility that there would be a strong likelihood that there would be a genetic mismatch of some kind between H. Sapiens and an alien female or male. Willing to take the chance?
An incomplete story.
A good story line, but too much time spent on their feelings! More humor mixed with action would have been nice! Thanks though! I still enjoyed it!
Word salad. Mixed metaphor. Please get a thesaurus and read more. "blanket of unfamiliarity" (just an example) is not idiomatic. Repetitive phrases throughout as if they were unique descriptions. Most of your story is fluff and there is almost zero world-building. No personality to your characters. This is so sad as a submission. This story hurt my brain to listen to because it was so disjointed.
Ugh - repetitive text. AI reader terrible.
The purpose of marriage is procreation. This story is just a "hey - we can rule the world." It's Star Trek the motion picture + alien + human = some vast creature that can control it's physical environment. Ugh. The Star Trek movie was watchable. This would not be.
When I saw Star Trek The Movie, I thought it was a TV show worth of plot, stretched beyond its life to a movie. Have fun
So boring. :(
Oh, oh, oh the lovely emotions, I'm sure the blathering wokes will love this tripe. What a waste of time.