When the Bird Sings │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • Опубликовано: 5 сен 2024
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Комментарии • 41

  • @sinawomagadla7451
    @sinawomagadla7451 3 года назад +9

    🥺I wrote this poem in the morning at 5am🥺💔 I was so hurt🥺
    Tittle: 💔 Suicidal Thoughts 💔
    By:: Magadla Sinawo Siseko
    I wish I could run away n' hide,
    Cause I can no longer bear the pain Inside.
    I'm tired of living every day lie,
    With sleepless nights as I cry,
    While all I want is to close my eyes n' die.💔
    The pain is no longer bearable,
    The hard times are no longer fightable.
    The pain I feel with every tear I shed,
    I plead for mercy but life hits more harder instead.💔
    I want to set my soul free,
    Cause it seems like life's not meant for me.
    I'm being called by my worse fear,
    Death whispering in my ear
    "Do it nobody cares about you"
    I look around, it's only death on my view.
    Death whispers again, whenever I'm in pain
    "Forget about everyone, forget your life"
    I look around again, all I see is a knife.
    Tears start trickling down my cheek,
    The pain is unbearable, I feel so weak.💔
    When I wake up n' look around,
    I don't want to be in a hospital gown.
    I want to wake up in heaven or hell,
    Cause I'm already there, you can tell.
    You think this is for sympathy?
    No, this is my way of compathy
    Or you can say it is for empathy.
    💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

    • @musictime251
      @musictime251 3 года назад +1

      🥺♥️ Great Poem♥️ I just subscribed on your channel 🥺🥺

    • @sinawomagadla7451
      @sinawomagadla7451 3 года назад

      @just me Yes it is really painful, but ever since I started writing, things are a little bit better.

    • @sinawomagadla7451
      @sinawomagadla7451 3 года назад

      @just me I won't 😊 Thank you very much for the courage♥️ Hoping you subscribed to my channel ♥️😊

    • @sherriwisdom0201
      @sherriwisdom0201 3 года назад

      Writing is therapy...it has worked wonders for me...check out my piece "This is me" on my channel Wisdom Sherri and gimme your two cents✌️

    • @sherriwisdom0201
      @sherriwisdom0201 3 года назад

      Good writing there btw❤️

  • @irynpatience
    @irynpatience 3 года назад +2

    I'll fight for everything that is dear to me even if it means facing my fears

  • @bacon1093
    @bacon1093 3 года назад +4

    This is literally so amazing 🥺

  • @KANOAH.Official
    @KANOAH.Official 3 года назад

    *Stands up clapping loudly* It's REVOLUTIONARY! Don't make me cry over here! lol great stuff. You're gifted.

  • @misky8419
    @misky8419 3 года назад

    Gosh Mel! This is so amazing ❤❤ and so full of wisdom. We dont need to hide behind any imaginary voice of self pity.

  • @Jennifer-hv2bc
    @Jennifer-hv2bc 3 года назад +1

    Beautiful !!! And what a perfect tital!!! 💞💞💞

  • @aceportgas3204
    @aceportgas3204 3 года назад +1

    Wow your poetry always has a deep meaning always blows my mind ❤️❤️❤️

  • @NicholasDemski
    @NicholasDemski 3 года назад

    "Mentally submitting to the lie that we are confused to being inadequate"...that rings true! We can be more if we believe its possible 🙏

  • @Lifefromjapancountryside
    @Lifefromjapancountryside 3 года назад +1

    Beautiful my dear ...
    Thank you ❤️

  • @firstinpoetry
    @firstinpoetry 3 года назад +1

    When the bird sings 🔥🔥 lovely ❤️

  • @LaRoyTechTips
    @LaRoyTechTips 3 года назад

    I love the way you write

  • @classeprepa874
    @classeprepa874 3 года назад +1

    Could u start putting the voice version only in a link for us to download
    Keep it up been following u a year now!!! ❤

  • @bhaskargautam
    @bhaskargautam 3 года назад

    If you said to the heart, the heart would be happy, whatever it is, smiling would be enough ♥️

  • @tainapitanga781
    @tainapitanga781 3 года назад

    Amazing!

  • @abdullkhalifa6859
    @abdullkhalifa6859 3 года назад

    Just Beautiful😖

  • @hazelkalata
    @hazelkalata 3 года назад

    Mesmerizing poem Mel♥️💜😘....keep up with the good work👏

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  3 года назад +1

      Thanks a lot 😊

    • @hazelkalata
      @hazelkalata 3 года назад

      @@MelsThoughts most welcome ☺️💕

  • @nilimakhan586
    @nilimakhan586 3 года назад

    Big fan from Bangladesh 🇧🇩

  • @ministryofpoetry2472
    @ministryofpoetry2472 3 года назад

    great!

  • @sheilagbollie6943
    @sheilagbollie6943 3 года назад

    I love you😘💯
    Keep up the good writing 🥰

  • @aswinsajeev8689
    @aswinsajeev8689 3 года назад

    great ,,,,

  • @ministryofpoetry2472
    @ministryofpoetry2472 3 года назад

    Mel, for how long have you had your channel?

  • @ElijahSwann
    @ElijahSwann 3 года назад

    ❤💯