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  • Опубликовано: 25 дек 2014
  • Merry Christmas Everyone! I hope you all had a wonderful Christmas
    Please let me know which book cover design you prefer in the comments below! You can PREORDER my book here: www.amazon.co.uk/The-Glam-Guid...
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Комментарии • 6 тыс.

  • @joannehellard8671
    @joannehellard8671 9 лет назад +312

    I think of the options the pink one is better. HOWEVER, if your publishers are looking at these comments I think you could get rid of the smaller pictures and your face should pretty much take up the whole cover. For example, a picture of you doing your makeup with your back to the camera, so all your beautiful golden locks are showcased, but we could see your face in the mirror. I would look at Lauren Conrad - esque pictures. She is very well put together. I think the cover could look more professional. To me, you appeal to youtubers your own age, and higher, you act your age, and you come across as very professional, sophisticated and conservative (in a good way) and the current book cover doesn't really reflect that to me. It is still something to be very proud of and this is only my opinion, I just think it could look a little less thrown together. Even the square edges on the smaller photos look a little stark/harsh, and to me that doesn't reflect you as a person.

    • @sheilarocks2001
      @sheilarocks2001 9 лет назад +5

      I would agree. It would be nice if you could focus on your and the star just because that is what defines you and pulls you away from others. Just an idea.

    • @giannag8897
      @giannag8897 9 лет назад +1

      I agree 100%

    • @Keepinitreal55
      @Keepinitreal55 9 лет назад +8

      I completely agree with you as well, I think the smaller photos look like they don't even blend together that well, like they've just been randomly thrown together. There could definitely be better shots used for the photos, like you said, either her sitting in front of a mirror doing hair/makeup, or doing some sort of DIY project. Better than a pair of heels or blue nails for sure

    • @alannavelasquez9801
      @alannavelasquez9801 9 лет назад

      I agree

    • @miss00tess
      @miss00tess 9 лет назад +6

      I agree...not trying to be mean or anything ,I appreciate that you actually ask us for advice so I think it's right to be honest..both covers are just too busy too much of everything you are just so classy and simple i think your book cover should reflect that..

  • @jenniferisabella4287
    @jenniferisabella4287 9 лет назад +196

    As a graphic designer I think the one on the right is the best. The color contrast makes the text pop and is visually more attention grabbing. I also think the photos are better. The purple one is nice, but the colors don't pop and read flat so while pretty and girly it's not as attention grabbing ... And it's more cliche for a beauty book ( the colors). I like the green!

    • @3we8ui
      @3we8ui 9 лет назад

      I agree!

    • @irismadeleine
      @irismadeleine 9 лет назад +1

      I like the green one better, as well. As you said, pink is a little bit cliché...

    • @marianaazambuja5910
      @marianaazambuja5910 9 лет назад

      I'm a graphic designer too and couldn't agree more!! The one with the green background looks better :)

    • @JessicaMotion
      @JessicaMotion 9 лет назад

      I agree! :)

    • @emmaleehanchek
      @emmaleehanchek 9 лет назад

      100% Agree.

  • @1LeiaPrincess
    @1LeiaPrincess 9 лет назад +682

    Honestly Fleur i would advise you to pick something more sophisticated, minimalistic and "clean" for the cover. The ones you presented looked more childish, especially the pictures along the top made it look as if my 14 year old cousin made it. I would invision your book cover to look more "chic" and "high end" , like some gorgeous coffee table books i've seen. I say this in the NICEST way possible, cause i really respect the hard work you've put into this. It's my honest advice as i would say it to my best friend.

    • @YelloPixieDust
      @YelloPixieDust 9 лет назад +100

      I completely agree in the nicest way possible. Something chic like a white background with black and rose gold to compliment your style would be perfect.

    • @1LeiaPrincess
      @1LeiaPrincess 9 лет назад +53

      Karen S I agree, and in fact i really like your idea of white and rosegold with some black details! It would be much more fitting and luxurious looking! You can't judge a book by its cover, but let's be honest, especially when it comes to "lifestyle/beauty/fashion" coffee table books, the cover has to look "high-end" and something you would want to display. I think that kind of minimalistic cover would suit Fleur better! ;)

    • @sandrapolat4664
      @sandrapolat4664 9 лет назад +15

      I agree dont like this cover book....

    • @MegaButterfly1212
      @MegaButterfly1212 9 лет назад +35

      Also no one should have their face on a cover. at least move it to the back cover or the inside cover

    • @shagunkaur8140
      @shagunkaur8140 9 лет назад +2

      Agreed

  • @alyssiagotfanz1492
    @alyssiagotfanz1492 9 лет назад +8

    Christmas morning I woke up and my mom was crying because she couldn't afford christmas this year so I hugged her and told her it was okay , because she trys her best and I'm greatful for what I do have . I have a roof over my head , food on my table , Electricy in my house , & most inportantly a beautiful hard working mom . I have all I could ever ask for . & some people don't have that , so everyone needs to be greatful for what they do have . 💓😘😍✊& I hope you all enjoyed your holidays .

  • @blondevlogger
    @blondevlogger 9 лет назад +295

    A nice matte white cover with "The Glam Guide" in gold or silver script and some gold or silver stars would suit your image and your channel much more.. This looks like another version of zoella's book, anyone agree??

