To find bliss you wandered from places to places. Yet it was hidden so close, your sight never fell there. You kept trying to chase illusionary dreams, thinking it will help you find it. You left one town, you left your street and played along as life took you places. This place was sort of new and so was the sky. Your desires grew and you worked but then you got tired of chasing things. As you achieved things, you kept trying to build biggers better larger things. Each desire leading to newer bolder desires, stealing any moments of rest. Once again your chase the newer illusionary dreams thinking perhaps it will lead you to peace, the cycle continued endlessly. There stood someone standing with his face turned around -This peaceful soul. He possed such bliss that which you had been chasing all your life. You said to him, it has been a long difficult tiring ride. However I am glad, I have found you. Aren't you bliss, you enquired. Why is it dark here, you wondered. Come on now, you say, lets share this boundless happiness you have, I am not all that bad, you plead with bliss. Suddenly there was a flash of light and bliss disappeared from there. Yet there was something in sight - a mirror. And what you could see in that mirror- yourself. And in that mirror, you could see bliss smiling as it says to you, all this while I have always been in you. You wonder, all your life you had been chasing it, yet you knew not it was in you. Bliss reads this thought of yours and says unto you - Don't be so hard on yourself, mate. Did you not achieve all that you were chasing all your life? Come listen to a thing or two which I want to say to you, it continued. In this rat-race of life most people dont recognize me. They call me by many names but no one knows me really. I am the much-missed -rest, in this rat-race of life. I am right here in everyone, yet a dream for them. Now, this is a promise with a catch. Try now, close your eyes and look deep inside you in meditation and this very moment you shall find me right in there. Your life was so full of desires, my friend. And you were so caught up with those desires so you couldn't find me. Now cut off those desires and become light. Don't chase me for I am right here. I liked it so much that I translated it for folks overseas.
सुन लिया, समझ लिया जो बोला तुमने कर लिया, फिर भी रहा ये खोजता कहां गया किधर गया। मुझ में मै ना मिल सका, शायद कहीं था गुम गया, मै खोजता हूं अपने ही अक्स को दूसरों के अक्स में। परछाई बन के रह गया हूं मैं अपने ही अक्स की। क्या करू, किधर चलू, भटक गया हूं मै दिशा, कोई कहे यहां चलो, कोई कहे वहां चलो, इसी कश-म -कश में उलझ गया हूं क्या करूं।
Bas wo aks na mila, sukoon liye tha Jo khada. Han khoj ta Hun aaina, ab bas Mai yuhi sada. Kidhar dhoondun khabar nahi hai raasta bhatak gaya Sukoon tujhe mile agar pata Bata Mera Zara
बहोत ही खूब ... पल्लविजी ... “सुकून की तलाशमें” सुकून की तलाशमें, तू फिरा इधर-उधर था मगर जहाँ छिपा, गई नहीं वहाँ नज़र | तू सोचता रहा यही, कि एक दिन मिलेगा वो जब मिलेगा सब तुझे, हाँ तभी दिखेगा वो | तू छोड आया एक शहर, तू छोड़ आया एक गली जिंदगी के संग चला, वो जिधर-जिधर चली | ये नयी सी थी जगह, आसमाँ भी था नया तू उड़ा बहोत मगर, फिर ज़रा सा थक गया | ईस उड़ान ने तुझे, था यहाँ बहोत दिया चाहतों को पर तेरी, नया मकाम दिख गया | तू फिर उड़ा ये सोच कर, कि जो तलब थी अबतलक ख़त्म होगी ये वहाँ, जहाँ दिखी है एक झलक | लंबा ये सफ़र रहा, होंसला मगर रहा आ गया नजरमें वो, जो दूर ही से था दिखा | एक शख्स था वहाँ, फेरे अपना मुँह खड़ा उसके पास वो सुकून, तुझे