So few things were really good in this video I really enjoyed it I think you put all of their characters emotions in this video I really enjoyed it you made a wonderful video. Enjoy and understand from it was a well-done Mafia setting even though it wasn't this bad I really enjoyed it and I could see you put all of your effort into this one video it was well done I enjoyed it I learned a lot from making this listen watching this video and I think I can make one like this just by watching this video I think I can make one and I loved this yoonmin fanfiction
Omo it was an amazing story..Tae- who's the father? Yoongi- (to pregnant Jimin) your pregnancy cravings are weird Yoongi- ( at his daughter's appearance) my power was incredible Yoonji- ( as a birthday gift ) a baby brother Me-wow unnie your dialogues used in the story are iconic 😂😂😂loved it
So few things that u need to improve ur grammer also if he is pregnant 7montgs he should have a bump and like a real good bump so YOONGI would already knew he is pregnant so yea pls correct these stuff when ur making an FF speaking as an author myself but u are doing great best of luck.
This is the first time I watched a ff and this is so cute But for the whole time the only thing running into my head is REST IN PEACE SCIENCE AND NATURE🤣 Army can make the impossible into possible😁
Screw ur mistake...as you're new you'll get better day by day just keep going😌💜proud that many yoonminers are making yoonmin ff as there r only few....keep going author😘🦋💫
Tbh he really can not be noticed jimin for being 7 months pregnant bcs your Tummy can be small if you always put your short or etc up to your tummy so that your tummy will be small.
I think its a great story, but im a slow reader, so i would love to read ur ffs if u slow a bit. Its okay to made it long since its Reading not watching. And yea nothing else serious tho, i understand how yoongi didnt see Jimins bump. I mean its FF😂
How can jimin give birth to a child and in normal way. Being a biology student it's hard to believe. But being an army I should except it for fun😂😂😂o god
Your grammar is not that bad I mean I've seen Some FFs which have WORST grammar and this is nothing infront of them so Ofc you need to improve it a lil bit and one more thing a 7 months pregnant person ofc has a bump I think you're really young that's why you didn't knew it it's ok It's a small mistake keep it up your FFs are awesome 💜💜
Hey, you should wait a bit before you change to another dialogue.It's not okay for reading that much fast.Can you do it? I am pausing every dialogue. BTW, this is amazing..🤎
Oh my gadd!! What's wrong with the 7 months bump didn't noticed? My best friend was pregnant all the way 9 months and her hubby didn't noticed it until she got labor and gave birth to the baby. And FYI They stay in the same house and sleeping together. 🥱
Sorry for The Scene that im mistaken and My grammar Thankyou for the compliment and the advice😄❤️
jimin: hyung i am 7 months pregnent
yoongi: oh really i did notice i just thought u were eating too much
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😂😂😂😂😂
😂😂😂
U DID NOT-😭
Omg jk is calling Jimin by the name Jimin hyung let me show this to Jimin he will surely thank author for that 😂
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Welcome 🤗
Lol its usually JIMISHIII
🤗 💖 YoonMin 💖 🤗
I love the baby names you chose
It is amazing , the only thing weird is Jimin being 7 months pregnant and yoongi didn't notice , but other than that , it is great 👍👍
I forgot To put some details Why Yoongi Didn't notice Jimin's bump Im sorry and Thankyou😊❤️
RIP biology......but still i like it 😍😍😍 lil meow meow😘😘😘😘
They're just adorable 😍♥️💜
That's a perfect duo too where yoongi is bold jimin is shy 🙈 btw nice ff author keep going and don't be too lazy 😂
So few things were really good in this video I really enjoyed it I think you put all of their characters emotions in this video I really enjoyed it you made a wonderful video. Enjoy and understand from it was a well-done Mafia setting even though it wasn't this bad I really enjoyed it and I could see you put all of your effort into this one video it was well done I enjoyed it I learned a lot from making this listen watching this video and I think I can make one like this just by watching this video I think I can make one and I loved this yoonmin fanfiction
its so good unnie i like your videos keep going💜💜
Thankyou 🥺
Omo it was an amazing story..Tae- who's the father?
Yoongi- (to pregnant Jimin) your pregnancy cravings are weird
Yoongi- ( at his daughter's appearance) my power was incredible
Yoonji- ( as a birthday gift ) a baby brother
Me-wow unnie your dialogues used in the story are iconic 😂😂😂loved it
So few things that u need to improve ur grammer also if he is pregnant 7montgs he should have a bump and like a real good bump so YOONGI would already knew he is pregnant so yea pls correct these stuff when ur making an FF speaking as an author myself but u are doing great best of luck.
