I'm republishing the awful book I wrote when I was 13.

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  • Опубликовано: 8 сен 2024

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  • @jaki645
    @jaki645 2 года назад +66

    One day, belladonna trilogy would be one of the most successful book trilogies in the world, it deserves to be! the effort you put in to writing those books, you are such as inspiration mel. I wish you all the best!

  • @swirlygirl5650
    @swirlygirl5650 2 года назад +37

    Don’t be ashamed of those shorts. They were a literal fashion statement and they remind me of my youth

  • @mayahrobinson9628
    @mayahrobinson9628 2 года назад +9

    Hey. It's me, Mayah.
    I cannot wait for this book to come out! Its been a pleasure working with you from Capsule to beyond and seeing you grow and change. Also the cover tho... astonishing!

  • @naomikenyon02
    @naomikenyon02 2 года назад +21

    I wore those pants too omg!!! And they were the pink ones too. XD The cover is sick! I'm so excited for this new journey for you. You're honestly my biggest inpiration when it comes to improving your writing.

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +5

      Hahah I'm not the only one!! Thank you so much Naomi, hope you're doing well :))

  • @kapolinaaaa
    @kapolinaaaa 2 года назад +15

    I wanted to say something cool here but I'll just go with: Mel you are great! My greatest inspiration and your travel videos have given me a slap in the face and made me realise that I would like to see other places, learn to speak different languages and also learn about other people's cultures... So, спасибо-thank you- (and that is me showing off🤣🤣🤣) and keep up the good work!

  • @strawberrymilk2987
    @strawberrymilk2987 2 года назад +10

    Your *my* inspiration! I have read capsule( It was SO good one of my fave books) and currently reading leaving wishville (I'm at the....depressing part). I really want to start a writing RUclips channel when I'm older just like you! Your the person who made me write my first book I want you to know your important and loved Mel!
    🌺💮🌸

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +3

      Aw thank you!! Good luck with your writing projects :)

    • @starbearshop
      @starbearshop 8 месяцев назад

      ​@@MelTorrefranca you help me keep working to improve on writing

  • @writer_surabhi_singh
    @writer_surabhi_singh 2 года назад +6

    THE COVER IS GIVING ME CHILLS AHHH!!! It fits so much with the theme of this book!!! I wanna buy it right now GIVE IT TO ME --

  • @rupshrisureka
    @rupshrisureka 2 года назад +3

    I feel like I am going to be insane in a few days as I am already hyped to read the book and THE COVER IS SO PRETTY THAT I CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE !!!

  • @jaspersmith7501
    @jaspersmith7501 2 года назад +5

    I've been waiting for months to get my hands on one of your books. I'm most definitely adding this one to the list.

  • @Rosabella.Thorne7
    @Rosabella.Thorne7 Год назад +2

    OMG, I'm from the Philippines and also, I love watching and hearing about writer's journey, they're always so inspiring. As an aspiring writer myself, my heart just leaps whenever I see other writers succeed in their passion.

  • @lade18
    @lade18 2 года назад +10

    My biggest inspiration from reading, writing and daily life. Thank you sm Mel. And I love the cover❤️‍🔥

  • @ZhyrenStudios
    @ZhyrenStudios 2 года назад +8

    Today is my first year as a sophomore in high school. We did a few ice breakers but one of them held a question asking. “Do you enjoy writing?” Possibly, If I was in 9th grade I’d put a big X on that. I have always been told I was a good writing but no one ever told me what it meant to be ‘good at writing’. So I stayed far away from it until I had to do it again for reports. It wasn’t until I read a few books, (one of which being ‘leaving wishville’) which sparked my creativity. ‘Maybe books aren’t so bad.’ I thought. ‘But no one writes nowadays. Only old people do it.’ I put myself in that mind space for awhile- but still enjoyed reading regardless. It wasn’t until I was looking on reviews for my favorite books. Then stumbled upon your channel. ‘A teenage author? That’s incredible! Almost unheard of!’ I was immediately whisked away into the wonderful style and the fact that you’re a teen writer- just like me. Now it doesn’t seem as abnormal anymore for me to write a little story on characters I made or request a writing assignment instead of multiple choice. Now, going back to that question from earlier. “Do you enjoy writing?” I put “Yes, I do.” On the text. The teacher who received it probably doesn’t read those and if she does- she won’t be able to read my hand writing because it’s so bad. She probably didn’t think anyone was thinking as vividly about that question. It was probably more of an academic thing than a hobbyist thing. Though, Never the less- thank you for creating content here on your channel. I was able to find like minded authors thanks to you and as well as see anything I write as not something to consider- ‘weird’ or ‘abnormal’ but it stead see it as just like any other hobby others do. Your channel has really inspired me to write and create in ways I never had before and be more open and transparent about my work, even if there’s problems with it I’d take those problems and spruce it up; good as new So thank you, Mel. This book is surely going on my reading list.

