This legitimately gave me chills! This is the first good one in a while in my opinion only a few creepy pastas give me this feeling dude. This, boraska, the showers, case files, ritual pastas r only a few that really stand out to me.
I gotta say, there's many narrators in your niche, some sound repetitive and robotic with their intonation, others ham it up, you deliver like you're really living it.
i have to say that these kinds of stories where the protagonist is a monster and we dont know it until later in the story are some of my favorites, alongside with stories where the protagonist is insane and we dont know who to trust till the end of the story. ALSO IF ANYONE KNOWS ANY MORE STORIES LIKE THIS PLEASE TELL ME! I NEED ANY I CAN GET!
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"The Strange Things on a Dark Rural Road" is a good one. You start off pretty much knowing the protagonist is awful, but it's still a great listen with an unexpected and ballsy end.
Thumbnail Image- She brought a car from the car salesman and deeply regrets her purchase. I thought the strange salesman was the MC's future self, then the plot thickened.
This is definitely one of my favorite Creepypastas of the last year. Not sure who also did it, but damn, I loved listening to your version. Absolutely gut wrenching story.
I always LOVE stories where it makes me hate the protagonist or any other main character and I really don't know why. Maybe because its a twist that is mostly never used.
Uhhh you didn't hear the same story everyone else has ? The old car salesman figured out that the one telling the story killed his daughter and convinced him to kill himself .
Worst. Salesman. Ever. 🙄 If I want to buy the $8,000 car, sell me the $8,000 car. If I want something in a sales person isn't listening to me, I will straight up not buy it. I don't need it that bad or I can get it from someplace else. 🤷♀️ 🤔 I swear I've heard this one before. From MCP....🤔
I thought it was that the man had killed his daughter and is trying to get someone else to confess to it or he kills the kid and the dad later confessed to it .
I'm only halfway through the story as I'm writing this and the bommer is frustrating the sh#@ out of me . I would of pulled out or jab the bommer in the throat. That's just me though 😁😁 Good story though ♥️🤙
I usually find stories where the whole point is that the protagonist did a no-no kind of formulaic and predictable, but this is a rare that sold it well (no pun intended, I guess).
The veteran car salesman was so good he even made death sound like a good deal
Thank you for featuring my story on your channel! Legendary performance, as always.
A big thank you for your chilling story 💐⭐
@@leonievanheerden7090 I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!
This was a great story
Not going to lie after hearing this I almost felt as it was a re telling or past events but I guess that's what makes a good story huh
@JESSE PULLINS the story way fantastic, you did a great job!
Now THIS was a REALLY good story. At first I thought the customer was a detective.
This legitimately gave me chills! This is the first good one in a while in my opinion only a few creepy pastas give me this feeling dude. This, boraska, the showers, case files, ritual pastas r only a few that really stand out to me.
The title wasn't a full synopsis, the twist was earned not forced, and the reaction to it was believable.
I'd say you were gassing it but borrasca and the showers sequels both brought them down a bit so I could see how this would be on par.
Penpal is by far the best for me, 2nd is Borrasca
I don't get why Borasca is getting so much hyped. The writing and pace are great but the storyline is boring.
@@theneet9528u just gotta trust it give it time
I love the plot twist, this was amazing writing
I gotta say, there's many narrators in your niche, some sound repetitive and robotic with their intonation, others ham it up, you deliver like you're really living it.
i have to say that these kinds of stories where the protagonist is a monster and we dont know it until later in the story are some of my favorites, alongside with stories where the protagonist is insane and we dont know who to trust till the end of the story.
ALSO IF ANYONE KNOWS ANY MORE STORIES LIKE THIS PLEASE TELL ME! I NEED ANY I CAN GET!
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Ice Diaries is good
Not insane per se, but have you listened to Psychosis?
"The Strange Things on a Dark Rural Road" is a good one. You start off pretty much knowing the protagonist is awful, but it's still a great listen with an unexpected and ballsy end.
I remember hearing this story a year or so ago. Beautifully written and narrated, ur one of the best!
Thumbnail Image- She brought a car from the car salesman and deeply regrets her purchase.
I thought the strange salesman was the MC's future self, then the plot thickened.
Damn I'm buying that book, that story was magnificent! Just the kind of horror anthology I love.
I like to believe the guy didn't even do it. Just that he got gaslit into killing himself by some car salesman demon.
This is definitely one of my favorite Creepypastas of the last year. Not sure who also did it, but damn, I loved listening to your version. Absolutely gut wrenching story.
I think lighthouse horror did it. It is memorable.
@@nancylovett2399 Yeah probably! Lighthouse is amazing :)
I had dejavu for a while before I recalled this one, was not disappointed hearing your narration 🥰
Absolutely superb writing, and exquisitely presented.
Takes a lot of skill to sell death, I should practice before I get rusty.
-Tucker
One of the most awesome narrator's narrators I've ever heard..... The energy you put into all your stories, simply Chilling....