    • @chelsealevi7750
      @chelsealevi7750 9 лет назад +13

      I actually like the pink one but after reading this I totally know what you mean! Something chic and simple with embossed metallic lettering would look so lush!!

    • @quincycole5307
      @quincycole5307 9 лет назад +3

      Yes I think the white would be perfect!

    • @jujumitko
      @jujumitko 9 лет назад +1

      I sososososossosooooooo agreee

    • @lucylooxxx7849
      @lucylooxxx7849 9 лет назад

      Zoes book is amzing i think fleurs looks kinda cheap not being nasty xxxx love ya

    • @Gracied-fz4qh
      @Gracied-fz4qh 9 лет назад +1

      I think that is such a great idea, just white with gold writing and stars would look so nice ⭐️

  • @emilylangford5550
    @emilylangford5550 9 лет назад +410

    I'm such a fan of yours Fleur, and that's why I was disappointed by the covers! I feel like they do not represent you nor your target audience.
    I was thinking embossed rose gold title and a simple illustration just like the My Little Box illustration which is so sophisticated and chic, and much more glam!

    • @Sharveyparker
      @Sharveyparker 9 лет назад +12

      I agree 100%

    • @bunnys9539
      @bunnys9539 9 лет назад +31

      yes!!! I was so disappointed when I saw the covers, they look like they've been thrown together by teenagers doing a school project.

    • @michellesgarmin
      @michellesgarmin 9 лет назад +17

      My thoughts exactly, I don't feel like Fleur's target audience is going to be reached with either of the choices. That would be such a shame as Fleur has put lots of hard work into her book!

    • @aZombieExtra
      @aZombieExtra 9 лет назад +3

      I agree completely. I had just commented before seeing this. And in my head was thinking embossed title and classy illustration much like the one you mentioned.

    • @TayTks
      @TayTks 9 лет назад +1

      Agreed!

  • @SashaBratzFan14
    @SashaBratzFan14 9 лет назад +67

    I really love your videos Fleur, but I feel disappointed with the covers. They don't really seem like your style, and they look more like Zoella's book, who you are so much better than! I thought that a cover with a dark pink background and The Glam Guide wrote in gold swirly writing would look so much better. Also with illustrations and not actual photos. Although I am a teenager, the cover makes it look like it's for a younger audience. A different cover would make it look more timeless and appealing for all ages in my opinion. And make it look more glam too! I'm only saying this because I am a big fan of yours and want your book to do really well!

    • @folumodel
      @folumodel 9 лет назад

      Lo she's not better than soella

    • @ellievisionBeauty
      @ellievisionBeauty 9 лет назад +1

      sophia noelle who's soella haha

    • @bbflo99
      @bbflo99 9 лет назад +3

      I agreed right up to the point in which you decided to bring zoella into this. They have completely different styles and of course one is going to appeal to you more the way you worded it seemed to me a little rude an uncalled for.

    • @riddhibhatt1482
      @riddhibhatt1482 9 лет назад +1

      You don't have to criticize other people to give advice. That was awfully rude and uncalled for.

    • @SashaBratzFan14
      @SashaBratzFan14 9 лет назад +1

      rb ford I honestly wasn't meant to be rude, maybe I worded it wrong.

  • @pieceful_puzzling
    @pieceful_puzzling 9 лет назад +2

    I love that the pink has the teacup from your mother! I think that is a nice little personal touch that a lot of people will not get, but that is wonderful for you :)

  • @theliasmia
    @theliasmia 9 лет назад +189

    The pink one. However I don't think it's glam. I'm not feeling the vibe at all. It looks too messy and the pic with the hands is weird.
    This is your book. YOUR book!
    I think you should use the artist who made your mug illustration. You standing on the world with stars and makeup and so on :)

    • @MiaMusicLoverTW
      @MiaMusicLoverTW 9 лет назад +5

      Great idea!:))

    • @TomRipley7350
      @TomRipley7350 9 лет назад +30

      I'm sorry to say this if it's a done deal but I have to agree. When I first clapped eyes on Fleur, it was the large green almond-shaped eyes and the shock of blonde wavy hair. She's ripe for a cute caricature, one even more identifiable than the one on the mug, maybe with one holding out a camera in front of her face to reference RUclips and how she gained her following. I have to say that she's worth more than these covers. I mean, look at the drawing her brother gave to her. He could have created something wonderful and unique. I feel an opportunity has been wasted.

    • @philippawood5047
      @philippawood5047 9 лет назад +11

      I also agree that I'd love an illustrated cover - perhaps the illustrator who is doing the rest of the book? They could perhaps take the photos and draw those images instead if you want to keep to the current design? I know this might not be the feedback you want, but I'm sure we all want the book to sell as well as it can knowing how much work you've put into it. You deserve something really special.

  • @tayloredbeautyedit
    @tayloredbeautyedit 9 лет назад +499

    I like the one on the right more, but honestly not a big fan of either one. I'd say get rid of all of the photos so it's more minimalistic. Just have the makeup brush on the bottom and the text/stars. The photos cheapen it for me, and make it less visually appealing.