कभी ना जो मिला | तूने उससे ये कहा, कि रास्ता कठिन रहा खुश मगर हुँ मैं बहोत, मुझे सुकून है मिल गया | क्यूँ अंधेरा है यहाँ, फेरे मुँह तू क्यूँ खड़ा चल सुकून को बाँट ले, मैं आदमी नहीं बुरा | फिर हुई जो रोशनी, वहाँ नहीं था कोई भी हाँ मगर था आईना, था आईने में अक्श भी | वो अक्श था तेरा वहाँ, जो था सुकून लिये खड़ा हसके केहने ये लगा, मैं तुझमें ही सदा रहा | क्या वो महज जुनून था, क्या पास में सुकून था क्यूँ मुझे खबर न थी, क्या मुझमें ही था ये कहीं | क्यूँ खुदसे ईतना लड़ रहा, जो चाहतोंने पा लिया अब समझ ये बात तू, जो तुझसे मैं हूँ कह रहा | दौड़ में यहाँ सभी, मुझे नहीं तलाशते नाम लेते है कई, ख़ाक पर है छानते | मैं दौड़ में आराम हूँ, मैं खास ना हूँ आम हूँ हर किसीमें हूँ बसा, मैं फिर भी सबका ख्वाब हूँ | आँख मूंद तू अभी, अभी पड़ा है तू जहाँ मुश्कुराके ढूँढना, मैं तुझमें भी छिपा हुआ | जिंदगी जो थी तेरी, चाहतों में थी घिरी तिरगिमे तू रहा, तो मैं तुझे दिखा नहीं | तो तिरगिको काट दे, तू रोशनी को साथ ले अब सुकून को खोज मत, है क्या सुकून ये जान ले |
Bas wo aks na mila, sukoon liye tha Jo khada. Han khoj ta Hun aaina, ab bas Mai yuhi sada. Kidhar dhoondun khabar nahi hai raasta bhatak gaya Sukoon tujhe mile agar pata Bata Mera Zara
Mam dil jeet liya apne...krishna se hi duniya h krishna se hi khusi.jise ye samay rahte samjh aaya vo insan ne is jindgi ko jeet liya..aur jo na samajh paye ise vo jeevan me sab kuch pa kar bhi kuch na pa paya
Aap bol rahi thi, Meri aakhein dekh rahi thi, aur rooh sukoon paa rahi thi..... Your poetry makes me in your world, literally I was imagining everything you have said, that mirror part was amazing
Dear Pallavi you have expressed the highest advaitic teachings so beautifully. It just went straight into the heart. Keeping writing and let the Supreme flow through you!
Pallavi Mahajan is terrific Poetess, she represents new generation but her thoughts match the thoughts of a great poet late Mirza Asadullah Khan Ghalib. I am of 73 years and I expect that in future Pallavi will be a very famous Poetess. I pray to Allah for her healthful and good longlife,
Pallavi.. I have no words to explain how nicely you have presented this...best poetry I ever heard. Lyrics/expression/style everything is perfect.Till now I followed Jagjeet Singh's Gazals and Rhat Indori's poetry only and today have added your name in the list..
Your words are your strength girl! The way you wrote this is immensely commendable! I have heard it on repeat and the more I listen to it the more I find meaning to it! Thanks for sharing your talent!! It’s a beautiful poem!
ruclips.net/video/XlR75zjrGWo/видео.html Avni ji please do listen to this story by my best friend and write your insights on the same. Thank you so much
आज पहली बार सुना आपको इससे शानदार सुबह नहीं हो सकती । भरोसा हो गया है अब हिंदी की कविता का बहुत ही लंबा जीवन है आप जैसे यंग युवा कवि इसे आगे ले जाने के लिए आए हुए हैं उम्मीदें धूमिल हो रही थी हिंदी को लेकर अब उम्मीद जग चुकी हैं बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद पल्लवी जी।
I can just say WOW... Trust me Pallavi you are a very close observer of Life... Your words are so realistic(can be easily related to anyone's life) and the way you speak, express is really mesmerizing... Wonderful HeartTouching Poetry...
A marvellous piece of poetry with such a deep meaning, presented so beautifully, aesthetically selected words providing a strong rhythm reaching to the heart. Already listened to this multiple times & thanks to Pallavi for giving such a strong & deep message with such an elegance.