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +1

      I’m so glad my channel has been helpful for you. Thank you for sharing!! :))

    • @ZhyrenStudios
      @ZhyrenStudios 2 года назад +1

      @@MelTorrefranca awwww thank you 🥹✌️

  • @TaraVeda11
    @TaraVeda11 2 года назад +4

    CONGRATULATIONS 🎉🎉🎉
    AND OMG- I AM SPEECHLESS- The cover is GORGEOUS _chef's kiss_
    And what you did to write your childhood dream- the hard work- that's just amazing! You are my inspiration Mel🙏🏻

  • @AudreyFors
    @AudreyFors 2 года назад +4

    I'm literally sooo obsessed with this book I really can't wait for it to come out and take the world by storm luv you melz and keep up the amazing work and energy.❤️

  • @riverbright
    @riverbright 2 года назад +4

    The cover looks stunning! It's been a blast going on this journey with you and I'm really excited for you :D
    (side note: I love the side profiles the cast have; they are delightful and have so much personality

  • @shreyavatsana
    @shreyavatsana 2 года назад +3

    This was a really sweet video(apart from the major self roast at the beginning lol). I am absolutely thrilled about this trilogy. The cover looks perfect. It has been very inspiring to see you work through, not only this book but the previous ones. 🤗 💙

  • @thomasboulousisviolin
    @thomasboulousisviolin Год назад +2

    When I was 14, i made a rough plan for a 6-book crime urban fantasy series split into 2 3book eras. VERY ambitious, too ambitious perhaps I was. Regardless, the following two years I completed book 1 of each era. Book 1 of era 2, the first one I wrote, doesnt work at all. Its horrible. Book 1 of era 1 I think works pretty well, but needs a lot of work to be actually good. I have temporarily abandoned the series to work on other projects, but I am definately going to come back some day and flesh it out.

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  Год назад

      Definitely do!! It’s so fun to come back to previous projects down the line

  • @onjelbercier
    @onjelbercier 2 года назад +3

    So happy for you, Mel! Thanks for this! I was hoping you would probably pick this up again and run with it. Like you, I started a book at 14 that was absolutely just not working, but I loved the concept, after years of fighting with my story, the plot evolved and people actually like it!

  • @iamhumanbeing3
    @iamhumanbeing3 2 года назад +2

    the cover reveal , 2 more videos coming, the characters illustration, your own felt fighting scene, the theme the book song each and everypart of your exsistance... your book coming into a new life I am beyond excited mel!!!
    i would love to meet an inspiring human (you) one day in person!!
    mel can you make a video on beta readers, I mean I don't know how to get beta reader for my novel!!
    do's and don'ts etc
    in a nut shell, you are an amazing soul!!!

  • @MelTorrefranca
    @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +25

    Nightshade Academy is OUT NOW: ruclips.net/video/sZWId1NaHyI/видео.html
    It would mean so much to me if you'd take a minute to add _Nightshade Academy_ to your "Want to Read" list on Goodreads: www.goodreads.com/book/show/62210574-nightshade-academy

  • @coly15
    @coly15 2 года назад +1

    SERIOUSLY MEL YOUR EDITING HAS IMPROVED SO MUCH! THIS VIDEO WAS AWESOME TO WATCH. Loved the aesthetic!
    I'm so excited for Belladona! The cover for Nightshade Academy is incredible ✨️ I love how dark and intriguing it looks!
    Your hard work is honestly astonishing. From your writing process to your editing, to you going through different life experiences to write Belladona, to creating a theme song for the trilogy, and many more. You're such a huge inspiration and you've come so far. I'm sure your ten-year-old self would be so proud of you for rewriting and bringing this story to life!

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +1

      Ahh thank you!! I’m so happy you’ve stuck around-love your content!! Your support means a lot to me

  • @Lectoracitónica
    @Lectoracitónica 2 года назад +2

    Finally!!! This day has arrived!
    0:49 Wait what???!! Belladonna trilogy was THAT book? :0

  • @butterfly_books
    @butterfly_books 2 года назад +1

    IM SO DANG EXCITED!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW YOU ARE REWRITING IT!!!! IM LITERALLY OBSESSED WITH THAT GORGEOUS COVER!!! ❤️❤️