    • @kw7957
      @kw7957 9 лет назад +1

      P

    • @kirstyann
      @kirstyann 9 лет назад +6

      this needs to be top comment so Fleur can see! their idea is great but I agree 100% on the photos

    • @InoSB
      @InoSB 9 лет назад +6

      Totally agree with you (i'm a graphic designer), the green one is better but i would get rid of all the photos. There is too much going on for me in these covers.

    • @caro_xo
      @caro_xo 9 лет назад +8

      I completely agree with you. I think the photos chosen make it look a bit tacky and I'd expect to see the photo of Fleur on the back of the book not the front. The text is nice though.

    • @sophiebrown7116
      @sophiebrown7116 9 лет назад +7

      I agree the photos just looks oddly placed and not appealing

  • @momotothechip
    @momotothechip 9 лет назад +1

    Your shirt/necklace combonations are always on point!

  • @JordanEmmons
    @JordanEmmons 9 лет назад +16

    If these are the ONLY two options, then the green one for sure. The green one has better contrast between the background and the "fleur de force" signature. Overall, though, I would push for a different cover option. It looks like another pre-packaged RUclipsr book cover, not like an actual glam guide done by a professional.

  • @beautycfw
    @beautycfw 9 лет назад +170

    I'm not that keen on either cover, but you've spent so much time writing this book.. so I think you should ask for another designer to put forward their designs. I know it'll lengthen the process but neither really do you justice! They're both quite basic & childish. Sorry Fleur!

    • @beautycfw
      @beautycfw 9 лет назад +25

      thinking about it.. if you took away the top photos, and put the main title in silver foil finish, it could look really good :)

  • @kerris-5164
    @kerris-5164 9 лет назад +164

    I like the pictures of the left cover and the colours on the right cover x

  • @TheJoyfulGirls2
    @TheJoyfulGirls2 9 лет назад

    The "green" one is the most prettiest and the one that reminds me most of you :) I can't wait to read it!

  • @Nanna2312
    @Nanna2312 9 лет назад +130

    In the store I would be most drawn to the green one, but when I look closely, I personally like the pictures on the pink one better :-)

  • @gatorgirl1720
    @gatorgirl1720 9 лет назад +92

    I think something gold with silver and gold stars with your name in a curvy fancy font would be beautiful! But between the plink and the green I'd pick the pink. I just think it looks a little thrown together and last minute.

  • @melissacryder3949
    @melissacryder3949 9 лет назад

    OMG, your gifts are so lovely! What incredible and thoughtful friends and family. I love the bag because it looks gorgeous and organized. I usually carry a suitcase with all my junk.

  • @shahadjz2
    @shahadjz2 9 лет назад

    That illustration is adorable! I wanna see a whole movie with these characters in it! so magicallll

  • @oliviaskelton640
    @oliviaskelton640 9 лет назад +103

    Seeing some of the illustrations from your book in one of your vlogs, I feel neither of the covers suit it. I am a massive fan of you and your videos, and have been watching you for many years now, and would hate to see the hard work and effort you have put into creating this book not to pay off because of the cover. I feel you could create a really sophisticated and simple cover, which would attract a wide range of audiences. If one of those was to be chosen, I'd go for the pink one. But whatever the cover is, I will be purchasing it as I can see the large amount of effort you have put into it!

    • @joannehellard8671
      @joannehellard8671 9 лет назад +2

      I completely agree, and just wrote something very similar. You said it very well though.

  • @banaatoz2
    @banaatoz2 9 лет назад +258

    Oh, these covers do NOT represent you very well
    !!!
    Could be more sophisticated!
    This cover is not made from someone, who watched your videos. With this cover, you are not reaching your usual target audience, it looks like made for much younger, treasure trove of experience - girls.

    • @TieganSwift
      @TieganSwift 9 лет назад +18

      I completely agree, this shines through more for me in the book that's on the left, the pink and purple makes it seem like its aimed towards preteens which I'm assuming its not

    • @azwinazizz
      @azwinazizz 9 лет назад +32

      I completely agree with Jo. These covers definitely do not represent you well Fleur. I've never missed any of your videos since you first started doing RUclips and you are pure class - i don't think these covers do you much justice. And I also agree with some other comments that perhaps an illustrated cover would be good. Please believe me these are not negative comments, but from viewers whose been following you for years and just want the best for you and your book, we know how hard you've worked on it. Sending you lots of love.

    • @liesmina
      @liesmina 9 лет назад +15

      I agree, the cover is a bit cute, but not very sophisticated... when I buy a book I like that It also looks good and I can put it in a shelf in open space where everyone can see it.... but I would not purchase this.... it looks very teen like... and I'm way over that age. Maybe just because I'm in a design sphere myself, cover of this book to me looks like either person who made this doesn't watch/like your videos and/or is a new designer who spent like 20 minutes for this... Sorry, no hard feelings. I love your videos and you are amazing!!! Hope you will have a great success with your book!

    • @kaykay00131
      @kaykay00131 9 лет назад +6

      Agreed! Please redo the cover if you can

    • @JaneMichelleTv
      @JaneMichelleTv 9 лет назад +4

      Agree. Either more like you, sophisticated or sex & the city meets fleur,...I think PINK pics and color r my favorite. I guess their okay but I'd change the boxed graphics on images..at least of you...UR the brand could just be a pic of u with tea & lipstick in hand :).