फिर हुई जो रोशनी वहाँ नहीं था कोई भी हाँ मगर था आईना, था आईने में अक्स भी वो अक्स था तेरा वहाँ, जो था सुकून लिये खड़ा हँसके कहने ये लगा, मैं तुझमें ही सदा रहा।। अद्भुत अविस्मरणीय 👏🏻👏🏻
@@ramintakumari7694 means khud ko dekhna ya hum jab mirror me dekhte he to samne hum apne ap ko dekhte he vo hamra aksh hota he matlb ek tarike se apni personality dekhte he hum ki hum kese he
Bas wo aks na mila, sukoon liye tha Jo khada. Han khoj ta Hun aaina, ab bas Mai yuhi sada. Kidhar dhoondun khabar nahi hai raasta bhatak gaya Sukoon tujhe mile agar pata Bata Mera Zara
4 yrs later aj fir comment krrhi hu much needed poetry it was....sukoon ki talash mein hi bhag rhi thi tbhi yeh poem yad ayi aur aake ise sun liya accha lg ra h ab
Dear Pallavi, I got this as a WhatsApp forward and I was so amazed by your writing and your delivery as well. Kudos to you and many compliments on your wonderful writing!
I want to hear more from you. You touched every heart. What a flow and how beautiful every lines are. You nailed it Pallavi! I m repeatedly listening it and sharing this to every social platform... it's absolutely mind-blowing. One of the best poetry I have ever heard in my life . All the very best to you. You have a long way to go. Best wishes from channel #AuraHealthHealingLiving.
It is simply brilliant. How beautifully you have expressed the essence of life, the endless wandering we do,without realizing the peace in not in anything but inside us only. Thanks a lot ma'am. It teaches me this message.
Any possible permutation and combination of 26 letters of the English alphabet is insufficient to justify the core essence and beauty of the content of this poetry. Beyond words. Only Silence can take over to express what it is. Take a bow. Worth listening again and again and again. And yes ....Thank you.
Pallavi listening to this poetry is like reading a million books like the monk who sold his Ferrari. Ye zindagi ka falsafa deti hae. Too good. Its a marvelous piece of poetry. Its till date your best rendition i have ever heard. But i hope your best is yet to come.
What is this ...... Can something be better than this... Poetic rhythm at its best... Beyond best... Rest everything too is so awesome... Pallavi, u are just toooo good re... Yar...
Just by hearing this beautiful poetry from a beautiful soul runs the life's jubilation and tribulations in one quick motion and come to rest in present moment to find beatitude/ sukoon. I feel so much sukoon by just listening this poetry.. A great fluency and powerfully attractive captivating recital. Be blessed...
Just a word for u FABULOUS here is the real sukoon for me...whenever i feel something messy in my life.. my next stop is this...this awsmm poetry... thnqq ma'am for such a great feeling 🕸🕸
Woww...dil ko chhu lia...aapki aawaz aur ehsaaso ne.....one of the best poetry i jv ever heard... God blessss u mam...... Tumhari poetry ab meri diary me darj jaroor hogi...... Im vry lucky to hear u❤
Most beautiful poetry I ever heard in my life. I keep listening it over and over again and still can't get enough of it. Hope to emulate the zest of it in my life. Thank you Pallavi 👍 And plz keep writing such beautiful poems. Loads of love and regards 😀
One of the best poetry I have ever heard... You nailed it pallavi 😘😘 each and every line are Heart warming. I seen this firstly on Facebook and from that day I m in love with this poetry...and repeatedly listening it and also shared it on my social media... Want to hear more by you... U r just fabbb 🙏🙏girl❤️❤️❤️
I love you..... Indirectly you wrote my lifes true story... While listening your poetry i feel you are my soul.... And you describe my entire life in this poetry....
Such an underrated piece. I always listen to it whenever I feel low and it never fails to amaze her poetry each time i hear. Beautiful, profound and soul-touching!
पल्लवी , आपकी कविता का लेखन , उसका पाठ , लय और आत्मविश्वास बहुत गजब का है । आप अपनी इस प्रतिभा को और आगे ले जाएं इसके लिए आपको शुभकामनाएं । ख़ूब लिखें और गहरा पढ़ें ।
This has made my day! This is exactly something I needed. Thanks for this wonderful poetry. This type of poetry is getting rarer day by day, a sincere. congratulation on my behalf
I love the poem which is close to the reality, and this is the one which every one relates to their life's. 10 th times watching the same, Thanks a lot for sharing this poem.