You're not an author
@@masonmount5371 i am here my channel link
@@masonmount5371 ruclips.net/channel/UCgVnSUaxw2t5qNpnR90lzug
@@ananyashibu8229 oh okay
Thankyou for the advace I'll do my best thankyou😄
This is the first time I watched a ff and this is so cute
But for the whole time the only thing running into my head is REST IN PEACE SCIENCE AND NATURE🤣
Army can make the impossible into possible😁
Amazing😍 author💜😘
Thankyou 😄
@@maeveym1363 my pleasure✨😌
That was cute love it, if only it were true
Screw ur mistake...as you're new you'll get better day by day just keep going😌💜proud that many yoonminers are making yoonmin ff as there r only few....keep going author😘🦋💫
I'm new ff writer can you visit me also I sure you will love it
I forgot To put some details Why Yoongi Didn't notice Jimin's bump Im sorry and Thankyou😊❤️
Unnie😊can you do special episode please i really love it😊❤❤
My second FF will be having a special episode better watch it dear 🤗
Let's appreciate that even though she/he have a wrong grammar's, but the story are amazing
Thankyou🥺
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Don’t say you are lazy you work so hard to make us happy , remember do not think negative things about yourself think positive ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Please make some more episodes that was amazing and I loved it so much 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Im sure i will,Thankyou!🥺❤️
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Hy author I'm Jeon jungkook it's my 2nd account didn't I told you I'm gonna find you 😉
Tbh he really can not be noticed jimin for being 7 months pregnant bcs your Tummy can be small if you always put your short or etc up to your tummy so that your tummy will be small.
I didn't know that jimin can cook😅
Your video is so fast... I have to pause it for reading... U can work on speed.. Otherwise ff is so good 😇💗
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I think its a great story, but im a slow reader, so i would love to read ur ffs if u slow a bit. Its okay to made it long since its Reading not watching. And yea nothing else serious tho, i understand how yoongi didnt see Jimins bump. I mean its FF😂
Luv this ff 😂😮😊💜💜🐱🐥🥰
I actually was making a ff in my mind for entertainment and in the ff I actually add rose as jimin's sis! 🧐🧐😳😳well yoonmin shipping not jimose!
How can jimin give birth to a child and in normal way. Being a biology student it's hard to believe. But being an army I should except it for fun😂😂😂o god
I just ignore your mistake about 7 monthly baby bump cause that FF is cute 🥺🥰
Sorry for Those stuff that im wrong btw thankyou😄
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0:02 what song is this?
What song is that
Lilly was a little girl....
@@shivanigupta4201 oh thanks
Lily Alan walker
@@sanikasawdekar9633 I'm new ff writer can you visit me also I sure you will love it
Good
me: this is such a cute and fluffy story! i love it🥰
me who doesnt understand pregnancy's yet: water...... broke???? (how tragic?)
Me too 😂😂😂
I don't understand the boy gives a natural birth of baby.😂😂😂
Your grammar is not that bad I mean I've seen Some FFs which have WORST grammar and this is nothing infront of them so Ofc you need to improve it a lil bit and one more thing a 7 months pregnant person ofc has a bump I think you're really young that's why you didn't knew it it's ok It's a small mistake keep it up your FFs are awesome 💜💜
I forgot To put some details Why Yoongi Didn't notice Jimin's bump Im sorry and Thankyou😊❤️
@@maeveym1363 It's ok and wlcm
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Hey, you should wait a bit before you change to another dialogue.It's not okay for reading that much fast.Can you do it? I am pausing every dialogue. BTW, this is amazing..🤎
Uhm... boy's can't be pregnant but i really like this ff because it's yoonmin 🌚💀
yeah ik, it's just based on alternative universe and it's a/b/o btw!🥲🤍
@@maeveym1363 it's ok anyways! I'm currently reading now 🙃
@@bangtanstarz awieee, thanks! read well sweetieee🤍
@@maeveym1363 Np! And ty
Please change into voise
How 7 moth??????
Part3?
Its Oneshot ☺️
Hehehehe
Sach me a/n ap bohot zada lazy ho
Oh my gadd!! What's wrong with the 7 months bump didn't noticed? My best friend was pregnant all the way 9 months and her hubby didn't noticed it until she got labor and gave birth to the baby. And FYI They stay in the same house and sleeping together. 🥱
Really