  • @TheColorBroddas
    @TheColorBroddas 9 лет назад

    The purple cover! 😁 I m so excited for u!!! And can't wait to get my hands on them 👍

  • @JessKaplan
    @JessKaplan 9 лет назад

    I like the cover with the mug in the middle, looks more balanced. And I like the makeup brushes in it.

  • @stacd6425
    @stacd6425 9 лет назад +121

    I was drawn to the green one but I like the pictures on the pink one better

  • @Atikahxo
    @Atikahxo 9 лет назад +188

    I feel like the book cover would look better if the photos weren't there and it was just the writing because to me it would look more professional. I love you Fleur but I hate to say that both covers looks kind of cheap? The photo's look like they were just found off google and were copy pasted onto the cover.

    • @SamanthaNikoletta
      @SamanthaNikoletta 9 лет назад +24

      i agree i don't think that either cover works... someone else in the comments said something about rose gold, small stars and maybe just the text with no pictures and i'm leaning toward that as well.

    • @BlueTulipe
      @BlueTulipe 9 лет назад +3

      I agree the pictures are to much.

    • @katarinaharris7478
      @katarinaharris7478 9 лет назад +2

      I 150% agree, those covers are not the best at all! They are almost tacky!

    • @nicoleevans2998
      @nicoleevans2998 9 лет назад +4

      Remove all the pictures and you have a best seller!

    • @yunkeli1882
      @yunkeli1882 9 лет назад +2

      Totally agree, but I do think that the brush at the bottom looks kinda cute and that she should keep that on her cover

  • @madcoconut09
    @madcoconut09 9 лет назад +1

    I say pink! Looking forward to the book and glad you had a lovely christmas! x

  • @missdanitinks
    @missdanitinks 9 лет назад

    Love the one on the left, the pink one I believe, with the cuppa and painted nails at the top. Beautiful!

  • @unconceivable
    @unconceivable 9 лет назад +185

    Fleur, don't want to injure you but I personally don't like neither of the covers. Composition is not so good. The only one thing I like is the brush in the corner) But all in all it looks quite primitive. I'm sure book will be amazing and definitely will buy one for myself. Just my opinion - work a little bit more on cover. But anyway, if choose btw these two - the left one is better :)

    • @unconceivable
      @unconceivable 9 лет назад +3

      Forget to mention, I like the style of the picture which was put in your sample box.
      And also think that it'll be better to put in the cover your photo, doing makeup for example. So only your photo on the white paper - but it will be stylish, with good quality.

  • @mmeyst
    @mmeyst 9 лет назад +99

    These don't speak "glam guide" to me. It actually reminds me of a cookbook.

    • @Sharveyparker
      @Sharveyparker 9 лет назад +60

      I agree. They look like a cross between a cook book & a teen magazine. I was expecting something more glamorous.

  • @RTgirl11
    @RTgirl11 9 лет назад

    The PINK cover compliments the pictures on the cover better!! Both are beautiful! Congrats Fleur!

  • @1DirectionsWay
    @1DirectionsWay 9 лет назад

    This is the first video of you that I watch, and two minutes into it I fell in love. I'm going to watch the rest of your videos now :)

  • @vickya3403
    @vickya3403 9 лет назад +193

    I hate to be cruel and add another slightly negative voice to the cover scenario... But I just think that her publishers need to hear this message loud and clear. Those covers do not encapsulate Fleur's style at all. Too kitschy/slightly childish to work. If I didn't know that Fleur was an expert at interior design/style/makeup, I wouldn't buy it off of first impressions. It would be worth the extra work to acquire some customers who don't know her from RUclips.

    • @leoowl9850
      @leoowl9850 9 лет назад +12

      unfortunately I agree!

    • @Sharveyparker
      @Sharveyparker 9 лет назад +7

      I agree.

    • @blissgirl9052
      @blissgirl9052 9 лет назад +6

      I agree as well. These covers are too busy, and very slopped together. Something clean and classic -- we don't all need pictures on our covers! -- would be so much more appropriate!

    • @alicej83
      @alicej83 9 лет назад +13

      I've never commented before but have been watching Fleur's videos for years. I totally, totally agree, I think her publishers/designers have really let her down with these. Given how hard Fleur has worked on her personal style, her brand and writing the book these do not seem to reflect her style at all - where is the glam in these covers? Please start again Fleur and don't let them push you into publishing with these!! xx

    • @gabrielalulaa
      @gabrielalulaa 9 лет назад +5

      I am a graphic designer and I completly agree.... those covers look cheap and not profesional at all sorry Fleur! they need more glam jaja

  • @yayitsheatherr422
    @yayitsheatherr422 9 лет назад +250

    I have to agree with a lot of people and say that the covers aren't the best for the book. You've been putting so much effort into the books and the covers don't look like there was really any effort put into them. I hate to say it but that's not exactly a cover that will do your hard work justice... I like the pinkish background better, and I like the brush and powder on the bottom. But the little pictures on the top look like a child's school project. I think pictures like that would be better featured on the back cover. And for the pic of you it's beautiful but might look nicer if they edited the background out so it kind of meshed with the pink more. And maybe placed it on the other side due tot the way you're facing- I think it would flow better. Sorry, just trying to be honest. Either way, I'm super excited for the book and I hope you don't take everyone's suggestions negatively. We just want to help! 😊

    • @yayitsheatherr422
      @yayitsheatherr422 9 лет назад +47

      Idea: if your brother is as creative as his gift shows, maybe he could make your book cover design?

