StormWolf - The Beginning of Order (Old Ver.)

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  • Опубликовано: 7 дек 2024
  • NEW BETTER VERSION • StormWolf - The Beginn...
    READ PLEASE!
    Finally a new song!
    This one's another one for toastbeard, this week's theme was "The End of Equestria"
    Another eurobeat style song, this one was inspired by eurobeat brony, and even borrowed his chord progs at some point. Not my best one though...
    I KNOW THE VOCALS AREN'T THAT GOOD- I don't have a decent microphone and I was kinda rushed (finished the entire thing in 2 days excluding the lyrics)
    Song composed and vocals done by me, StormWolf/Josh Loh
    Ingenious lyrics and story concept created by Equinox/Larry McConnell!
    STORY LINE
    Chaos, happiness, and misery are balanced in Equestria as it was many years ago, clouds cut between water and cotton candy, and days pass at changing rates. Nothing is constant just like it was meant to be and Discord maintains that intention. An ambitious white alicorn sees the chaos as destruction, and uses it as an excuse to take the world for herself. The world becomes a place of order and constants, under rule of Princess Celestia.
    Discord was the true ruler of Equestria. The real Equestria. The ambitious Celestia didn't see Discord perfect reign of chaotic happiness, so she overthrew him in an apocalyptic event. This, was the true end of Equestria, when the king was imprisoned into stone. Today's Equestria is merely a mask, a post apocalyptic scene under the guise of Celestia's tyranny and need for control and constants. Now everypony has to control everything, the weather, the animals, the light. The "Equestria" we see in the present, is in fact, not the true Equestria. The true Equestria was destroyed many years ago.
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Комментарии • 165

  • @OdysseyEurobeat
    @OdysseyEurobeat 13 лет назад +5

    Yer gettin' too good, kid. Makin' me nervous~!
    Another fantastic Eurobeat tune. You get better with each tune! And for using the built-in microphone, you've mixed it really quite well! Here's hoping for more.
    -EbB

  • @ZsoronZ
    @ZsoronZ 9 лет назад +26

    I like this one more than the ¨Better version¨
    You should have really keep your rap part.

    • @JoshLohMusic
      @JoshLohMusic  6 лет назад +6

      In retrospect, I agree. Well, there are parts to both versions that I like. At the time, I was really not fond of my voice in this one, and I had learned how to use a lot of new shiny production tools, so I basically convinced myself that this version was crap and that I needed to make a new one. But yeah, now when I look back, there are various elements in both versions that I enjoy!

    • @allenholloway5109
      @allenholloway5109 4 года назад +4

      @@JoshLohMusic Yeah, I love the instrumentals in this, and the passion behind the words. And with a little polish, that rap part would easily be the best and most impressive part of the entire song. While I still like the newer version, it was a little over-polished for what the song was saying.
      (Oh, I should probably mention that I got here from InterrobangPie's crossover of this with Kirby. I loved that song for years before realizing it was actually based off of something. ruclips.net/video/P8RHDid1th4/видео.html)

  • @Ecapsora
    @Ecapsora 12 лет назад +3

    Cool song, interesting idea. I like the re-interpertaion of what Equestria was like under Discord. History is written by the victors right.

  • @AlzMarioWolfe
    @AlzMarioWolfe 6 лет назад +8

    Something about this instrumental sounds cooler than the new version, but I still prefer the singing quality and octave change in the new version. Also, the rap wasn’t necessary for the new version, so I agree with most people. Not unless it was done cleaner.

  • @tamral31
    @tamral31 13 лет назад +1

    Being labelled as the 14th greatest brony song of 2011 is no meager feat. Hats off to you sir!

  • @Subserial_
    @Subserial_ 13 лет назад +2

    Someone HAS TO make a fanfic out of this story. SOMEONE has to. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!

  • @someonesomething00
    @someonesomething00 4 месяца назад +1

    you should make a 2024 version of this
    (I'm listening on repeat for years hah, counting your newest remix of "let your mane down" too, great stuff!)