Pallavi Mahajan🙏 keep continue...baaton ne teri 🌟phir majboor kiya! Kuch sukoon👌 bhara sunkar aaj mann bhi bahut khush hua! tu badhti rahna esse hi thought saath lekar taaki hosle hamare bhi majboot bane tujhe sunkar❤️
क्या वो मजह रुचि थी, पास में खुशी थी। क्यो मुझे खबर न थी, मुझ में ही थी यह बसी।। Also feel hopeless and then I heard this. Reason for being alive today. Thanks #Stage #pallavimam a lot.
@@palpoetry thanks a lot mam for making me a fighter. God bless u mam. I can't express my love and gratitude towards you in words.🤐 Once again thanks a lot.😊 Only desire to meet you once in my life spam.🤗🤗
To find bliss you wandered from places to places.
Yet it was hidden so close, your sight never fell there.
You kept trying to chase illusionary dreams, thinking it will help you find it.
You left one town, you left your street and played along as life took you places. This place was sort of new and so was the sky.
Your desires grew and you worked but then you got tired of chasing things.
As you achieved things, you kept trying to build biggers better larger things.
Each desire leading to newer bolder desires, stealing any moments of rest.
Once again your chase the newer illusionary dreams thinking perhaps it will lead you to peace, the cycle continued endlessly.
There stood someone standing with his face turned around -This peaceful soul.
He possed such bliss that which you had been chasing all your life.
You said to him, it has been a long difficult tiring ride.
However I am glad, I have found you.
Aren't you bliss, you enquired.
Why is it dark here, you wondered.
Come on now, you say, lets share this boundless happiness you have, I am not all that bad, you plead with bliss.
Suddenly there was a flash of light and bliss disappeared from there.
Yet there was something in sight - a mirror.
And what you could see in that mirror- yourself.
And in that mirror, you could see bliss smiling as it says to you,
all this while I have always been in you.
You wonder, all your life you had been chasing it, yet you knew not it was in you. Bliss reads this thought of yours and says unto you -
Don't be so hard on yourself, mate.
Did you not achieve all that you were chasing all your life?
Come listen to a thing or two which I want to say to you, it continued.
In this rat-race of life most people dont recognize me.
They call me by many names but no one knows me really.
I am the much-missed -rest, in this rat-race of life.
I am right here in everyone, yet a dream for them.
Now, this is a promise with a catch.
Try now, close your eyes and look deep inside you in meditation
and this very moment you shall find me right in there.
Your life was so full of desires, my friend.
And you were so caught up with those desires so you couldn't find me.
Now cut off those desires and become light.
Don't chase me for I am right here.
I liked it so much that I translated it for folks overseas.
Well done, Saurabh! Thanks.
Awesome Saurabh. Marvelous.
Very nice translation; shall forward this to my students.
Nice
Can I get the hindi lyrics please 🙏
सुन लिया, समझ लिया जो बोला तुमने कर लिया, फिर भी रहा ये खोजता कहां गया किधर गया।
मुझ में मै ना मिल सका, शायद कहीं था गुम गया, मै खोजता हूं अपने ही अक्स को दूसरों के अक्स में। परछाई बन के रह गया हूं मैं अपने ही अक्स की।
क्या करू, किधर चलू, भटक गया हूं मै दिशा, कोई कहे यहां चलो, कोई कहे वहां चलो, इसी कश-म -कश में उलझ गया हूं क्या करूं।
Nice one 👌
Bas wo aks na mila, sukoon liye tha Jo khada.
Han khoj ta Hun aaina, ab bas Mai yuhi sada.
Kidhar dhoondun khabar nahi hai raasta bhatak gaya
Sukoon tujhe mile agar pata Bata Mera Zara
Wow
@@dr.k93 Thanks
@@ishadugar4913 Thanks
I heard her this masterpiece four years ago on someone's status..... I wasn't much matured that time but now......I can relate to it so much❤️❤️
बहोत ही खूब ... पल्लविजी ...