    • @simonagherman
      @simonagherman 9 лет назад

      yayitsheatherr422
      yup, that's another great idea.

    • @LeeGeez
      @LeeGeez 9 лет назад +1

      yayitsheatherr422 I was going to recommend the same thing, but he may be quite busy these days. But I agree with you that the cover doesn't match her image/brand and could be elevated to match what I'm sure is awesome content in her book. Proud of you Fleur!

    • @TheGigglingMuggle
      @TheGigglingMuggle 9 лет назад +5

      I agree, but I like the green better! It contrasts with the pink tones and I think it makes even prettier :) maybe add a few gold stars instead of the picture, and it would be puuuuuurfect! We're so proud of you Fleur!!!

    • @VlogsWithAlex1
      @VlogsWithAlex1 9 лет назад

      Totally agree! Xx

  • @allycw3
    @allycw3 9 лет назад

    Definitely the pink! Love it! Congratulations!

  • @ellenklaver5470
    @ellenklaver5470 9 лет назад

    I'd go for the left cover, the purple makes your book such a luxury!

  • @natten74
    @natten74 9 лет назад +121

    Ive got a great idea... how about getting your subscribers to design a cover and submiting that to the publisher? Im sure one of us could do a better representation of you!! then you'd have hundreds to choose from...

    • @lindachristine83
      @lindachristine83 9 лет назад +4

      Agree with u

    • @JaneMichelleTv
      @JaneMichelleTv 9 лет назад +11

      That's what hank and John green have done for many many projects....so many talented viewers who know the audience better and whatFluer is like at least on camera...

  • @Taravat76
    @Taravat76 9 лет назад +280

    Fleur, I adore you, but I didn't like either cover, really. You are such a sophisticated, beautiful woman and I really think both covers remind me more of young adult book covers... just my 2cents.

    • @ameliafearr
      @ameliafearr 9 лет назад +8

      I Agree!

    • @Caroline333223
      @Caroline333223 9 лет назад +11

      Agree.. But if i nad to choose i'd choose the green one cause the pink one makes u look like stupie blondie girl which your not(!)

    • @giannag8897
      @giannag8897 9 лет назад +1

      I feel like the pictures need a frame or something..

  • @salamiguy
    @salamiguy 9 лет назад

    I love the pink one! I'm so happy your making a book

  • @fionaharvey2184
    @fionaharvey2184 9 лет назад

    I love the pink one best. So excited for your book!!

  • @bowsandpearls
    @bowsandpearls 9 лет назад +102

    the pink one but the picture of the author goes in the back. It doesn't seem too "glam" though. I'm not getting that vibe.

    • @padelackles
      @padelackles 9 лет назад +17

      Totally right, if the author's pic isn't the main focus of the cover, it should be on the back. It actually took me a while to focus on Fleur's face on the front, which seems like a big no-no if you're gonna have your face on the front at all.

    • @AlongwithChristy
      @AlongwithChristy 9 лет назад +8

      Agree. I think her photo should be on the back where she explains the description of the book. It makes it more personal.

    • @MrsTofuschnitzl
      @MrsTofuschnitzl 9 лет назад +1

      It looks the exact opposite of glam and also like the person who made it doesn't know anything about graphic design. sorry.

  • @happyniss24
    @happyniss24 9 лет назад +14

    They say in retail shops that people are more attracted to things on their left side, because it's how we process information, from left to right, or something like that, and it's so funny because I've totally found myself being more inclined to pick something on the left, sooo I made a metal note to switch things around ( because I'm a rebel ;) )and paused the video to look at each cover, but must say I still prefer the left, purple/pink cover! Haha! I think it's more you! Both are beautiful though! So exciting!

  • @Laura.v.b
    @Laura.v.b 9 лет назад

    The book cover one the left is more eye grabbing and draws my eye more, even though I do love the colour scheme of the one on the right.

  • @krystalharned-holmes8276
    @krystalharned-holmes8276 9 лет назад

    I love the pink! Can't wait until the book hits shelves and I can buy it!!!!!!

  • @janpanos1527
    @janpanos1527 9 лет назад +268

    Fleur I'm so excited for your book!!! However, I do not like either of the covers, I'm sorry. To me it looks quite cheap and something I would not want to display on my coffee table or bookshelf. It would look much nicer if it was simple and classic just like your style. Those scattered pictures are just too much and look tacky. You've worked too hard for your book to give off that vibe. Still looking to buy it though! xoxo

    • @susantimmerman4757
      @susantimmerman4757 9 лет назад +38

      Agree. Boring covers! Maybe ask your talented brother to illustrate something for your cover. I wouldn't pick your book up at all based on the cover design. I love the illustration of you on your mug! Glad to see you had a happy Christmas and keep vlogging! You are my fav!