  • @shadeunite5031
    @shadeunite5031 6 лет назад +1

    The rap was awesome *^*

  • @eclipsedragonwing
    @eclipsedragonwing 12 лет назад +1

    What is anarchy but the progressive stage between forms of rule? I think that the true question that this song raises in my mind is, "What was the crime?" If Discord ruled as he saw fit, letting the world fall into what it naturally became around him, was it not Celestia tampering with the "Natural Order?"
    On the other hoof, it is said that ponies were tortured by Discord's rule, and he did seem to be abusing them for entertainment... But history is written by the winners. We know little.

  • @Krethak
    @Krethak 13 лет назад

    I can't push the "I like button" more than once ._. Your singing is really good and the vocals put a really interesting point of view in the whole Discord incident

  • @breceeofficial
    @breceeofficial Месяц назад

    I'm happy to come across this song again! Both versions are good, but I think this one sounds more 'genuine' than the 'better version'.
    The comments about the sawtooth lead always make me lol :)

  • @thedwardgai
    @thedwardgai 13 лет назад

    I'm looking forward for your future projects! Please keep on singing so you'll get better and more experienced!

  • @Fleskdawson
    @Fleskdawson 13 лет назад

    hey josh, for a song thats been rushed and with a crappy mic, you did fantastic, i love every moment of it and that eurobeat parts are mind blowing, i would love to see some of the more delicate work you pull off,
    your faithful fan
    Flesk

  • @iBringDaLULZ
    @iBringDaLULZ 13 лет назад

    Damn dude, you can do any genre justice can't you?! :3

  • @angeliquedowda6306
    @angeliquedowda6306 9 лет назад +6

    OMG how old are you? Your voice is amazingly beautiful, the rap was awesome! your voice is super sexy to be honest i really look forward to hearing way more from you, you are a true talent my friend. KEEP STRONG AND ADORABLE SOUNDING!!!!!!

  • @JamesCWR
    @JamesCWR 13 лет назад

    Beginning sounds like the Pokemon theme song. After that it was just Awesome! Coming out with your own lyrics damn cool! good job!

  • @W34T13Y
    @W34T13Y 11 лет назад +1

    This was already my headcanon, and now it's a song too. ^_^

  • @xWOAStarStudiox
    @xWOAStarStudiox 13 лет назад

    Dude,you're an AMAZING singer!
    Keep up the amazing work!

  • @bobo7k
    @bobo7k 12 лет назад

    When I read the description I loled because thats what I've always thought!

  • @MagnaDrake
    @MagnaDrake 13 лет назад

    Dude. You are burning my passion. Thank you.

  • @l33753ph1r07h
    @l33753ph1r07h 12 лет назад

    Cool story, Bro. Like seriously, thats awesome!

  • @skyrocketneko
    @skyrocketneko 12 лет назад

    Great song! And I agree that it has great potential with updated vocals in it! I would love to give it a shot if I had the proper tools/programs.

  • @caligula6668
    @caligula6668 13 лет назад

    Really enjoyed the song and lyrics, i hope you re-upload this song in the future with better vocals though, then i download

  • @Pyrobug0
    @Pyrobug0 13 лет назад

    I like the perspective shift. It's cool to have a song from Discord's point of view.

  • @GigaBowserNS
    @GigaBowserNS 13 лет назад

    I am totally addicted to this song.

  • @saxwastaken
    @saxwastaken 11 лет назад +4

    DISCORD IS BEST PRINCESS

  • @AMintyDragon
    @AMintyDragon 13 лет назад

    This is pretty awesome!

  • @saquya3
    @saquya3 13 лет назад

    Amazing! I think I'll try to a dub of this one day. the lyrics are truly awesome :D

  • @CarolinaSkunkApe
    @CarolinaSkunkApe 12 лет назад +1

    Love how this is formated like an epic poem of sorts, but Celestia did NOT have authoritarian and power-hungry motives in overthrowing the self-proclaimed spirit of CHAOS. Why else would the Elements of HARMONY been used to stop him? You get a glimpse of Discord's unhindered rule and what he could do in a matter of days. Is that a noble and just "freedom?"