“सुकून की तलाशमें”
सुकून की तलाशमें, तू फिरा इधर-उधर
था मगर जहाँ छिपा, गई नहीं वहाँ नज़र |
तू सोचता रहा यही, कि एक दिन मिलेगा वो
जब मिलेगा सब तुझे, हाँ तभी दिखेगा वो |
तू छोड आया एक शहर, तू छोड़ आया एक गली
जिंदगी के संग चला, वो जिधर-जिधर चली |
ये नयी सी थी जगह, आसमाँ भी था नया
तू उड़ा बहोत मगर, फिर ज़रा सा थक गया |
ईस उड़ान ने तुझे, था यहाँ बहोत दिया
चाहतों को पर तेरी, नया मकाम दिख गया |
तू फिर उड़ा ये सोच कर, कि जो तलब थी अबतलक
ख़त्म होगी ये वहाँ, जहाँ दिखी है एक झलक |
लंबा ये सफ़र रहा, होंसला मगर रहा
आ गया नजरमें वो, जो दूर ही से था दिखा |
एक शख्स था वहाँ, फेरे अपना मुँह खड़ा
उसके पास वो सुकून, तुझे कभी ना जो मिला |
तूने उससे ये कहा, कि रास्ता कठिन रहा
खुश मगर हुँ मैं बहोत, मुझे सुकून है मिल गया |
क्यूँ अंधेरा है यहाँ, फेरे मुँह तू क्यूँ खड़ा
चल सुकून को बाँट ले, मैं आदमी नहीं बुरा |
फिर हुई जो रोशनी, वहाँ नहीं था कोई भी
हाँ मगर था आईना, था आईने में अक्श भी |
वो अक्श था तेरा वहाँ, जो था सुकून लिये खड़ा
हसके केहने ये लगा, मैं तुझमें ही सदा रहा |
क्या वो महज जुनून था, क्या पास में सुकून था
क्यूँ मुझे खबर न थी, क्या मुझमें ही था ये कहीं |
क्यूँ खुदसे ईतना लड़ रहा, जो चाहतोंने पा लिया
अब समझ ये बात तू, जो तुझसे मैं हूँ कह रहा |
दौड़ में यहाँ सभी, मुझे नहीं तलाशते
नाम लेते है कई, ख़ाक पर है छानते |
मैं दौड़ में आराम हूँ, मैं खास ना हूँ आम हूँ
हर किसीमें हूँ बसा, मैं फिर भी सबका ख्वाब हूँ |
आँख मूंद तू अभी, अभी पड़ा है तू जहाँ
मुश्कुराके ढूँढना, मैं तुझमें भी छिपा हुआ |
जिंदगी जो थी तेरी, चाहतों में थी घिरी
तिरगिमे तू रहा, तो मैं तुझे दिखा नहीं |
तो तिरगिको काट दे, तू रोशनी को साथ ले
अब सुकून को खोज मत, है क्या सुकून ये जान ले |
The whole alchemist book in single page
No words for flow of your poetry
So true! Destiny took him to the start.
WoW... Great analogy!
Bas wo aks na mila, sukoon liye tha Jo khada.
Han khoj ta Hun aaina, ab bas Mai yuhi sada.
Kidhar dhoondun khabar nahi hai raasta bhatak gaya
Sukoon tujhe mile agar pata Bata Mera Zara
Man
U gave me a spoiler
Emotional poem k liyr subscribe kijiye chainnal Ehsaas Mohsin
Mam dil jeet liya apne...krishna se hi duniya h krishna se hi khusi.jise ye samay rahte samjh aaya vo insan ne is jindgi ko jeet liya..aur jo na samajh paye ise vo jeevan me sab kuch pa kar bhi kuch na pa paya
Aap bol rahi thi,
Meri aakhein dekh rahi thi,
aur rooh sukoon paa rahi thi.....
Your poetry makes me in your world, literally I was imagining everything you have said, that mirror part was amazing
Dear Pallavi you have expressed the highest advaitic teachings so beautifully. It just went straight into the heart. Keeping writing and let the Supreme flow through you!
Aah, I was looking for this comment, this is the pure Advaitic teaching... 🎉
Pallavi Mahajan is terrific Poetess, she represents new generation but her thoughts match the thoughts of a great poet late Mirza Asadullah Khan Ghalib. I am of 73 years and I expect that in future Pallavi will be a very famous Poetess. I pray to Allah for her healthful and good longlife,
Its the best ever poetry I saw on youtube. You deserve more the a million like. You said a lot of things so quitly. Well written, keep writing.
Pallavi.. I have no words to explain how nicely you have presented this...best poetry I ever heard. Lyrics/expression/style everything is perfect.Till now I followed Jagjeet Singh's Gazals and Rhat Indori's poetry only and today have added your name in the list..