    • @ameliawalsh3766
      @ameliawalsh3766 9 лет назад +12

      Completely agree with this comment .
      It doesn't reflect your or your channel. You are much classier then either of these covers

    • @lishirley7459
      @lishirley7459 9 лет назад +2

      I think covers are bad that they looks like someone who don't know about design, something from unprofessionals! Please consider to re-do it!

    • @ChapaChannel
      @ChapaChannel 9 лет назад

      i have to agree with this! i'm a second year graphic design student and i've seen better work in first year. it does look tacky and not your style at all! very zoella-y and i was hoping for something a bit more mature! not a fan of the title too but good design can make all the difference.

  • @MademoiselleRuta
    @MademoiselleRuta 9 лет назад +14

    I have to agree with the other commenters, but these covers don't seem like you. You've always been such a sophisticated, classy and polished young lady, and these covers just look quite cheap. I think a photo of you getting ready putting on makeup or doing your hair or something would be a lot better. Even something like Lauren Conrad's book cover. Simple, elegant, and you.

  • @brittc4592
    @brittc4592 9 лет назад

    Oh this is so exciting! I can't wait for your book! I gravitated towards the pink more so.... the pink one! xo

  • @hayleyshannon2745
    @hayleyshannon2745 9 лет назад +1

    Can't wait to read your book! I prefer the pink one 🎀💕

  • @carolinewalsh8888
    @carolinewalsh8888 9 лет назад +13

    The mint cover on the right is far more striking! The pink/purple one is more of your standard colours for a beauty book. If I saw the two in the shop the mint would I draw me in quicker than the pink!

  • @LovefromIsabel
    @LovefromIsabel 9 лет назад +42

    Of the two, I like the pink better. However, resonating with previous comments, I thought the 5 pictures at the top didn't fit well with what I perceive to be Fleur's style and it doesn't look as professional or put together as it could be. I love you Fleur, but I'm not sure whether your face should be on the cover - and if it is, perhaps some shape (e.g. circular frames or Polaroid frames) would make it seem more put together. Overall, I am so excited to read your book, but I hope the cover can look more professional. :)

    • @LovefromIsabel
      @LovefromIsabel 9 лет назад

      For some ideas, if you really want the multiple pictures, you could put them in a frame (e.g. a Polaroid frame) and stack them on top of each other to look like a stack of photos or the like! :)

  • @amybritain2470
    @amybritain2470 9 лет назад

    I love the look of the pink cover! I really like the photos but I think they are both nice😊💕

  • @llhughes1803
    @llhughes1803 9 лет назад +1

    I like the one on the left. The one with the pink blush and brushes. I like the pops of color.

  • @gloriaventura
    @gloriaventura 9 лет назад +6

    I'm saying this with the best intentions at heart. These covers don't reflect you, your channel or your blog, Fleur. I hope this doesn't make you nervous or anxious, it's just an opportunity to keep making your book better and getting it where I know you want it to be. You have very high standards, never compromise them. This is YOUR book. Thank you for putting so much hard work into it. Looking forward to buying it.

  • @MissTimewaster
    @MissTimewaster 9 лет назад +65

    Honestly, Fleur... I don't like either of the covers.
    The font is nice, both colour schemes are pretty (I think pink would be best), I really like the powder/brush at the bottom + you look great in the photo BUT it's the square photos... It makes both covers look very plain, basic, hate to say this but 'cheap' almost.
    I think if something was done to the layout/framing of the photos then you'd be on to a winner.
    On a happier note, glad to see you got lots of lovely gifts for Xmas + all with personal touches. :) Shame about the coat but I hope you found some fab stuff in the sales today. x

    • @MissTimewaster
      @MissTimewaster 9 лет назад +22

      Forgot to say... That illustrator you're using for your book. I looked up her stuff + it's gorgeous. Could you not maybe incorporate some of her work onto the cover instead?

  • @peffbee88
    @peffbee88 9 лет назад

    oh how I love your videos :)
    I am so going to miss your daily vlogs! vlogmas saved my december :) thank you, fleur!

  • @threeoh9
    @threeoh9 9 лет назад

    I prefer the pictures of the pink book cover, but I prefer the green colour scheme. But as everyone already said, you can't go wrong with either, because, well, it's YOUR book. Can you believe it? Well done! You should be so proud of yourself. You made a really good job, Fleur.

  • @SimoneWulff
    @SimoneWulff 9 лет назад +3

    The cover on the left for sure - the stilettos look sooo much better when you see the heel, and the pinkish shade suits your haircolor better. Plus the minerals from the makeup in the bottom is much prettier in pink, than it is in the white/mint/pink/purple. Go for the left one!

  • @sparklefarter
    @sparklefarter 9 лет назад +39

    Lovely and such thoughtful gifts! They all know you so well. :P
    I love the green cover better. It's brighter in my eyes and seems more of an eye catcher. Though as a graphics designer, I feel like they could've done better at the design of the book with the pictures. :/

    • @talaa4294
      @talaa4294 9 лет назад +13

      True, the square pictures don't look that great

    • @irismadeleine
      @irismadeleine 9 лет назад +2

      I agree. I actually don't think that the pictures are necessary at all.