  • @Dulore1
    @Dulore1 13 лет назад

    Woo I love this! The quality of your mic isn't that bad.

  • @Dulore1
    @Dulore1 13 лет назад

    @JoshLohMusic Well it seems that we have the same mic! Also it was your first time singing I don't think anyone expects you to be perfect, I know you did far better than I ever could. :)

  • @SPOTtheSamurai
    @SPOTtheSamurai 13 лет назад

    Great job Josh!
    I'm not a fan of Eurobeat but it's done well and vocals are spot on apart from one or two words.
    The lyrics are...uh...bronyish but they work.
    I'll have to listen to some more of your stuff.
    Finished pixel art of Twilight Sparkle, Derpy Hooves and Rarity, working on Fluttershy.
    Note to others reading: I AM NOT A BRONY

  • @Galliri
    @Galliri 13 лет назад

    This is brilliant! I love the chorous, and I won't be able to stop singing it for a while now.
    The only thing I could tell that could use improvement is lyrics - some of them don't seem to fit into the rhythm that well, seems a bit awkwardly made to fit in places. I don't know if that's what you were aiming for, or if it was accidental.

  • @Tacityoshi1234
    @Tacityoshi1234 13 лет назад

    @JoshLohMusic I thought you did a great job I would never be able to muster up the courage to do something like this.

  • @nickcanary173
    @nickcanary173 6 лет назад +1

    6 years ago...

  • @onisiluxstudios1598
    @onisiluxstudios1598 8 лет назад +1

    Hey! I love the song :p

  • @CSLucasEpic
    @CSLucasEpic 11 лет назад +4

    I actually liked this one over the better version.

  • @sw1tchfl1pper
    @sw1tchfl1pper 12 лет назад

    It's on his soundcloud already. :D It's awesome!!!

  • @screwthis12345
    @screwthis12345 12 лет назад

    this song has high potential, good luck remaking C:

  • @WolfJoeTV
    @WolfJoeTV 13 лет назад

    omgomgomg, demand a remastered version plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz (appleblooom plz), this is good, but it could be so much better if you didnt rush it, in other words speak out the words clearer in some cases, probably better mic, vocals are where you could really improve this song.
    Still love it especially the chrous *singing* an alicorns desire attempts to welcome harmony try to create order... a worthy eurobeat brony inspired song, you know whats going to be punished... the replay button

  • @lejacobems
    @lejacobems 12 лет назад +1

    Celestia is now officially worst pony. Go Discord!

  • @MorbidlyElectrifying
    @MorbidlyElectrifying 12 лет назад +1

    Great song, nice to see that people like you are showing this fandom the talented side of Australia, unlike me. But just one question, this song was released last year, so how does the cover art have the shot of Celestia advancing on chrysalis on it?

  • @AbraCadaveric
    @AbraCadaveric 13 лет назад

    Really nice lyrics

  • @theparadiselast
    @theparadiselast 13 лет назад

    Awesome. We're keeping an eye on you~

  • @dragonhelix
    @dragonhelix 13 лет назад

    wow this is just incredible it makes me think what if it turned out celestia was actually the evil one masking her acts as 'justice' and what if luna tried to stop her and thats the real reason luna sealed her away in the moon o.o

  • @cHiHiRo9696
    @cHiHiRo9696 13 лет назад

    holy shit this is good. what bs about crap microphone and bad vocals? ITS BEASTLY. ;D well doneee

  • @Darkmarine40
    @Darkmarine40 12 лет назад

    I've been looking for some new music to listen to (brony-made or otherwise), and I am quite please with what I hear. This is DEFINITELY going on my mp3 player.

  • @fadelsukoco3092
    @fadelsukoco3092 6 лет назад

    The rap definitely should have made it over to your updated version, it would have made it even better, and that part was quite unique.

  • @UberFacundia
    @UberFacundia 13 лет назад

    I love it brony!

