Yes I know you’ve heard this many times but it’s true. The way you detailed the story is just so realistic and more interesting. Most ff look like they were rushed and didn’t take a lot of time to complete. But I can already tell this is going to be my favorite ff. I love it sm! Keep up the great work!!
Bruh, this is amazing. I know English very well (I know it better than my first language) , and in lots of fanfics, the grammar+English is not so good. Your idea and grammar/style of writing is amazing;I love it. In other words, you are the definition of underrated (amazing fanfic keep going!)💜
Mine’s Urdu (I’m Pakistani) I know (more like learning) French, Arabic and Spanish because my ‘private’ school teaches it for some reason. I’m also learning Korean (which I’m miserably failing at)
Wow I am just amazed by how the author explain simple things in most beautiful way And I really like the character of y/n The one word to describe this ff is 'Elegant'
GIRL THIS IS GOOD. A lot and I mean A LOT of ff you can't even watch 5 minutes without horrible grammer and cringing, but this was good. For somebody who says that english is not your first language I am impressed. The details you put into everything are great, I can really see their personalities, and actions in my head when I am reading. Also love that you put in the gifs to show off some moments. Good job :)
Nice work! 👍🏻 It’s very interesting and easy to read. Can’t wait to see what happens next, please upload the next episode soon and good luck with your future work 😊😊😊
WHY DID I DISCOVER THIS JUST NOW?!. I've always like perfect grammars and well written fictions and I finally found another story line to read, the others are really overrated, and I actually kinda dislike it since their plots and grammars are not really well done. Keep up the good work ;>
I love it author-nim. You are soo gooooooood at these and there are no grammatical errors. Officially subscribed. It's a shame I discovered a talent now. Thank u for the amazing ff. ^_^💜💜💜
I rewatched the 1st eps while waiting for 2 final eps. It's still fascinating. After knowing what happen, it makes more sense why Namjoon was so intense during funeral.
I honestly love the vibes Taehyung gives in this ff I might be too early to say this but nvm. But I also want handgun on my birthday lol maybe crazy I already am but damn holding Springfield XD in my hand in a black dress like damn it ...
As soon I read the title of this FF, I got intrigued at first then as I started reading it, I couldn't stop reading, got sucked in this Mafia AU world as if it was real. I can't wait to read the next episode. Oh by the way...what things about to change? I'm very curious now.
After the description of jimin short I am expecting him to be more short.. why ...I am like this..like odd...evem though he is not that short..ah me silly.
Hey! Good question actually. I give myself one week for an episode, but things move around and I sometimes end up not having time to write it. For the Episode 4, it’s already all written and I need to finish editing it. It’s gonna be up tomorrow for sure!✨
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I swear Yeontan is so freaking famous! He's in almost every ff I watched! 🤣🤣
Ofc he is famous.He is V taehyungs son
When the dog is more famous that any of us😂😂
@@rosie__broke_my_heart5696 hurt 😭🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ofc son of a famous idol should also be famous 😉🤣
@@rosie__broke_my_heart5696it hurts it really does😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
When we talk about Jin there must be the word "handsome"
One minute silence for all the Taehyung bias y/n is his sister😂😂
Yes I know you’ve heard this many times but it’s true. The way you detailed the story is just so realistic and more interesting. Most ff look like they were rushed and didn’t take a lot of time to complete. But I can already tell this is going to be my favorite ff. I love it sm! Keep up the great work!!
The one dislike is from y/n' s dad
Hahah love it😂
Alexa __ 😂😂😂
Alexa __ her dads *ghost
Lmao he came back from the dead just to dislike the video 9 times.
Becky Webster 😂😂😂
When namjoon said short and black suit
Wow jimin's description is great
FINALLLYYYYYY A GOOD CHEF KISS MAFIA KDRAMA THAT DOESNT JUMP ALL AROUNG AND MAKES THE POINT CLEAR
you have gained a new sub
Bruh, this is amazing. I know English very well (I know it better than my first language) , and in lots of fanfics, the grammar+English is not so good. Your idea and grammar/style of writing is amazing;I love it. In other words, you are the definition of underrated (amazing fanfic keep going!)💜
Same here! The grammar is good
Guys what is your first language?
I know French better than my first language 😅
Mine’s Urdu (I’m Pakistani) I know (more like learning) French, Arabic and Spanish because my ‘private’ school teaches it for some reason. I’m also learning Korean (which I’m miserably failing at)
Stranger EK mines pasto but I speak Urdu aswell as English , tho I might dare to say that my English is better
Most ff barely have details and u kinda get lost but this one shows ever step! It’s very realistic
When namjoon said “short”, i knew who he was talking about
FREAKING PARK JIMIN
Wow
I am just amazed by how the author explain simple things in most beautiful way
And I really like the character of y/n
The one word to describe this ff is 'Elegant'
GIRL THIS IS GOOD. A lot and I mean A LOT of ff you can't even watch 5 minutes without horrible grammer and cringing, but this was good. For somebody who says that english is not your first language I am impressed. The details you put into everything are great, I can really see their personalities, and actions in my head when I am reading. Also love that you put in the gifs to show off some moments. Good job :)
This is amazing well done no grammatical errors so far keep going
Nice work! 👍🏻 It’s very interesting and easy to read. Can’t wait to see what happens next, please upload the next episode soon and good luck with your future work 😊😊😊
Is no one gonna talk about how a/n described Jimin😂.