Hiiiiiiiii 😊
Your words are your strength girl! The way you wrote this is immensely commendable! I have heard it on repeat and the more I listen to it the more I find meaning to it!
Thanks for sharing your talent!!
It’s a beautiful poem!
ruclips.net/video/XlR75zjrGWo/видео.html Avni ji please do listen to this story by my best friend and write your insights on the same. Thank you so much
आज पहली बार सुना आपको इससे शानदार सुबह नहीं हो सकती । भरोसा हो गया है अब हिंदी की कविता का बहुत ही लंबा जीवन है आप जैसे यंग युवा कवि इसे आगे ले जाने के लिए आए हुए हैं उम्मीदें धूमिल हो रही थी हिंदी को लेकर अब उम्मीद जग चुकी हैं बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद पल्लवी जी।
I can just say WOW...
Trust me Pallavi you are a very close observer of Life...
Your words are so realistic(can be easily related to anyone's life)
and the way you speak, express is really mesmerizing...
Wonderful HeartTouching Poetry...
Phir hui thi roshni vha nhi tha koi bhi tha mgr aina....yrrrr your words 💘💘💘💘🔥osm....sachme sukun feel ho rha h aapko sun kr😌✨😌✨❤️✨
Hii
After decades have heard something like this. Just loved it.
Check my poems also if you like subscribe the channel and informed us how it is?😊
True. Very strong Base
A marvellous piece of poetry with such a deep meaning, presented so beautifully, aesthetically selected words providing a strong rhythm reaching to the heart. Already listened to this multiple times & thanks to Pallavi for giving such a strong & deep message with such an elegance.
This girl is terrific. I watched the video for more than 10 times. Super awesome. More power to her poetry!
फिर हुई जो रोशनी वहाँ नहीं था कोई भी
हाँ मगर था आईना, था आईने में अक्स भी
वो अक्स था तेरा वहाँ, जो था सुकून लिये खड़ा
हँसके कहने ये लगा, मैं तुझमें ही सदा रहा।।
अद्भुत अविस्मरणीय 👏🏻👏🏻
Kya baat hai
Akas means
@@ramintakumari7694 means khud ko dekhna ya hum jab mirror me dekhte he to samne hum apne ap ko dekhte he vo hamra aksh hota he matlb ek tarike se apni personality dekhte he hum ki hum kese he
Amazing 👏👏👏👏👏👏💯
Bas wo aks na mila, sukoon liye tha Jo khada.
Han khoj ta Hun aaina, ab bas Mai yuhi sada.
Kidhar dhoondun khabar nahi hai raasta bhatak gaya
Sukoon tujhe mile agar pata Bata Mera Zara
बहुत अच्छा इस कविता को मैंने २० बार सुना---- बडा सकुन देने वाली यह रचना लगा
4 yrs later aj fir comment krrhi hu much needed poetry it was....sukoon ki talash mein hi bhag rhi thi tbhi yeh poem yad ayi aur aake ise sun liya accha lg ra h ab
Dear Pallavi, I got this as a WhatsApp forward and I was so amazed by your writing and your delivery as well. Kudos to you and many compliments on your wonderful writing!
I want to hear more from you. You touched every heart. What a flow and how beautiful every lines are. You nailed it Pallavi! I m repeatedly listening it and sharing this to every social platform... it's absolutely mind-blowing. One of the best poetry I have ever heard in my life . All the very best to you. You have a long way to go. Best wishes from channel #AuraHealthHealingLiving.
Kya awaaz hai...poetry main hi sab Bata diya...heart touching
It is simply brilliant. How beautifully you have expressed the essence of life, the endless wandering we do,without realizing the peace in not in anything but inside us only.
Thanks a lot ma'am. It teaches me this message.
Any possible permutation and combination of 26 letters of the English alphabet is insufficient to justify the core essence and beauty of the content of this poetry. Beyond words. Only Silence can take over to express what it is. Take a bow. Worth listening again and again and again. And yes ....Thank you.
Pallavi listening to this poetry is like reading a million books like the monk who sold his Ferrari. Ye zindagi ka falsafa deti hae. Too good. Its a marvelous piece of poetry. Its till date your best rendition i have ever heard. But i hope your best is yet to come.
I've memorized the whole thing but I still listen to it everyday
Hiiiiiiiii 😊
Same here ☺
Same
Same with me.