  • @iamfilleg
    @iamfilleg 13 лет назад

    ... WHY HAVENT I SUBSCRIBED TO YOU YET!?
    When I look at related vids, i see tons of stuff that I have downloaded. :) (I'm the guy who asked for the notes for Octavia's Ballan) ;)

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  12 лет назад +2

    NO Celestia is a beautiful pony!!!

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад

    @Dulore1 LOL My mic is actually a hole on top of my desktop computer xD
    But yeah I guess it's not too bad, kinda a bit unhappy with the vocals still but meh, someone out there will probably cover it xD
    But yeah, I'm glad you like it! I was a bit nervous while uploading this

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад +1

    @SHE37 Ill upload non-vocals in a few days time, when I have internet (I had to go to larry's house to upload this one)

  • @alexeng1995
    @alexeng1995 13 лет назад

    I usually detest vocals like the plague, but this is really freaking well-done. Only a few pin-holes down from For the New Lunar Republic, imo.

  • @midnightgear2616
    @midnightgear2616 8 лет назад +5

    Thus the need for balance/ harmony
    Chaos|Order
    two sides of the same coin
    we need both but not too much of either

  • @SandBlaster3000
    @SandBlaster3000 13 лет назад

    Heh, wow. This is a perfect counterpoint to Eurobeat Brony's "Discord". Good to play them in tandem.

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад

    @TehRodziR
    Intro:
    Fm Db E Ab (1/2) C (1/2) x6
    Riff:
    Fm Db Ab E (1/2) C (1/2) x4
    Verse:
    Fm Db E Ab (1/2) C (1/2)
    Fm Db E C
    Bridge:
    Ab C Fm F Bbm Db C C
    Chorus:
    Fm Db Ab E (1/2) C (1/2) x4
    And it basically goes
    Intro>Riff>Verse>Bridge>Chorus>Riff>Verse>Bridge>Chorus>Riff>Bridge>Chorus>Riffx2>Outro (Same as riff)

  • @SandJosieph
    @SandJosieph 12 лет назад

    You should really think about putting more of the remixes and covers of this song in annotations.

  • @xWOAStarStudiox
    @xWOAStarStudiox 13 лет назад

    @JoshLohMusic
    Awesome dude!

  • @SnowCakez
    @SnowCakez 13 лет назад

    EPIC!

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад

    @eddmario Eenope
    I accidentally used a similar chord prog, with the first 3 chords being the same as luna (i VI VII) but then its different
    In fact for the most part it was inspired by Discord (The bridge has the same chord prog)

  • @PieEaterV2
    @PieEaterV2 12 лет назад

    The remake is even better :D

  • @tamral31
    @tamral31 13 лет назад

    @Archimonde259 Look up 'Everfree Radio', it should still be somewhere on the front page

  • @twilight-hu4rl
    @twilight-hu4rl 8 лет назад

    this is good song nice jobe.

  • @IndustriesPnC
    @IndustriesPnC 13 лет назад

    Eurobeat Brony commented. Now THAT'S an achievement.

  • @bananasXgoneXwild
    @bananasXgoneXwild 13 лет назад

    Badass! :D

  • @redwings13400
    @redwings13400 13 лет назад

    I would personally vote for Celestia as president or dictator, but this song is pretty awesome.

  • @RobertRaeder
    @RobertRaeder 13 лет назад

    I am sooo covering this! Gotta use my other channel tho, I don't want people I know to stumble upon my covers XD

  • @GreatFox42
    @GreatFox42 13 лет назад

    @EquineEquinox I didn't mean that who wrote the lyrics was fasle.
    I was just saying that the lyrics themselves, what they were saying, were recently proven to be false.

  • @dnotive
    @dnotive 12 лет назад

    @JoshLohMusic SO EXCITE.

  • @Zoronii
    @Zoronii 13 лет назад

    Don't let the fact that your microphone sucks get to 'ya! Look at what Tarby's done!

  • @meowmeowparadise
    @meowmeowparadise 13 лет назад

    It's all about the euroraps

  • @TerraHv1
    @TerraHv1 13 лет назад

    This is pretty good for your first time singing... ever.