  • @c.c2166
    @c.c2166 2 года назад

    Mel, I've been following you for two years and it's so exciting to see your growth. Every time I've felt unmotivated to write, The Sky Weeps With Us video was always my go-to for inspiration. You're such a talented writer and a bright person. I hope this project is more healing and momentous than you expect and the release goes well! The cover is incredible!!! Lots of love

  • @lazylark3826
    @lazylark3826 Год назад +1

    a similar thing happened to the project I'm working on right now- I had no experience or knowledge of what I was doing when I started writing a novel when I was 12, and it was awful. It wasn't even my idea, my friend encouraged me to do it and when she moved, I quit. but i picked it up again recently and I'm having so much fun with it, and the new connections I've made really make it all so worthwhile.
    Being a part of the Belladonna Trilogy is so inspiring, i think I'm so lucky to be contributing to this project. I can't wait to see what you have planned, good luck!

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  Год назад +1

      Thank you so much for being part of this :)) Glad you've chosen to dive into an older project too! It's so nostalgic and fun

  • @caileycarrot
    @caileycarrot 2 года назад +1

    with all the incredible effort you're putting into this trilogy, I'm sure it'll make it rlly big one day

  • @leowaves7513
    @leowaves7513 2 года назад +2

    This video is so good omg mel! Also the cover is incredible beautiful! I love it, so excited to read it! Good luck with this trilogy! 💗

  • @kapolinaaaa
    @kapolinaaaa 2 года назад +3

    Also I would like to see more videos of you in your writing space, writing or plotting and editting and whatever (I sound like a weirdo-creep). Maybe if I see you brainstorming I will stop being so lazy and put an end to my 24-hour long procrastination sessions.

  • @RekhaChadhaAuthor
    @RekhaChadhaAuthor Год назад

    Be you, don't give up, you got this , I am here for you, you are amazing 🙃

  • @caileycarrot
    @caileycarrot 2 года назад

    the dark theme of the cover is so pretty!

  • @lesna5737
    @lesna5737 2 года назад

    Mel, I have been watching this Same video on repeat, this is addicting not just this video but your whole RUclips channel is addicting>>>
    I am watching again and again, all of your videos. Other author RUclipsrs aren't just my type unlike yours, I love your channel. Upload more often Mel 💘 >3

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад

      Aw thank you so much for sticking around :)) just dropped a new video today

  • @Lyric.L.Faison
    @Lyric.L.Faison 2 года назад +1

    OMG! I can't wait for this book or the trilogy its self! I can already tell that the Belladonna trilogy is going to be huge.

  • @yrsworld
    @yrsworld 2 года назад

    the cover is awesome, love it. Congratulations fren Mel ❤, good to see old picture - a little cutiepie 🥰

  • @johnadams7145
    @johnadams7145 2 года назад

    Super excited to read Nightshade Academy!

  • @RossSterling
    @RossSterling 2 года назад +2

    Wow I'm late to this but the back story was so interesting to hear! I also had no idea this story has been with you for so long so I'm happy to see it come so far! It's sooo inspiring and encouraging to hear origin stories from authors and their books so this definitely makes me want to work on my own stuff XD

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +1

      Glad you enjoyed it! Hope you have fun with your own projects!

    • @RossSterling
      @RossSterling 2 года назад +1

      @@MelTorrefranca Of course! And thank you! ^^

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  13 дней назад +1

      Idk why I'm just seeing your comment now!! Hope your own projects are doing well!

    • @RossSterling
      @RossSterling 13 дней назад

      @@MelTorrefranca Haha no worries! And thank you! I actually published one of my books last year! So doing pretty well ^^

  • @Rajahhh
    @Rajahhh Год назад

    I actually found you from that video and you inspired me to at least try getting more into writing even though I already loved writing

  • @starbearshop
    @starbearshop 8 месяцев назад

    Mel, you are my inspo to keep writing

  • @babybluewillow12
    @babybluewillow12 2 года назад +1

    The cover looks great Mel! I love it! 😄 keep working hard because your stories deserve to be told!

  • @Silly_mazey
    @Silly_mazey 8 месяцев назад

    this video and one more of your videos make me so happy and i like to listen to them while working on stories because I don’y like silence

  • @iateyourmomscookies
    @iateyourmomscookies 2 года назад

    New subscriber! This made me almost tear up a little, i remember seeing your first video in 2018 a while back and I always wondered if you would ever re write it, so now that im seeing this, my heart is so happy. I can't wait to read this whenever it comes out, I can see how happy and proud you are and that makes me so excited too♡ this made my day and the song for the book is amazing

  • @amandalauren377
    @amandalauren377 2 года назад

    This is awesome Mel! So proud of you!!! I love what you said about the story writing you versus you writing the story. Very relatable!