I loved this. Didn't see the twist coming for a mile away for once. Amazing ❤️
Lighthouse Horror did this story a year ago. Wasn’t sure if it was the same one or not. Can confirm, I’ve heard this one before
Enjoyed your reading of the characters here. With the realistic descriptions and small details in the story itp really helped visualizing it
Well that escalated quickly
Oh boi, as a car salesman. Cant wait to hear this
One where the protagonist isn't some kind of hero, survivor or discoverer. Nice twist. good story!
I've heard this before... It's so good! I'll listen again.
Pecker tracks on back seat are hard to clean...give this guy credit.
Those who know... Know!
LOL....
Uhhhhhhh
Listening to this from inside my 2001 buick lasabre was... an experience. Lol didn't expect that
That was a very good story!! As always the narration was perfect!! Much love from Colorado!
That. Was. Excellent!
I always LOVE stories where it makes me hate the protagonist or any other main character and I really don't know why. Maybe because its a twist that is mostly never used.
I’ve heard this one before. Still gives me the heebie jeebies when I listen to it though.
Another great narration! Keep up the great work❤
My first car was a 1999 La Saber, that's so funny!
I love when it's the main character
Mrcreepypasta you do really good work. I love your content.
Awesome story by Jesse's Pullins, keep punching them out...
"What do you do?"
"I rip off people for thousands of dollars. "
Second time hearing this story and even with Knowing what's coming I still listened to the whole thing again....
Damn this was great
This one is deep well job
More honorable than most of the used car salesmen I've met.
Good story!
Great Story and narration MC!
This has some real Christine vibes to it 🖤🖤
When he says "Hello kids" But you're in your 20s😅
Hey there kids That phrase is so iconic now
I’ve heard this one before. It’s a pretty good one.
“Monsters roam these halls but they’re not robotx; men, are capable of some dark thoughts”
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Where's Tommy Taffy? I would buy a car from him!
The guy who SAs kids?
Heard this before, intense!
"You ever get a dame in the back of one of these kid?" Whos he selling this car to Bonesaw Vic?💀
The realistic warped reality hits gotta keep quality over quantity please
Ahh takes me back to my sales day....Anything to not sit on a goose egg ...
Good story
Great story
This is a great story glad to hear it again an as always your delivery is top shelf
When I heard that he pulled out the 38 i was thinking dam
I get he killed her but did he SA her as well?
Buicks an old man’s whip
car sales? aw, man
That was… idk I’m scared to be honest.
Sure sounds like care salesmen to me.
12:40 Around here is when a reasonible person would have been called the police and then left the area.
I am indeed a car salesmen
Just Commenting for the algorithm 💙
Oooooh i get the story now.
Bing chilling
I've heard this before, not sure if it was here or another channel. Old story.
Taken, if Liam Neeson was an alcoholic former car salesman
I HAVE THE CHILLING APP AND IT'S DEFINITELY WORTH GETTING.
Pureblood!!!!!👍👍👍 Damn right!!!
I also have the Chilling app and I agree it's totally worth it!
The worst car made have to pull motor to change water pump and take the motor mounts off to put a new belt on WORST CAR EVRR MADE!!!!!
Good push car in river best thing you could do to that car in the RIVER
excellent ♥️👍👍👍
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All my girlfriend's rode in my car's trunk...They're all at my special place in the woods now! I visit them often.
Isn't going back for one how you got caught the final time, there, Ted?
@@saeyabor That only happens in movies…
@@chainbenwa2713 no, it's how Ted Bundy got caught once, I forget if it was the last time or when he escaped
@@saeyabor ohh haha your right.
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Not sure what his deal was? An hero? Someone explain?
For him to shoot himself. I think.
Uhhh you didn't hear the same story everyone else has ? The old car salesman figured out that the one telling the story killed his daughter and convinced him to kill himself .
Hmm pretty sure this is a reported story
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Worst. Salesman. Ever. 🙄
If I want to buy the $8,000 car, sell me the $8,000 car.
If I want something in a sales person isn't listening to me, I will straight up not buy it. I don't need it that bad or I can get it from someplace else. 🤷♀️
🤔 I swear I've heard this one before. From MCP....🤔
I thought it was that the man had killed his daughter and is trying to get someone else to confess to it or he kills the kid and the dad later confessed to it .
Obvious lessons to take from this story: 1. Don't drink alcohol, it leads to consequences; 2. Don't go to bars, people get r4ped and murked there.
I got drugged the last time I went to a bar so yes
First?
I'm only halfway through the story as I'm writing this and the bommer is frustrating the sh#@ out of me . I would of pulled out or jab the bommer in the throat. That's just me though 😁😁 Good story though ♥️🤙
I usually find stories where the whole point is that the protagonist did a no-no kind of formulaic and predictable, but this is a rare that sold it well (no pun intended, I guess).
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