Really good! The only line i feel that doesnt hit is "facing one i once called friend" it feels a bit rushed for the beat.The retribution part is amazing and well written. You should really try apphrehension or even trial by fury!
This is actually amazing! I loved your Mother’s love cover and you certainly delivered justice (no pun intended) to this track! I loved how this one focuses on Martlet’s lament and how it’s her final stand rather than the other covers which were more so a recap of her insurgent power. When Retribution kicked in I got chills. Amazing cover.
Neat. That's how I would describe this video. People already have high-lighted the good parts so I'll just focus on the potential "improvement" points from my amateur's perspective. Sometimes it sounds like the line you're singing is too much for your current capacities, like at 5:16. The "through" at 1:30 also disturbed me a little bit but I just brushed it off as bird imitation, which I find hilarious. I'm sure you get my point and I'm not making a list of everything, with that being said... It would be really cool to see this get remastered after you acquire new skills, I will be waiting for this! Kudos to you, JD Studios (I know that the music is wonky in terms of ups and downs, making lyrical adaptions a hassle, but after viewing this I'm confident you guys will get it eventually!)
That’s already what the original Undertale does. In Yellow’s case, the Pacifist ending HAS to end with Clover’s death canonically - there’s no way around that. The Genocide ending was the only one where Clover possibly COULD have lived, because it’s the only one that could stand to be non-canon.
@mathcookie8224 actually that's not true, none of the main characters die in genocide except Asgore and Flowery, and that's an easy fix, just have Asgore defeat you in genocide like he does in pacifist, and Flowery shouldn't exist as he was created by alphys, actually Alphys and Undyne shouldn't exist either
@@potatoheadpokemario1931 I mean, the two could exist, assuming that Undertale Yellow is at least within 30 years of Undertale since I'm assuming both Undyne and Alphys are in their mid 30s by Undertale. However I'm not entirely sure whether or not they'd be in the same roles if that's the case since I'm assuming there's at least a decade between the gap of UT and UTY, which would mean that Undyne would've been captain of the guard and Alphys the royal scientist since their 20s.
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4:51-4:56 Love Martlet using Clover's own words against them.
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Holy crap it’s bub8les hope your music likes being blasted on my Alexa because that’s what happens every day
Really good! The only line i feel that doesnt hit is "facing one i once called friend" it feels a bit rushed for the beat.The retribution part is amazing and well written. You should really try apphrehension or even trial by fury!
This is actually amazing! I loved your Mother’s love cover and you certainly delivered justice (no pun intended) to this track! I loved how this one focuses on Martlet’s lament and how it’s her final stand rather than the other covers which were more so a recap of her insurgent power. When Retribution kicked in I got chills. Amazing cover.
*Clover I remember you're Genocides*
I remebr ur enemy reteriings
Cover rembatrr oeeijr endnnehhy refnndnertingd
GET OUT OF MY MIND GET OUT OF MY MIND GET OUT OF MY MIND GET OUT-
Enough with you’re puns sans
Kid I'm determined now I remember you're pacifists
Determination
No, its justice
Martlet are you okay?
@@PillagerPatrols probally she has taken the sample of kindness soul because clover is not dead and integrity is not pure hearted 🤓🤓🤓
i’m pretty sure she took determination.
I think easer (and safer) just aware Asgore about the human and force him to absorb souls
Neat. That's how I would describe this video. People already have high-lighted the good parts so I'll just focus on the potential "improvement" points from my amateur's perspective.
Sometimes it sounds like the line you're singing is too much for your current capacities, like at 5:16. The "through" at 1:30 also disturbed me a little bit but I just brushed it off as bird imitation, which I find hilarious.
I'm sure you get my point and I'm not making a list of everything, with that being said... It would be really cool to see this get remastered after you acquire new skills, I will be waiting for this! Kudos to you, JD Studios
(I know that the music is wonky in terms of ups and downs, making lyrical adaptions a hassle, but after viewing this I'm confident you guys will get it eventually!)
Our prayers for a retribution cover have been answered, Thank you.
*Clover, your reign of terror ends now*
Thank you for getting on this, still waiting for the day remedy/retribution gets covered by man on the internet
Aaaa I was just trying to find more Undertale Yellow vengeance route with lyrics videos and I see that this is gonna premiere in an hour!! :D
Timestamps
Remedy: 1:00
Retribution: 3:43
4:37 Really nice reference!
Finally, after all this years... PEAK!
Or Beak? idk
What beak? I only see dust and sweet sweet exp.
@@josecorzo5517 💀
Alr imma listen to this at least once a day thanks:)
YES! FINALLY! A COVER OF RETRIBUTION! We literally only have two of these. One is okay, the other one was made by AI.
This is way better than the one i made
Everything is perfect!
MAN,this is amazing,you cooked pretty well!
Good lyrics man
MARLETS VOICE IS PERFECT!!!!
pretty good
Good job nice
This is legendary!
*Martlet no longer believes in you...*
should've not ate ice cream before watching this lol, good work though!
Honestly I think one thing undertale yellow should have changed was make genocide lead to doom and make pacifism lead to victory
That’s already what the original Undertale does. In Yellow’s case, the Pacifist ending HAS to end with Clover’s death canonically - there’s no way around that. The Genocide ending was the only one where Clover possibly COULD have lived, because it’s the only one that could stand to be non-canon.
@mathcookie8224 actually that's not true, none of the main characters die in genocide except Asgore and Flowery, and that's an easy fix, just have Asgore defeat you in genocide like he does in pacifist, and Flowery shouldn't exist as he was created by alphys, actually Alphys and Undyne shouldn't exist either
@@potatoheadpokemario1931 I mean, the two could exist, assuming that Undertale Yellow is at least within 30 years of Undertale since I'm assuming both Undyne and Alphys are in their mid 30s by Undertale. However I'm not entirely sure whether or not they'd be in the same roles if that's the case since I'm assuming there's at least a decade between the gap of UT and UTY, which would mean that Undyne would've been captain of the guard and Alphys the royal scientist since their 20s.
*Clover
You feel his justice and regrets
And that fills you with *HATE*
*el Zenit del subsuelo se levanta... Un digno oponente*
This is pretty good
this video needs more views thats all i have to say
Peak.
Honestly. This is fire and a damn good voice for Martlet. I do like Retribution a bit more
Let justice be done... 💛
Awesome!!
I'm sure this is what everyone was expeting in the original Geno route, not Sans
JD studios spotted using lyrics from A Mothers Love: 3:59
The genosides
clover be like during that speech since when did i ask
1:09 BERD!
But with a twist...interesting
20/10
BRITISH MARTLET RAAAAAH!!!!!!
🙏 Today i got a nice meal
You cooked well 🔥🔥
Could you make a loopable version
Please
I was waiting for the battle against a true hero part :(
Angry Twitter Bird moment.
Good riddance. Justice has been served. Now its time to confront that crowd they call a king.
try to cover the minecraft disc creator by lena rine
British martlet.
Trial by gunhat
I might be the only one, but Zenith Martlet immediately reminded me of JaidenAnimations for some reason
Im saying
Oh my God she turned into my girlfriend
Nah, I'd win.
Yup stole them 4:37
Correction: He "stole" mine! (I gave him permission to cover my version of Enemy Retreating!!)
You stole those lyrics frum bub8les