  • @purplecarpetsquishies1947
    @purplecarpetsquishies1947 2 года назад

    You're my biggest author inspiration ever no cap

  • @claireeloise5777
    @claireeloise5777 2 года назад

    Wow. I'm completely speechless. This is truly inspiring! As a 13-year-old who wants to publish her own book, this video really speaks to me! Since, well, I wrote a 53-chapter fanfic last year (which we do not discuss) and reading it now makes me cringe because there is so much I could fix to help improve it. I've had a lot of story ideas, but when I start writing them, I get bored very easily. I guess I haven't had an idea that has piqued my interest yet. I can't wait for the book to be released, and I will definitely read it! 💗 Thank you for being an inspiration!

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +1

      Thank you so much!! Writing 53 chapters of anything is a huge accomplishment in my books haha, hope you find a story idea you connect with soon :)

  • @EmeraldCityVideo
    @EmeraldCityVideo Год назад

    It's funny. I'm older (by quite a bit) but just last night started thinking about the idea of reworking a book I wrote in 2005 and this video hit JUST at the right moment.

  • @sandhya12109
    @sandhya12109 2 года назад +2

    THE COVER.
    It's awesome.

  • @erroridentitymissing
    @erroridentitymissing 2 года назад

    i'm so excited! good luck Mel!!!!

  • @josephbokea
    @josephbokea 2 года назад

    Looking forward to reading the final book and your future works! Great cover design too.

  • @ElLibrerodeAlex
    @ElLibrerodeAlex Год назад +1

    you're an inspiration!

  • @writer_surabhi_singh
    @writer_surabhi_singh 2 года назад +1

    6:03 is that a Sarah Sutton reference?! 👀

  • @Silly_mazey
    @Silly_mazey 3 месяца назад

    currently working on my own book called The Sunflash Trials

  • @saharadessert8917
    @saharadessert8917 Год назад

    This is my fifth attempt at writing a book that I've had in my brain since I was seven years old (yes I started writing it at seven) and I finished it! I hope to publish sometime soon!

  • @damijinadu4184
    @damijinadu4184 2 года назад +1

    I was one of the beta readers and I’m super excited to see the final product. Love that cover!

  • @caileycarrot
    @caileycarrot 2 года назад

    ur channel is so underrated

  • @totu7071
    @totu7071 2 года назад

    Wow, the cover is extremely pretty!! Congratulations Mel!!

  • @BrianMcBrideOfficial
    @BrianMcBrideOfficial 2 года назад +2

    It’s stunning!!

  • @juliarosemaryturk
    @juliarosemaryturk 2 года назад

    OKAYY LOVING THIS COVER 😍

  • @writeright447
    @writeright447 2 года назад

    Lmbo I love your videos! I'm so excited for the Belladonna trilogy. I've subscribed to your channel, and I bought two of your books. They're so good!

    • @MelTorrefranca
      @MelTorrefranca  2 года назад +1

      Thank you so much for the support!!

    • @writeright447
      @writeright447 2 года назад

      @@MelTorrefranca Of course! Ackk, sorry I'm just so excited you replied--

  • @aftoncrain2042
    @aftoncrain2042 2 года назад

    I’ve finished and edited the book I originally wrote at 11 and while I’ve been nervous to enter the publishing world, rejection won’t hurt as much when I can use that age as an excuse.

  • @soda_mix
    @soda_mix 2 года назад

    Your the reason I'm writing a book. Been writing it for four years now.

  • @pixie-bo6wi
    @pixie-bo6wi 2 года назад

    Aaaa I'm so excited

  • @watermxrk
    @watermxrk 2 года назад

    Very cool

  • @bluemacaroons
    @bluemacaroons 2 года назад +1

    just casually after publishing a few books 😂

  • @swirlygirl5650
    @swirlygirl5650 2 года назад

    Love ur content and books. I think it would awesome if you made audiobooks for all your published work. It would top off all ur great work. I don’t get how u did some of the publishing stuff when not being 18. Everything seems impossible when ur under 18. Also I wonder were your parents okay with all the business stuff u do and moving.

  • @ruelechowich8224
    @ruelechowich8224 Год назад

    Hey, I'm a writer also and was wondering where you would recommend going with a draft for constructive criticism, as you mentioned in the video. I have a story I'm writing and was hoping for some feedback, thx

  • @DManLewis1
    @DManLewis1 2 года назад

    I hope you let your hair grow out 🥺.. but if not you still look really beautiful!!

  • @globebemine2532
    @globebemine2532 2 года назад +1

    Is draft 2 going to be available for beta readers?

  • @lilyann1567
    @lilyann1567 9 месяцев назад

    Jesus loves you :)