how it feels to fight a war with your own mind

this song means a lot to me. i spent a ton of time on it, and i think its the best song ive made yet. i went through a lot of emotions while making it, and hopefully it reflects how i feel. hope you enjoy it
per tutto il dolore che hai causato
song info:
125 bpm
c maj
50-60 or so tracks before merging
33 tracks after merging
premiered 6:47 pm feb 3rd

[@hhhhj5831]

Tf is this? 💀💀💀

[@dragonmasta125akaskye5]

An absolutely beautiful piece, that's what.

[@kirbycrow64]

respectfully could you give me some ideas on how to improve it?

[@kirbycrow64]

@@dragonmasta125akaskye5thank you!

[@Astrochorius]

nah fr this some roblox clone tycoon type music

[@kirbycrow64]

@@Astrochorius once more, please tell me how i can improve

[@GdMan11.]

As someone with adhd, these occurances are less like traditional wars and more like dragon ball z fights where everything is going faster than light and either side could lose in an instant. Great song btw

[@kirbycrow64]

so real bro, also thank you!

[@sameoldtunes7110]

It’s the same for me except some days it’s just
Me 1: *go die*
Me 2: *no thanks*
Over and over lol

[@YepTheGameMaster]

great song! especially for a small youtuber :D it could use a bit more bass to pump the vibe a little bit though but overall, great song good job :D

[@ethanweld4205]

You’d love post rock. Check out departure songs

[@kirbycrow64]

will do!

[@MrBeanMrBeanBean]

Nice

[@ethanweld4205]

Ok punpun. Toot toot, tinkle tinkle, hoy away

[@mynamesgus4295]

truly i think you really captured that ethereal feeling of when you kind just see the world in a comepletely unforseen different point of view . awesome stuff dude

[@kirbycrow64]

thanks so much! i was really going for something like that and im glad you picked up on it!

[@sameoldtunes7110]

You captured the feeling perfectly bro. 👍😎

[@MarGamingYT]

Sounds awesome! 🔥 🔥

[@prashanthsrinivasan2680]

WOA this is sick! It really does sound like a battle inside the mind, synths were great. I really liked the bells and that popping sound at around 2:38, one suggestion, I think you could make the really high pitched noise in the background a bit less sharp?? idk how to explain it im sorry

[@kirbycrow64]

thanks so much! i think i know what youre talking about, if i revisit this song i will take your suggestion into account

[@prashanthsrinivasan2680]

@@kirbycrow64 I was making something myself and asked a more experienced friend how to make something sound less sharp and he told me to reduce the attack on the instrument

[@thereallynooby]

Bro i wish i was as good at making songs as you.
Although I do have some constructive criticism for you:
That water mark in the corner kinda makes it feel cheap, if you just want a free editing software to just trim some footage just use something like clipchamp instead (it has no watermark)
Also, I'm not sure if this is just me, but the sound quality sounds a bit low so it might be better to just export the audio and put it on top of something (even just this footage) rather than screen recording the audio which is what I'm guessing you've done.
Again, amazing song though! It practically gives me the chills🔥

[@kirbycrow64]

thank you! i agree with you about the watermark, and i think exporting it and putting the audio over the footage would def work best

[@ShxDowXDOfficial]

This is incredible!

[@kirbycrow64]

thank you!

[@GloriousSEAGRUB]

🔥

[@SethMiller01]

WOW

[@whackareal]

🔥🔥🔥

[@ily.777.S2]

this is so incredible, and hella accurate too!! :D keep up the good work, hoping u will blow up ^ - ^

[@kirbycrow64]

thank you so much! recently my music has been doing pretty good and im tryna stay consistent so i dont lose that lol

[@ily.777.S2]

@@kirbycrow64 i believe in u man, u got a real talent!!

[@kirbycrow64]

thank you! that means alot to me