  • @ercoveney
    @ercoveney 9 лет назад

    Definitely the left book cover! Lovely xxxx

  • @paulinebarraque-bigot6739
    @paulinebarraque-bigot6739 9 лет назад

    Really really love the first cover on the left! The pink powder at the bottom really brighten up the cover :)

  • @s-nf5509
    @s-nf5509 9 лет назад +12

    I have to agree with most people on here...I was a bit disappointed by the covers as they don't scream Fleur De Force to me...they scream pre teen 😕
    You are a sophisticated woman and these covers look like the person that has designed them doesn't know you at all and has thrown something half arsed together.
    You adore high end products,rose gold,stars,cooking,family,dogs....I saw one or two of the above.
    I think a re do is required,but if this cannot be done id have to say the green...however I prefer the pictures in the pink x

  • @gpbandchick2010
    @gpbandchick2010 9 лет назад +21

    the one on the left is better.However just like many others have mentioned,not to put you down- or say that the publishers don't know what they are doing- but you have been working so hard on this book and I think the cover should look more chic and glamorous and not like a collage you can make yourself. Your photo should be the main one and definitely keep the brush with the pink powder. Your paying the publishers so they should put more effort and come up with some different designs/grapics.

    • @gpbandchick2010
      @gpbandchick2010 9 лет назад

      I like the Fleur de Force font keep that too! maybe put that under your portrait. The title shouldnt take up the whole page

  • @Alice-ch5gf
    @Alice-ch5gf 9 лет назад +2

    The pink one, but I agree with what the others say in that because we are all a lot older than other youtubers viewers, something suggested below like the gold stars and elegant font maybe with a white or off white background would look so classy and sophisticated :) love you lots fleur!!!

  • @lorif255
    @lorif255 9 лет назад

    What a precious video with such cute gifts!! Ur friends and family are so thoughtful!!! The cover debate, I prefer the one on the left with more pink in it and the high heels 😍😬👠

  • @shannonestelle
    @shannonestelle 9 лет назад +20

    obsessed with your necklace :D

    • @coolkids7502
      @coolkids7502 9 лет назад

      i was just gunna say that and then saw yr comment

    • @dailydoll6612
      @dailydoll6612 9 лет назад +2

      obsessed with u shannon, i watched your Christmas vid 4 times - ily

  • @DramaticMac
    @DramaticMac 9 лет назад +3

    I don't know why but I am so drawn to the pink cover for your book xx

  • @CaitlinTWxxx
    @CaitlinTWxxx 9 лет назад

    Oooh I love love love the pink one on the left! Congrats Fleur this is amazing! :D

  • @missnickix
    @missnickix 9 лет назад

    that oliver bonus bracelet is just so so precious!

  • @jazzy364
    @jazzy364 9 лет назад +3

    The contrast of the green cover is awesome. In my opinion it's more professional and appealing to the eye.

  • @evebennettx
    @evebennettx 9 лет назад +26

    I loooove the mint cover on the right! Merry christmas :)

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      @katierichards4656 9 лет назад

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  • @MandiLou41493
    @MandiLou41493 9 лет назад

    What cute stuff you got! Can't eat for the book. My personal favorite cover was the purple!

  • @tammy9596
    @tammy9596 9 лет назад

    The mint green one!! That one looks really lovely x

  • @lianamitt
    @lianamitt 9 лет назад +6

    I like the cover with the green background best. So many RUclipsrs are coming out with books, but yours is the only one that I plan on buying! So proud of you!!!

  • @chloessims
    @chloessims 9 лет назад +6

    I prefer the design of the one on the right but prefer the colours of the left

  • @marinajade8745
    @marinajade8745 9 лет назад

    The left cover!! The pictures are of things that make me think of you!

  • @meganthomas1859
    @meganthomas1859 9 лет назад

    I agree that the green one would look the best if it had the pictures from the pink one. I'm so happy for you Fleur and I know how exciting this must be after so much hard work!!!

  • @SuperGirl01
    @SuperGirl01 9 лет назад +11

    The pink one is prettier, but I have to admit I don't like the top half, wish there was something like the blush brush on top , like a broken lipstick and a spilt nail polish all in pinkish tones to go well with the cover, and not add a personal picture on the front, it makes it look more like a magazine than a book. :)

    • @SuperGirl01
      @SuperGirl01 9 лет назад

      Oh and make the stars on it glittery, it will give it a pop when it's on bookshop shelves ;)

  • @TheSayerp
    @TheSayerp 9 лет назад +26

    In no way do I want to come across as being negative, but I feel as if they look like 'templates', they look unfinished and look as if they haven't had much effort put into them. I feel as if you should really put your stamp on them, make them eye-catching and glamorous. Maybe rounded edges on the pictures to soften them? I don't know but I think it is such a big thing for you and it could look so much better, I hope I don't offend you by saying but I'd like to give you my honest opinion. Good luck anyway :) x

    • @TheSayerp
      @TheSayerp 9 лет назад +3

      I also think perhaps take inspiration from your blog, I've just checked it out and the minimalistic and chic theme of your blog and the font of your name could really look great on a book cover! Perhaps with embossing and illustrations like the other comments have suggested :)

  • @isabellewalker3017
    @isabellewalker3017 9 лет назад

    AWWW, Fleur! Seeing you so excited makes me so happy!