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад

    @Reakkor YES PLEASE
    Instrumental now in description!

  • @TheGreatSammyJack
    @TheGreatSammyJack 12 лет назад

    Unsubscribed...Wait...not subscribed yet? ... *listens* subscribed.

  • @lucilletea
    @lucilletea 13 лет назад

    A nice song. First time I heard it I couldn't quiiite hear some of the lyrics, but that's mostly cleared up on my second listen - maybe I was just tired :/
    But I still have to read along at the "badly attempted rap" section at 2:50, it's a bit unclear.

  • @MysticalRhythms
    @MysticalRhythms 13 лет назад

    This is so much better than eurobeat brony's stuff.
    no offence to him or anything.

  • @MrPAGENIS
    @MrPAGENIS 12 лет назад

    FOR DISCORD, CHAOS RISING

  • @tamral31
    @tamral31 13 лет назад

    @nickthecropper I smell the New Lunar Republic behind this one...

  • @LexiWhatWeGot
    @LexiWhatWeGot 12 лет назад

    Yet more proof of Luna's superiority.

  • @GreatFox42
    @GreatFox42 13 лет назад

    Lyrics have been recently proven to be false (Sorry EE), but they're actually sung pretty well.
    And goddamn is this catchy as hell.

  • @SandJosieph
    @SandJosieph 12 лет назад

    Actually, this song didn't inspire the entire song "Daddy Discord", just the line about Equestria returning to its "Natural Chaotic State". I don't think I could ever write anything that could compare to this on the same level. Which is why I focus on a completely different genre! >:3

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад +1

    As Seen On: Yahoo! Answers
    Haha, the fuck?!

  • @daylightsavage
    @daylightsavage 12 лет назад

    luv it ;)
    daylight

  • @TheSonic10160
    @TheSonic10160 13 лет назад

    @JoshLohMusic Well you sound british and FYI I'm from New Zealand

  • @miumiumanzo
    @miumiumanzo 13 лет назад

    My body automatically ParaParas to this...

  • @obsidianchangeling5968
    @obsidianchangeling5968 11 лет назад

    Y do U think this is bad? this is-- in MY language- AWESOME-TASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @teholimpa
    @teholimpa 12 лет назад

    I really like Your voice :3 are you English?

  • @DreamExtractor
    @DreamExtractor 13 лет назад

    WHY DIDNT I DISCOVER YOU EARLIER!!?

  • @ShadowNinja1995
    @ShadowNinja1995 13 лет назад

    @JoshLohMusic You sound like one of those Vocaloid singers like Kaito and Miku and all that...

  • @yellowklayman
    @yellowklayman 13 лет назад

    Is there by chance an orchestral version somewhere?

  • @ShadTheCrazed
    @ShadTheCrazed 13 лет назад

    Hey, where can you even get the Eurobeat soundfont?

  • @jvegaalbela
    @jvegaalbela 12 лет назад

    Force eurobeat to sing for you. DO IT!!!!

  • @coiledAgent
    @coiledAgent 12 лет назад

    LUUUUNAAAAA

  • @qwertykins76
    @qwertykins76 12 лет назад

    You know, a pmv got a LOT of views for Daddy Discord. Perhaps you could find someone to make one for you. Also you can your vocals "not extremely good," but they are good until that rapping part. That's even good I just have trouble understanding what's being said. 'Tis good music.

  • @Ryder429
    @Ryder429 5 месяцев назад

    Top

  • @abaltovtin
    @abaltovtin 12 лет назад

    I think this is fabulous. Why are you putting yourself down?

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  13 лет назад

    @TheSonic10160 I'm Australian Asian.

  • @Reakkor
    @Reakkor 13 лет назад

    Mind if I do a vocal cover of this? I'd be mighty grateful.

  • @JoshLohMusic
    @JoshLohMusic  12 лет назад

    Yo, I'm gonna redo this song in Ableton and like, remaster it and redo the vocals so theyre not shit and IT WILL BE SICK GET PUMPED YEAH