SHORT
Heyyy I just started this and already in love. Good writing and grammar with a interesting plot. I'll go see the next episode now 💜
This ff is a piece of art ! I’m glad I clicked on the video.
YOUVE JUST GOT A NEW SUBSCRIBER
It's amazing...i really love it..
Let's see how things are gonna change...
WHY DID I DISCOVER THIS JUST NOW?!. I've always like perfect grammars and well written fictions and I finally found another story line to read, the others are really overrated, and I actually kinda dislike it since their plots and grammars are not really well done. Keep up the good work ;>
Yeah I know how you feel, I'm really picky with my ffs...
@@namjoonsmissingairpods2120 right
the way you write the story is great, what I meant by that is... the way you choose words for them to say are just *chef kisses*
back to this because this story is literally one of the best fanfiction out here!
Next episode plzz its amazing and i love itt cant wait for next episode eeee you are the best writter
Well.
When i see short...
My mind goes like jimin ..
This intro go crazy❤❤❤❤❤❤ im in love
ok but only true armys sing along to the background music aswell.
I love it author-nim. You are soo gooooooood at these and there are no grammatical errors. Officially subscribed. It's a shame I discovered a talent now. Thank u for the amazing ff. ^_^💜💜💜
Thank you author for putting the world lovely into Jimin's speech!!!😁💜
Being ot7 is a blessing. I never feel guilty watching a bunch of ff’s with different members 😂 ngl jimin hits different
_oh frick,this is hella good_
Only I know how much I am missing you.. 😭.Came here to again read all these masterpieces 💜💜.. miss u
I love this already
all the boys are introduced except Jk and Suga!!! this is such a good ff!!! i love it already!!!
I was searching for something else..but i guess I'm gonna stuck here for a while...
I love the plot, you definitely deserve more subs, goodluck💜
One the best fanfic I have ever read
I rewatched the 1st eps while waiting for 2 final eps. It's still fascinating. After knowing what happen, it makes more sense why Namjoon was so intense during funeral.
this was so good :(( i cannot ☹️❤️
Ok
Interesting, a new story which isn't like regular ff.
Who else had to search up the definition of Notorious??
oh how nice brother & sister bonding over guns 🤩
I actually really like this
Who is here rewatching for the 4th time the whole episodes😂😭
Love it so far!! Can’t wait to watch episode 2 next!
Why the fuck am I crying.....THE FF JUST STARTED 😭😂
Not gonna lie this kinda gives me umbrella academy vibes. Kinda and I love it
I honestly love the vibes Taehyung gives in this ff I might be too early to say this but nvm. But I also want handgun on my birthday lol maybe crazy I already am but damn holding Springfield XD in my hand in a black dress like damn it ...
anybody who thought of vicenzo or corn salad when u read consigliere
the one dislike is from jimin because of his height lmao😂😂
OMFG why did it took SOO long to meet u? 😂😂 a good ff after a long time!!!!!
Why you are not active pls make ff again , this is too good 💜
I'm waiting for episode 4 now 😩
I hope our author posts it soon
Love how on is playing in the background first cause that’s my song🥺🥺😩
Woow that was good 😍
Omg this is soo good
i just realized i never commented on the 1st chapter- how rude of me😤 but henlo- mcscuse me the talent---
wow you are such an excellent writer🤎
I'm sorry but I cracked when I read the word short 🤣
Ewww I feel disgusting I was like "ooo~ namjoons looking for jin ahhhhhhh I ship😉 " but there related ahhhhhhhh😱😢
I love this unnie 0write more pls
I am a new subscriber
Here
Bitter truth here !!... My bias is my brother bias wrecker are both opp of Kim fam!! I mean jimin n jk 😂
Ok why am i wierd😂🤣for handgun i saw armageddon😂😂im sorry
Starting this ff now
Welp you got me
When is the next ep
Ok i dont know if im stupid but am i older than taehyung in this ff or is he older than me?
NEVERMIND IM STUPID IT SAYS AT THE END
As soon I read the title of this FF, I got intrigued at first then as I started reading it, I couldn't stop reading, got sucked in this Mafia AU world as if it was real. I can't wait to read the next episode. Oh by the way...what things about to change? I'm very curious now.
PLEASE PUT IT ON WATTPAD!
After the description of jimin short I am expecting him to be more short.. why ...I am like this..like odd...evem though he is not that short..ah me silly.
O love this vid
when i’m reading this i literally imagine a movie ! T H I S I S S O G O O D ! ! ! your writing skills are WAY better than mine 💜
new subscriber 🙋🏻♀️💜💜💜
Yoyalty
16:16
Taehyung: Who does he think he is?
Me: Your soulmate.
😂😂sorry
Wow
8:45 pause, short
When will you upload the next video?? Do you have a video schedule??
Hey! Good question actually. I give myself one week for an episode, but things move around and I sometimes end up not having time to write it. For the Episode 4, it’s already all written and I need to finish editing it. It’s gonna be up tomorrow for sure!✨
@@xdream-ssix1038 ok THANK YOU 💜💜
@@xdream-ssix1038 what country do you live in so I can know the time difference???
I live In Canada🇨🇦
@@xdream-ssix1038 ok thank you
4:41 I-
Btsjiminpark
28:02 OMG HOW IS EVERYONE STILL ALIVE??
What was she song at 34:50?
Louder than bombs
@@RIAAAAAA_ thx!