  • @simoneboekhoud5566
    @simoneboekhoud5566 9 лет назад

    I like the pink one the most! It looks great Fleur!

  • @eveeeee2378
    @eveeeee2378 9 лет назад

    The box covers are gorgeous! However I prefer the pink one ... Still both so so lovely xx

  • @StyleNovice
    @StyleNovice 9 лет назад +5

    I've been imagining a more 'Lauren Conrad'-esque style cover. White background with close up of Fleur on front but, I vote Pink :)

  • @sophiecairnes4189
    @sophiecairnes4189 9 лет назад +4

    i really like the one on the left because the pink powder really makes it stand out more, cant wait for the book !!xxx

  • @elhunterb93
    @elhunterb93 9 лет назад

    Love the covers! The pink one seems to be more "you"! But whichever you choose will be wonderful!

  • @taca357
    @taca357 9 лет назад

    The pink cover is perfect for your book!! I love you Fleur! *****

  • @belleke18
    @belleke18 9 лет назад +5

    Loved everything you got! I really like the pink cover.

  • @Stinaliza73
    @Stinaliza73 9 лет назад +27

    The pink one without the photos, sorry Fleur. love ya :)

    • @Stinaliza73
      @Stinaliza73 9 лет назад +9

      The photo of you should stay of course!

    • @giannag8897
      @giannag8897 9 лет назад +1

      Stinaliza73 I agree the photos is what I don't like..

  • @apryllou
    @apryllou 9 лет назад

    Congrats on your upcoming book! I love the cover with the makeup brushes :)

  • @hellofrecklesblog
    @hellofrecklesblog 9 лет назад

    That print from your brother's book is incredible, such a sentimental gift! As for the cover, I agree with a bunch of the other comments below, something plain with gold/rose gold text would be more chic and probably fit the style of the book better and it'd appeal to more audiences x

  • @theshadedpinks
    @theshadedpinks 9 лет назад +4

    I dont know how i JUST found you but your videos are so much fun! And you are so gorgeous ❤️

  • @meganmcmahon02
    @meganmcmahon02 9 лет назад +11

    I agree with everyone saying these covers are a bit disappointing tbh! I think covers are a huge part of the marketing of a book and the only people that cover will really appeal to are preteens... I love both the green and the pink colours, plus the typography of the title/your name/the star and the make up brush at the bottom, but the photos on it look so awkward and misplaced! Would it be possible for a few more designs to be created to give us/you (because you definitely deserve for this book to be a success!) some more options? I don't think the covers accurately represent how mature and sleek you are - I understand why the photos are there, but maybe have them on the back cover instead?

  • @PetraGreene
    @PetraGreene 9 лет назад

    The pink cover is perfect! I think cause your name's fleur I immediately think of pink. It's just the color associated with flowers and beauty.

  • @danniihumph2681
    @danniihumph2681 9 лет назад

    The pink book cover looks so good xx

  • @EllsyBells
    @EllsyBells 9 лет назад +11

    I'm a graphic design/communication student and I find these two covers rather unprofessional looking. However the photo of you is beautiful, have you thought about having that photo in the same ink/hand rendered style as the illustrations which feature in your book? I think that might look quite nice:-) I love your videos and can't wait to get my hands on a copy of your book x

  • @AngelinaAJDSMusic
    @AngelinaAJDSMusic 9 лет назад

    The green one was absolutely beautiful!

  • @MissSeaworld8
    @MissSeaworld8 9 лет назад

    The green one! Looks professional and interesting :) Love the design! Good luck with your book :)

  • @Spencer-su3xs
    @Spencer-su3xs 9 лет назад +6

    I do have to agree that the covers don't really fit the whole glam idea. I like the writing and the makeup brush at the bottom but the pictures at the top remind me of like a school project. I think maybe if they were drawn into the background or something that could work. I don't want to hurt your feelings because I can tell you're super excited and this is a HUGE deal. In the end YOU have to love it so go with your heart.

  • @pookiielover
    @pookiielover 9 лет назад +5

    I vote for having your brother design your cover

  • @Skelem0
    @Skelem0 9 лет назад

    I prefer the first option! Beautiful cover, congrats Fleur!!

  • @Izziexxo
    @Izziexxo 9 лет назад

    So excited for the book! I love both covers but I prefer the second option (the green background) x

  • @qidddy2024
    @qidddy2024 9 лет назад +10

    I adore you Fleur, so I'm being honest! You gotta ask your publisher to create another cover for you because these covers look quite amateur. I'm not a creative designer or anything but I think a minimalistic cover with no pictures would be better. Perhaps just the words "The Glam Guide" and "FleurDeForce" on it. To replace the pictures of the make up brushes and shoes etc. you can add a caption like "Beauty. Fashion. Lifestyle." A simple background like blurred fairy lights or a rose gold-colored bokeh or glittery background would be nice! As others have mentioned, the photo of yourself can go on the back cover with a little 'About the Author' section. I wish all the best Fleur, and whatever the outcome, I will definitely be purchasing the book (I hope it will be available in my country)!