Me 2.... its never gonna old..😌❤
Dil ko chu gai aapki ye kavita...seriously u n poetry both are amazing...
All my heart.
3 years back one of my very close realtive shared this masterpiece with me and since then it is my favourite like her. ❤️
What is this ...... Can something be better than this... Poetic rhythm at its best... Beyond best... Rest everything too is so awesome... Pallavi, u are just toooo good re... Yar...
Just amazing !!
No words for it.
Sukoon hamesha pas hai bas janne ki jarurat hai. Great poetry.
This is the most important thing I've heard for us living in this day and age.
Simply awesome. You have summarised the essence of Bhagvad Gita.
Amazing words and they definitely made me introspect. Very beautiful indeed. All power to Pallavi ji.
Pallavi hats off to you, as if you gave words to some hidden emotions
Tu ne jo hai kaha
Dil ko mere chhu gaya
👌👌😊very very nice poem
I have tears in my eyes everytime I listen to this poem... Love it very much
Just by hearing this beautiful poetry from a beautiful soul runs the life's jubilation and tribulations in one quick motion and come to rest in present moment to find beatitude/ sukoon. I feel so much sukoon by just listening this poetry.. A great fluency and powerfully attractive captivating recital. Be blessed...
Wonderful poetry Pallavi ji.
The complete jist of spirituality summed up in a few lines..
Thank you for putting these unsaid feelings into words. Loved the poem. Kudos to you!
Jab nind nahi aati.. Tab tab soon ke so jata hun.. Thanks for the poetry..
Its superb....i don't know how many times I have listened to this poetry
It's one of the most beautiful poems I've ever heard.
Just a word for u
FABULOUS
here is the real sukoon for me...whenever i feel something messy in my life.. my next stop is this...this awsmm poetry... thnqq ma'am for such a great feeling 🕸🕸
Pallavi Ma'am, your piece of poetry is such a blessing to all of us here...
Woww...dil ko chhu lia...aapki aawaz aur ehsaaso ne.....one of the best poetry i jv ever heard...
God blessss u mam......
Tumhari poetry ab meri diary me darj jaroor hogi......
Im vry lucky to hear u❤
Most beautiful poetry I ever heard in my life. I keep listening it over and over again and still can't get enough of it. Hope to emulate the zest of it in my life.
Thank you Pallavi 👍
And plz keep writing such beautiful poems.
Loads of love and regards 😀
Aajkal market me keval love poetry hi pasand kar rhi h yuva peedhi....A good poem on RUclips after a long time .... highly underrated
Bahot khub har insan ki kahani aik hi kavita mai kah di Allah taala aap ko hamesha aik sachchi sukun bhari zindagi de
Superb , I searched it and am here to hear it again and again and again. The recitation is simply awesome. God bless you.
I am glad to you and stage. Thankyou 🙏🏼
Aksar lahasil hi reh jaata hai..sukoon Talaash e Sukoon ki raahon par..
This is a master piece of art. you have a real talent with words and the way they are presented.
one of the best poetry ever heard
beautifully narrated
After a long time i heard such nice poetry , it is just awesome😍😍😍
beautiful lines...sukoon milta hai ye video roj dekh k..
No words....mtlb iti bar sune k bad bhi man ni bharta.....#sukoon ka asli mtlb bta diya kuch mints me....😍🙌
One of the best poetry I have ever heard... You nailed it pallavi 😘😘 each and every line are Heart warming. I seen this firstly on Facebook and from that day I m in love with this poetry...and repeatedly listening it and also shared it on my social media... Want to hear more by you... U r just fabbb 🙏🙏girl❤️❤️❤️
बेहतरीन पेशकश। शब्दोें पर बहुत ज़बरदस्त पकड़ और भावों का अद्भूत समन्वय रचना को शाहकार बना दिया 👏👏👏
Wah !
Tumari Hindi bhi bahut achhi hai
I love you..... Indirectly you wrote my lifes true story... While listening your poetry i feel you are my soul.... And you describe my entire life in this poetry....
Excellent thought and wonderful narration. Pallavi my best compliments and wishes to you.
Pallavi u r unique..... 👌
No words... Speechless
You just explained the complete way of living life... Awesome 😊
Pallavi mahajan 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 luv ur pieces of poetry..... Face pe smile aayi naam padhte hi 🔱🔱🔱
Pallavi ji ye aapka masterpiece h.. Excellent..!!!!
सुपर बहुत बार सुना लेकिन हर बार लगा कि एक बार सुनु इतना दिल के करीब है
Such an underrated piece.
I always listen to it whenever I feel low and it never fails to amaze her poetry each time i hear. Beautiful, profound and soul-touching!
This is one of the best I have ever heard.... Listening this is itself like a Sukoon
Its one of best poetry & heard in my life ..naration is also awesome ......got mesmerize my mself...
Pallavi. ...at this age only? ??!!!
You are gifted, a torch bearer!
Keep writing for us! !😍😍
Yes I will... Thanks a ton :)
पल्लवी , आपकी कविता का लेखन , उसका पाठ , लय और आत्मविश्वास बहुत गजब का है ।
आप अपनी इस प्रतिभा को और आगे ले जाएं इसके लिए आपको शुभकामनाएं ।
ख़ूब लिखें और गहरा पढ़ें ।
Sahi kaha
Suna jo maine tujhko aaj, Ye aam se lafz jo bahut hi khaas hein.....aur jo paigam hai diya....mila usi mein SUKOON hai
One of the best ..
Listing everday..
Should be listen by everyone..
Crux of life in few lines..
Hats of you ....
This has made my day!
This is exactly something I needed.
Thanks for this wonderful poetry. This type of poetry is getting rarer day by day, a sincere. congratulation on my behalf
Can watch it over and over again.. isko sunn ke sukoon zarur mil gya..
Pallavi this is awesome.....It can't be described in words...
I start my day after listen this ..!!👍👍👍..
आप लगी सबसे अलग अलग मुझे दिखी परमात्मा की झलक. 🙏
So beautiful poem Dil ko chhu lene wali .. bht br suni hun
Listen so many times yet everytime seems something new 🙂🙂.... One of my fav..
Nice.........acha LGA k Hindi poetry ka zunun Abhi b kayam h. ......love it.
Absolutely beautiful.. shall always remain one of my favorite poetry..
My go to poem when I am feeling low or need motivation, just a masterpiece.❤ Kudos Pallavi!
I love the poem which is close to the reality, and this is the one which every one relates to their life's. 10 th times watching the same, Thanks a lot for sharing this poem.
truly motivating
A very high level of poetry.nice writing and presentation skills pallavi ji.
just listen this and you will start loving poetry
amazing
Gives me goosebumps. May God bless you. 🤗🙏
Hai kya sukun tu jaan le 😍 .. Beautiful..
Best sayari about life i have heard
Pallavi Mahajan🙏 keep continue...baaton ne teri 🌟phir majboor kiya! Kuch sukoon👌 bhara sunkar aaj mann bhi bahut khush hua! tu badhti rahna esse hi thought saath lekar taaki hosle hamare bhi majboot bane tujhe sunkar❤️
❤️❤️
@@palpoetry 🙏thanx...
Ye sun kar mujhe bahut skoon milta hai
And I listen Everyday ❤❤❤❤
I've never felt so connected to a poetry..... A fan of urs from now 😘
The beauty of this poetry is beyond the words. My first comment on any poetry.. still looking for lyrics.
Beautiful Poetry , Beautifully narrated, Beautiful voice by
Beautiful Pallavi once again.
There is sukoon listening your poetry.
Very nice lines... when i have heard it first time, i repeat it 5 times.
Woooow
jaab bhi suno ek sukoon sa milta hai... bahot khub!
It's one of the best poetry. You have just nailed it by your use of words and by adding a nice ring to it. Truly amazing. 👌👌
आप का क्या कहना। भगवान की कृपा आप पर बनी रहे। आशीर्वाद धन्यवाद ।
क्या वो मजह रुचि थी,
पास में खुशी थी।
क्यो मुझे खबर न थी,
मुझ में ही थी यह बसी।।
Also feel hopeless and then I heard this. Reason for being alive today.
Thanks #Stage #pallavimam a lot.
Take care of yourself.. and don't give up.. stay blessed :)
@@palpoetry thanks a lot mam for making me a fighter.
God bless u mam.
I can't express my love and gratitude towards you in words.🤐
Once again thanks a lot.😊
Only desire to meet you once in my life spam.🤗🤗